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Moments of His Life by LilMissGranger
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 70]

Summary: This is the story of the adventures of Lily and James Potter as they watch their son grow up from afar, only allowed these small moments....

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 9226 Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Published:
12/09/05 Updated: 09/14/09


Reviewer: lobo_blanco1986 Signed
Date: 11/27/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Omg hurry and write more this chapter made me tear up so bad I had to stop reading for a moment, I love you're work you are definitely a talented writer. Don't stop, if fact I would like to encourage you to try writing something of your own. I would definitely read it. Please, please, please continue.

 

A Legend Continued by Meryl Montgomery
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 127]

Summary: A story about Harry Potter's children growing up and becoming legends in their own right. Full of heated arguements, glowering girlfriends, and a rival too good-looking to be considered fair.

Chapter Eight Now Up!

Chapter Eight Excerpt:

'"This morning," McGonagall began, her face white. "I was greeted by two hysterical young girls from Ravenclaw. They informed me that they, along with their best friend Melanie Trumpett, were approached by a cloaked figure who appeared to have came from the Forbidden Forest. These two girls tried to persuade their friend to come along with them, as they were cautious of the stranger, but they said that Ms. Trumpett was answering oddly. She didn't look the same, and her eyes looked "funny"...'

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 12506 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Published:
07/10/06 Updated: 02/21/07


Reviewer: lobo_blanco1986 Signed
Date: 11/27/09 Title: Chapter 9: Of a Dire Warning and the Nicest Thing Said

I love it. Please, please finish.

 

Safe Haven by NikkiSue
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 65]

Summary: After a conflicting life as the son of a famous and feared Death Eater, Draco Malfoy has turned spy for the Order. After things go awry, his emergency portkey transports him to his Safe House which turns out to be quite the surprise! New bonds are formed and romance is in bloom. This all goes to show that war indeed brings out the best in people and the worst.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 35039 Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Published:
08/27/06 Updated: 06/26/10


Reviewer: lobo_blanco1986 Signed
Date: 11/29/09 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Shady Secrets and Yummy Desserts

I love it absolutely love it. Please continue, I've been wanting to see a story like this with reconciliation between Harry and Draco as well as the others for some time now and you have given me precisely what I wanted.

Author's Response: I too got tired of reading of the (realistic) relationship between the two of them. Thanks for your positive feedback.

 

Christmas Letters by helgaandgodric
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: Someone sends Hermione mysterious letters around Christmas time, asking for forgiveness. What will she do? A two shot.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 3208 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/28/07 Updated: 04/10/07


Reviewer: lobo_blanco1986 Signed
Date: 11/26/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Saw it coming but still beautifully written, I love the slight symmetry between this and Romeo and Juliet. Please continue to write and I will continue to read and comment.

 

Returning Home by Cwiddy
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: It has been 10 years since the final battle and Harry had left, not keeping in touch with any of his friends for the past 10 years. Now he is returning home to face the friends he turned his back on for 10 years.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1456 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/18/07 Updated: 04/25/07


Reviewer: lobo_blanco1986 Signed
Date: 11/26/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not bad a little short but I like it nonetheless, keep writing I will keep reading.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

 

Summary: My take on the first of those 'nineteen years' between the 36th chapter of DH and the epilogue.

Warnings: contains an unusually-shaped ring, a nosy neighbour, a rude shop assistant, shaving mishaps, thoughtful gestures, threatening goblins, and, unexplained appearances of Romantic!Ron and Romantic!Harry. You have been warned.

Rating is for *mild* innuendo and *mostly* innocent interactions but I wouldn't let my 9 year old read it.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 65868 Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Published:
11/23/07 Updated: 11/18/12


Reviewer: lobo_blanco1986 Signed
Date: 01/25/10 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The First Task

MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!! Please finish this one. I love this one and for some reason the one's I truly love never get finished. This was the second one I read after I found this site, that was in Oct. '09 and I bookmarked it right away, waiting for you to finish. :)

Author's Response: Well, I have every intention of finishing what I have started, so I sure hope that doesn't mean this will not end up being a favourite when you read the very last chapter! I may take a long time to update each chapter, but I *will* update. Thanks for sticking with me! cj

 

Lost by Gmariam
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 22]

Summary: Past Featured StoryAlbus Potter is lost: guilt and grief have driven him to a desperate search for the Deathly Hallows, and Harry must confront his son before it is too late. Their confrontation, however, ends in disaster as Albus disappears with two of the Hallows.

As he continues his search for the Resurrection Stone, Albus remembers the shadowy road that lead him to his confrontation with his father – and must face both his brother and the tragic loss that has driven him so far down dark paths.

Albus must journey deep within to conquer the darkness that surrounds him. Will he find what he seeks? Or will Albus be lost to his loved ones forever? This story is now complete.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Slash, Violence

Word count: 20197 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/02/08 Updated: 03/28/10


Reviewer: lobo_blanco1986 Signed
Date: 02/05/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six - Journey

Please finish, I've been waiting on the conclusion for a while now. I love, please continue writing you truly have a gift.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm so glad to know someone has enjoyed this story and is looking forward to it! I am working on the epilogue, but as I seem to have gotten caught up in some challenges on the beta boards, it might be a little while. Thank you so much for sticking with it. I really appreciate the review! ~Gina :)

 

Summary: Harry Potter returns to Hogwarts for his seventh year. With Quidditch, NEWT's, and a pompous new Transfiguration teacher this year is certainly not going to be dull! Mix in some Marauders, a couple jokes, and a bunch of good friends and this will be Harry's best year yet! Nominated for QSQ'a Best General Fic. Thank you!



Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Profanity

Word count: 14868 Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Published:
03/23/09 Updated: 11/08/09


Reviewer: lobo_blanco1986 Signed
Date: 01/26/10 Title: Chapter 11: A Relaxing Evening and Malfoy's Mysterious Behaviour

MORE MORE MORE PLEASE RIGHT MORE!!!!!!!!!! :)

 

After Breakfast by Northumbrian
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 29]

Summary: After the Wedding comes the reception. Once the guests are greeted and seated, the meal is served, the Wedding Breakfast.

After breakfast? The speeches.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4712 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/13/09 Updated: 07/17/09


Reviewer: lobo_blanco1986 Signed
Date: 11/29/09 Title: Chapter 1: After Breakfast

Loved it, absolutely loved it. Now you need one for the H/G wedding lol. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you The Harry/Ginny wedding will take a lot of planning. I've started several times. I just haven't foung the right angle to approach it from yet. -N-

Author's Response: Thank you The Harry/Ginny wedding will take a lot of planning. I've started several times. I just haven't foung the right angle to approach it from yet. -N-

 

Summary: On May 2nd, 1998, Harry Potter walked calmly into the face of death to save those he loved, bringing with him only his wand, and four people brought back with an extraordinary stone. Unbeknown to him, they had also come on a journey to be with him that night.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 14547 Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/03/09 Updated: 03/07/11


Reviewer: lobo_blanco1986 Signed
Date: 11/26/09 Title: Chapter 6: Yaxley and Thicknesse

I love, hurry and finish I want to know what happens....

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like the story. Next chapter is in the queue, so it shouldn't be long!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like the story. Next chapter is in the queue, so it shouldn't be long!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

"James Sirius Potter, it is the judgment of the Wizengamot that you have been found guilty. You knowingly, in possession of sound mind and body, used the Cruciatus Curse and the Killing Curse in the intentional torture and murder of one Gregory Goyle the Third."

James Potter was going to Azkaban for the rest of his natural life, and his whole family was in shambles. His wife and child have fled the country, his sister was missing, and his parents were a wreck. However, James knew that he had larger problems: his guilt was coming more and more in question.

Though he knew that James was withholding information about the circumstances of the murder of which he had been found guilty, Harry had secrets of his own; however, even he could not handle this torrent of trouble alone. Can Harry trust his darkest confidences to anyone? Even family? 

How will the Potter clan stop the downward spiral into pain and disaster, and can they recover what they've lost?

 

This fic was nominated for a 2010 Quicksilver Quill Award - Best Next-Generation Story.



Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 188923 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/10/09 Updated: 05/05/10


Reviewer: lobo_blanco1986 Signed
Date: 02/08/10 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

You have me completely enthralled with this story. I love the twists and turns. I think I mentioned this in one of my earlier reviews but I'm glad you made peace between Harry and Draco. I was a little sad about the split between Harry and Ginny but it works and I love the path you took with Katie. She's a breath of fresh air for me and Harry. I've read many many fanfics and this is one of my favorites. I want to thank you for this. :) If you would like to e-mail me and talk about anything I would be thrilled. lobo_blanco1986@yahoo.com

Author's Response:

Well, um, yeah...you just totally made my day. :D

I've had a mixed reaction from my readers about splitting Harry and Ginny, but if one truly delves into the recesses of both of their characters, one tends to find that they really aren't as compatible as Jo intended them to be in the series. Ginny never understood Harry's desire to save the world at his own expense, and Harry would never stop being everyone's hero, because that's all he knew how to do at that point. There were very few people who would understand why he would torch his own marriage to keep someone's secret, but after the journey through these characters that I've taken in this story, I know them better than most of the people I know in real life. This just seemed like the natural course for the story to take. I knew that Harry would end up alone in the end because of how he handled this whole mess, but for some reason, I just couldn't make myself leave him with no one at all. He'll always need someone to protect and care for, and Katie just happened to have a position open with her and her daughter for just that.

Okay, that was probably more information that you asked for, but for some reason, ever since I got a semi-angry review for breaking up Harry and Ginny, I feel the need to validate my reasoning every chance I get. It's probably overly sensitive on my part, but when you've been working on something for 4-8 hours a day for five months straight, you tend to treat it like another appendage.

Anyhow, if you ever have any questions about the story or about events in the universe of Harry and the rest of the cast as I have it set in my mind, please don't hesitate to ask or to email me at avsno26rocks@aol.com. I really love hearing from my readers, good or bad, but sometimes, when people ask me questions, it actually sparks my creative juices and makes a better story as I write it. Well, that's all for now, so until we meet again...

~Jess

 
Reviewer: lobo_blanco1986 Signed
Date: 11/27/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

You have my complete attention. Please, please continue writing, I love it. Unlike quite a few of the fanfics I've read on here this one is actually well conceived and plotted. Once again, please continue writing and I will continue to read and review.

Author's Response: [p]Wow, you have MY complete attention! You totally made my day. :D[/p] [p]Not to worry, you will most definitely find out what happens, because I'm pushing this story through as fast they'll put it up, and there's much, much more to come from my beloved characters. I chose Harry's children around which to center my story because it's nearly a blank slate with which to work. I can do things like send one of them to prison, because while we know none of the Trio would never kill anyone, we don't know James, Albus and Lily as well as them.[/p] [p]Well, again, thank you for reading and keep an eye out, because I have no intention of stopping this story. I think of it as my brain child, since I formulated the entire story around the first line, and it was all good things from there.[/p]

 
Reviewer: lobo_blanco1986 Signed
Date: 01/19/10 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

I must say I love this, every bit of it. Please, please continue. I would hate for this to become like so many others I've read unfinished and forgotten. I don't think I can take another of my favorite fan fictions being cut short before the finish. I love, you are an exceptional author. I think you would do well to create your own world and your own stories. I would read them.

Author's Response:

Haha, I'm totally chuckling/blushing. You just gave me warm fuzzies all over. :D

I have every intention of finishing this book, and I'm actually almost done, so it should be finished within the month, because I find it harder to write the further into it I go. I want it to be just right, and that takes a little time, but I guarantee a finish to this story. I'd be pretty disappointed in myself if I didn't complete it. Thank you so much for reading, and feel free to leave as many reviews as you want, because they make an author's day. Take care!

~Jess

 

Peace in Heaven by Equinox Chick
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary: After decades of hatred, a friendship begins...

Severus Snape wakes up after Nagini's bite in a hospital bed. He is dead, of that there is no doubt, but he cannot move on as the others who fell in battle have.

Why?

I am Equinox Chick from Hufflepuff and this is my entry in the November in-house banner/story challenge.

Author's Note: For this competiition, the writers in Hufflepuff picked banners designed by other Puffs and wrote a story based on the picture, title and catchphrase. The banner I chose was by Terri (mudbloodproud).

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. I think it's safe to assume that you all know that.

I am indebted to the truly wonderful (and QSQ award winning) Emma (Amortentia x) who has beta'd this fic. Not only did she sort out my punctuation, but she had some extremely good suggestions throughout the story.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity

Word count: 4917 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/21/09 Updated: 11/21/09


Reviewer: lobo_blanco1986 Signed
Date: 01/25/10 Title: Chapter 1: Peace in Heaven

I wish this wasn't a one shot, I love how you brought one of my favorite characters out of his shell and shown him the "light" as it were. Keep it up I do love this one. I would really like to see a sequel or this turned into a longer story even. Thank you for your genius and way with words, it makes me happy to know that there are still some people with a good imagination out there and to give Snape his due...Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review and the praise. I don't think there'll be a sequel, unless I can think of a new angle as they are just about reconciled now. Hmmm, Regulus entering perhaps *ponders*. ~Carole~

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Harry Potter had seen death - a lot of death. Friends had passed in his lifetime, more so than any one person should ever experience, but how much is too much, even for the Chosen One?

Ron Weasley is dead, leaving behind his wife and his best mate. How can these two cope with their Trio being cut down to two? And when danger lurks in the shadows, can they find the strength to fight for one another?

 



Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Epilogue? What Epilogue?, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 54202 Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/29/10 Updated: 11/09/13


Reviewer: lobo_blanco1986 Signed
Date: 01/29/11 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Unfurling

You have my undivided, curiousity rapt attention. PLEASE finish and SOON!!!!

Author's Response:

I'm working on it, I promise. I've just had to do some *eek* planning and outlining. When I started doing that, I have no idea, but I'd really like this fic to come out well. Thanks for reading and your support. A new chapter should come out soon. :)

~Jess

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