Channeling Phlegm at the moment, please bear with me as I try to avoid turning into Bridezilla.
Summary: Harry has to say goodbye to Hogwarts, Privet Drive and his former life. But in all bad situations, there is always a little hope and Ginny provides Harry with comfort. Ron and Hermione become a couple but are also there at Harry's side. Together, they face the hardest and most important battle of their lives. (Most romance happens in later chapters). I promise the story gets much better. I set the category at romance R/H and H/G because its general but has LOTS of shipping moments.
I NEVER saw the imperious course coming! Very tricky! But poor Ginny!
Author's Response: I know, I felt bad about doing that to Ginny. Thanks for reviewing!
You did good on the R/Hr and H/G "love" scenes. They were well written, and seemed like something that could actually happen. nice job
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. It was hard considering I don't have much...erm...experience *blushes horribly* he he....well thanks for reviewing!
Yay! Finally Draco got what was coming for acting naughty! The will was...interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing!!
I wonder why the ravenclaws were okay but not the hufflepuffs. Hmmm... nice chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks. The Ravenclaws were okay because the Racenclaws are supposedly similar to the Slytherins but less...er...malicious.
I am not a fan of the Hr/D scene. Maybe if she only had a fantasy about him it would have been ok, but I really can't believe Hermione would sleep with Draco. You did ok with the writing, I just didnt like the subject. Poor Ron. Although I did like Ginny saying her pig of a brother could wait.
Author's Response: The only reason that Hermione was able to sleep with Draco is because she doesn't care for him. She will figure this out later on. With my story, everything makes sense and works out in time. You just have to keep reading to find out. I'm glad that you at least liked Ginny's comment. Thanks for reviewing.
You gotta love Fred and George for their creative genius. Make sure you watch out for spelling errors, you spelled gently wrong when Hermione knocked on the door. 8/10
Author's Response: Thanks. You do have to love Fred and George. I know I spent gently wrong, for some reason I always put an "I" in and I'm not sure why....
Dung as a DE, hmmm. Interesting. Fudge officiating the ceremony seemed odd, given his history with the Weasleys.
"Her hair was set in gentile waves that played around her face." I'm a human spellcheck, and a Gentile is a non-Jewish person. So Ginny must have some interesting hair!
Author's Response: He does have a bad history but very few people are worried about marrying couples at the time and he was desperate for work. Like I said in my other review, I have a strange habit of adding an "I" to gently. Thanks for the review!
Most of this chapter is good, but i can't believe that Arthur would miss his son's wedding.
Author's Response: It was really important business, and what he was actually doing will be revealed in later chapters. Just wanted to clear that up. He wouldn't have missed it for just any old work.
If they were just going to be apparating to where they were searching for horcruxes, why didn't they stay at the burrow? J/W. Okay so far.
Author's Response: They didn't stay at the Burrow because they didn't want to endanger the Weasleys and 12 Grimmauld Place is Unplottable. They are safer there than at the Burrow because Death Eaters can't find them there. I guess I should have made that clearer.
so are we going to find out what happened at gringotts and why harry's vault door was "slightly open"? Because that was the most interesting part of this chapter, a possible clue. The baby horcrux was...different, but well written.
Author's Response: Thank you. It's nice to get a positive review. As I have said repeatedly, EVERYTHING will make sense in due time. Thanks for the feedback.
Melanie was a twist. Not sure how I feel about that yet. The feast was cool.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Glad you liked the feast.
The phoenix was cool. I hope the Weasleys are ok!
Author's Response: Thank's for the feedback! It's great to know what readers think. You'll find out about the Weasleys later!
Glad to see the Weasleys are ok. I was surprised nobody except Harry seems to have figured out Albus is a phoenix. *strokes chin thoughtfully* Wait! I did! In the last chapter!
Author's Response: Ha ha, good job!
I'm very happy Harry is the daddy! The last few chapters were different. I had to laugh at Hermione's cravings. I was sad Ginny got kidnapped, but relieved Harry found her. What will Lucious do if he finds out!!!
Poor Hermione! Can't wait to see what happens next!
I laughed at the line about Harry hearing things he's not supposed to hear. I'm keeping my fingers crossed Remus is OK!
Author's Response: Well...I figured somebody finally need to say that Harry's ears are too big! You'll find out about Remus in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
Lots of confusion at the end. Ron forgiving Hermione so quickly seemed OOC. Also, when Hermione ran out of Ron's room, first you had them on her bed, then his bed. Must be some sort of magic, apparating between beds while ... The Harry/Ginny scene was good, but I still don't trust Draco.
Author's Response: Ah, I guess I mixed up my pronouns. I have to fix that. Sorry that you were confused. My only explanation is that Ron is a boy and a pig and Hermione is hot. Thanks for reviewing.
Not tonks! Maybe its just a giant mouse that pooped on her shoe! (very gross) I'm glad they rescued Remus.
Author's Response: Ha ha, that's a good idea! But Remus isn't safe yet...you'll find out in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!!
Yay, the Weasleys are home! The baby pictures made me laugh, I can just picture Ron looking like a gnome!
Author's Response: I know, when I thought of baby pictures I immediately thought someone should be a gnome and I figured Ron was perfect! Glad you liked. Thanks for reviewing.
I laughed when Harry realized he wasn't wearing pants. I can't wait to find out how the DEs got into Hogwarts.
Author's Response: Good, I'm glad somebody laughed at my joke! I thought it was funny too. Next chapter doesn't really include much about DEs so you'll have to wait for Ch.10! Thanks for reviewing!