“It’s our rule not to dredge up past things, remember?”This rule is about to be broken.
~Inspired by a worldwide beloved film.
Callie, Lia AND Albus steal this story!!!
That smootch was pure bliss! I hope Hermione can get past her hurt and surrender to her luuuuuuurve!! LOL!
Build up? This chapter was bloody brilliant!!
I looooooved Minerva's letter! It was the cherry on top of the ice cream!! ^^
Love your story! I'm loving the upperclassmen for meddling in the twin's dilema so much, as well! I'm basically overflowing with love for all your story. Portrait-Albus and Peeves included!
Author's Response: Yay! Glad someone noticed the letters and Peevesie! :) Thanks as ever, dear Ceci!
Lovely darling spunky Rose!!! ^_^ That last coment was awesome!!
Author's Response: Well, I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters in this story as well, now that it is finally finished.
I'm soooooooooooo falling in love with your writing!!!
AND even if I did not... Dolores = Jabba would have won my heart!!
Not to mention.... Missy's her daughter!!! Christmas and my birthday were combined!! A WE SO ME!
Author's Response: Thanks! The first thing that popped into mind when I saw the illustration of Umbridge in the books was Jabba. Seemed like a match made in heaven.
This is better than a Bic Mac! And I LOVE Big Macs!!
I enjoy all the movie references. And the fact the Toad is pushing daisies!
And our darling heroine has a crush, rather teo crushes. Is she smitten over Arch? He pulled some very impressive stunts back in this chapter... Gone read some more! Great story!
Even BETTER than a Big Mac... Wait! I've already said that! Dung!
I like Motoko!!
Cori simply ROCKS!
This is getting insane! I almost miss slow-moving, setting chapters. Those that are nearly filling one and most writers apollogize for in chapter end notes. ALMOST. This story simply keeps getting better. Not a single moment to breathe!! Just action, action, action.
Missy is such a cool character! And I'm guessing there's more than friendship between her and Charlie! (YES!!) Given the position our fair redhead has put into, I'd guess mamma is not very happy about it, or is even moved angry at her own suspicions since the youngsters neglect to officialize.
I think I can't actually name my fav character!! Each one has something I like so much. Arch with his mystery air and general awesomeness (yes, I'm making up a word for him!) Missy with her crazyness and thought past (being Umbridge's daughter is something I would only wish to PB or Voldy) Charlie with his sensibility and cooking skills! Not to mention caustic queen Cori. I've gotten attached to them!!
I googled Satoshi... Arch just keeps getting hawter!!
Funny, when you first mentioned Arch being murderous toward Harry for dumping his cousin, I'd kind of assumed we were talking Ginny. Since wih Cho he had like... one and a half date, during wich she mostly wept over dear ol' Ced... I wouldn't have thought it'd have taken such a toll on her.
As for Marrieta's SNEAK. Totally deserved! Thought I'd hoped it'd fade out, in time. Are we set during Golden Trio's sixth or seventh year?
Anyhow... I'm sending life and obligations for a walk and keep reading!! ^.^
This is CRUEL!
There'sa cliffie on your other story as well!!!
This is an unhappy review! Extremely unhappy review! How's a girl suposed to cope with that kind of stress!? >:C
It's not nice to end such a lovely chapter with a cliffie like that. I mean, Missy's costume hilarious! She was a Slytherin! Impressed by her pureness of heart. She IS fighting for the good guys!
I particularly liked that Cori was clad in a kimono. *winks to the asian hawtness in the story*
I urge you to update soon and end my agony! I want to know what the heck happened with Cho and why they want children! Are they brainwashing them or what?
Awh!! I do addore this story! I so wish you'd finish it!! :) Pretty please!?
BTW; congrats on making the QSQ best OC runner up! You desserved it and more!!!
That last sentence got me slightly emotional...
I very much enjoyed this one-shot. It was nice and endearing.
I'm guessing you're not very fond of Ron/Hermione, by the way the girl was constantly irritatedby him. Honestly, doxy eggs? What a pine-head!
LOL! I enjoyed it! ;)
Author's Response: No no nooooo, I love Ron/Hermione, I needed an excuse for George to go to the ball. I just think Ron is still a bit of a prat at times - ha ha. Glad you liked the story. ~Carole~
I find myself quite loving this story. Snape acustic thoughts are quite enjoyable. The QSQ was CERTAINLY well placed!!
I can't help but feel a bit bad about how his luck is unfolding so far. Poor bloke. The elf stealing incident is never going to go away, is it?
On second thoughts, I would guess it is a bit of a way for him to pay for kharma... he was quite nasty at Hogwarts. I can't help but remember that AWFUL remark he made at Herms when she was hit by that densaugeo hex... So, man up Sev, it's your bad actions biting you in the back!
Loving Shoshana and her way of pestering him, btw. Her insistance for him to choose a different carreer where brilliant!! Keep 'em comin'
Author's Response: Yes, my Catholic school is showing with this story, Snape needing to clense his soul through suffering and all.
Winner of the 2010 QSQ for Best Canon Romance!
She IS going to start a betting pool, isn't she?? LOL! That'd be soo Mary!
That was a cute thing, BTW. A bit psycho, but cute nonetheless. I mean, she's drifted appart from her friend, but she clearly still cares enough to be keeping an eye on her, and noticing all this changes that Lily herself fails (or refuses) to notice...
I really liked Sirius asking about whether she was one of them or not. I guess this means she's closer to being let in on the secret. YAY!
And I think the kitten detail, (specially the part when Lily mentions doing it partly to annoy Sirius) as well as Severus glaring at them during that conversation in Potions were great details, that add up to a great chapter!!
Looking forward to the next one!!
Author's Response: haha mary's insane. it's have the fun. thanks so much, i'm glad you're enjoying it! next chapter should be up soon :)
Charlotte's web!!!!! LOL!!! Brilliant!!!
Isaac Smith wouldn't happen to be related to another not very nice Smith, right??
I liked this very much!! And it's quite funny the way Remus reacted to not having thought about the obliviating thing before... Again, brilliant!!
Liked it very mucho!!! Great chap!
Author's Response: Haha same last name...blond...Hufflepuff....I think it's a definite possibility :)
Urgh.... Tricky situation for the Trickster!
BTW, James did get what he desserved when she kissed Sirius!! He was just begging for ther to do something nasty! I've much rather she kissed Peter, almost. But since Sirius is such a ladies man, and Peter more shy and akward, I guess, Sirius was a better choice.
And James' reaction to his explanation. ("You've kissed her before?") Brilliant!! ^_^
Quite a git Sev, trying to give away secrets that aren't his. After promising Albus he wouldn't!! I bet half Slytherin knows already! But I'm pretty sure Lily's intrigued now and will eventually figure it out... I mean, James sort of keeps giving hints...
Like it very much! Good chapter!
Nice turn of events... I'm pretty sure Sev feels like a pile of scum right now. The nerve he had to treat Lily like that!!! Gosh!
I have to admit, that she should have waited for confirmation that the letters came from him, before blurting that out... That would have been a smart move, Evans!
I hope now she puts two plus two together and realize it was James!!
Thank you! Vielen Danke! Muchas gracias! Merci beaucoup!!
I've never ever ever loved a cliffie as much as I loved this. Closing it with a kiss, and what a kiss! Perfect! Really. I'm just a bit puzzled as to how will Lily find out about the other nicknames. But I guess you might have left something for the other chapter. Btw, thanks for the betting pool!! ^.^ Great one!
I absolutely loved this chapter as well... Mostly because it covered most of the things I had been waiting to happen!! ^.^ LOL!
The animagi discovery, actually all that conversation and situation between Lily and James was quite adorable. I like very much their dialogs. I'm not sure if I mentioned it before, but they feel quite natural and real.
Of course, the scene with the patronuses was magical. The deer and the doe. So romantic!
As for Severus... it's kind of funny, but I'd always thought his would have changed sort of last moment. Like, after he'd realized he had set Voldemort on Lily's tracks when he told him about te prophecy, you know? But the moment you choose was quite fitting.
I wonder about this sequel of yours now... I sense it focus on the summer between sixth and seventh? Interesting... We'll get to see Tuney and Sev misbehaving... That's promising!!
Great fic!! Loved every bit of it!
You EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL writer!!!
How DARE you getting me to CRY over Tom Riddle's death!!! You should be ashamed of yourself!!
BTW, that was meant to be cahrged with irony. I'm not sure if it shows... :)
Gosh!! The final line is great!! "You-Know- Who" I guess Keeds was a bit of a prophet. Poor girl... why why why did you have to kill her!!! :'(
I DO hope Riddle had the good sense to try for some remorse. I mean.. hello, Earth to Tom? REMORSE=Seeing Keeds in the afterlife... That's it dude!!! No questions asked!!
Another lovely thing about this chapter. Keedie's humor was left untouched in the afterlife!! AWESOME!! I do hope she gives him HELL for the lack of nose thing. I can just picture her... trying all sorts of funny party accesories on him. Clown noses, those that come with moustache and plases, cat noses...
I am going to miss your fic soo much!!!! :(
I hope to see a new masterpiece around soon!! I swear you could write a romance using Greyback and I'd buy it!!! (again, you're SUCH a devilishly great writer!!)
Author's Response: Shucks, thanks for such an awesome review! Made my day. It might please you to know that there is a second epilogue for this fic, and it shall be completed very soon. Thanks so much for reading. Keedie will crop up in other stories, I swear. Glad you felt for Voldy! :D