Penname: nevilleherosnape [Contact]
Real name: Leanne
Member Since: 12/16/09
Website:
Beta-reader:
Status: Member
Bio:
[Report This]
Reviews by nevilleherosnape
 

Grave Days by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 100]

Summary: Front page: THE DAILY PROPHET 4 May 1998

TOM RIDDLE “ THE SELF-STYLED LORD VOLDEMORT

Editors Note: At the request of the Ministry for Magic this Official Statement issued by the Office of the Minister is produced full and unedited.

OFFICIAL MINISTRY STATEMENT

This official statement has been compiled with the assistance and co-operation of Mr Harry Potter.

“Lord Voldemort” was, in fact a man named Tom M. Riddle, son of a witch, Merope Gaunt and a Muggle, Tom Riddle Senior. The Ministry has decided that in all future official publications Riddle will be referred to by his given name.

There has already been much speculation and wild rumour regarding the events at Hogwarts School. The Ministry can confirm that Tom M. Riddle was killed at dawn on the morning of Saturday, 2 May. Riddle was disarmed by Harry Potter while in the act of firing a killing curse at Mr Potter. The curse killed Riddle rather than its intended target.

Continued on page 4

WHERE IS HARRY POTTER?

Despite the Official Ministry Statement (published above) we are no closer to receiving an answer to the question on the lips of every witch and wizard in the country. Where is Harry Potter?

It appears that Mr Potter left Hogwarts School early yesterday morning, apparently in the company of his close associates Hermione Granger and Ronald Weasley. An attractive young Ministry clerk, who did not wish to be named, told The Prophet “He’s at the Ministry, having an important meeting with the Minister. My friends and I saw him. He asked us out to the pub, but we had to turn him down.” This statement is at odds with a report from the Portkey Office that Mr Potter has fled the country, travelling to Australia with his companions.

Continued on page 2

The days after the battle were days of grief and mourning. Grave Days.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 77566 Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/28/09 Updated: 04/15/10


Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 04/19/10 Title: Chapter 15: Postscripts

Very good! I enjoyed reading every chapter! Looking forward to the next one!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope that you enjoy the sequel, too. -N-

 
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 03/24/10 Title: Chapter 14: Committals

I love this! I always figured that Hermonie's parents would be ticked off, but hopefully they understand quickly and get over it!! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: The next chapter is the last! I can't believe it. -N-

 
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 03/17/10 Title: Chapter 13: Inhumations

I think I just had every emotion possible reading this chapter! Tears, laughter, remorse, loss........great job! I'm a little sad Harry didn't speak at Snape's funeral, but it totally fits that at this moment in time he's still processing everything the man did. Draco was a suprise! Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: I thought that, as its still only a week after the battle, it was to early for Harry to give Snape any more than the private thanks he did. As for Draco, well, he and Harry are family, sort of. Harry is Teddy Lupins godfather, Draco is Teddy's first cousin, once removed. That's something else Harry's going to have to come to terms with.

 
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 03/05/10 Title: Chapter 12: Funereal Progress

tears......and smiles! My mark for a good book is one that leaves you lost in the movie playing in your head and all wrapped up with the emtions the characters are having, while not hearing the real world going on around you! Bravo!! Can't wait for more and speaking of the real world, I was boiling some milk......now I can clean it up and try again! :)

Author's Response: Thank you. More funeral to come as this story moves rapidly towards its conclusion. Sorry about the milk. -N-

 
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 01/11/10 Title: Chapter 10: Deadlines

how exciting! how wierd to see Hermione in such a weakened state! It's terrific and I'm not waiting very patiently for more to come!!

Author's Response: I have been really rather cruel to Hermione. However, I hope that her behaviour isn't entirely out of character. Next chapter should be posted fairly soon. -N-

 
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 01/01/10 Title: Chapter 9: Death Watch?

wonderful! it flows and I'm hooked on what's going to happen next!

Author's Response: Thanks, i hope that you enjoy the next chapter, too. -N-

 

Summary: Even death can't keep the Dark Lord busy for long! A few weeks after his death, Voldemort returns to earth and finds his magic lost.

Forced to live as a Muggle, Voldemort teams up with an unlikely friend in an attempt to get a flat, keep a steady job and regain his old glory.

Please note: This story contains ridiculous plot twists, kooky pop culture references, extremely out-of-character behavior, alternate universes galore and a great deal of random silliness. You have been warned!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 4637 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
09/01/09 Updated: 10/07/10


Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 12/15/10 Title: Chapter 3: Voldemort Makes a Sale

Great! Love it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

 
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 02/22/10 Title: Chapter 2: Voldemort Gets a Job

Holy Crap! Sorry, that was the first thing that came to mind! :) It's hilarious! I have a somewhat weird sense of homor too and this is funny! I like it! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I'm glad there's someone else out there who enjoys non sequiters like I do! I'm currently on vacation, which has thrown something of a monkey wrench in my writing schedule, but I am trying to get Chapter Three completed. Thanks for reading!

 

Summary: On May 2nd, 1998, Harry Potter walked calmly into the face of death to save those he loved, bringing with him only his wand, and four people brought back with an extraordinary stone. Unbeknown to him, they had also come on a journey to be with him that night.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 14547 Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/03/09 Updated: 03/07/11


Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 03/07/11 Title: Chapter 10: Lifting Mists

Wonderful!

Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review. Sarah x

 
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 09/21/10 Title: Chapter 9: Death, and All His Friends

AWESOME!! There just aren't enough words !!!

 

Scenes from Shell Cottage by WeasleyMom
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 126]

Summary: This fic is a series of missing moments from the time H/R&H were at Shell Cottage, beginning immediately after they Disapparated from Malfoy Manor. JKR shows us what was going on with Harry, but this is my version of what could have happened with Ron and Hermione after one of the most emotional/disturbing events in the entire series.

UPDATED June 2010 When I first wrote this fic, I didn't know what a beta reader was, and frankly, it showed. Thanks so much to Natalie for helping me polish this up and make it more readable. Thanks also to both Julia and Carole, whose helpful comments in the review section allowed me to make some much-needed corrections during the rewrite. I would love to know what you think ~ reviews are very much appreciated!

This was nominated in the 2010 Quicksilver Quill Awards for Best Canon Romance.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 17189 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/03/09 Updated: 11/23/09


Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 02/19/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

EXCELLENT!!!! FAB!!! LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Thank you!

 

The Dark Phoenix by L A Moody
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 64]

Summary:

Even in a time of peace, evil never sleeps…

In the post Deathly Hallows world Harry Potter is a broken man, rejecting the public’s view of him as a hero and seeing himself as a destroyer of lives. Although married to Ginny and embraced by the boisterous Weasley clan, he holds himself apart from true happiness. The only solace he finds is among the other shell-shocked victims of the war: George Weasley and Andromeda Tonks. But young Teddy Lupin is determined to unearth the joy his godfather once had for life and in so doing adds to the alternate dimension where the cost of Voldemort’s defeat was not so high.

In the alternate reality, it has been seven years since Voldemort’s defeat. Reclaiming his own destiny, Harry has built a new life for himself from the ruins of the Potter estate. Although he did not hesitate to claim Ginny as his own, it has been an unusually long engagement period as neither of them has been a hurry to take that next irrevocable step. For Harry, these extra years have allowed him to recapture some of the carefree days of youth as he established his career in the Auror Department. Determined not to follow in her mother’s footsteps, Ginny has been making the most of the intervening years to cement her career with the WWN. The Lupin clan has been steadily expanding with the eldest, Teddy, immediately establishing himself as a Metamorphmagus, sporting bright turquoise hair at birth. In contrast, his younger sister inherited the delicate beauty of the Black family. As her parents await the signs that will identify her as a witch, one has to wonder whether she has any unique powers of her own.

Although this story starts on a dark and disturbing note, it is ultimately a tale of hope, healing and survival. It serves as an epilogue to both, Cruel Moon for the Misbegotten and Harry Potter and the Hero’s Lament; and consequently, contains all manner of spoilers for the canon series as well as the alternate universe my prior tales have established. Reading those two previous stories is recommended. Contains original characters who were established in prior narratives.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Epilogue? What Epilogue?, Mental Disorders

Word count: 261038 Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/08/09 Updated: 08/29/10


Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 07/01/10 Title: Chapter 32: Thirty-Two: Let the Pieces Fall

WOW! Great chapter! I knew Pheobe was turning into a rabbit, that's really cool! Arrest toad face!

Author's Response: Dont worry. Dolores will get her comeuppance. But you have to give Hermione a chance to shine. Thats all I can say for now.

 
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 06/17/10 Title: Chapter 29: Twenty-Nine: Tea with the Dowager

I liked it! Especially the look into Snape's trial!

Author's Response: So pleased you like the mini courtroom drama. It occurred to me that there was a big gap between Snape still in hiding at end of the previous story and him having established his own business at the start of this story. Hopefully, this flashback will answer a lot of questions about what happened in between.

 
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 08/30/10 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue: A Bend in the Road

Bravo! Standing ovation! So sad that it has ended, but as you said it could be just beginning! LOVE IT!!! Enjoyed every second and I think I will read it again!

Author's Response: I am so, so flattered that you want to go back and reread the entire story. It always hangs together so much better when one chapter flows right into the other. I realize I ended it with a bit of a cliffie so I submitted the beginning of a new story right away. You will recognize it, guaranteed.

 
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 06/10/10 Title: Chapter 28: Twenty-Eight: A Fox, Three Hens, and a Toad

I laughed myself silly at the part at the end about Binns! Too funny! Would you believe it didn't dawn on me about who "Dottie" was until Umbridge was mentioned! Very good chapter! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: So very, very happy that you liked my riff on Binns! So little is known about him, as well as Madam Pince, that I just couldnt resist.

Umbridge had mentioned her knitting circle in the past, but I admit it was rather obscure. Thats why I added the little ah-ha moment in the middle of that passage so everyone could be on the same page.

Next chapter will be submitted on Monday, without fail.

 
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 07/11/10 Title: Chapter 33: Thirty-Three: Improvisation

Oh oh oh oh oh!! Update fast!! Totally entertaining!! LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Just summited Ch. 34. Hopefully it won't be as long this time! Glad you're enjoying Dolores' comeupenace.

 
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 08/25/10 Title: Chapter 37: Thirty-Seven: The Future and the Past

Very nice and sad and happy and wow! I love it that the $$ will got to the beterment of werewovles!

Author's Response: So happy you liked the final blow to Umbridges ego. I so wanted something that wasnt cruel, but still satisfying.

 
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 04/19/10 Title: Chapter 22: Twenty-Two: In the Belly of the Beast

Again, another great chapter!!!

Author's Response: Glad you approve. I had lots of fun imagining the controlled chaos in the archives. Will be submitting next chapter within the next few days.

 
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 03/08/10 Title: Chapter 18: Eighteen: Diplomacy

FAB!! Love Krum in this! :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked my take on Viktor. I wanted to make him personable enough that Hermione would have maintained the friendship. Shyness aggravated by feelings of not being like everyone else could easily have been misread as surliness during his year at Hogwarts. Theres more of him to come in the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape Signed
Date: 06/04/10 Title: Chapter 27: Twenty-Seven: Gifts in All Shapes and Sizes

Love this and the last chapter! Can't wait to see how you nail Umbridge!

Author's Response: Theres no doubt that Umbridge is a slippery toad: hard to grasp and even harder to hold onto. The next chapter, which I am submitting today, contains a unique Dolores POV. Hope you enjoy!

 
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
MOST RECENT
Wheelbarrow by BrokenPromise 1st-2nd Years
Frank Bryce remembers his brother.
Love, Lily by dmbw7052 1st-2nd Years
A collection of letters from Lily to SiriusThis was written when I saw it was...
All This Waiting For The Sky To Fall by Dawnie 1st-2nd Years
They found her body - broken, bleeding, face filled with signs of pain and fear...
FEATURED
When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning by forsakenphoenix 1st-2nd Years
Hope, loyalty, love, despair, and tragedy. Through it all, Lily discovers the...
The Seven Potters by Gmariam 1st-2nd Years
Harry is about to leave the Burrow for the final time when his six doppelgangers...
Doubt by lucca4 3rd-5th Years
In the midst of the war, the Marauders and Lily have joined the Order, resolute...
Rest In The Bed by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
"This is the last night I will spend in our flat. I have spent sixty-nine nights...
Marriage and Other Matters by Acacia Carter 3rd-5th Years
All Augusta wanted to do was apologise, but the minute she opened her mouth...
Chased by Daylight by iLuna17 3rd-5th Years
In the morning, she knows he'll never be there. This is for Maple, as a...
When You Think of Umbridge by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
How Umbridge sees herself and wants to be seen - a speculation in prose poem...
Empty Chairs at Empty Tables by The_Real_Hermione 3rd-5th Years
In November 1981, Remus Lupin returns to the headquarters of the Order of the...
CATEGORIES