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Channeling Phlegm at the moment, please bear with me as I try to avoid turning into Bridezilla.





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Summary: Lord Voldemort is no more, but the victors paid a high price. This story begins as Harry, Ron, and Hermione’s seventh year comes to an end and Ginny's starts. While delving into the ancient story of Merlin, Percy Weasly brings attention to what appears to be the complete collapse of magic. Can he, or anyone stop the changes before it's too late?

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 246004 Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/02/05 Updated: 12/29/06


Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 11/03/05 Title: Chapter 9: Percy's Memory

The Percy part was a bit slow, but the part with Liam, Tiernan and Ruday was good.

Author's Response: Thanks you! S.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 11/01/05 Title: Chapter 8: ...You Sometimes Get Burned

I can just picture Ginny mouthing "Bat Bogey" to Ron. I have to agree with Amanda, it was a bit strange for Harry and Ginny to tell Ron, but I'm sure it fits into your master plan. Hopefully Harry will discover his distaste is just because he needs to experience it to enjoy it!

Author's Response: Well, Harry got the job by default. Hermione was too upset, Ginny was too mad, so Harry did it. Look at it as a "man-to-man" sort-of thing! S.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 10/20/05 Title: Chapter 1: Damage Assessment

You were very descriptive, and most of the paragraphs I was able to figure out, but I'm still pondering who the redhead in the grey coat is. Onto the next chapter!

Author's Response: Enjoy...lots more to come. S.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 10/20/05 Title: Chapter 2: Awakening

Good so far, but couldn't McGonnagall just transfigure a classroom into an office? And where has peeves gotten off to?

Author's Response: You'll find out about Peeves MUCH later in the story.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 10/20/05 Title: Chapter 3: Moving On

The last line It would take a magician... was very good. The speeches were very good, I had to wipe a tear away.

Author's Response: Thank you for the tear. Oddly, I thought the "speaches" were the weakest parts of the chapter, as well as a big one around chapter 38. S.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 10/20/05 Title: Chapter 4: Opportunities

First the YAYs: Tonks and Remus having a baby! Ginny's talk with Molly! Percy's wand getting stolen and him getting called stinky! Now the BOOs: Killing Charlie and Bill!

Author's Response: Yeah, I felt bad about that. When I have the story edited I might just make it one or the other...who knows? Thanks againi. S.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 10/20/05 Title: Chapter 5: Steak Knives and Shotguns

I was confused why the trio was staying at the Burrow when they had the Hog House, but then I figured it out! You didn't have them move in until after they spent time with the Weasleys. Make sure you read over your stories before you submit them, there were a few spelling mistakes, such as new instead of knew, etc.

Author's Response: Yeah, I proof it a half dozen times but always manage to miss a few! S.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 10/20/05 Title: Chapter 6: When You Play With Fire…

Hmm, Tiernan wants to take Rudy on holiday...could it be Rudy is a wizard? And the Percy/Peter story is pretty good.

Author's Response: Thanks...good guess. Rudy ends up playing a smaller part in this that I had originally planned. The story was becoming too long and I had to cut somewhere. S.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 10/20/05 Title: Chapter 7: Strong Drink Giveth The Desire But Taketh Away The Ability

Hey I beat Amanda to being the first to review! I liked Ginny's earrings. Why exactly were Ron and Hermione drinking at the beginning of the chapter?

Author's Response: Doesn't really matter, does it! LOL! S.

 

Summary: The fact that opposites attract might be one reason for Ron and Hermione’s new endearment towards each other. By the time the Hogwarts Express pulls into Hogsmeade Station for another year at Hogwarts, every witch and wizard on the train knew something had changed drastically between the two friends. Harry and Ginny on the other hand decide to keep their relationship a secret because of a “dream” Harry has about ‘You Know Who.’ If their secret love is discovered by the wrong people it could possibly cost Harry and Ginny their lives.


The sequel is on it's way! It's been submitted so I hope you enjoy it everyone!

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 64708 Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/02/05 Updated: 03/20/07


Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 10/02/05 Title: Chapter 1: Good Laughs And Bedrooms

Is it horrible that I have Biz Markie singing in my head right now? Sorry, the just a friend line about Krum started it. Cute beginning.

Author's Response: Not horrible...but a little bit weird. Thanx for the review!

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 10/02/05 Title: Chapter 2: Bad Dreams and Boxers

I like that you keep switching the POV. And I loved Ginny's hiding place for the decorations, very creative.

Author's Response: I would like to thank you for reviewing for every chapter and not just all in one.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 10/02/05 Title: Chapter 3: The Party...and a Little Bit More...

I wish I had someone offer me pancakes or waffles every morning. It got a little confusing with you repeating things in other people's POV, but i like it so far.

Author's Response: Um yeah me too! I put alot of my own "wishes" into my story.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 10/02/05 Title: Chapter 4: Just Between the Four (Five) of Us

in going with the theme of warning ron to watch out for lamp-posts, watch out for another new review! Is the death going to be significant to the story, or just a turn in the plot to get harry and hermione alone to talk?

Author's Response: Just a turn in the plot to get harry and hermione alone to talk. I needed it somewhere, so that Ginny and Ron wouldn't be there. The only thing I could think of was some type of "family outing." The only problem with that was if it were a fun "family outing" Harry and Hermione would be included into that. The only way my mind worked was to have a family members death whom Harry/Hermione didn't know.

 

Summary: When a hopeless James goes to his marauder friends for advice on how to get Lily to go out with him, Sirius tells James a story. Would Sirius' story help James make a wise decision, or not? Lots of marauder humor. One-shot, MWPP L/J, plz R&R

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2618 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/03/05 Updated: 09/03/05


Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 09/18/05 Title: Chapter 1: Which Flavor Do You Prefer?

*coughSiriusisnumber2cough* Cute story. My mom used the candy store analogy. I told her as long as it was chocolate, I would like it. And just because Moony is my fave Marauder, he would be chocolate flavored, James would be Moose Tracks, Sirius would be Cookie Dough, and Wormtail would be no-fat lo-cal *coughtraitorcough* vanilla.

Author's Response: *coughyourrightcough*hmnm...a candy analogy was another clever one! hehehe...moony is my fav too...actually all threee! sirius has a special spot in my heart though...lol...

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 09/18/05 Title: Chapter 1: Which Flavor Do You Prefer?

*coughSiriusisnumber2cough* Cute story. My mom used the candy store analogy. I told her as long as it was chocolate, I would like it. And just because Moony is my fave Marauder, he would be chocolate flavored, James would be Moose Tracks, Sirius would be Cookie Dough, and Wormtail would be no-fat lo-cal *coughtraitorcough* vanilla.

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 09/08/05 Title: None

*first review dance* Ginny lurking in the closet? You've got my attention. Can't wait to find out more about Tonks' ring!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Because of you and another reviwer, I am adding a teeny tiny bit of Tonks and Lupin. It might be a small part, but i hope you will like it. I finally got to respond to my reviewers. YAY! Also, Chapter 2 is submitted.I know i repeated that.

 

Harry and The Love by rockeye
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 623]

Summary: This story starts a few days after the end of HBP. Harry has already had one shock to him, so what are a few more? Mainly H/G with R/Hr and other pairings. AU since its my version of book seven.



Read Bio, important info to be revealed.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 82158 Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/11/05 Updated: 03/31/06


Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 01/14/06 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Lessons of Life

The fun part is the trying! ;) This was a great chapter, I can't wait for the dance! YAY!

Author's Response: Sometimes it is. Thanks

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 12/01/05 Title: Chapter 9: Privet Drive

*first review dance* Operation Snitch was pretty cool. Too bad Tonks took the spell off Uncle Vernon.

Author's Response: Liked to keep it on him too! Thanks

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 03/03/06 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 The Chamber

Wow. This was an intense chapter, but you did a great job in details! I liked your idea of sending back the patronuses to let the Order members know what was going on, very cool. I can't wait to read the rest of the story!

Author's Response: 17 is in the works now.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 10/29/05 Title: Chapter 6: Horcruxes

your locket/horcrux theory is very interesting. Can't wait for the weddings!

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
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