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09/18/09




I currently live in the great state of South Dakota. Why do I live in a place with such nasty winters, I don't know. Since most of my family lives far away in more exotic places than I do, my life revolves around my four dogs, Sampson, Raphael, Seamus, and Mayhem. They are a min-pin, a toy poodle, a teacup Malti-Poo, and a Great Dane, respectively.

I've always had a fascination with the mental illness aspect that characterizes Bellatrix Black Lestrange. My first story is her story. On one site I was sorted into Ravenclaw but I think the hat made a mistake. Most days I feel like a Slytherin!


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The Severed Souls by Magical Maeve

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 283 Reviews
Summary: Summary : The sequel to Daughter of Light. Maeve has a very bad end to her honeymoon as things come to light about Severus that astound her. Why is her husband so keen to keep Draco Malfoy alive at all costs and can she really get over her loathing of Narcissa Malfoy to work together to save both Severus and Draco from the fate that Voldemort would like to inflict on them? Why is Harry so furtive and will Neville save the day when Maeve’s necklace is returned to her by her father. Oh, and our favourite bad-boy Auror is back!

There has been rather a long break in the writing of the story due to work commitments, but I'm back on the case and hoping to get it finished - if there's anyone left still reading!! :-)
Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 11/09/16 Title: Chapter 1: The Darkest Night

Roderick is kind of a nosy busybody isn't he? And Maeve hit the nail exactly on the head. She understood from the transcript what was really going on. Very good chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 11/11/16 Title: Chapter 2: An Uncomfortable Alliance.

I think I'd be very frustrated if I were Maeve. I know she'd like to talk to Severus and the sooner the better. And I know what it all looked like to the outside observers. It looked like Severus just outright killed Dumbledore. I hope Maeve has some way of proving otherwise.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 11/15/16 Title: Chapter 3: Harry's Pensieve

I wonder what that's all about. I'd be horrified too if Narcissa threw herself at me. What is so wrong that Narcissa would turn to Maeve for consolation. It hasn't quite sunk in yet that Dumbledore has died. With the focus on Maeve the story takes your attention away from some of th3e other characters.



Meet the Boys by Subversa

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 21 Reviews
Summary: Hermione and Severus are approaching their last major hurdle: informing Harry and Ron of their engagement and plans to marry. Severus sulks and intrudes on Lupin and Tonks while the Dream Team convenes. Later, Severus has this velvet box to show to his bride-to-be. This story is a one-shot sequel to Master of Enchantment, Bast, & Meet the Parents.
Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 01/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: 1

This chapter had a lot of wonderful humor in it. I laughed out loud when I read that Gilderoy Lockhart had turned into a wedding planner. I laughed even louder when Ron just found out that he had a wedding planner and who it was:D I liked that Harry and Severus were able to shake hands as Harry offered his congratulations. I loved that Severus paid a visit to his dragon great aunt and she gave him the Snape family engagement ring for Hermione. It sounded lovely. Great story.



Meet the Beetles by Subversa

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 19 Reviews
Summary: The story of the wedding of Hermione Granger and Severus Snape, told through a series of newspaper articles; later on, we visit Hermione and Severus on their honeymoon. This story is a one-shot sequel to Master of Enchantment, Bast, Meet the Parents, and Meet the Boys. It is also non-HBP compliant.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 01/22/10 Title: Chapter 1: 1

That was outrageously written, hysterically funny, and extremely clever. Great job.



Your Eyes: The Beginning by GryffindorsHeir

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 339 Reviews
Summary: Hermione notices a change in Draco Malfoy, and a friendship is established...but is everything as it seems?

Part 1 of a three part Series
Additional Warning: Book 6 disregarded only slightly. the main events in book six are not changed.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/05/16 Title: Chapter 1: Confusion and Doubt

Draco seems a little paranoid about taking the Dark Mark. Now I'm starting to wonder why Hermione is staring at Draco.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/05/16 Title: Chapter 2: A confession

I was a little surprised at Harry's reaction. And then he said he would help Hermione get Draco to notice her?



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/06/16 Title: Chapter 3: The Plan

I'm not sure Hermione would want Harry following her. What's he going to do anyway?



Nobody Told Me There'd Be Days Like These by Subversa

Rated: Professors • 59 Reviews
Summary: This story is a sequel to Master of Enchantment, Bast, Meet the Parents, Meet the Boys, and Meet the Beetles. The honeymoon is winding down as Severus returns to work; Great Aunt Seraphina arrives for a visit, bearing gifts.
Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 01/24/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Wedding Gifts

That was entertaining. I'm very happy that Gilderoy found a career that is so fitting for him. I'm happy Hermione accepted Quirk. She's mellowed quite a bit. I guess that comes from maturity. The beginning was funny in that Hermione hated to see Severus go to work and he couldn't wait to get there. I'm sure this is a huge adjustment for him and he really doesn't know how to act. I'm really enjoying this series of stories about Severus and Hermione. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 01/25/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Having One's Cake

Is Hermione pregnant? Poor Gilderoy--I can picture his panic when he thought he had imagined all of his work. I loved the pull of the Enchantment--when Bast conveyed to Severus that something wasn't right with Hermione and he raced to her rescue. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 01/26/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

Wow--that was a marathon reading event, but it was extremely entertaining. I'm not sure what part I liked best. I almost think it was the scenes involving Gilderoy. Severus is such a baby with his hurt feelings when Hermione doesn't pay enough attention. I'm glad Hermione learned to manage him. I don't know what else could've gone wrong with the dinner party preparations. Wait, I think my favorite part was when Severus thought for a brief moment that Hermione was pregnant and that Gilderoy was the father. This was great but so long I don't know what to say:D



Harry Potter and the Unspeakable Power by mrsgeorgeweasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 1010 Reviews
Summary: After the trauma of his sixth year Harry and his friends enter into their last year of magical education at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The trio try to balance passing their exams with fighting Voldemort and planning their futures. Despite all that, romance will fill the air with wedding bells ringing out. This year Harry is in more danger than ever when his enemy finds new ways to try and get the Boy Who Lived. Voldemort’s presence will be felt more than ever as he steals more lives; can Harry find himself before its too late? And what adventures will he have along the way?

If you haven’t read Harry Potter and The Girl Who Lived then I would strongly urge you to do so because if you don’t then this story probably won’t make any sense to you. Be helpful to writers by Reading and Reviewing!

The very last chapter of this fic has been reworked. Please re-read there's more about the kids in there! Also my author's notes on the final chapter have also been added. Ten part fic related to this going up shortly!!
Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 11/12/09 Title: Chapter 9: Wedding Bells

Awww, I always cry at weddings. Good job on describing the wedding. I'm sure Molly is thrilled.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/28/09 Title: Chapter 5: Coming of Age

After reading about Harry's presents I almost feel like I won the lottery--so much money and property to think about. I'm happy that Potter House was restored. --I forgot to say that before. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/28/09 Title: Chapter 6: Fatherly Advice.

James' letter was sad in many ways. He knew he was going to die soon and he seemed to accept that. It made me think again, just how much sadness was Harry expected to take. The talk from Remus and Arthur was in a much lighter vein. Kind of cute in a way. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/28/09 Title: Chapter 7: Unwelcome Present

Wow--that's a lot of muggles under attack. It's interesting how Ellie and Harry are connected through their scars. I'm glad Harry has his own penseive. It seems easier to relay informations that way. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/28/09 Title: Chapter 8: Graves

I take it that was a wizard bachelor party? Very funny, with the exception of visiting the graves. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/25/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Best Summer

Very good. My favorite parts involved the twins. I was a little nervous when Ellie decided to try their new candy. But it seemed to have no ill effects. A good laugh is really good for people. Then, when they were interrogating Harry about his interest in Ginny. That was really sweet. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/25/09 Title: Chapter 2: Freeing Neville

I was only watching the Quidditch game from the sidelines but it was a lot of fun. I guess in Ellie's case blood is thicker than love, if that makes sense. I wonder what they'll be up to in Godric's Hollow. Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/25/09 Title: Chapter 3: Return to Godric's Hollow

I loved the di Vinci quote. I'll have to remember that. I liked the interpretation that Lily was a healer. To be honest I never knew what Lily did. Were they in hiding all the time after Harry was born? Great chapter.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 09/25/09 Title: Chapter 4: The Second Return

That was a really good chapter. I loved touring Potter Hall. I loved the bathroom. I want one like it. I was reminded once again of all that Harry lost at the hands of Voldemort. His life should've been so different. Great chapter.