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Channeling Phlegm at the moment, please bear with me as I try to avoid turning into Bridezilla.





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Summary: Harry, Ginny, Ron, and Hermione struggle to fill their roles in the two prophecies. Time is growing short and the finally battle looms. Who will decide where and when it takes place? Will the foursome find the key to Harry's victory in time?

This is the year seven sequel to, Harry Potter and the Blood Traitor. Read that first, or you will have no clue what is going on in this. Now that HBP is out, and I have continued to post my story, Harry Potter and the Unlocked Mind, I thought I would take a second to say this. Unlocked Mind will not be modified in any way to accomodate any of the cannon from HBP. Unlocked Mind, while not posted, was essentially finished before the release of JKR's book. Any similarities that my version of year seven has that may tie it to JKR's version of year six are coincidence.


Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 134286 Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/02/05 Updated: 09/01/05


Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 07/27/05 Title: Chapter 12: Bluff Discovered

Great chapter, especially with the bonds between Mione and the people she saved. It was a special added touch, like the canary cream, or the spit punch. I like telling jokes when people are drinking, so I appreciated that bit.

Author's Response: Thank you.

I would think a person would be more than a little devoted to you after what Hermione did for them.

The Canary cream was fun, especially making Hermione squawk like a chicken. Sometimes I think that is what she must sound like. Apparently the Twins think so too.

Harry and Ginny are going to have to be carefull with Hermione. The girl is starting to lighten up and she is brilliant. If she had the twins daring or they had her brains, well, the pranks would be out of this world.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 08/30/05 Title: Chapter 20: Checkmate Part Two

Are you sure you haven't already become a published author? This was a great chapter!

Author's Response: No, I'm quite sure I'm not a published author. My bank account is much too small for that to be true.

 

Summary: Itís the summer after the battle at the Ministry of Magic and Harry has returned to Privet Drive, where he awaits the time when he can rejoin his friends. A certain redhead has begun to occupy his mind and awaken emotions he never knew he had. As he continues to mourn the loss of his godfather, Harry slowly begins to heal and may have discovered a way to communicate with Sirius. Can it be too good to be true? Takes place directly following OOTP. Primarily a H/G romance, with some R/Hr as well. Rated R for adult content in future chapters.


Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 126594 Chapters: 29 Completed: No
Published:
06/04/05 Updated: 11/06/08


Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 06/06/06 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Miscarriage of Justice

I'm on the edge of my seat! Pardoned! If I didn't know better I would say Fudge had been imperioused, and gold had changed hands! Update soon!

Author's Response: It\'s an outrage, isn\'t it? Something is definitely wrong here. Thanks for the review - I appreciate it as always.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 11/21/05 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Back to School

*first reviewer dance* This was a fun chapter, i liked the confrontation with draco. good for neville! and hermione flipping her hair! one question, were the first years already lined up to be sorted, because i think dumbledore would have wanted to introduce everyone to him, not just the 2nd through 7th years. have a cookie one me!

Author's Response: Thanks! I really wanted to give Neville a bit of courage and I'm glad you liked it. As for our friend Hermione, I wanted to have her do something unexpectedly girly just to drive Ron crazy. In answer to your question, yes, the first years were already lined up to be sorted. Sorry that wasn't clear and thanks for pointing it out. Thanks for the cookie :0)

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 02/26/06 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Prophecy and Promise

Well, since I was watching the Olympics earlier, I am going to give this chapter a gold medal! Or would you prefer a gold donut? The four branches were cool, I even picked who would get which branch before I read it. I Harry?Ginny scene at the end was really sweet. *Plays HP theme music in lieu of national anthem*

Author's Response: I'll most appreciatively take the gold medal since it's the closest I'll ever get to the Olympic podium! Those medals did look like gold donuts though, didn't they? Glad you liked the chapter. It was fun to write. The four branches certainly had their owner's names written all over them, didn't they? Thanks for your wonderful review - I always look forward to them. *Humming HP theme music while standing on the podium accepting gold medal (or donut), tears of joy streaming down her cheeks*

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 08/02/05 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Results Are In

maybe hermione is going to take matters into her own hands, and they will have the "meeting" in a private room at TLC, just an idea, feel free to use and expand upon it!

Author's Response: LMAO!! Oh the evil thoughts that came to my mind.....it's difficult to say what Miss Granger will do. I'll have to see where they take me. Thanks for the idea!

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 10/15/05 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Hermione's Secret

*sneeks a peek for other reviewers, (nope none here) dances a quick jig to celebrate being first to review this chappie* Poor Hermione! You got Harry's reaction dead on. The part with Harry looking up Ginny's shirt was lighthearted, but typical teenage horniness. Hopefully Ron and Hermione will quit dancing around each other and dance TOGETHER! Good job.

Author's Response: You have no idea how happy I am to see that someone finally reviewed and I'm so glad it was you! I admit, I was getting a bit discouraged that I had over 130 reads for this chapter, but no reviews yet. I'm glad you saw what I was going for. I wanted Harry to see a physical reminder of what happened or could have happened to his friend and I wanted to lighten it up a bit, hence tossing in the horny teenage bit - LOL. Thanks for taking the time to review.

Author's Response: You have no idea how happy I am to see that someone finally reviewed and I'm so glad it was you! I admit, I was getting a bit discouraged that I had over 130 reads for this chapter, but no reviews yet. I'm glad you saw what I was going for. I wanted Harry to see a physical reminder of what happened or could have happened to his friend and I wanted to lighten it up a bit, hence tossing in the horny teenage bit - LOL. Thanks for taking the time to review.

Author's Response: You have no idea how happy I am to see that someone finally reviewed and I'm so glad it was you! I admit, I was getting a bit discouraged that I had over 130 reads for this chapter, but no reviews yet. I'm glad you saw what I was going for. I wanted Harry to see a physical reminder of what happened or could have happened to his friend and I wanted to lighten it up a bit, hence tossing in the horny teenage bit - LOL. Thanks for taking the time to review.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 08/01/05 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Results Are In

add my vote for the pretend meeting! alone time for h/g and r/hr will be worth the wait!

Author's Response: Since mrsgeorgeweasley has very graciously allowed me to use her idea, I am certainly going to do that. It really makes for an interesting angle, doesn't it? I hope I can do the idea justice.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 01/30/06 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Feelings Revealed

Not just one, but two! I loved Harry and Ginny's first kiss, the wait was worth it! And to top it off, catching the slytherins! Good old Peeves, I had to laugh that Harry imitated Dumbledore, but the flying pies were priceless. I think Kingsley was a little lenient though!

Author's Response: Yes, you got two for the price of one - I thought it was only fair since I made you wait so long for it to finally happen. The flying pies were just a moment of pure silliness on my part, but I had fun with it. As for Kingsley, he has his reasons for not wanting to make too many enemies so soon in the school year. Thank you (as always) for the lovely review.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 03/26/06 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20. Shadows

I was so happy to see the update! Hermione's birthday gets overlooked so often, it was nice to see almost a whole chapter devoted to it, yay! Draco is acting very suspiciously, I'm very curious as to what he has up his sleeve. 9/10

Author's Response: I agree - we need to have a celebration for Hermione every once in awhile. Yes, dear Draco is acting a bit odd, isn't he? You know he's definitely up to something :-) Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 12/04/05 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Potions and Practical Magic

I loved the Harry/Ginny scenes! Especially the last few lines! I liked how you included the ingredients to the potions, and Harry being nice to Draco, well, if I were him, I'd be speechless too! I can't wait for your next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!! This really is one of my favorite chapters and I was hoping it would be well received. I like the playfulness between Harry and Ginny, and I really wanted to illustrate that they are ever slowly coming closer. Thanks so much, as always, for your wonderful reviews. I always look forward to them.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 07/05/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Letter

do we get to see whats in the letter? good first chappie, onto the next!

Author's Response: A new reader - welcome! I'm glad you liked the chapter. Yes, you will see what is in the letter.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 07/05/05 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Harry's Reaction

photo albums are so sentimental, i love them! nicely done, readin on to see how harry gets to the burrow

Author's Response: I agree. When you lose someone close to your heart, photographs are bittersweet, but the memories they give us are what makes us go on.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 07/05/05 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - At Long Last

boys! can't live with them, and can't live without em. :) they're finally realizing who their hearts belong to (YAY!) while still being immature (pillow fights) but it looks like we will see them grow up a bit

Author's Response: They are silly creatures, aren't they? I wanted to make them mature a bit, yet still retain some of their normal ways.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 07/05/05 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Wishes, Woes and Wisdom

tonks in the kitchen! oh no! very good conversation between remus and harry.

Author's Response: Yes, Tonks in the kitchen is a very dangerous situation and Molly recognizes that. I'm glad you liked the conversation between Harry and Remus. I felt that Remus was the logical one to talk to Harry.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 07/06/05 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Nightmares and Nighttime Visits

i've been seeing pensieves in alot of stories lately, yours will be put to good use i presume. looking forward to when harry and ginny are ready to act on their feelings for one another

Author's Response: Poor Harry was really in need of a Pensieve and he will certainly be putting it to good use in the future. Ginny and Harry will start out a bit slowly at first because they are both unsure of themselves, but all will work out in the end.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 07/06/05 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Remus Returns

just one question, who did the chessmen belong to? in SS it said that Harry had a hard time directing the pieces b/c they didn't trust him (and he had borrowed them from someone) but ron's pieces knew him and could anticipate his moves harry finally got some sense knocked into his head, now i'll have to wait and see what the will said, and what ginny will say :)

Author's Response: The chessmen belong to Harry. I believe he received them one Christmas in a Wizarding Cracker. It's better than having to borrow someone's all the time, but also a problem since they know Harry quite well. The next chapter has been submitted, so hopefully it will be up soon.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 08/23/05 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - A Day In Diagon Alley

10/10! I loved this chapter, especially the quality time between Ginny and Harry! A well aimed bat-bogey hex was the icing on the cake!

Author's Response: Thank you!! This is really one of my favorites so far and I am glad you enjoyed it. If anyone deserves to be covered in great flapping bat bogeys it has to be Percy. I can think of no one more deserving.

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 10/31/05 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Momentos and a Midnight Confession

Aww, this chapter was sweet. I loved Harry's thoughts of waking up with Ginny. The box from Sirius was a nice touch. If only Ron knew he talked in his sleep!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I am having a lot of fun making Harry deal with his emotions, whether they be good or bad. Poor Ron, you have to feel bad for the boy, but these things always seem to happen to him. Thanks for all of your reviews - I really, really appreciate them!

 
Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate Signed
Date: 01/10/06 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Revelations

I started laughing when Dumbledore mentioned the toilet seats. The rune translation on the pensieve was cool, and I liked how you mentioned Lily was a gifted occulemens/legilimens. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really am quite fond of those toilet seats (yes, I realize how strange that sounds), and they will be cropping up now and again in the story. I am really glad you liked the rune translation - I was worried it wasn't interesting enough. Last but not least, I really wanted to show that Lily was a powerful witch, so I am happy you liked what I incorporated. Thanks for your lovely review!

 
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