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The Resilient by Misdemeanor1331

Rated: Professors • Past Featured Story
Summary: Sequel to "An Aversion to Change."

It's Voldemort's world now: a world of corruption, betrayal, greed, and violence. A world of evil thoughts and evil deeds, where no one can be trusted, especially those closest to you.

But through it all, there must be strength. There must exist those who will stand up to totalitarian rule, who will say no when others submit, who must survive despite their condition. There must exist the resilient.

Eventual Draco/Hermione with plenty of plot. Very dark, so read at your own risk!

Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 05/19/11 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: The Forest

=) One reader ardently happy! Awesome work!

Author's Response: Woohoo! Thanks!!

Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 02/13/10 Title: Chapter 6: Natural Selection

Interesting... I was working under the assumption that "Master" was just codename for Draco... Now I really curious to see who the hell this kind torturer is!!!

Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 04/07/11 Title: Chapter 24: Rite and Right

Rock and roll baby!! COD: Death by Mudblood blood!!! Way to go Herms! Or... way to go Draco! LOL!
BTW, is Hermione pregnant?

Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you approve!! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 05/26/10 Title: Chapter 8: Resilience

Oh, la la!!!

And so, Draco makes his reapearance... What's not clear to me is... if these blokes are FOR the Dark Lord... then why the heck they need to go undercover!?!?!

Wouldn't they get a medal for they little club?

And why is Draco (whom, last time I checked was U-No-Poo's right hand) be risking his neck with these guys? Unless, he wanted to gain access to Hermione, of course.... *wink* wink*

A Little intrigue!! I like where this is headed!! ^_^

Author's Response: Hehe, good questions, all! And all will be answered in time. ;D Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 09/06/10 Title: Chapter 13: A Lesson, Lived

Somehow 'ouch' doesn't seem to cover it. Yet it's truly everything I manege to write.

You made an art piece out of describing Hermione's feelings.It was quite moving. Geesh, poor girl. Somehow, through all these chapters I thought I was sort of past the point of being truly impressed by Hermione's grief. you know, there comes a point in agnst or dark fics you just sort of get used to all the gore and dark places... well, did not happen with this chapter. Your descriptions were so accute, accurate, spot on, eloquent, that you snapped me out of it, and made it feel as fresh as if it had been the very first dark chapter of Potterverse I ever read. Kudos!

I very much liked the detail of the changing tapestry! It's a bit like an electronic photo frame. Cute. I wonder if there's more to it than meets the eye...

Update soon!!!! ^.^

Author's Response: Ah, thank you! It was hard for me to write those scenes - they take a lot out of you!

One Last Wish by Belledeg

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Harry Potter has defeated the Dark Lord and proven the strength and the power of love. However, he is unaware of one tiny detail about the battle. The fact that, seconds before his demise, the Dark Lord felt something he was not supposed to feel.

So now Lord Voldemort finds himself in a place that is not Heaven, Hell or Earth but somewhere in between.

And he is not alone...

A Second Epilogue for "My Troubled Tyrant"
Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 10/22/09 Title: Chapter 1: I Should Have Remembered It

Only polite...?


I HAVE to say it... I LOVE this even more than the original ending... After reading this, I'm afraid I'll have to admit that EVEN Tom Riddle deserves a happy ending. May only because it gives one to Keedie also!!!!

Looooooove your writing Belledeg!! You're a gem!! Thanks for this amazing gift to the Potterverse. A different and really original, masterfully painted picture of Tom Riddle. The reasons behind the Monster. And it does make me pity him. Kuddos!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to have been able to write a happy ending too. :D

Agnes by Russia Snow

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Dolores Umbridge is evil. Everyone hates her and she hates everyone. That is the way it has always been - or has it? Are people born evil? Surely there are reasons for her actions. We only ever hear the tale of the hero, what about the ememy?

This is the untold story of Dolores Umbridge.

This is Russia Snow of Gryffindor writing for The Untold Story Challenge in the Great Hall on the Beta Forums

Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 10/26/09 Title: Chapter 1: Dolores Umbridge

I lked the fic... But I really don't think it fits centaurs to kill innocent children. Maybe some other creature, like kappas or werewolves,surely, but centaurs seem far too peaceful to me to have done something like that.
However, I really like the whole idea of giving Dolores a reason to be so evil. Well written and quite gripping also. Kuddos.

Author's Response: Ahh, but that is the point. These centaurs are the outcasts from the gently centaur tribes. There are evil people in this world, so why not evil centaurs? This is my reasoning behind Umbeidge hating half breeds, she was just incredibly unlucky that the first bcentaurs she met were this un-ruly, bunch of outcasts. She never got to meet the kind, gentle centaurs. Do you get what I am saying? There musy have been the odd centaur who thirsted for power and hated humans, in my eyes, they would have banded together to form this pack. Thankyou for the review! Russia xxxxx

How to Charm Snakes by Misdemeanor1331

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: When the Department of Magical Transportation invents an Apparation alternative, Hermione and Draco are the lucky participants of the first human trial. But what happens when everything that can go wrong, does?

Short story, challenge entry.

An entry by Misdemeanor1331 of Hufflepuff to the Lofty Learning One-Shot Challenges: How to Charm Snakes.

Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 11/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: How to Charm Snakes



GREAT! Fic! Really! Loved it!!

Soo funny and romantic! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it was funny; it's weirdly tough to write humor!!

The Mistake of a Lifetime by mudbloodproud

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: “Lily is pregnant.”

Those words sent shivers of dread through Remus Lupin. The dread came not from the fact they were in the midst of a war, but from a secret, a secret he could never tell James.

This story is the result of my evil muses. I hold no responsibility for the content.

I do not own anything you recognise in this story. It all belongs to J.K. Rowling. I am just thankful to play in her world for a little while.

I wish to thank my friend, Bine, {luinrina} for her wonderful and quick beta help on this story. Her comments made this story better than what it was to start with.

Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 10/28/09 Title: Chapter 1: Memories and Truth

Hehehe.... Quite inverosimil to me that those two WOULD do something like that... But enjoyable and well writen nevertheless.
I very much liked the way you ended it. And, clearly, Harry was James'. Hehehe!! Liked it very mucho!

Dagger of Doubt by Grace has Victory

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Because Tracey Davies wants nothing to do with her brother Roger, she avoids Ravenclaw House. But will she survive in Slytheirn? And is survival even what matters?
Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 12/01/09 Title: Chapter 4: Nature's Nobility

Tracey, Tracey, Tracey... that is not the most convenient way of regaining your friend's favour, is it?
I mean, considering how smart she is... she could have suspeted that spiting nasty family rubbish at your (so-called) friends won't make them any more prone to forgive past faults... Specially in the middle of the common room.

Regardless how much I like her... she SHOULD have known better. I do hope, however, that this developments show her that she really did not have friends in those silly girls that allow Pansy to treat them as pawns...

On a side note next time she should consider blackmail. With Slytherins it might be a much much much more useful way of using such information!!

And Roger should probably have kept his TRAP shut!! Still dislike him feverishly. The pinhead. Love of limelight or not, he should realise his little sister is being stoically overlooked!!

Anyhow.... I find the story extremely interesting. And your insights on the cannon characters seem awful accurate. The way you tell us the story through Tracey's eyes is lovely and I really like it.

Last but not least.... THANKS A LOT for the quick update!! Keep 'em coming!!! ^.^

Author's Response: Dear Kaiserin (after which Empress have you named yourself??), ~ Thanks for writing such a detailed, engaged and engaging review. I'm really touched by your willingness to identify with Tracey's problems. ~ Yes, Roger and his friend were stupid to confess their family backgrounds in a public corridor at a time of emergency, but that doesn't excuse the Slytherins' hateful reaction. Tracey just wasn't prepared for how fickle her "friends" would be, leaving her far too hurt and angry to think sensibly about her problem. She tried to debate her equality (a Ravenclaw strategy) instead of employing a Slytherin cunning to make them WANT to be friends with her. ~ Tracey, stop sulking and start thinking! You're the most intelligent girl in your class... and Kaiserin has already given you a strong hint... ~ Best wishes, GhV

Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 12/11/09 Title: Chapter 7: The Hogwarts High Inquisitor

Well, it was an evil plan. But it did not really work out anyway...

So, I'll just congratulate the evil genious... Even thought she meant awfully What can I do??? Trace just won my heat!!! The evil minx!! Be nice and reform!! Come to the Good Side Tracey, we have cookies!!! ^_^

Author's Response: Dear Kaiserin, I'm amazed you're still cheering for Tracey after what she just did! Thanks for writing in; I'm afraid it's downhill a little more next chapter. GhV

Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 12/07/09 Title: Chapter 6: The Yule Ball

Oh!!! C'mon girlie!!! Cheer up will you!?

You got a date for the Yule Ball. AND you smelled Zabini's trick without making a complete fool of yourself! That ought to mean something, right?

I think she just can't help but blame Roger of her every missfortune, even when she doesn't really have any!! She had a great time!! (which is far more than what some girls can say from the Yule Ball *cough*Padma-and-Parvati*cough* Why, I say, why can't she see the glass half full, for a change!!

I am no prophet, but I foresee this lovely girl going down a very very nasty path!! I HOPE I'm wrong!! I really do! C'mon Trace!! I have faith in you girlie! I know you'll see ha light. No matter how obnoxious and self-centered, it's quite clear Roger cares for you!! Give peace a chance!!! ^.^

As usual, Grace. Lo-ooo-o-oo-ve-ly chapter!!!! Keep 'em comin' an' I guarantee happy readers and merry reviews!!

Author's Response: Dear Kaiserin, ~ Thank you very much for such a "merry" and detailed review! I am so glad you understand my story. Yes, Tracey has chosen to hate a person who means her no real harm and she has decided to blame Roger for every little misfortune in which he played no possible part. Her Slytherin "friends" do nothing to improve her attitude, which by now is harming more people than just herself and Roger. ~ So it's really very impressive that you can still remember the overlooked child she was and still like her enough to hope she turns back from the "very very nasty path". But I think you know by now that it would take something BIG to reset the course of Tracey's life. She certainly isn't going to turn over a new leaf just for the fun of it. ~ Thank you very much for your support. There will be more in a couple of days. Best wishes, GhV

Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 11/30/09 Title: Chapter 3: The Worst Defeat

Ufff!! Again... Pooor... pooor Trace!! It's just not right for parents to do stuff like that!

I noticed, you jumped a GREAT deal of time in between. What was her parent's reaction to her being a Slyth? I mean... thye must have said something!! And Roger? What did he say or do? Pester her, pretend she did noy exist? Arrgghhh!!! Too many questions!!!

Great chap anyway.... I like the ideas and the scheming of the Slytherins and how we got to know what was going on in the school while Harry was enduring his usual end of the year Hospital Wing stay!!! Hehehehe....

Author's Response: Dear Kaiserin, ~ Thanks for reviewing. I was wary of makaing this story longer than its interest-value, so about 9-10 months will pass after each chapter. There hasn't been room to give more than a hint of her parents' problems: they are short of money; they are worried about the Muggle grandparents' health' their lifestyle is a constant effort to hide their magic from the Muggle neighbours. So, no, they don't even notice that they pay more attention to Roger. They won't make a deliberate comparison between his exam results and Tracey's, but Tracey is sharp enough to notice that they will be more pleased with Roger. ~ Roger and the parents were shocked that Tracey had ended up with the "bad house" but they went out of their way to pretend it was all right and they didn't mind (which pretence, of course, Tracey saw right through). Roger didn't tease Tracey, but he did annoy her by stopping her in corridors to ask if she was really, truly all right. And this motivated her to BE all right, just to show him! ~ Anyway, Tracey has managed to make friends in Slytherin - if I could paint, I'd paint a picture of them all sitting and scheming together at that Quidditch match. But there will be a major test of those friendships when Slytherin's Monster appears on the scene next chapter... ~ Thank you for writing in. Best wisehs, GhV

The Wolf by clabbert2101

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: In the dark of night, a werewolf is on the hunt.

This is a poem from the victim's perspective.
Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 11/27/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Wolf

Liked it very much.
Kind of dark, but then again, it's about s1 being eaten by a werewolf!! So, duh!
Wish I could write poetry too! Kuddos!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Aberforth Dumbledore: A Love that Dare not Bleat its Name by Equinox Chick

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Aberforth Dumbledore was once infamous throughout the land for casting Inappropriate Charms on goats. He never responded to the claims, never gave his side of the story and lived with an odd reputation for decades.

But now he wants to set the record straight before Rita Skeeter has a chance to twist things furthur awry.

This is Equinox Chick from Hufflepuff and this is my entry in the Stirring category for the Winter Snows 09 competition on the MNFF Beta Boards.

I am not JK Rowling. Does that honestly surprise anyone!

This story won the 2010 QSQ Best Humour Fic - I'm still in shock.

Thank you to Hannah (coolh5000) for beta'ing this fic.
Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 08/30/10 Title: Chapter 1: Aberforth Dumbledore and the Enchanted Goat

Awwhhh... Poor Abe. Such a tragic thing to happen to him. :(

But on the bright side, he did not fiddle with any goats!! Brave man Abe... setting the record straight.

Pretty imaginative to come up with a way to turn around a potentially kinky story into a love affair gone bad. Kudos for yet another highly amusing and enjoyable one-shot.

Author's Response: Of course he didn't fiddle with a goat! He's an honourable man. ha ha. Glad you liked it. i think his story needed to be told

Jemzi by Belledeg

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Jemzi Zabini is the seventeen year old daughter of Blaise Zabini and his wife Harper, and is about to join her fellow witches and wizards at Hogwarts for their final school year. Jemzi is famous for being the once best friend of Albus Potter. However, a mysterious argument last year that only the two of them were witness to has ruined their friendship and they are now practically enemies. No one knows the reason for their fall out, only that it has caused a great divide in their friendship group.

Jemzi's best friend and Albus' cousin, Rose, suspects that their friendship expired because of strange and unwanted feelings between them. Feelings which, despite their fall out, have not gone away. Feelings that are similar to those she has for a certain Slytherin...

So can the next generation of Hogwarts students learn to forget past actions and forgive?

Nominated for "Best Next Generation Story" and "Best Other Character" in the 2010 Quicksilver Quill Awards

This story features Harry Potter, Ginny Potter, Lily Potter, Luka Krum, Blaise Zabini, Harper Zabini, Zacharias Smith, Leon Holmwood, Tristan Wells, Rose Weasley, Scorpius Malfoy, Jemzi and Albus plus many more.
Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 06/09/10 Title: Chapter 15: The Wedding Part Two

OF COURSE I want to see more and more and more of this puzzling little triangle you're cooking up between Lily and the Krum brothers!!! Duh!!

Lukas.... Grrr!! Mysterious, dry... I certainly like him more than Alex... But that may be beacuse you always want what seems you can't get. And that eye-shinning thing you keep giving him! It's giving me goosegumps!! LOL!

I loved the reference to Keedie and Tom... *sigh* such lovely stories of loves past... I'm glad Rose and Scorpious are "unearthing" that stor, letting the world know the "trut" about Riddle!

I hope the kids talk to the portrait!! Or to Sluggy...

And Zizi is finally bonding with Gigi!! Yay!! It was about time. But she simply couldn't help it! Big sis mode went on!! Good for her!!

Oh! Also, I'd like so see a bit more of Rose - Scorps. Their calmed, shy romance is rahter sweet. And I'd love to see how are Daddy Ron and Daddy Draco taking the situation, of course!!

Great chap!!

Author's Response: Uncovering Keedie's story will be a psrt of the story, and I shall certainly add a little more Rose/Scorpius plus their fathers :D

Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 02/15/10 Title: Chapter 2: A Bunch of Hotheads

Interesting... Jem seems capable of uprising many kinds of emotions.

The fight with Albus... heart related I guess, maybe.

But these fighting fellows... I wonder what's the story behind them and if it relates to the one with Al, or maybe it's just sub-plot...

I like the quiet and shy romance between Rose and Scorpious. Very sweet!

Nice story. Very promising!! ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you. More updates soon :D

Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 07/28/10 Title: Chapter 17: Letters

Soo... that interesting dream was most certainly about the OTHER Krum boy. Great! I'm positively squealing in delight!! ^.^

Scorps is being an arse, but deep down I hope that there is a hidden good (more like great-life-theatening) reason behind his attitude!

And we can clearly see thant Leon and Tristan almost had something going on... something that needs to get out of the closet! Come over to Argentina mates, and get married! ;)

The non-sent letters from Albus were a great touch. I did not expect them and enjoyed them. Especially the law-siut threaten. That was a fun touch.

I'm hoping, more than usual for a quick update, so as to know where are all this little big plot twists headed!! ^.^

Author's Response: Big update for sure. And your faith in Scorpius is pleasing :) The other Krum boy indeed :D

Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 07/23/10 Title: Chapter 16: The Wedding Part Three

I totally loved this chapter. You described the chemistry between Lily and Luka soo... delightfully. I do hope that code word finds it way to Luka's hands... It'd be lovely! ;)

As for that duel. That was a great piece of work. Smith really had it coming! I can't believe how shameless that brat is!!
Can't he spell MARRIED!?!? Gosh! He soo deserved a good lesson. I'm thrilled you made Harper giving it to him!! And now, the mask has fallen and she knows Smith loathes Jemzi, just because of being Blaise's child!!

Kudos! Great chapter! It almost feels like fanfic soap opera!!! Loving it!

Author's Response: Smith is a bit of an arse, I always felt. Luka finding the code...my writing pattern is becoming too predictable ;-)

Reviewer: Kaiserin Signed
Date: 09/07/10 Title: Chapter 23: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

Holy canelones!!! What A chapter!!

I truly can't point towards the bit I liked most... Let's see... Scorpious and Rose mazyingly written make up? That was too lovely. "my idiot" and all that. Freshly out of fluff. Loved it!! ^.^

Perhaps, Luka's daring rescue!! That was quite awesome. Lily stupid reckless thing! But perfect grounds for Krum to play prince charming. ^.^ I soo like the Bulgarian hawtness!

Still want to see Blaise's reaction to his new-found daddy! He had a nice detail with the dress, that much us certain.

Also liked the Harry and Ginny seasoning. The hints towards their own little love story were a sweet touch.

Let's see... what else did I just love? Well, the Boy Who Loved, clearly. And the fact that Keeler's dad turned out to be the prickiest prick of the chapter. Hehehe! That'll give the skank some thinking to do! *snorts* Her dad nearly kills Harry Potter's son! Jackass!!

On a side note... could the Malfoys be more slow to catch on? Going solo into a deserted corridor AND giving room to disarming. Useful for lovely Albus' rescue, not so much of self-preservation instinct for a former Death Eater! Tut-tut!

Oh, and, yeah! There IS the little yet HUGE detail of Al wanting to ask Jem to live with him. I do hope that's the first thing he blurts out once he regains consciousness!!

LOVED the chapter. Soooo sad it's next to last.... :'(

Author's Response: Once he regains conciousness?? Very optimistic ;-)