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The Dawn by ahattab33
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 16]

Summary: Past Featured Story

Ron Weasley is staying at Shell Cottage during the Christmas of 1997. These are the thoughts and feelings that occupy him.

This is ahattab33 of Hufflepuff, and this is for the "Watching the Mirror" class on the MNFF Beta Boards.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Suicide

Word count: 1921 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/05/09 Updated: 12/08/09


Reviewer: BlackWideEyes Signed
Date: 12/20/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Dawn

It was quite a good characterization of Ron and very believable. It was just had to figure it out whether it was first or third person POV. Ron I'd thinking these things yet he reffers to himself as "He".
Other than that it was really good and I would love to read more angsty Ron.

Author's Response: Ahh, angsty Ron is such fun to read, lol. Hm, I'll have to go back and see which parts you're referring to...it is meant to be 3rd POV. But, thank you for the read and review, it is much appreciated!

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