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I currently live in the great state of South Dakota. Why do I live in a place with such nasty winters, I don't know. Since most of my family lives far away in more exotic places than I do, my life revolves around my four dogs, Sampson, Raphael, Seamus, and Mayhem. They are a min-pin, a toy poodle, a teacup Malti-Poo, and a Great Dane, respectively.

I've always had a fascination with the mental illness aspect that characterizes Bellatrix Black Lestrange. My first story is her story. On one site I was sorted into Ravenclaw but I think the hat made a mistake. Most days I feel like a Slytherin!

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Once in a Blue Moon by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 301 Reviews
Summary: Tonks is rich in family and friends, but the wages of a new Auror keep her short of funds. A side job brings something into her life money can't buy.


*Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill for Best Romance- Canon.*


Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/03/09 Title: Chapter 8: Dark Moon

I want a Remus in my life. Actually, right now I'm happy reading about Remus. You can tell how wonderful a person is if they'll sit and watch a soap with your Gran and make meaningful comments. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for being happy to read about Remus. If I had psychic (or psychotic as Angelica from Rugrats put it) powers, I'd send a real life counterpart your way. Since I don't, I'll just send up a prayer. :)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/03/09 Title: Chapter 9: The Serpent and the Moon

Damn it--my reading time is over and you've left me with a cliffie. I don't think I can stay up and read anymore. Tonks' friend knows who Remus is doesn't she? Thank you for the time frame at Hogwarts. I think you mentioned it before but I got involved in the romance. Tonks would know who Mad-Eye is wouldn't she? I'm feeling a little nervous about this Death Eater party. This was a great chapter. You may not see me until Monday. Good night for now.

Author's Response: Cliffie's are useful for making readers come back and making it easy to jump into the next chapter when writing. Win/win, heh. Whenever I "see" you, you'll make my day! I hope the rest of your weekend is relaxing and fun! :)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/04/09 Title: Chapter 10: Crying for the Moon

I'm the sort of person who would just tell Tonks "Look, your boyfriend is a werewolf. But he's a really nice guy. I'm sure you'll learn to deal with it. You'd better because there aren't that many nice guys around." How long has it been since she's seen Sirius? I know I said I wouldn't be back until Monday but I couldn't resist. This is just too precious--her choice of music and plans to dance in the moonlight as I sit here with Linkin Park blaring in the background. I'd probably scare Remus away. Actually, I'm Lucius' age. I wonder if the Death Eater would be scared? Tonks is so smart. Putting on the perfume (my sister likes Moonlight Path too) and then flooing to Diagon Alley. Too bad they couldn't stay longer and get more information. Your writing is so wonderful that I can't comment enough about it. I feel bad because I know authors put so much into their writing and here I am spending every waking moment thinking about when I can read again. Excellent chapter.

Author's Response:

You had me at "I couldn't resist", :D, but you officially completed me by saying you think about when you'll read again.

My day (which is rainy and gray and sucktackular weather-wise), is now sunny and flowe-filled in my heart. Thank you so much for giving me such wonderful feedback! 

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/04/09 Title: Chapter 11: Full Moon Rising

Tonks reacted how I hoped she would. I would've been extremely disappointed if she had done something different. Wow!! I think this is the best chapter yet. Evan is a first class prick. Oops, can I say prick in a review. What a day for Tonks! To have first hand experience investigating a werewolf and then to find out from Evan Bloody Rosier that her new boyfriend is a werewolf--Tonks has a lot of class, but I knew she did. Excellent chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think Evan will grow on you (like mold, heh) through the stories, but he's definitely making Remus look good by being such an arse! :D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/04/09 Title: Chapter 12: Hunter's Moon

That was too wonderful. I think Sirius would be more shocked. I am sitting here teary-eyed. That was too cool. I've owned huge dogs--Newfoundlands, Great Pyrenees, St. Bernard--and there's nothing like sleeping with them--knowing they'll protect you to the death and love you unconditionally. I think a wolf would be like that. Hey, I'll take a canine any day. This chapter was too incredible for words. Excellent.

Author's Response: I think his years in Azkaban have given Sirius a "don't sweat the small stuff" mentality. Protecting Harry is is top priority. He considers Tonks a grown woman (most of the time, heh) so I couldn't see him pulling a Ron and overreacting. :D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/04/09 Title: Chapter 13: The Moon and Sirius

This was too cute. I can't believe she's got to impersonate Priscilla Parkinson. I'm just going ewww. I've always pictured Sirius as a Newfie. I was disappointed in the film version of his animagus form. I can see Sirius still flirting with the ladies as a dog. I love canines. This was a great chapter, I really liked the interplay among the three characters. I still thin Sirius was more shocked. Excellent chapter.

Author's Response: I'm not trying to say that Sirius will never make comments or be uncomfortable with his friend and little cousin dating (Sirius is in 4 out of the 5 canon chapter fics, so there is ongoing adjustment and growth in relationships) but he knows life is short and after what he's lived through, not a lot truly shocks him anymore.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/04/09 Title: Chapter 14: Harlequin's Moon

How is Tonks gonna get out of this one? How does Evan know? Maybe he cared for Tonks more than she knew? Or is this some weird game he's playing? Does he like to pretend Prissy is Tonks and does Prissy let him do that? Can Remus intercede as her father? Probably not. This was very good. I'm on the edge of my seat though. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! Evan did care for Tonks more than she thought (he just loves himself and his business more than anything else) but she's not perfect, she gives little things away that Evan picks up on because he's a cunning Slytherin.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/04/09 Title: Chapter 15: Tears of the Moon

Well, that sounds ominous. You aren't going to make something hideous happen in these last few chapters are you? Tonks is so talented. I can't believe how she got out of her last situation with Evan. He really thinks all of these people are Tonks--and they are:) I'm sure he misses her more than he realizes. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Ta, thanks! The books were about Harry, so we didn't really get to "see" Tonks in action, much. I had fun creating her work life, and the jobs that bleed over into personal life. Nothing hideous will happen, just a lesson Tonks needs to learn, and a debt she'll have to pay in the next chapter fic. :D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/04/09 Title: Chapter 16: Vanished Moon

Whenever I think of Sirius in his dog form I think of my Newfoundland, Sampson, who died in the summer of 2000--gone but never forgotten. I've been checking into getting another Newfie. They're great dogs--very loyal and intelligent. I'm glad Cami just needed a distraction from the bottle. That's important but I thought something worse was going on. And now we know what Sirius was doing when Harry was in the triwizard tournament. Great chapter. See you tomorrow.

Author's Response: Thank you! Sampson sounds like a big sweetie. Did he have a Delilah? :)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/05/09 Title: Chapter 17: Moonstruck

Somehow, I didn't quite expect that. It appears that Tonks didn't either. I guess I expected Evan to come on like a raging Death Eater, but as you said before he's in love with himself and his business. It's so sad that what gave Tonks away was the look of pity in her eyes. Sadder still, is the fact that Evan knows she pities him. To answer one of your questions, my Sampson never had a Delilah. He had a big heart full of love and he was totally devoted to me. He died way too young, we'll never know why, and he's still missed. Great chapter by the way. I was just looking up where to go next in this series. I'm so glad your Scorpius/Rose story was featured and I became familiar with your work.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you read featured stories! (I've sometimes wondered how many people actually do, :D) The next story in this series, A Wolf in the Moonlight was a featured story once upon a time.  It's more of a mystery/romance that takes place over a couple of weeks in December. Had to have a Christmas ending. :D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/05/09 Title: Chapter 18: Bad Moon Rising

I know why Tonks didn't share her "mission" with Remus, but maybe it would've been better if she had. I'm sitting here cringing because I can just imagine the hurt look on Remus' face and the pain in his voice. And even if you try to tell the truth after the fact, it's still hard to rebuild that trust. I really like that CCR oldie by the way and I really liked this chapter, aside from the fact that Remus got hurt feelings.

Author's Response:

Absolutely, it would have been better, but Tonks has to learn the hard way, sometimes, like the rest of us. :D

Yay for you liking CCR!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/05/09 Title: Chapter 19: Shadow Moon

Actually, I smiled at the neutering comment. I say that to Fynn at least once a week. Although I was charmed that Snuffles seemed to be trying to interfere in Tonks' relationship. I also chuckled when Tonks leaned over the side of the bed to grab her hangover potion, that the bartender had thrown in for free. She must have really looked like she was going to get pissed. Again, I'm struck by what a gentleman Remus is. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

And what does Fynn do to deserve the "Bob Barker Treatment" ? :D

I bet there is a look on people's faces a bartender can read, heh. 

Thank you!

Halloween Treat by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 34 Reviews

On her 21st birthday, Coach Johnson gets a Halloween treat from the Harpies...the chance to deal with a ghost from her past. Locked in a cellar with Fred and George, Angelina proves there's something about Fred that sets him apart. His kiss.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 11/20/09 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween Treat

This story was light and funny and just the thing for this morning. The thought of the "brave and gallant" twins locked in the basement was hilarious. I'm giggling over the imagined sounds of them "screaming like girls." Angelina's lucky her arms didn't get bruised from the twins "comforting" her in the dark and helping her to the table. At least they were locked in the wine cellar. That can't have been too bad. Wonderful story.

Author's Response: Good morning! Yay for you giggling! When do you leave for you New Moon field trip? I read a review that said the werewolves are more fun than the vampires, and like to dress in long shorts and go shirtless because their abs are so hot. :D An actor I loved from the Underworld films, Michael Sheen, plays one of the Volturi. You'll have to tell me how he looks with red eyes, heh.

Kissing Harry by Kerichi

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 56 Reviews

A kiss is not just a kiss. After a disastrous Valentine's date with Cho, Harry finds himself alone with Luna and discovers what a kiss should be. Humour and Romance in a story that started with canon and went What If?


Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 11/20/09 Title: Chapter 1: Kissing Harry

This story reminded me of when I first started reading the Harry Potter books. I always had the impression that Harry was rather clueless about so many things; that he seemed to just be along for life's ride; that he took life as it came and did nothing to shape his fate. This story brought back those thoughts. I chuckled at the "unholy sight" of Snape smiling. And again, when Harry realized that Luna wanted (wait for it)--him?? Harry and Cho were worlds apart in what they expected from the date. I feel so sad for Cho--she needs to let Cedric go. After all, it was Harry who was with Cedric when he died and he's not brooding over it overly much. I didn't even think Cho loved Cedric that much--I think she was just in love with the idea. Wonderful story.

Author's Response:


I think of Cho when I hear Garbage sing:


I'm only happy when it rains
I'm only happy when it's complicated
And though I know you can't appreciate it
I'm only happy when it rains
You know I love it when the news is bad
Why it feels so good to feel so sad
I'm only happy when it rains

Pour your misery down
Pour your misery down on me


I thought that way about Harry, too, that he was along for the ride,

until he figured out he had to be proactive, not reactive!


(As he did in the dungeon with Luna, heh)


Touch of the Moon by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 14 Reviews
Summary: "Remus dreaded the full moon the way men in classical literature feared love." He's been hiding his 'furry little problem' from Tonks, but Remus learns that a secret, like the past, has a way of catching up with you.
Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Touch of the Moon

This was another take on one of my favorite chapters. I remember, once again, Evan's pathetic attempt to get back at Tonks by exposing Remus as a werewolf. Great one-shot. Loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you! Evan is very much dog in the manger...which isn't a nice thing to say about dogs. :D

Everything and the Moon by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 20 Reviews
Summary: "Perhaps there was such a thing as being too much of a gentleman." After giving Tonks an ultimatum, Remus finds faith, not drowning sorrows with Sirius, is the only thing that makes waiting bearable.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Everything and the Moon

Poor Remus--drowning his sorrows in the bottle. I know things are bad when that happens. I didn't know Remus lost his job that afternoon. I'd like to kick Evan's pureblooded arse--in public, screaming obscenities. It would be a verbal trouncing. The Prophet would cover it. Death Eaters would be frightened and cross to the other side of the street when they saw me coming. Well, that was kind of fun for a while. Excellent one-shot. My heart goes out to Remus. Thank goodness Tonks came back and knew just the right words.

Author's Response: When you hit the bottle, romance has hit the skids! :D Evan's punishment is Prissy, but your verbal trouncing would be fun to listen to!

A Wolf in the Moonlight by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 546 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: When her old pal Rory calls in a favour, Tonks searches for a missing girl with the help of her new love Remus and his 'dog' Snuffles

*Sequel to Once in a Blue Moon*

*Ch 20 Quote*

It was the happiest Christmas of my life.


Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Moonlight and Roses

I thought I'd at least get started on this book before turning off my computer for the night. I don't know how you do it but you even make Remus" transformation sound romantic. And the single red rose--Ahhh:) I love roses. I really like what you do with Arthur Weasley in this series too. He sounds so true to character. Excellent chapter as always. To answer your earlier question, Fynn gets threatened with neutering usually after inciting a brawl or trying to hump his brother. And one of these days we'll get around to it. It's just what we do.

Author's Response:

Men don't think outside the box enough when it comes to roses. A dozen on a special "day" is nice, but it's the single rose for just-between-us reasons that are swoon-worthy. :D

Thank you for liking Arthur! He's such a sweetheart. I thought Molly treated him horribly in the books and didn't like her until I realized that Harry was seeing her in moments of stress and that doesn't bring out the best in most people. 

So Fynn has dominance issues? :D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/06/09 Title: Chapter 2: Moonlight Confessions

Somehow, I really like Rory and Jimmy. I also found Remus' comment, that he'd track Tonks down, to be sexy. I know he could do it and would do it. Now I'm hungry for a breakfast involving bacon and ice cream sundaes for dessert. I feel bad for Sirius, having to maintain his dog persona, but I feel less bad than I did when Harry described him as on the run, hiding in caves, and eating rats.
Yes, young Fynn has dominance problems. He doesn't realize he only weighs about 5 lbs., if he's lucky. I bought him from a woman who was selling him because he kept antagonizing (trying to dominate) her two bull mastiffs and she was afraid he'd be eaten. I don't know what'll happen when I do get big dogs again. Fortunately, most big dogs have big, sweet personalities. Great chapter, by the way.

Author's Response:

I have a soft spot for bad boys with good hearts. :D

In the AU fic, that's what Remus is doing, tracking Tonks. Not by scent...yet...but I'll find a way to work some kind of scene dealing with that in. "Scent of My Woman" LOL. 

Poor Fynn, I was imagining him much larger, although don't they say it's the size of the fight in the dog? ;)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/06/09 Title: Chapter 3: Promise by Moonlight

Hmm--wizard parchment?? The wand discussion was interesting:) The interplay between Sirius and Remus is that of old friends who know each other very well. I thought that Remus being there under a Disillusionment Charm was very sexy. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Don't worry, :D, parchment isn't animal skins, it's made from cellulose fibers prepared from fir trees or plants such as cotton or flax. It's thick and smooth and wizards use it rather than thin Muggle paper.

Remus is sexy. So let it be written . . . .heh.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/06/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chasing Moonlight

I was just thinking--to write as you write you really have to know a lot about a lot of things. I'm thinking that's what an English professor meant when he told me once--if you're going to write a novel write about something you know. Remus and Tonks are so cute together as detective partners. I thought it was very sexy when Remus perked up when he thought Tonks was being threatened. But still, wizard parchment? And is Snuffles going to get his chow mein? Great chapter.

Author's Response: I think "write what you know" is as much "write about what you want to know" because you can do research and find out almost anything, but you have to have that desire. Parchment is just fancy paper most wizards take for granted and most Muggles would have to go to a high end shop to find so they don't even think of using it. You'll see about the chow mein. ^_~