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I currently live in the great state of South Dakota. Why do I live in a place with such nasty winters, I don't know. Since most of my family lives far away in more exotic places than I do, my life revolves around my four dogs, Sampson, Raphael, Seamus, and Mayhem. They are a min-pin, a toy poodle, a teacup Malti-Poo, and a Great Dane, respectively.

I've always had a fascination with the mental illness aspect that characterizes Bellatrix Black Lestrange. My first story is her story. On one site I was sorted into Ravenclaw but I think the hat made a mistake. Most days I feel like a Slytherin!
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MOMENTS OF BLISS by moonymaniac
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1201]

Summary: Remus Lupin is a man with a tragic past, filled with pain, suffering and sorrow. But it is also a past filled with great adventure, true friendship and…love? Even though the odds were against him, Remus found happiness at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. He had the Marauders, he was a prefect and his transformations were less horrible, thanks to his Animagi friends. What more could a teenage werewolf want? And how long could his happiness last? Remus and the Marauders prove that in the saddest of lives and darkest of times, there can still be moments of bliss.

Remus centric but with a lot of the other Marauders. This story is a romance, but has almost as much general Marauder era background and side story as romance.
Pre-HBP and DH, so some things from DH will be disregarded, as the warning indicates, but some Spoilers will be incorporated.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death

Word count: 441388 Chapters: 73 Completed: No
06/08/05 Updated: 10/05/15

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 02/16/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Notes on a Life

You can almost feel Remus' mother's heart break. How do you explain prejudice to a child? I felt angry with their friends who were obviously making up excuses for not associating with Remus. Then I felt hope after reading the letter from Dumbledore. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Fynnsmom. Being a mom myself, writing from Rena's point of view was a little tough. Granted I would never have to imagine having a werewolf child; *duh* there are so many things that can happen to a child that will sorely impact their lives. It is almost enough to want to put them in a padded room and keep them there until they are 30. :) But alas, we aren't allowed to do that. lol I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 03/08/10 Title: Chapter 16: Sixth Year Begins

You know, as stupid as everyone makes Peter appear he did manage to figure out how to turn himself into a rat and back. I'm not a Peter fan but I was just thinking that. I guess Remus has his work cut out for him trying to get Lindi to go to the ball. Maybe her heart will soften as summer gets further away in her memory. I really enjoyed reading this chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 02/25/10 Title: Chapter 10: Humiliation

I can understand Lindi's fear of snakes. I also have a fear of snakes--even little ones that you find in the garden. I don't actually fear them but I hate how they suddenly just pop out at you when you're innocently walking through the grass:D I'm wondering what's going on between the DADA teacher and Lindi. Bravo to Remus for sticking up for her even though it got him lines. James' boggart was pretty funny. I can imagine he would worry about going bald. Great chapter.

Author's Response: They say to write what you know and I know fear of snakes. *shivers at typing the word* Ughh...I have been known to nearly get run over while walking when I see a dead snake on the road and jump in front of oncoming cars to avoid them. Heck...I've jumped at a piece of rope I thought was a snake. *sigh* It is a problem. That was the only boggart I could think of for dear James. lol All that mussing of his hair...:) I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thank you.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 03/03/10 Title: Chapter 13: Ravenclaw Versus Slytherin

Lindi sounds like an amazing flyer. I'm sure the boys were all picturing her lucky knickers:D I thought Lily was kind of obvious in making comments to Remus about Lindi. But then she doesn't know that her conversation with Lindi was overheard by all of the Marauders. Great chapter.

Author's Response: hehe Naughty boys.... :) I rather got a kick out of making Lily so obvious when she thought she was being so clever and subtle because she didn't know they knew....*gets dizzy* :*) But it was another chance for Remus to be embarrassed, but very pleasantly so, so I had fun with it. :D Thanks, Fynnsmom.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 03/09/10 Title: Chapter 17: Lindiís Problem

That was really interesting. It seems so obvious now that you mentioned it--that Lindi is afraid that she might hurt someone or something. I guess I'd be frightened of mandrakes too. I liked Remus characterization that brilliant people are sometimes psychotic. I agree with him:D Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 02/18/10 Title: Chapter 2: A Wish Come True

I almost cried when Remus got his letter of acceptance to Hogwarts. My heart just broke when I thought of this intelligent, studious little boy possibly not going to school. Great chapter.

Author's Response: :D I loved writing that scene. I have to admit I teared up a little thinking about him dancing around the kitchen. It made me so happy to think of him so happy after suffering so much. *sigh* I just love him. Thank you, Fynnsmom.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 02/18/10 Title: Chapter 3: 1st Year: The Adventure Begins

It was fun to guess who people were by your description. I smiled when Severus was called Sunshine. I can't think of a more unlikely name for him. The young Mundungus sounded like a character even at his young age. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Haha...Severus isn't a very sunny guy, is he? I really should feel more sympathy for him, but he treated Harry, Neville, Remus....and pretty much everyone but Lily and maybe Draco and Dumbledore like garbage, so I find it difficult. :*) I'm sure he was civil to the rest of the staff, but we only saw him being a jerk, so yeah... I think Mundungus is a hoot and really wanted to include him, even if it is probably incorrect timeline wise, but, hey, I claim artistic license. ;) Thank you for reviewing, Fynnsmom. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 02/18/10 Title: Chapter 4: Making Friends

I always get a kick out of teenaged wizards comparing their wands. I think thestral mane is a totally awesome wand center. It was funny hearing Remus logically explain why it wasn't scary to have thestral mane in your wand. Great chapter.

Author's Response: :) Boys can be so competitive. hehe. I'm glad you like the thestral hair. I love those creatures, and thought it would be good for Remus. Thanks, Fynnsmom.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 02/18/10 Title: Chapter 5: Time Flies

Time really did fly in this chapter. I guess that's because you're trying to get to the actual point of your story. The only thing I found strange was the Marauders finding out so early that Remus was a werewolf. I didn't have a problem with that--it's your interpretation. Great chapter. I suspect we'll get to more of the romance now:D

Author's Response: :*) Yes, I rather skipped over a lot of detail with their early years, for just the reason you state. Can you imagine how long the story would be if I hadn't ? O.O Actually, they did find out in 2nd year, didn't they? Three years to figure out how to become animagi...I figure they started work after Christmas 2nd year when Sirius got the books (didn't he? *thinks*) Figured it out after Christmas 5th year... That's right, isn't it? *hopes* And yes, there actually is romance coming up in this epic romance. :*) Thank you Fynnsmom, and especially for the part about the timeline. I always want to know if there is something that is confusing or I've messed up. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 02/26/10 Title: Chapter 11: Tutors and Teasing

That was a nice little diversion for Remus. Too bad Darlene had to get so possessive. I think my favorite scene was when Remus returned to his dorm and the other three Marauders knew that he'd been snogging someone in the broom closet from looking at the Map. This has been fun reading, aside from the abusive DADA teacher but I guess even he has a reason for being there and DADA teachers are notoriously awful. Great chapter.

Author's Response: :) I'm glad you enjoyed that. I have to say, my favorite things to write are poor Remus being tormented by his loved ones. He's just so cute when he's embarrassed! lol And DADA teachers, other than Remus of course) ;) are notoriously awful. That's why I don't feel too bad about letting Adamson be a little over the top rotten. :*) Of course, even he isn't as bad as Umbridge, but Dumbledore didn't have much power to do anything about her. :( But anyway...I'm glad you are having fun. It has been a lot of fun writing it, too. Thanks for leaving me such great feedback. That makes it fun, too. :)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 02/19/10 Title: Chapter 6: Hard Work Pays

How wonderful that Remus has friends during his transformations. That was nice of you to come up with reasons for Peter's usefulness as a rat. It was funny that Sirius and James were proud of their animagi forms because they were big:D Great chapter.

Author's Response: Yes, I'm so glad he had them. He suffered too much as it is. :( And I try very hard to be nice to Peter, but he really makes it hard! lol Silly Sirius and James...they think size matters...LOL Thanks, Fynnsmom.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 03/04/10 Title: Chapter 14: Butterbeer with Mum

I had to think back to try to remember if I've done that with my kids. They're all grown up now and I can't remember specific times but what is it about mothers that they have to brag about their kids to other people. I know I've done that--right in front of the kid and it must have been embarrassing. I'm always fascinated with Lucius. Even at my age, I love a bad boy. This was such a fun chapter to read. I loved reading about Remus' interaction with his mother. You wouldn't think that Remus is a werewolf. He's such a gentleman. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Oh...I remember my mother TRYING to have that conversation with me... *dies* But I can see doing it with my own daughter. She's much more open about stuff than I was. But she's still too young, so I better not be having that conversation too soon. lol And bragging...haha Isn't it the truth. But I think it is our job to embarrass them. ;) Oh, Lucius...I have to say, I'm influenced by Jason Isaacs' portrayal of him....he's just so bad boy hot! :*D Remus is a gentleman...if there was ever a true thing said about a character. I just love him. Love him...*sigh* I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. I'd say it was one of my 4 favorites to write. Probably in the top two and definitely one of the ones I'm most proud of. Thank you, Fynnsmom.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 03/10/10 Title: Chapter 18: Special Attention

That was so sweet. I could see myself closing my eyes too when hexing someone. One time when I was driving I thought I was going to hit a bird so I squeezed my eyes shut. Then I said "You can't do that--you're driving." I think Lindi needs to learn to let go and that things can be put to rights later. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 03/17/10 Title: Chapter 19: Just a Little Hexing Between Friends

That was a very amusing chapter. I really thought Remus was finally going to be able to ask Lindi out. The duel was great, especially when Lily joined in to make it more fair. I cracked up when Sirius and James were re-enacting what happened in dueling club. That's exactly what happened but they put a different slant on things. Great chapter.

Author's Response: :) Thank you, Fynnsmom. I really had a fun time writing this chapter. Oh that they were all so easy and amusing to write....This is when I love the boys the best; when they are being boys! lol :*)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 03/06/10 Title: Chapter 15: Not Her Little Boy Anymore

Poor Remus. He has to be so responsible and worry about things no one else would worry about. You wrote these conversations so well. I could actually hear them happening. Who would think that his train ride home would be worse than his transformation. I laughed more than once. I'm glad I'm at home with only my dogs to look at me strangely for laughing over apparently nothing:D I really loved this chapter. It was sensitive and honest and funny.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Fynnsmom. I have to say this is one of my favorite chapters, probably in a three way tie for most fun to write and two way for which I'm proudest of. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I loved putting myself in both Remus' (since I remember the horror of my mom trying to talk to me) and in Rena's (as a mom myself starting into these murky waters O.O) positions. It was just too much fun to imagine. I think overall, Remus' parents have been some of the most fun for me to develop. Maybe because they are my own. Anyway, I'm glad you got a laugh at Remus' expense/embarrassment. He's so cute when he blushes, isn't he? lol


Bast: Operation Kitty by Subversa
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 29]

Summary: Some animals are more familiar than others -- this is the story of how Severus Snape acquired his familiar. This story is a one-shot prequel to Master of Enchantment and will make more sense if you read MoE first.

Categories: Hermione/Snape Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 3835 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
07/01/05 Updated: 07/01/05

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 12/25/09 Title: Chapter 1: 1

I had a golden retreiver once who was named Edward Trent-Lestat and I used to call him my vampire puppy--I don't know why. I never had an Anne Rice moment. Actually, my youngest daughter named him. This was a wonderful story. I wasn't sure why Severus was given a cat but it seemed to be a good thing for him. He was a master spy but he let a kitten outsmart him. Loved this story.


Meet the Parents by Subversa
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 22]

Summary: In the best tradition, Severus must meet Hermione's parents to seek their blessing. Just how has Dumbledore meddled THIS time? This story is a sequel to Master of Enchantment, as well as Bast, though it may stand alone.

Categories: Hermione/Snape Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 3505 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
07/07/05 Updated: 07/07/05

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 01/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: 1

It looks like Severus and Hermione did a good job of convincing the Grangers that they should be married. The very best part was hearing about Dumbledore and McGonagall "preparing" the Grangers for the engagement:D Great story.


Meet the Boys by Subversa
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 21]

Summary: Hermione and Severus are approaching their last major hurdle: informing Harry and Ron of their engagement and plans to marry. Severus sulks and intrudes on Lupin and Tonks while the Dream Team convenes. Later, Severus has this velvet box to show to his bride-to-be. This story is a one-shot sequel to Master of Enchantment, Bast, & Meet the Parents.

Categories: Hermione/Snape Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 4523 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
07/26/05 Updated: 07/26/05

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 01/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: 1

This chapter had a lot of wonderful humor in it. I laughed out loud when I read that Gilderoy Lockhart had turned into a wedding planner. I laughed even louder when Ron just found out that he had a wedding planner and who it was:D I liked that Harry and Severus were able to shake hands as Harry offered his congratulations. I loved that Severus paid a visit to his dragon great aunt and she gave him the Snape family engagement ring for Hermione. It sounded lovely. Great story.


Meet the Beetles by Subversa
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary: The story of the wedding of Hermione Granger and Severus Snape, told through a series of newspaper articles; later on, we visit Hermione and Severus on their honeymoon. This story is a one-shot sequel to Master of Enchantment, Bast, Meet the Parents, and Meet the Boys. It is also non-HBP compliant.

Categories: Hermione/Snape Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 4333 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
08/27/05 Updated: 08/27/05

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 01/22/10 Title: Chapter 1: 1

That was outrageously written, hysterically funny, and extremely clever. Great job.


Summary: This story is a sequel to Master of Enchantment, Bast, Meet the Parents, Meet the Boys, and Meet the Beetles. The honeymoon is winding down as Severus returns to work; Great Aunt Seraphina arrives for a visit, bearing gifts.

Categories: Hermione/Snape Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 25106 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
09/07/05 Updated: 09/20/05

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 01/24/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Wedding Gifts

That was entertaining. I'm very happy that Gilderoy found a career that is so fitting for him. I'm happy Hermione accepted Quirk. She's mellowed quite a bit. I guess that comes from maturity. The beginning was funny in that Hermione hated to see Severus go to work and he couldn't wait to get there. I'm sure this is a huge adjustment for him and he really doesn't know how to act. I'm really enjoying this series of stories about Severus and Hermione. Great chapter.

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