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When Worlds Collide by jenny b

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story

Rose was a Weasley. She never gave Scorpius Malfoy a second glance. They were sworn enemies, even though they’d barely even spoken to each other. But sometimes all it takes for love to blossom is a Potions lesson, a few snide remarks and a dropped book.

Two people. Two entirely different worlds that are suddenly intertwined.

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 06/10/10 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Four: The End

THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!! I can't believe it's over though...I've read this from the beginning and I have to say that you are a really great writer. I love Rose and Scorpious and I really really want there to be more, so I'm hoping there is. :) Thank you sooo much for finishing this story all the way. It's fabulous. I can't wait for more from you! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! You're too sweet. There will be more of the next-gen kids, don't worry - read my replies to the other comments. I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much! Jen x

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 03/21/10 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen: Introducing Mr James Potter!

This is a great chapter! I like it from James' POV, but I like it even more from Rose's POV. The swtich up was interesting though.
Thanks for updating so quickly! I love your story!

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 03/09/10 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen: How Not To Impress Your Boyfriend's Parents

Oh my gosh! This chapter was so good! But poor Scorpious. :( No, but really, this chapter was excellent and I loved everything about it! Can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 06/01/10 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three: And All You See Is It Fall

I love this story so much! This was an excellent chapter, well done. :D

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 05/25/10 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One: Home For Christmas

Woah. Cliff hanger much? :)
I really enjoyed this chapter. :) It is really sweet and nice and the ending is super shocking! I can't wait to read more, although I am sad this story is almost over. You are a fantastic writer!

Apparently Asleep by Equinox Chick

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Nymphadora Tonks lives under a shadow. Both her cousin and her aunt are in Azkaban believed to be in league with Voldemort. She knows Bellatrix deserves to be there- but Sirius?
Remus Lupin is an outsider. He’d once had three good friends- now two are dead and the third has been locked up for murder and betrayal.
They had met once before, when she was a child, but as Tonks grows up they find themselves thrown together- far too closely for Remus’ comfort. He’s always yearned for a normal life but knows that is impossible. Can Tonks convince him that he deserves happiness?

Nominated for a 2009 QSQ award in the Best canon Romance category. Thank you.
Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 12/20/10 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - It's not only Bludgers that cause pain.

This chapter is sooo good! I've really missed this story. :)
I like the Tonks/Bill thing going on, but I don't like the Mary/Remus thing. :( Maybe Tomks and Remus will get back together in the next chapter...?
This chapter is fantastic! I can't wait for another update!!!

Author's Response: Hmm, well, I don;t think it'll be the next chapter. Unfortunately for you, I rather like Mary (She's in Lions of Gryffindor, too) so I haven't decided what will happen to her and Remus yet. Thanks for reviewing, and sorry about the delay. ~Carole~

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 03/27/11 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Work, Rest and Play

Oh my gosh!!! This chapter is awesome! :D I really like how you worked this into the death eater scene, and I love Bill and Tonks, and I also love the jealousy thing between Tonks and Remus. Now I just can't wait for Tonks and Remus to meet again... :)
I really love this story! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Ah, Bill/Tonks - what will happen there? ~Carole~

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 08/15/10 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Old Flames

Great chapter! I'm so happy you updated. :) I just hope Remus and Mary don't get too friendly...and that Tonks will forgive Remus soon. :) I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, sorry about the delay. I've come to the conclusion that I have far too many chaptered fics. This one and Lions of Gryffindor are my priorities though. Glad you liked this chapter. Oh, but Mary is lovely ... honest ... ~Carole~

Soldiers by dominiqueweasley

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "There are many stories between the lines." - Jo Rowling, about the Black Family Tree.

Cedrella's goal all her life has been to be the perfect Black. She has impeccable manners, commands respect, is always composed, and has never had a friend in her life. But Cedrella has a secret that is about to get a lot more complicated…

Septimus is the youngest of seven Weasley brothers. His dearest wish for his seventh year at Hogwarts is to meet the mystery girl he once saw dancing in the Owlery in the dead of night…

This story is a romance, but it is also a story about family, owls, and what it feels like to know you are worth something.
Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 03/20/10 Title: Chapter 5: Breath of Heaven

This chapter was absolutely amazing! I love everything about it. Can't wait for another update --ForeverFred

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 03/14/10 Title: Chapter 2: Got to Get Back to Hogwarts

I really enjoy this story. I've just read the first two chapters back to back and I can't wait to read more! I love everything about this! I'm excited to see where you take it. :)

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 05/02/11 Title: Chapter 18: Soldier

Hahah I'm sooo happy!!! My heart has been beating about a thousand times per minute! Ahhhhhh!!!
This chapter is perfect! Seriously. Awesome. Except the part about Charis is sad :( So, like you requested, I'll tell you about my thoughts on Charis. So at first Charis had potential to be like Cedrella (a real person not a pureblood doll) which was good, and even though she was still sort of annoying, she was just the little sister. BUT THEN, she started drifting away from Cedrella and told on her about Sep and oh my gosh, I hated her soo much! But now I feel like I know why she did that: b/c Cedrella raised her that way. It's all very confusing because I feel like Charis shoud be like Drell but that's the exact opposite she was ever taught. And she's just a kid for gosh sakes and all she wanted was to be a good pureblood and marry Lucifer (which to me sounds appalling, but whatever floats her boat). But stupid Arcturus had to ruin it! I was wondering what would happen with the wedding but I NEVER thought Charis would be substituted for Drell! That's just so....wrong!
But seriously, the most important thing is Drell and Sep! :) And this chapter makes me soo happy! I almost couldn't believe she even left in the first place and then I couldn't believe that she actually wasn't found! Also, Sep was very dramatic in this chapter ;) haha but I'm glad he listened to her! I hope they figure out a way to save Charis...and I hope they get married :) I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yay I was so excited for you to read this chapter! It's the second to last one, there's only an epilogue left that ties up some of the loose ends you mentioned... :) Anyway it's really interesting to hear what you think of Charis! The way I see her, she had the potential to be more than just a pureblood pawn, but because of the way she was raised, she couldn't do it- she's a total product of her society. Cedrella was only able to realize that there was more to herself because Septimus showed her that there was, and Charis didn't have anyone like that. Poor kid :( thanks so much for reading and reviewing all the way through!!!

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 12/20/10 Title: Chapter 15: Only Wish I Could Forget

Ahhhh! NO!!!! Drell and Sep need to be together! This chapter is beautifully written - you are fantastic - but I don't think I could stand it if they aren't together. :(
I can't wait for the next chapter...and hopefully for some good news! Thank you for being such an amazing author! I love this fic!

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 07/05/10 Title: Chapter 9: Weightless

I LOVE this chapter!!! It's awesome. :) I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 04/28/11 Title: Chapter 16: Isn't it Always Love

AHHH!!! This is such a cliffhanger! Oh my gosh, this chapter was really, really awesome! I LOVE this story so much, I hope to read more soon! :) Also, I hope Cedrella leaves her family and chooses Septimus...

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!! The next chapter is already waiting to be validated, so hopefully it won't be long. And I guess you'll have to wait and see... :)

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 05/09/11 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

I'm sort of crying right now haha. I'm completely torn between undescribable happiness and a desperate sadness because I want this story to continue! But I think the happiness is winning :)
This is the best fanfic I have ever read and there is no way for me to thank you enough for writing it. I apologize for the late review btw, but I had a number of AP tests to study for and I wanted to make sure I had the time to properly write something.
There are sooo many great things about this story that I don't even know where to start! First off, I'm glad Charis' bit had an ending - although I'm sad she didn't end up with Lucifer like she wanted :( It seems she truly grasps the meaning of a pureblood family now. Her transition from the beginning of the novel to now is crazy! She went from annoying little obedient sister to understanding self-sacrificing sister.
Now for Sep and Drell! Squeeee! I'm so happy they are together and happy and going to be married!!!! Oh and her book is getting published! And Pepper is walking her down the aisle! Ah, it's just too much joy to handle. You created their characters perfectly. Cedrella is by far the most interesting character I've read about in a fanfic. Her state of mind is so interesting! For a couple of chapters I just wanted to strangle her for not choosing Sep faster, but her transition was pretty quick for someone so dedicated to her family. I love that she is smart and has a gift with owls. And I love that she chose Sep. :) Speaking of Sep...he is beyond adorable! His proposal made my jaw drop! How sudden first of all, and second, how awesome! I will count myself lucky if I get proposed to half as well as he proposed to Cedrella! :) It makes me happy how his family accepted Drell too...haha the wedding invite is awesome. Their whole relationship from start to finish is epic. The meeting in the owlery and the secret rendevous around school and the valentines day meadow trip!
Oh man, here come the tears again. I seriously wish you could continue this story for the rest of my life! Everything about it is just SOOO GOOD! I hope you continue writing fanfics! I'll be checking your page regularly to see if any new stories pop up! You are seriously talented. Thank you soooo much for writing this perfect story.
-Alex DuVall (ForeverFred)

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 09/29/10 Title: Chapter 13: Don't Cry, Sister

That was sooo....sad/epic/infuriating! Ahh! I really want Septimus and Cedrella to be together, but now she's locked in her own house! And Charis! How could she be such a monster?! Ugh, not to mention their father...
Oh my goodness, you are such a brilliant writer, thank you, thank you for updating! I LOVE this fic and I really hope it gets happier soon. :) I can't wait for another update!

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 05/31/10 Title: Chapter 7: Tip of the Iceberg

:D I love this story!

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 04/29/11 Title: Chapter 17: Rolling in the Deep

YES! Finally! I'm sooo happy she left! :) This chapter is fantastic. I really like all the character developments - Charis is so frustrating, but still interesting - but Cedrella! Her epiphany was so perfect! I can't even believe how awesome this chapter is! Your writing is perfect!

P.S. Rolling In The Deep is my favorite song!!!

Author's Response: thanks so much! I love that song too. I'm glad you like what I've done with Charis...in some ways I think she is the most complicated character. I'd be interested to know more of your thoughts on her! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 11/02/10 Title: Chapter 14: Home

This is possible the best chapter yet. You write really well, I'm impressed with every update! Seriously, I love the way you describe Cedrella's feelings/thoughts. It all seems so honest and real. I just wish she could see Septimus again. :( Caspar has to be the lamest fiancee ever! He's so self centered and .... eh. I hope Cedrella can find a way to escape this whole mess. By the sound of the last sentence, I bet she will. ;)
I LOVE this fic so much! Thank you for updating!

ps. I love your song choices ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I think the reason I'm able to get inside Cedrella's head is that she is a lot like me... anyway, stay tuned- there is much more to come :)

Reviewer: ForeverFred Signed
Date: 08/14/10 Title: Chapter 11: What Do You Want From Me?

I love this chapter! A lot. :) Cedrella's world is so different from Sep's so it's interesting to see how they both look at things...I just really hope they end up together! Btw, those last few sentences of Sep's were fabulous. :) Keep updating please, because I love this story!

Author's Response: Thanks! That's great to heart that you think both of their prospectives are realistic :)