What is going to happen with Lily? She is a great character, and what is Blaise keeping from her? What was the fight really about? This chapter brought up so many questions! Loved the chapter though - update soon!
Author's Response: Questions will all be answered; I don't like loose ends, and there will be plenty of Lily and her problems in the next chapter :D
Ooooh it was great! I loved it. I always like when you have Albus/Jemzi convos. However, my favorite is when they are getting along, and you show how well they know each other....maybe soon? Update again please!
Author's Response: Some nice Al/Jemzi interaction to come, never fear. Thanks for commenting :D
On a stormy October evening, a letter, a late night trip to the library and a secret conversation lead Lily Evans to discover that there are several mysteries in her life that only she has the capability and the inclination to solve. The first mystery is James Potter – what could turn him from the arrogant, could-care-less boy that she had previously known to someone withdrawn and far away? Then, perhaps more troubling, there is Esther Collins, the fifth year who has vanished without a trace. Furthermore, one of Lily’s best friends, Izza, is seeing a mystery boy and Lily is determined to know who.
Then there is the threat of war, backstabbing friends and NEWT’s. A disinherited and emotionally battered Sirius Black is the source of heartache for his friends, except perhaps Izza, who, with her own terrifying family, might just understand him. Lily’s closest male friend, Remus Lupin, is hiding a dangerous secret from her. Peter’s girlfriend is screwing him over, and the whole time Lily is struggling to stop the people she loves from coming apart at the seams.
OMG OMG OMG i am soooo happy!! Finally!!!!!!!!! It was great i loveeeeee sirius and izza!! i also love the fact that they both have a dark side, i mean they are totally gryffindors, but they will always have those family ties - i think it is really well done. and lily and jamessahhh the tension! I love it! please keep sirius and izza together and update soon!
Author's Response: Yes, they both have that dark streak, but then so does everyone, I think. I'm glad you think their family ties are well done - the human sense of loyalty and obligation is a twisted, fascinating thing and I plan to explore it even more in this story, so expect more of the Blacks and Moldovoneaus :D
AAAAAH! Please update soon! Such a cliffhanger! You are such a good writer - I love Izza and Sirius - they really need to get together - however, Remus and Izza was cute too - something there perhaps? Oh, and is anything going to happen with Lily and James? Anyway, please update soon!
Author's Response: Hmmm... Izza and Remus? Interesting... Of course something will happen with Lily and James :D Just not right now - there's a little too much tension (the 'I want to punch you so bad right now' tension as opposed to the 'I want to shag you all night long' tension) for anything of the romantic persuasion to happen right now. But sit tight! There is plenty of action coming up.
AHHHHHH!!!!! This chapter was soo good! I've missed this story so much, you have to update soon!!!!! I love the whole Izza, Sirius, Remus thing, and also the James/Lily thing. So good please keep writing!
Oh! So good! i cant believe remus likes izza too! it should be sirius and izza! update soon please!
Author's Response: Ah, Rosty, my loyal reviewer! Next chapter is already waiting for validation :D
i think you are a great writer and I love the relationship between the boys. I have to ask though - are you going to keep them at this age for a long time? Because as much as you are a good writer, older versions of them would be more interesting. I understand you can't just jump to them being 16, but maybe like a couple more chapters summing up the major points that happen in their younger years. Anyway, just a suggestion it is great already! Keep writing I love the story!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, I do plan on really quickly going through their 2nd-4th years in a few chapters, but first year was really important to establish the relationship between the boys, their families and personalities and whatnot, so I did a lot with that year. But yeah, there's only few more with first year left, and I don't anticipate any other year before their fifth taking so many chapters.
Hey! I love this story its so good...but why did u make james' parents die? i dont think thats how it happened in the books but i could e wrong. anyway i love the arguements and update soon!!
Love the story idea - that year at Hogwarts where everything is different is barely shown in the 7th book, so it is interesting to get a good look at it. Keep writing this story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope you like the rest of it!
James Potter has changed: no longer an arrogant, irresponsible prankster, he has matured into a responsible Head Boy with tops marks in Transfiguration. Lily Evans has changed as well: normally studious and in control, she has lost focus as she struggles with Head Girl responsibilities and N.E.W.T level studies. An unexpected encounter in the corridors one weekend leads to several startling realizations, the least of which is that things have definitely changed between James Potter and Lily Evans.
This story was nominated for a 2010 QSQ and is now complete.
This is so good!!!!! please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying this story. I'm working on Chapter 7 even as I type and once my beta looks it over, I hope to post it asap. Thanks so much for reading this and leaving a review, I really appreciate it! ~Gina :)
This is so good! I love the characters you have created. Update soon please!
this is really good! Please update soon :)
This is amazing, and such an interesting concept. Please update soon!! I can't wait! I think the dynamic between sirius, remus and lily is fascinating. I also really hope you keep Severus as a main character, because I think it would make the character relationships even more fascinating! Anyway, amazing job, keep writing!
loved it. i really like morgana. i just want more rose and scorpius!!!!!! update soon!
Author's Response: I like Morgana too! She can be a bit mean at times - but I think she's good at heart: at least, I hope that came across. The final chapter's up now and that's exclusively Rose and Scorpius! Thanks for you review :)
So good!!!!! please update soon. I really like the triangle between morgana, scorpius and rose!
Author's Response: I've written the next chapter, so I will be posting soon - just got a bit of last-minute editing to do first! Thanks for the review :)
hey i really like this! I like the way you have made Rose and Scorpius different from their parents, and Rose is such a likable character. Keep writing, I can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'll try to update it as much as possible!
I really love this story! It was totally missing from the books and your writing is just fantastic and true to character, so it seems so real. I love the detail you include, and the last chapter was just great. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing :) I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Next chapter will be up as soon as!
This has been such an amazing story, thank you so much for writing this! It was exactly the kind of story I've been wanting to read for years. I also loved the perspective from Harry in the epilogue, it was very fitting. And I loved how you made Ron and Hermione so awkward - that is totally how I pictured them being!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! They might have kissed but they are still Ron and Hermione - they will make it as complicated as possible for themselves. And thank you! The response to this story has been incredible so thank you (again) for being a part of it :)
this is just so good!!! please update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing :) The next chapter should be around soon!
yay! sooo good. i can't wait for the next chapter! and the kiss... :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Glad you enjoyed it! Next chapter shouldn't be too far away. Technically The Kiss is a missing moment so it won't appear in this story. That's not to say that there isn't any kisses though :)