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After the War by harry4lif
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 23]

Summary: The war is over. How will everyone react? Will Harry and Ginny get back together? Or will their love be lost? And most importantly, can everyone learn to live with the choices they made?

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Sexual Situations

Word count: 5936 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
10/20/08 Updated: 06/04/09


Reviewer: Helena ravenclaw Signed
Date: 08/13/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Great personification of Molly Weasley. When are u going to release the new chapter?

 

What Would You Do? by ron lover
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 48]

Summary: Past Featured Story

WINNER! in the 2010 QSQ for best Canon Romance story. Thank you so much!

I take a deep breath so my voice won’t shake.

“What would you do if we died tomorrow?”

He takes a step away from me, but still keeps me in his arms. “What?”

“What would you do if you knew that we died tomorrow?”

“What kind of question is that?”

“Don’t give me that, James. You know that we are going to die soon. There is no point in pretending that we aren’t.”

James and Lily have a conversation two days before Halloween.



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 5499 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/06/09 Updated: 08/09/09


Reviewer: Helena ravenclaw Signed
Date: 06/28/12 Title: Chapter 1: What Would You Do?

It is a beatiful little story, pretty much of what happened in the Potter´s last days, the thoughts of Lily are very sad, but real. Knowing that almost everything she´s thinking will come true in a close future is very devastating. I loved the read head detail :).

Author's Response: I'm actually glad that you thought it was devastating. I'd actually be happy if a reader felt any emotion to what I wrote at all. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. :)

 

Much More Than A Game by Hypatia
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 87]

Summary:
“Lord Voldemort has never had a friend, nor do I believe that he has ever wanted one.”
-Dumbledore, HBP, ch 13

Dumbledore was rarely wrong, only once did Lord Voldemort desire a friend. It started out as only a game, but became so much more…

This is the story of how the teenaged Tom Riddle met a unique individual and slipped from cold indifference, to affection, to friendship, to romance. Discover how even Voldemort’s cold and callow heart was once broken beyond repair. This is for anyone curious about how an imperfect love warped and twisted a corrupt young man into the Dark Lord.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 106968 Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/16/11 Updated: 09/29/12


Reviewer: Helena ravenclaw Signed
Date: 06/28/12 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions

Wow, your story is fantastic!. I think that if Tom Riddle or later Lord Voldemort could live in those situations, JKR would write it exactly as you did. You really understood tom´s character and you created a perfect couple for him; Lydia is maybe a character with wich many of us Potterheads can identify, I even feal jealus for her to have such handsome and smart guy courting her, if that´s what they are doing.
I only have a question, If Voldemort has already made a pair of Horcruxes, doesnt that prevent him from loving? I mean he´s as selfish as ever but maybe loving Lydia can make a change in what he feels by creating his Horcruxes, maybe pain in his soul, because in my believes, love comes along with having a soul, and if you are slowly turning your soul into pieces maybe that affects your loving and maybe Voldemort, at some time of the story coulf feel remorse by not being able to protect lydia and having to deal with her death through his ever lasting life.
Anyway I just wanted to know your thoughts on my thoughts.
I congratulate you for writing such a wonderful story, I read it all in only 2 days, and now my eyes are irritated for staring so much time at the computer, but nothing to worry about. I hope you keep writing and if you decide to release a book, please let me know so I can buy it and read one more amazing story :) . And one more thing, I must confess I don´t know much about chess, but I´m looking forward to learn it, because in many cases, it can be much more than a game :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your review was the bright spot in my day (and it was one of those days that really needed a bright spot).

As for your question regarding Voldemort's ability to love with a split soul... I'm afraid I can't answer that just yet. However, if after reading the epilogue you don't feel that the question is fully answered, just let me know and I will give you a more detailed response. Sorry, but I think you're question is just too close to how the story ends. (If you can't wait to find out, you can PM me on the forums since it will be weeks before the epilogue is posted: I'm Hypatia there too.)

Thank you again for review,
Hypatia

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