elaine..........it rhymes with insane..............go figure
..whoa...i just started a story of my own and i wish it were half as good as yours! your use of metaphors and similes is amazing! I felt like i was there! i'm actually sad now cuz it felt so real.....jeez thanks a lot.....lol......keep it up!!! 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Aww, don't begin to compare your writing. Each piece of writing is as individual as the person who wrote it. I'm glad you caught the similies and metaphors. ;) I was wondering if anyone would. LOL, sorry to make you sad. But the story isn't all sad...it has its highlights, as you'll see.
omigosh.....u r sooooo good!! keep it up! 10!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you!