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Choices by Treacle_Heart
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: We all have to make choices in life. Some decisions are harder to make than others.
Colin Creevey discovers this on the night of his death.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 921 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/10/08 Updated: 12/11/08


Reviewer: Tobias07 Signed
Date: 10/31/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was surprisingly good for 900 words. Usually a death scene takes ages, but you did well in a short space. Good job

 

Fallen Lord by TheBlackSister
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: Past Featured StoryAn old defeated man awaits his end. It comes with consequences.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 1863 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/06/09 Updated: 02/07/09


Reviewer: Tobias07 Signed
Date: 06/13/10 Title: Chapter 1: Fallen Lord

Thumbs up. Entertaining

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

 

Summary: “Is it true five years have passed since that night? That I have been dead for five years?”


Hermione had known love with Ron. But, now he was married to someone else and Hermione was alone with only her work at the Ministry to keep her busy.

But, when she was asked by Minister Shacklebolt to handle a problem, would Hermione find love with someone from her past?

Sirius Black’s life was cut short when he fell through the Veil in the Department of Mysteries. But, somehow, he inadvertently found a way to come back through the Veil.

When he was told it was five years after he fell, Sirius didn’t believe Kingsley. Sirius found himself being held in a room in the Department of Mysteries. A prisoner again.

When the door opened and a grown-up Hermione walked through it, Sirius was stunned. How could this be the same girl he had known?


This is the story of a lost girl, a man back from the dead, and a love story that will be talked about for years.

Categories: Hermione/Other Character Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 22692 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
05/03/09 Updated: 06/17/12


Reviewer: Tobias07 Signed
Date: 06/13/10 Title: Chapter 7: The Burrow

You know as bizarre as this storyline goes, I actually like it. One of the few times I read these things and the characters actually feel like people, not archetypes. Very good, and keep practicing.

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