Penname: Annalise28 [Contact]
Real name: Annalise
Member Since: 09/04/09
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Hey! I'm Annalise. I haven't been writing for long but I hope to get better. I only have one story up so far, but soon that number will grow. I am working on many stories, but which ones will actually be finished, I am not entirely sure... haha.

I hope you like Returning and Silent Thanks it would be wonderful if you left a review..

~ Annalise x :)
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Love Can't Be Stopped by ambush
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 146]

Summary: New year, new start, new feelings. Has James' newly deflated ego and mature attitude finally won over the heart of Lily Evans? With a mixture of embarrassing situations, falling out of bed, and roaming hands, this year could be an interesting one.


My first fanfic everybody, so any criticism is very welcome! enjoy!



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 22333 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
12/09/05 Updated: 08/24/08


Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 01/25/10 Title: Chapter 1: Strange Feelings

Really lovely chapter! I quite like James and Lily's characterization as it is a bit different to those I am used to. I will review every chapter as I finish it! I can't wait to read the rest! :)

~ Annalise x :)

 
Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 01/25/10 Title: Chapter 2: Wrong Side of the Bed

This chapter was very short, so other than I loved it, I don't have anything to say. :( I did love it though. :)

~ Annalise x :)

 
Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 01/25/10 Title: Chapter 3: A Clever Plan

Again, such a lovely chapter! And I love the final words, mischief managed!

~ Annalis x :)

 
Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 01/25/10 Title: Chapter 4: An Unexpected Occurence

*sigh* I wish the chapters were longer! :D K
am really liking your story! But it would be amazing if the chapters were longer :)

~ Annalise x :)

 
Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 01/25/10 Title: Chapter 5: Spilled Beans

Wow. This is definitely my favourite chapter so far. It was very good! Just a note though; don't make remus the 'always knows what's right and how to handle everything' guy too much. I've made the same mistake myself before. Evn though remus is very smart and likes books it doesn't exactly mean he knows everything and every way to help relationships. I don't think how you portrayed him in this chapter was in any way bad, but I would just be a little careful of it. :)

Nevertheless I loved the chapter!

~ Annalis x :)

 
Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 01/25/10 Title: Chapter 6: Christmas Surprises

I really love the tension in this chapter and how you show just how unperfect relationships can be, whilst not making it totally gloomy and adding a bit of romance too! And a cliffhanger?!?!? :D

(sorry for my scarse reviews, I really do love your story!)

~ Annalise x :)

 
Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 01/25/10 Title: Chapter 7: Make-ups and Break-ups

It seems as though each chapter keeps gettingbetter and better! :)

~ Annalise x :)

 
Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 01/25/10 Title: Chapter 8: All's Well that Ends the Term Well

:D I loved it, as usual! It seems it is permanently like that now! Hehe.

~ Annalise x :)

 
Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 01/25/10 Title: Chapter 9: An Eventful Holiday Season (part one)

Wow, this chapter was terribly sad. I feel so sorry for sarah, which basically means your doing an amazing job and you are definitely improving! I always say that if the author can make their readers feel any emotion towards their character, be it love, sympathy, hate etc. They are doing a good job with their characters, givng them life,/ Your chapters have become much longer, as well to top it off! So well done!

~ Annalise x :)

P.S. I wouldn't worry too much about the swearing, though it was good to warn those who would mind. :) I think it was perfectly in character so it's fine. :)

 
Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 01/25/10 Title: Chapter 10: An Eventful Holiday Season (part 2)

Well, you have done it, oh amazing one! You have officially made Annalise cry. :D and now I am incredibly sad that I have to wait for the next chapter. *sigh* I am quite impatient :p

I wish you luck on your new chapters, and hope profusely that they come soon :D thank you for writing this story; I have greatly enjoyed it and I absolutely can't wait to ear the rest! :)

~ Annalise x :)

 
Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 01/25/10 Title: Chapter 9: An Eventful Holiday Season (part one)

Wow, this chapter was terribly sad. I feel so sorry for sarah, which basically means your doing an amazing job and you are definitely improving! I always say that if the author can make their readers feel any emotion towards their character, be it love, sympathy, hate etc. They are doing a good job with their characters, givng them life,/ Your chapters have become much longer, as well to top it off! So well done!

~ Annalise x :)

P.S. I wouldn't worry too much about the swearing, though it was good to warn those who would mind. :) I think it was perfectly in character so it's fine. :)

 

Death Rose by Purplemage
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 31]

Summary: “True Love” Two little words. One big concept. A belief that someone, somewhere is holding the key to your heart. The only thing you have to do is find them. So where is this person? And how do you find them?

Some people do, some people think they do, and some people never do. Sirius didn’t know if Remus was his true love, but he didn’t care. He would follow the werewolf to the end of the world if he had to.

Winner of challenge #1 In defence of love; of the February Valentine's Day challenge

QSQ Nomination for best Same-Sex Pairing Fic

Categories: Remus/Sirius Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Slash, Violence

Word count: 4366 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/22/06 Updated: 02/22/06


Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 01/22/10 Title: Chapter 1: Death Rose

Wow. Honestly, that was very amazing. It was so incredibly heart-warming, while heart-wrenching all at the same time. Absolutely wonderful!

~ Annalise x :)

 
Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 01/22/10 Title: Chapter 1: Death Rose

Wow. Honestly, that was very amazing. It was so incredibly heart-warming, while heart-wrenching all at the same time. Absolutely wonderful!

~ Annalise x :)

 

Adventures in Courtship by SunDevil05
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 996]

Summary: The war is over. Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley finally have the chance for the happiness they've been craving. But, with Harry recovering from the war and Ginny back in school, can they finally have the relationship they've always wanted?





******Higher rating just to be safe.




Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 156330 Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/04/06 Updated: 05/10/07


Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 11/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - Starting Over

WOW. This story is amazing. It is so filled with heart and compassion and love and emotion. It is really amazing how you could express how much love they felt for each other without making it corny, over or underdone. I am really speechless. This is my favourite fic. When you ship Harry/Ginny, you really feel happy that they can live their lives together. Everyone has problems in a relationship but the way this story is written makes it so that it doesn't seem unlikely. There were a few mistakes but one could hardly take that into account when reading this fic. Both Harry and Ginny were in character throughout the whole story, which is something that is hard to accomplish. Well, to finish this awfully long review, this story is filled with captivating emotion and love that will engross any reader that loves both HP and Harry/Ginny.

PLEASE READ!

~ Annalise x :)

*totally in awe at the amazingness of this fic.

 

I Don't Want To Cry by MarauderWannabe
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 28]

Summary: Crying in the Great Hall was the last thing Ginny wanted to do.

Especially in front of the guy she loves.

Rated 3rd-5th Years for Mild Language

DH Spoilers for obvious reasons.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2240 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/28/07 Updated: 09/06/07


Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 09/29/09 Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Want To Cry

It is a very thoughtful and heartfelt one shot. I never really get tired of reading these same sort of stories again and again. Good job.
5 stars xx

 

A Little More Time by Pallas
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 435]

Summary: Past Featured StoryWas it possible to save two lives in the past without altering history? Was it possible to give his parents a future twenty years after they had supposedly died? Teddy Lupin thought so...

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 120231 Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/20/07 Updated: 04/25/08


Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 09/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Watching

I absolutely love your story! I've been staying up until almost 1:00 in the morning every night to listen to the chapters but I still haven't finished it yet since I only started listening 2 days ago. You are a wonderful writer and I thankyou for doing such a wonderful job!

 

Honey by cassie123
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 24]

Summary: Hermione Granger made a career out of protecting house-elves. At forty-eight, she had moved on to bigger and better things. But when asked to take leave from work, Hermione is certain this can only mean failure.

So when Ron brings home the story of Honey the house-elf, Hermione makes a decision that could alter the course of her career - and ultimately her life.

Not only does Hermione have to convince the entire Wizengamot of Honey's innocence, she must also prove it to her family. And they have become those least likely to believe her.

‘Honey,’ I said. ‘That’s an unusual name for a house-elf.’

Ron cleared his throat loudly. ‘It’s also unusual for a house-elf to commit a murder.’


Post-Hogwarts/Mystery

Epilogue now up!

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 16782 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/24/08 Updated: 08/10/08


Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 09/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: Part I: The Arrest

This is a wonderful story with an amazingly creative plot and storyline. I just listened to it as an audio fiction and had to read the rest. I also registered for the site just so I could tell you how much I loved it! Amazing job! You have great author ability and potential. I will be reading more of your stories soon to see if they are as good as this one which I think may be likely. Thankyou for writing the story as it was very enjoyable and left me simply needing to read the rest. Very discriptive writing. You must have needed to research a lot to check and if you didn't, you must be a true Harry potter fan as I am!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm so so glad you liked it enough to register and leave a review :) I did do quite a bit of research, of the books and of law in the real world. I haven't written anything else like this fic, really, as I prefer emotionally-driven stories rather than ones with strong plot-lines, but hopefully you enjoy my others too! I actually didn't know they'd made an audiofic of my story until this review, so thank you very much! I really appreciate it. - Cassie

 

justify by Stubbornly_appeared
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 1]

Summary: On top of that lonely hill in November, he's wishing for something.


Stubby of Gryffindor here, writing for my House's banner challenge.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 101 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/01/08 Updated: 08/07/08


Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 01/12/11 Title: Chapter 1: justify

This is a very simple and beautiful poem. I like the effect of the lack of grammar. This makes me feel like the poem is very unofficial and unplanned, the way Severus would have written it - even if it was not intended that way. I also find the way it has been written - almost messy and defying the commonalities of poems - to be almost enchanting, and a great testament to Severus and the way he was feeling.

However as much as I enjoy this format in the poem, and believe that it was done with the character's personality in mind, it is a touch difficult to read. This could be taken as both good and bad critique, I suppose, as it shows how much you have thought about the characterisation within the poem. But I also feel that it could have been done better so that it flowed slightly, while still encompassing Severus' character.

I really enjoyed this poem. Well done!

 

How To Fix Everything by cassie123
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary: ‘I missed you,’ she whispered into his chest. ‘Two days is a long time.’

It would be expected for them to somehow be pulled apart, be it due to the status of their blood or the houses in which they lay, their seperation was inevitable. For Ted, the hardest part was knowing that Andromeda herself was the reason they had to be apart.

‘Not quite as long as two months,’ he said. ‘Which is how long I was left to miss you.’

A follow up to Don't Apologise, but it can be read as a stand-alone one shot.

Note: The non-consensual sex and violence warnings are minor aspects of the story, mainly written in small flashbacks.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 4982 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/10/08 Updated: 10/12/08


Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 02/01/10 Title: Chapter 1: Fix Me

Incredibly lovely story, Cassie. You have never let me down to this day with your incredibly amazing writing capabilities! :)
~ Annalise x :)

 

Last Chance to Lose Control by lily_evans34
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: Hermione has lost everything – until she finds someone who understands, whose companionship transcends her faith in everything she has ever known. Songfic to ‘Hysteria’ by Muse.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Epilogue? What Epilogue?, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 3041 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/25/09 Updated: 02/25/09


Reviewer: Annalise28 Signed
Date: 01/23/10 Title: Chapter 1: Hysteria

Very lovely fic, Rachel :) You are an amazing writer!

~ Annalise x :)

Author's Response: *grins* Thank you, Annalise! :D

 
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