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09/18/09




I currently live in the great state of South Dakota. Why do I live in a place with such nasty winters, I don't know. Since most of my family lives far away in more exotic places than I do, my life revolves around my four dogs, Sampson, Raphael, Seamus, and Mayhem. They are a min-pin, a toy poodle, a teacup Malti-Poo, and a Great Dane, respectively.

I've always had a fascination with the mental illness aspect that characterizes Bellatrix Black Lestrange. My first story is her story. On one site I was sorted into Ravenclaw but I think the hat made a mistake. Most days I feel like a Slytherin!


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Once in a Blue Moon by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 301 Reviews
Summary: Tonks is rich in family and friends, but the wages of a new Auror keep her short of funds. A side job brings something into her life money can't buy.

 

*Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill for Best Romance- Canon.*

 


Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/02/09 Title: Chapter 2: The Pull of the Moon

This is too much:) It sounds like they were meant to be together from the beginning. I like this story about how the Order started. Will we meet other members as they join? Other familiar faces? Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Ever seen The Nightmare Before Christmas? "We're simply meant to be" is from one of the songs, and absolutely Remus and Tonks. At the same time, so is Rascal Flatts' "God blessed the broken road that led me straight to you" does too. Their life experiences make them appreciate each other and perfect for each other in a Grace Jones "I'm not perfect, but I'm perfect for you" way.

Lyrics for all occasions, heh. 



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/02/09 Title: Chapter 3: Dancing with the Moon

At least Remus knows that Tonks was engaged once and will hopefully be mature enough to put two and two together. I really like your interpretation of Remus and Tonks. I'm enjoying this new book but I hope nothing bad happens. I was never really happy that Remus and Tonks died. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

They have angsty moments and different relationship issues to work out through the series, but Tonks only has eyes for Remus and he only has eyes for her.

I was so unhappy about Remus and Tonks' fate in DH that I couldn't write a DH chapter fic. I had to end the canon series on a happy note and then go AU where they live and work their way back to each other. The suspense is how and when. :)



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/03/09 Title: Chapter 4: Kiss the Moon

Tonks is such a naughty girl. Remus knows who she is doesn't he? I'll bet she can morph all over the place and he'll still pick up her scent. The events surrounding the wizarding Kama Sutra were a hoot. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Oh yeah, he's got her scent and there's no fooling him. Not that she won't ever try.... :D



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/03/09 Title: Chapter 5: Reaching for the Moon

I'm not a big chocolate eater (preferring caramel and vanilla) but your description of the bakery kind of had me looking for the candy I bought today. No such thing as chocolate croissants around here unless I bake them. I think it's hysterical that Remus was there when Tonks came back from her run and guessed what was in the bag. Great chapter and excuse me while I go find a snack. Damn you Kerichi!!!

Author's Response: I'm an equal-opportunity sweets lover, so while I love chocolate, caramel and vanilla sounds good. Have you ever had the candy corn hershey kisses? Mmm...you have me wondering what you had for a snack. Yes, I can enjoy food vicariously. :D



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/03/09 Title: Chapter 6: By the Light of the Moon

I really enjoyed my date with Remus and Tonks. I tried to be real quiet so they wouldn't know I was there. I did have to avert my eyes a few times, so as not to invade their privacy. You'll be happy to know I went home after the jazz club. I'm not really a peeping tom. That was a great chapter. Tres romantique! (I'm not sure if that's how you spell romantic in French--don't have my dictionary handy--but you know what I mean.

Author's Response: While you read you are Tonks, so Remus would get a complex if you weren't there, lol. My French is limited to phrases read in books/heard in films/looked up online, but it looks correct to me!



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/03/09 Title: Chapter 7: Blinded by the Moon

That chapter was so sweet. I hope Tonks isn't too upset when she finds out Remus is a werewolf. Heck, he may be a werewolf but he's more of a gentleman than a lot of people I know.
BTW, I received your "warning" about not writing a series right off the bat. I've got most of the first book written, will be looking for an agent, and I know this could take a while. The toy line is kind of a joke, since the book is about my toy poodle, Fynn. I thought if the book was successfull then maybe kids would want a Fynn toy. And he kind of looks like a toy. Then, my sister and I were joking around and the idea for the second book came into being. Seriously, right now, I'm just working on the one book. So wish me luck.

Author's Response:

I think you'll like Tonks' reaction!

It wasn't a warning as much as passing along advice. Ever listen to country music or seen the film Twister? There's a Shania Twain song called "No One Needs To Know" that fits both men or prospective editors of a future series, heh.

I got my heart, set my feet wet
And he dont even know it yet
But no one needs to know right now

Good luck...and when the first book's done, why not go for the second while you wait?

 



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/03/09 Title: Chapter 8: Dark Moon

I want a Remus in my life. Actually, right now I'm happy reading about Remus. You can tell how wonderful a person is if they'll sit and watch a soap with your Gran and make meaningful comments. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for being happy to read about Remus. If I had psychic (or psychotic as Angelica from Rugrats put it) powers, I'd send a real life counterpart your way. Since I don't, I'll just send up a prayer. :)



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/03/09 Title: Chapter 9: The Serpent and the Moon

Damn it--my reading time is over and you've left me with a cliffie. I don't think I can stay up and read anymore. Tonks' friend knows who Remus is doesn't she? Thank you for the time frame at Hogwarts. I think you mentioned it before but I got involved in the romance. Tonks would know who Mad-Eye is wouldn't she? I'm feeling a little nervous about this Death Eater party. This was a great chapter. You may not see me until Monday. Good night for now.

Author's Response: Cliffie's are useful for making readers come back and making it easy to jump into the next chapter when writing. Win/win, heh. Whenever I "see" you, you'll make my day! I hope the rest of your weekend is relaxing and fun! :)



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/04/09 Title: Chapter 10: Crying for the Moon

I'm the sort of person who would just tell Tonks "Look, your boyfriend is a werewolf. But he's a really nice guy. I'm sure you'll learn to deal with it. You'd better because there aren't that many nice guys around." How long has it been since she's seen Sirius? I know I said I wouldn't be back until Monday but I couldn't resist. This is just too precious--her choice of music and plans to dance in the moonlight as I sit here with Linkin Park blaring in the background. I'd probably scare Remus away. Actually, I'm Lucius' age. I wonder if the Death Eater would be scared? Tonks is so smart. Putting on the perfume (my sister likes Moonlight Path too) and then flooing to Diagon Alley. Too bad they couldn't stay longer and get more information. Your writing is so wonderful that I can't comment enough about it. I feel bad because I know authors put so much into their writing and here I am spending every waking moment thinking about when I can read again. Excellent chapter.

Author's Response:

You had me at "I couldn't resist", :D, but you officially completed me by saying you think about when you'll read again.

My day (which is rainy and gray and sucktackular weather-wise), is now sunny and flowe-filled in my heart. Thank you so much for giving me such wonderful feedback! 



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/04/09 Title: Chapter 11: Full Moon Rising

Tonks reacted how I hoped she would. I would've been extremely disappointed if she had done something different. Wow!! I think this is the best chapter yet. Evan is a first class prick. Oops, can I say prick in a review. What a day for Tonks! To have first hand experience investigating a werewolf and then to find out from Evan Bloody Rosier that her new boyfriend is a werewolf--Tonks has a lot of class, but I knew she did. Excellent chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think Evan will grow on you (like mold, heh) through the stories, but he's definitely making Remus look good by being such an arse! :D



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/04/09 Title: Chapter 12: Hunter's Moon

That was too wonderful. I think Sirius would be more shocked. I am sitting here teary-eyed. That was too cool. I've owned huge dogs--Newfoundlands, Great Pyrenees, St. Bernard--and there's nothing like sleeping with them--knowing they'll protect you to the death and love you unconditionally. I think a wolf would be like that. Hey, I'll take a canine any day. This chapter was too incredible for words. Excellent.

Author's Response: I think his years in Azkaban have given Sirius a "don't sweat the small stuff" mentality. Protecting Harry is is top priority. He considers Tonks a grown woman (most of the time, heh) so I couldn't see him pulling a Ron and overreacting. :D



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/04/09 Title: Chapter 13: The Moon and Sirius

This was too cute. I can't believe she's got to impersonate Priscilla Parkinson. I'm just going ewww. I've always pictured Sirius as a Newfie. I was disappointed in the film version of his animagus form. I can see Sirius still flirting with the ladies as a dog. I love canines. This was a great chapter, I really liked the interplay among the three characters. I still thin Sirius was more shocked. Excellent chapter.

Author's Response: I'm not trying to say that Sirius will never make comments or be uncomfortable with his friend and little cousin dating (Sirius is in 4 out of the 5 canon chapter fics, so there is ongoing adjustment and growth in relationships) but he knows life is short and after what he's lived through, not a lot truly shocks him anymore.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/04/09 Title: Chapter 14: Harlequin's Moon

How is Tonks gonna get out of this one? How does Evan know? Maybe he cared for Tonks more than she knew? Or is this some weird game he's playing? Does he like to pretend Prissy is Tonks and does Prissy let him do that? Can Remus intercede as her father? Probably not. This was very good. I'm on the edge of my seat though. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! Evan did care for Tonks more than she thought (he just loves himself and his business more than anything else) but she's not perfect, she gives little things away that Evan picks up on because he's a cunning Slytherin.



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/04/09 Title: Chapter 15: Tears of the Moon

Well, that sounds ominous. You aren't going to make something hideous happen in these last few chapters are you? Tonks is so talented. I can't believe how she got out of her last situation with Evan. He really thinks all of these people are Tonks--and they are:) I'm sure he misses her more than he realizes. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Ta, thanks! The books were about Harry, so we didn't really get to "see" Tonks in action, much. I had fun creating her work life, and the jobs that bleed over into personal life. Nothing hideous will happen, just a lesson Tonks needs to learn, and a debt she'll have to pay in the next chapter fic. :D



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/04/09 Title: Chapter 16: Vanished Moon

Whenever I think of Sirius in his dog form I think of my Newfoundland, Sampson, who died in the summer of 2000--gone but never forgotten. I've been checking into getting another Newfie. They're great dogs--very loyal and intelligent. I'm glad Cami just needed a distraction from the bottle. That's important but I thought something worse was going on. And now we know what Sirius was doing when Harry was in the triwizard tournament. Great chapter. See you tomorrow.

Author's Response: Thank you! Sampson sounds like a big sweetie. Did he have a Delilah? :)



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/05/09 Title: Chapter 17: Moonstruck

Somehow, I didn't quite expect that. It appears that Tonks didn't either. I guess I expected Evan to come on like a raging Death Eater, but as you said before he's in love with himself and his business. It's so sad that what gave Tonks away was the look of pity in her eyes. Sadder still, is the fact that Evan knows she pities him. To answer one of your questions, my Sampson never had a Delilah. He had a big heart full of love and he was totally devoted to me. He died way too young, we'll never know why, and he's still missed. Great chapter by the way. I was just looking up where to go next in this series. I'm so glad your Scorpius/Rose story was featured and I became familiar with your work.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you read featured stories! (I've sometimes wondered how many people actually do, :D) The next story in this series, A Wolf in the Moonlight was a featured story once upon a time.  It's more of a mystery/romance that takes place over a couple of weeks in December. Had to have a Christmas ending. :D



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/05/09 Title: Chapter 18: Bad Moon Rising

I know why Tonks didn't share her "mission" with Remus, but maybe it would've been better if she had. I'm sitting here cringing because I can just imagine the hurt look on Remus' face and the pain in his voice. And even if you try to tell the truth after the fact, it's still hard to rebuild that trust. I really like that CCR oldie by the way and I really liked this chapter, aside from the fact that Remus got hurt feelings.

Author's Response:

Absolutely, it would have been better, but Tonks has to learn the hard way, sometimes, like the rest of us. :D

Yay for you liking CCR!



Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 10/05/09 Title: Chapter 19: Shadow Moon

Actually, I smiled at the neutering comment. I say that to Fynn at least once a week. Although I was charmed that Snuffles seemed to be trying to interfere in Tonks' relationship. I also chuckled when Tonks leaned over the side of the bed to grab her hangover potion, that the bartender had thrown in for free. She must have really looked like she was going to get pissed. Again, I'm struck by what a gentleman Remus is. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

And what does Fynn do to deserve the "Bob Barker Treatment" ? :D

I bet there is a look on people's faces a bartender can read, heh. 

Thank you!



Halloween Treat by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 34 Reviews
Summary:



On her 21st birthday, Coach Johnson gets a Halloween treat from the Harpies...the chance to deal with a ghost from her past. Locked in a cellar with Fred and George, Angelina proves there's something about Fred that sets him apart. His kiss.




Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 11/20/09 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween Treat

This story was light and funny and just the thing for this morning. The thought of the "brave and gallant" twins locked in the basement was hilarious. I'm giggling over the imagined sounds of them "screaming like girls." Angelina's lucky her arms didn't get bruised from the twins "comforting" her in the dark and helping her to the table. At least they were locked in the wine cellar. That can't have been too bad. Wonderful story.

Author's Response: Good morning! Yay for you giggling! When do you leave for you New Moon field trip? I read a review that said the werewolves are more fun than the vampires, and like to dress in long shorts and go shirtless because their abs are so hot. :D An actor I loved from the Underworld films, Michael Sheen, plays one of the Volturi. You'll have to tell me how he looks with red eyes, heh.



Kissing Harry by Kerichi

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 56 Reviews
Summary:


A kiss is not just a kiss. After a disastrous Valentine's date with Cho, Harry finds himself alone with Luna and discovers what a kiss should be. Humour and Romance in a story that started with canon and went What If?

 


Reviewer: Fynnsmom Signed
Date: 11/20/09 Title: Chapter 1: Kissing Harry

This story reminded me of when I first started reading the Harry Potter books. I always had the impression that Harry was rather clueless about so many things; that he seemed to just be along for life's ride; that he took life as it came and did nothing to shape his fate. This story brought back those thoughts. I chuckled at the "unholy sight" of Snape smiling. And again, when Harry realized that Luna wanted (wait for it)--him?? Harry and Cho were worlds apart in what they expected from the date. I feel so sad for Cho--she needs to let Cedric go. After all, it was Harry who was with Cedric when he died and he's not brooding over it overly much. I didn't even think Cho loved Cedric that much--I think she was just in love with the idea. Wonderful story.

Author's Response:

 

I think of Cho when I hear Garbage sing:

 

I'm only happy when it rains
I'm only happy when it's complicated
And though I know you can't appreciate it
I'm only happy when it rains
You know I love it when the news is bad
Why it feels so good to feel so sad
I'm only happy when it rains

Pour your misery down
Pour your misery down on me

 

I thought that way about Harry, too, that he was along for the ride,

until he figured out he had to be proactive, not reactive!

 

(As he did in the dungeon with Luna, heh)