Penname: Miss Undaztood Black [Contact]
Real name: Laura
Member Since: 08/14/09
Website: www.booksie.com/Miss_Undaztood_Black
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OK, so, my dream is to be a writer, so I'm thinking this is a good start. If you've actually taken the time out to visit this page, I should probably let you know a few things about myself. Favourite books: Harry Potter (PoA), Twilight, House of Night, Jane Austen, Artemis Fowl, Noughts & Crosses and North & South. Favourite films: Chocolat, Blow, Sweeney Todd, Harry Potter (HBP), Moulin Rouge, Shakespeare In Love, Pirates of the Carribbean and LOTR. I love Sirius Black and the Marauders.
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A Different Kind of Love by Nymphea
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 58]

Summary: James gives Lily a letter on the last day of sixth year:
I’m going to be perfectly honest with you—I’m not that good with feelings. I usually just ask Remus; he’s pretty good with that sort of thing. But I can’t ask Remus to write this letter for me, so you’re just going to have to bear with me while I set the record straight before the school year ends and I forget how to describe my feelings about things between us. [2000 reads! thanks guys!]

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1136 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/30/08 Updated: 04/21/08


Reviewer: Miss Undaztood Black Signed
Date: 08/26/09 Title: Chapter 1: A Different Kind of Love

I love this! I think you've captured James' feelings brilliantly. Can't wait to go and read One Way Street!

 

In the Stillness of Night by cassie123
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: Past Featured Story



The night is still, crisp, unforgiving. I take my time to walk the stone path, staring down at the rough detail on every circular rock. This is my preparation for my own self-exposure. I’m composing myself before the time comes for me to unravel.


To tell the truth isn't always easy, not even for the ones you love.

A Scorpius Malfoy/Lily Potter one shot.


Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 4051 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/20/09 Updated: 05/26/09


Reviewer: Miss Undaztood Black Signed
Date: 08/27/09 Title: Chapter 1: In the Stillness of Night

Generally, I read Marauderer Era fics. I don't tend to like Next Gen fics at all. But when I spotted your story, the summary intruiged me, so I thought I would give it a go. It's now one of my favourite stories.
I must admit, some of the sentences did throw me off a bit, but these have been pointed out in previous reviews, and there was a bit of an issue with formal/informal.
Apart from these minor things, your characterization was excellent, so real and the PoV only strengthened the connection with Lily.

 

Running by annuscka
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1]

Summary: "He has feared it all along - for longer than she has, he has feared this day, this argument, this goodbye. In the past months she has come to fear it too, and all summer they have merely been waiting." Andromeda leaves the only life and love she knows behind.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1751 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/22/09 Updated: 08/27/09


Reviewer: Miss Undaztood Black Signed
Date: 08/28/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. I'm wiping tears away from mx eyes. You should be proud of that.
It gets a bit confusing towards the end, though. I can't be certain how many people there are or who they are. Are there four or six altogether?
Overall, the language is brilliant and you give just enough away of their past together. Brilliant.

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