Please come back!!!!!!!! I love this story! It's the one that got me to read fanfiction in the first place!!!!
Aww thank you! Sorry it's been so long! The next chapter is submitted and just waiting to be validated! :)
"It feels as if the whole world is falling apart," said Neville, "and I'm falling right along with it."
In the fifth instalment of the Neville Longbottom saga, Voldemort is back, but nobody wants to know. Facing pressure from all sides, and feeling alone and abandoned, the Boy-Who-Lived confronts the depths of despair and the darkest corners of his soul.
With a direct link to evil plaguing his mind and the cruel Dolores Umbridge determined to break him, can Neville find the hope and strength to carry on? And will he be prepared to embrace his destiny? The darkness falls in Year Five...
A note on the warnings: there's nothing there you won't find in the canon novel.
Please come back!!!!! I love this whole series!!! Neville is my favorite and u wrote so well! Pleeeeease!?!?!!!!
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! that was awesome!
Author's Response: Draco is such a funny bloke isnít he? -N-
I was so hoping you would do Neville! He's my favorite! I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks, Neville is great. -N-
So.... I'm a christain, and decited to read this kinda on a whim from the description and, I COULD NOT STOP READING!!!!!!!!! Yep. Just thought I'd let you know. Five stars. :)
Hahaha! That was just about the most badass story about Neville I have ever read!! Great job! I loved it!!
Author's Response: I'm glad!
I love this! I really do! Neville has always been a favorite of mine and it's nice to read stories like this.
Author's Response: Thank you! He's one of my favorites too.
O.o woah. I've always wanted to write something in second person, and you pulled it off nicely! Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad the second person worked for you... I was a little bit nervous about it. I think it's an interesting way to create empathy with a character and a way for them to almost not want to take responsibility for their actions, as they push them on to the reader, if that makes sense. Anyway, thanks for letting me know you liked it!
Wow! That was beautiful! So sad! I loved the opening. If I didn't know they ended up together I'd be angry with Lupin. All around great job!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Glad that you liked it! :)
Harry Potter has come to Hogwarts.
But I am waiting for him.I who loved his mother, detested his father for taking her away from me. I deserved Lily Evans. I gave my word to protect her son. But how shall I stop myself? I want to see a young, helpless James Potter sqirm and writhe under my gaze....
This is awesome! If you write more short stories in this style from anyone's perpective I will read them!
Author's Response: Thank you! I definetley will, I am planning a 'Snape' series. Like, him teaching Harry Occlemency, how he feels about Lupin coming to the school, killing Dumbledore.... I'm not sure where that will take me, but I'm glad you'll read them!
Few things truly provoke Albus Dumbledore's rage like attempting to kill Harry Potter under the guise of a friend. A two-part vignette from Albus' POV about the events that transpired after Harry returned from the Third Task, Cedric's dead body in tow.
I like it! Can't wait for part 2!