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- Name: Christine
- Age: 15
- Residence: BC, Canada
- HP fan for: 6 years
- Favourite Character: Draco Malfoy (Tom...*melts*)
- Dream Career: Author or an interior designer

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The Sweetest Sin by annie

Rated: Professors •
Summary: In the years following Voldemort's victory in the second war, Muggle-borns must become slaves and servants to pure-bloods in order to survive. Over time, Hermione Granger has learned to suppress her pride and independence in households where she is considered lower than dirt. She thought she would be prepared for this new family, just like she was for all the previous ones. What she didn't know was that this new family was none other than Draco Malfoy's. Will she manage hold up when she finds herself struggling to withhold her sharp tongue, returning hatred, and...something else?

The last chapter of this story has been posted! Thanks for reading :)

Thank you to everyone who voted "The Sweetest Sin" as the Best Tearjerker in round 4 of the Dramione Awards!

Thanks to some of my amazing readers, The Sweetest Sin has been/is being translated into seven languages: French, Italian, Russian, Portuguese, Czech, Latvian, and Chinese. If you would like the links to any of the translations, please e-mail me or leave a review :)
Reviewer: xoTom Signed
Date: 08/30/05 Title: Chapter 17: In the Midst of a Storm

Wow, absolutely amazing. I only started reading your story last night (at around 2am :P), but I have now read all of the chapters. With each chapter, my addiction to this story increased. At first, I was a little sceptical about Hermione being a slave for Draco, but your amazing writing captured me and I knew you would pull through. When you explained that Voldemort had won the war, it all clicked together. Your writing style and choice of words is absoltely stunning. I have read my fair share of fanfictions, but I think your story is my favourite. The plot is intruiging and captivating, and has kept me on edge the whole way. I was stupidly grinning when Draco and Hermione finally kissed, and when Hermione went into the forbidden room on the third level, I felt this excited feeling that I often get when I figure out something. You portray the characters perfectly and I feel so attached to them now. Sorry for the long review, but I just wanted to let you know that your hard work and dedication to this story is truly appreciated. Please update when you get the chance and I will be readily waiting. :)

Canis Majoris by trinsy

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Adhara Jocelyn Black has always been torn between her loyalty to James Potter, her cousin Sirius's best mate, and Lily Evans, the sister she has never known. But in her seventh year everything changes. Join Jocelyn, Sirius, Lily, and the rest of the Marauders as they battle for their lives... and loves...
Reviewer: xoTom Signed
Date: 07/08/05 Title: Chapter 3: Patrol Duty and a Plan

Wow, that was an excellent chapter. I love your writing, it seems very professional. I loved: “He’s disgustingly smitten, isn’t he?” Sirius commented after the door had shut behind James. Remus and Peter both stared at him. “If you’ve just figure that out,” Remus told him, “you don’t deserve to be a Marauder.” Haha, very clever. I also liked how you had Sirius, Lupin, and Jocelyn sitting around the fire debating about the scenarios. Very well done. :)

Reviewer: xoTom Signed
Date: 07/08/05 Title: Chapter 11: Mail

I love your writing style and I think your perception of the characters is excellent. You've got me hooked on this story. Write more soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very, very much!

Reviewer: xoTom Signed
Date: 08/30/05 Title: Chapter 15: Alphard Black

Amazing, amazing, amazing! I believe I have reviewed your story before, but I absolutely LOVE it! I think this is my favourite fanfiction of all time. I have found a lot of really excellent authors, but their stories have little plot. But your writing is very intruiging and concise, and your plot is very well thought out (or appears to be so) and exciting. I love your choice of words and you present the characters perfectly. 10/10 without a doubt, and please keep up the amazing work.


Reviewer: xoTom Signed
Date: 07/08/05 Title: None

Very nice. I actually laughed (which is hard to get me to do) and read my brother the "The Brilliant Author: You know what? Harry’s pretty fit when he’s angry. Americans in Audience: Fit?" lines, and he laughed (which is even harder to do). :P So great job, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Ooh, so are you British? *is suddenly very interested* I'm not, but I have fun confusing my friends by throwing in British words and slang occasionally. xD The next chapter is in queue at the moment -- keep checking for it.