First of all I would like to state that I am in fact, NOT homophobic (i actually have a quite large amount of gay friends) but I can't believe that you could have gone this far. YES, it was an excellent story, nice plotline, but I am very dissappointed that you decided to make Albus Serverus gay. Yes, it's fanfiction, but I give a thumbs down on the decision. I would think Draco's son to be gay, but not Albus. And I think many viewers and fans would agree.
I have a theory though that just because Albus Dumbledore was gay, does NOT mean Harry's son shall be. I'm sorry, but I just don't really like the idea. In fact I would like to ask what the hell you were thinking. I am truly sorry, and I loved the plotline, but I really wished you would have picked another character or an original character to play the Draco's son's love interest.
But it just facinates me and I give you props for this, that a son of a very strong, wealthy, and pure family line could not be so pure at all. I think that is quite ironic and interesting so kudos to you:)
Author's Response: Wow. Excuse me, but I find this review extremely rude and offensive. I'm having trouble seeing why exactly you find it so bad to make Albus gay. We know nothing about the sexuality of the next-gen characters, and Albus is just as likely to be gay as any of the others. And I seriously do not think that "many viewers and fans" will agree with you on this point, seeing as you are the only person out of the many people to have read this fic to tell me this opinion. Where on earth does your reasoning come from? If it's just because Albus Dumbledore was gay, then I'm going to have to tell you that it's absolutely ridiculous. To be completely honest, that connection didn't even cross my mind while I was writing this fic. I think of Dumbledore as first and foremost a great headmaster, not a homosexual. His sexuality does not have any bearing on Albus' at all. "What the hell was I thinking?" I wanted to write a romance between two characters who we know NOTHING about. Also, for someone who is "NOT homophobic", you certainly seem to be looking at the characters' sexuality in an extremely negative way. Firstly, I don't think that Albus being gay is the huge deal you've made it out to be, and secondly, I'm extremely offended by how you deem Scorpius "not pure" simply because of his sexuality. Even if that was meant to be a compliment, you're implying that homosexuality is an impure thing and I really do not appreciate it. It's nice to hear opinions on my writing, but I might be more inclined to take you seriously if you weren't so narrow-minded and rude and perhaps used correct spelling and punctuation. Reviews like this are honestly just a waste of your time and mine. I would appreciate it if next time you kept your offensive and discriminatory opinions to yourself.