I currently live in the great state of South Dakota. Why do I live in a place with such nasty winters, I don't know. Since most of my family lives far away in more exotic places than I do, my life revolves around my four dogs, Sampson, Raphael, Seamus, and Mayhem. They are a min-pin, a toy poodle, a teacup Malti-Poo, and a Great Dane, respectively.
I've always had a fascination with the mental illness aspect that characterizes Bellatrix Black Lestrange. My first story is her story. On one site I was sorted into Ravenclaw but I think the hat made a mistake. Most days I feel like a Slytherin!
That was funny even though a drunken bunny thought it up. Fudge was always a pathetic loser. I really liked this story.
I like it when Ginny is feisty. I think they've both accepted a challenge.
I think there's an art to accepting a gift. I've gotten to the point that if someone gives something to me I just accept it rather than protesting. Sometimes people just find a gift and think of you so they buy it. I do that a lot. I think I enjoy giving people gifts as much as receiving them. Great chapter.
Loved this first chapter. I think I've seen your work on another site. I can't wait to see what happens next.
I guess if I were Hermione I'd be very confused. I don't think I could act as boldly as she does. It is nice to fantasize though. If I had had a professor like Snape I probably would've taken a chance and flirted with him. :D
Severus is clever and tricky. He really knows what Hermione likes. Unfortunately that makes it easier for him to manipulate her.
Neither one of them seems too upset at the charade the Dark Lord has ordered. I' m confident that Severus will be able to manipulate the situation to his benefit.
By reading Subversa's work, I became a believer in the Good Ship HG/SS. I was looking at her work today and saw that she had one favorite author, you. So, I decided to check out your stories. This is a great start although I thought you got into Severus lusting after Hermione a little soon. But, this was a great chapter. It was well written and that's iimportant to me. And, why not jump into the story right away. I look forward to continuing this story.
That Snape is a pretty smooth dude. It was like he had a reasonable excuse for asking the personal questions he asked. Ron is portrayed as the clumsiest lover ever. I didn't find his arguments to make Hermione make out with him convincing at all. I chuckled over the possible taking of points for making a clumsy seduction attempt:D Great chapter.
Snape is so sneaky. I guess it's a good thing he overheard Ginny and Margaret talking. I'd hate to see his carefully laid plans go to waste:D I think sending her to his personal library was a very safe bet. Great chapter.
I think that's true--this time the masters are bowing to the servant. I think Severus is going to get his way:D Hermione handed to him on a silver platter, or should I say silver bed:P Great chapter.
Interesting. I think I'd be suspicious of Dumbledore's matchmaking attempts, especially since he'd read my thoughts at one point. Were you implying that Snape's father was a wizard? Great chapter.
That sounded like a fun evening out. For some reason I don't think Severus gets out much so it was good to see him as Holiday Severus. Too bad Hermione had to admit to being a virgin. Oh well. It could've been a worse admission. Great chapter.
Do hangover potions really work that well? Severus is so cute when he's jealous:P It's interesting that he's aware of the Enchantment. Now, what's he going to do about it. Great chapter.
I was wondering what song lyrics those were. The concept of Enchantment is so interesting. How could Snape say no to Hermione for all those years? He is sure a man of strength. Great chapter.
That was a wonderful love story. Again, I was most grateful you let three of the four characters live:) See you in the next story.
I'm still getting used to Snape and Hermione being a couple. I guess I can see it. It's not so hard to imagine. I was worried that the Grangers were killed. I'm glad that some of the other characters are still in the story. I have a feeling this will get interesting. Great chapter.
Now, this is really getting interesting. I'm so glad you let some of the characters live after the war. I can't wait to see where this is going. Hermione is doing great as we would expect her to. Do you let Remus and Tonks get together? Great chapter.
I really liked this chapter even if Remus appears to have lost the girl. It was funny when Peter was the only Marauder to have a Friday night date--which he screwed up anyway. I could feel Remus' anguish as he went from thinkiing Lindi liked him a lot to discovering her, via the map, possibly snogging someone else. I remember that teen angst well even though I'm considerably older:D It was nice of you to make Peter look good in this chapter. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, Fynnsmom. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. It was a bit of a challenge to write since I loathe Peter and being nice to him is difficult. lol Oh, I remember the teen angst as well...many moons ago, but that sinking feeling is difficult to forget. *sigh* Thank you for reviewing. I'm sorry it has taken me so long to reply, or to post the next chapter. I'm dropping in now to post a bit of update on my progress. I was getting close, but real life attacked and slowed me down and now, I'm dealing with the affects of a natural disaster. :( I hope to make some progress over the weekend, since we are expecting some rain. Wish me luck. :) I want to get it posted so I can get to the lovely reviews I have yet to respond to. :*( Thank you all.
I guess this is the start of the romance:D I hope Remus gets the girl although I'm used to seeing him with Tonks. Remus was in the right place at the right time. He saw the beautiful girl, recognized her, and saved her from a battle. Plus, he got away without detention. Great chapter.
Author's Response: <.< Don't get me started on Tonks. >.> :P Yes, I think, aside from green hair, Remus was far luckier than he normally seems to be, wasn't he? But is this the start of the romance? >.> *dies* Well, it sort of is. ;) Thanks, Fynnsmom.