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09/18/09




I currently live in the great state of South Dakota. Why do I live in a place with such nasty winters, I don't know. Since most of my family lives far away in more exotic places than I do, my life revolves around my four dogs, Sampson, Raphael, Seamus, and Mayhem. They are a min-pin, a toy poodle, a teacup Malti-Poo, and a Great Dane, respectively.

I've always had a fascination with the mental illness aspect that characterizes Bellatrix Black Lestrange. My first story is her story. On one site I was sorted into Ravenclaw but I think the hat made a mistake. Most days I feel like a Slytherin!


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Harry Potter and the Girl Who Lived by mrsgeorgeweasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 1115 Reviews
Summary: It’s Harry’s sixth year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and once again there is a new Defence Against the Dark Arts Teacher, and Snape likes her almost as much as he likes The Boy Who Lived, but why is the new professor so interested in Harry? What dark secrets is she hiding? Is Harry the only survivor of Lord Voldemort’s wrath? Will things ever be simple for our beloved Trio? It’s going to be another interesting year for Harry and his friends, and he’s going to realise that he might not be as alone as he thought and in more ways than one..

This story is newly edited as of 25/3/2009!!

The sequel to this fic has been posted, it is titled Harry Potter and the Unspeakable Power. The spin off stories One Life Owed and The Night That Started It All are also available.

This was written in the aftermath of OOTP. Events of HBP and DH not included.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/21/09 Title: Chapter 17: Expiscor Diligo

I don't understand why everyone was getting so angry at Harry. Basically, Ellie just blurted out that Halloween was the anniversary of his parents' deaths. He had every right to be upset. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/21/09 Title: Chapter 18: Draco's Discovery

Well, that wasn't as bad as I expected. That would make Harry and Ellie cousins. I know I can be really dense sometimes, but I don't see why this is a problem, other than that Ellie and everybody else neglected to tell Harry that he had a cousin. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/21/09 Title: Chapter 19: Home Truths

That does explain why this book is called The Girl Who Lived. I guess I just kind of went along and trusted that it would all be explained in time. Excellent chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/21/09 Title: Chapter 20: Aurors and Good Howlers

For some reason I really like Howlers--I just like the concept and when someone receives one I think it's kind of funny. So, that being said, I like the concept of the opposite of a Howler almost better. Excellent chapter. But, I'm wondering what's going to go wrong for Harry.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/21/09 Title: Chapter 21: In the Open

Wow--the Weasleys narrowly escaped. But, when did the Weasleys leave the Burrow? They said they hadn't been there for months. This reminds me of a scene from HBP when Death Eaters started the Burrow on fire. Excellent chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/22/09 Title: Chapter 22: Gryffindor vs. Slytherin

I didn't think it was too bad of a song. Didn't JKR herself write "Weasley is Our King?" It seems as if Ellie has some sort of mental connection with Harry. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/22/09 Title: Chapter 23: When Severus Met Elizabeth

Poor Severus--How did he ever get involved with the two women who married Potter men and then become indebted to them. You have to wonder why he did this to himself. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/22/09 Title: Chapter 24: A Christmas Engagement

That was wonderful. I always like reading about Christmas balls. I agree that the world needs a little madness as long as it's happy, creative madness. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/22/09 Title: Chapter 25: Making A Home With A House-Elf

I love Dobby. He's too adorable. I want a Dobby. I think you've done a marvelous job on describing Dobby's personality. Great chapter. Loved it.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/22/09 Title: Chapter 26: Things That Could Have Been

Well, I sure am feeling all warm and fuzzy and somewhat contemplative. I know why Harry had to stay with the Dursleys but he would've been so much happier with the Weasleys. It's strange how life is at times. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/22/09 Title: Chapter 27: A Potter Christmas

I love stories about Christmas and the Potter family Christmas is no exception. I can see Dobby's little pile of clothes. Now I'm hungry for Christmas dinner. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/22/09 Title: Chapter 28: Surprises

Aww, Charlie finally proposed--well I guess I shouldn't say finally since he proposed when he was 8 or 9 didn't he? So what is the meaning of all of Harry's dreams? Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/23/09 Title: Chapter 29: A Lesson In Life

That was really sweet. I enjoyed hearing about the women of the past--Granny Potter, Jane, and Lily and about how traditional and old fashioned wizard society is. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/23/09 Title: Chapter 30: The First Protection

I was intrigued by Dumbledore's explanation to Harry about why he and Ellie can hear the other's voice and how the same connection existed between James and Sirius. Ellie must indeed be a powerful witch. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/23/09 Title: Chapter 31: The Demise of Percy

And here I thought that Harry was having another dream. But I agree with you, if someone had to die, it might as well be Percy. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/23/09 Title: Chapter 32: Farewell and Bon Voyage

I think you would've felt worse if it had been someone else. What's gone is gone. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/23/09 Title: Chapter 33: Let's Talk About Tom

It was interesting to see how the students reacted to saying Voldemort's name. The children of Death Eaters seemed to be the most frightened. Maybe because they had the most reason to be frightened? Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/23/09 Title: Chapter 34: The Attack

We just met Ellie. You can't take her from us already. Besides, she could probably duel Voldemort and a bunch of Death Eaters single-handedly. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/18/09 Title: Chapter 6: Sweetest Sixteen

I'm new to this website and although I've been reading for a while this is my first review. I enjoyed attending Harry's party. I have tears in my eyes as I watched him open gift after wonderful gift. I especially liked the wand holder and Moody's comments. Ellie's gift was also extremely touching as was Ginny's. Great job on this chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/18/09 Title: Chapter 7: Foretold

Wow!! I can understand Harry's curiosity with Ellie--just who is she? I'm curious myself. I'm so glad Harry shared the prophecy with his "family" and friends. I think Harry has a little problem asking for help. He's got to learn that you can't just do everything yourself.