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Fool Me Twice by Dawnie
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 110]


Lily Evans is pretty, intelligent, vivacious… and accused of murder. James Potter is privileged, arrogant, and conceited… and her best chance at avoiding Azkaban. If only he wasn’t convinced of her guilt.

With a war looming in the background and evil slowly seeping into the wizarding world, seven years of secrets unravel, and two very different people find themselves caught up in a battle against privilege, intolerance, and greed.

But even in the darkness, and even in the despair, there is still friendship, and love, and hope.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 104781 Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
02/02/11 Updated: 08/15/11

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 08/04/11 Title: Chapter 21: Those Seven Minutes

Well done dawnie. you're a genius, somehow :d.
i didn't think narcissa really could care about anyone except her family, ever.though she kept lily's secret:
"Whatever the blonde witch might say about her own motives and reasons, it did not change the fact that she had taken Lily’s wand and Lily’s secret, and she had not told a soul."
you said otherwise!hope to see more of your work.

Author's Response: Thanks! I think Narcissa was a complicated character in canon, and she definitely had the potential for doing good, primarily because of her love for Draco. So, when writing this story, I tried to hold onto the fact that she has good inside of her. She went out of her way to make Lily miserable, but she also saved her life.

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 05/17/11 Title: Chapter 12: The Prosecution's Case

it was realy good keep writing.

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 08/16/11 Title: Chapter 22: One of the Good Guys

I can't believe it's finished.i would have waited for another if i hadnt read your note!
But the end was just gr8.
I'm looking forward for the next one you write.

Author's Response: Thanks! There is definitely more that could be told in this AU world, but the story is sadly over. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 04/10/11 Title: Chapter 9: The Rising Dark's gr8.keep writing

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 07/24/11 Title: Chapter 20: The Last Missing Pieces

oh that was gr8.plz update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you like it.


Raindrops by Gmariam
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 248]


He returned with a quiet sadness and a surprising new responsibility to keep him focused. She returned with a misplaced bitterness and the matching position that forced them to work with one another. Yet fear, resentment, and stubborn arrogance kept pushing them apart, even when they were meant to be together.
Winner, Quicksilver Quill for Best Canon Romance. Thank you!!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse

Word count: 88679 Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
06/20/11 Updated: 12/20/11

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 07/30/11 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

this story isovely.lily has no right to b angry at james.update soon're a great author :D

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 11/11/11 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three

it was great.i hope nothing would happen in Diagon Alley.

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 10/16/11 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty

it was great. especially the last part.update soon.

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 08/23/11 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

oh damn lily. i don't get it: what james had saw in an arrogant person like her.and why the hell cant she believe that she likes him.I am soo sorry for james. i hope things get better for him soon.
and you're doing great you know.Just keep the good job up ok?

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 10/24/11 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One

I wanna read the next one right now! PLEASE update soon

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 08/15/11 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

poor poor poor poor and again poor jamsie!
but that was fantastic.
I cant wait to read more

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 07/22/11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

oh my god!it was sooooooo wonderful.the whole chapter.and i cant put my finger on a special part.please update soon.

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 07/14/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

oh i'm glad lil & jam could actualy talk!and i dont understand why they don't know about their feelings towards each other.Poor mark and Cynthia

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yes, they are rather clueless, aren't they? Well, they are in denial, obviously! I suppose they will get there eventually...maybe. ;) Thanks for reading, hope you continue to enjoy it! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 10/05/11 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen

good writing and good story but you keep going with the same things. :(

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments, although I'm not sure about the same things happening over and over. It may seem that way, but I wanted to show both sides of their story, and how similar they are, so its all been deliberate and planned. One of them sees them with someone and thinks the wrong thing, then the other sees them with someone and thinks the wrong thing. They just can't get around their misconceptions and misunderstandings. And then, after what happened in Chapter 17, you didn't think they'd just end up together, did you? Hee hee. ;) I'm not stringing it out as torture, I'm just trying to build some depth. I hope you enjoy the rest, it does get better for them, I promise. ;) ~Gina :)

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 06/27/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

it's good.update sooon

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on the next chapter and hope you enjoy it! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 08/10/11 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

it was good.keep writing

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 07/19/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

"their lips just inches apart…

And then Madam Pomfrey appeared to check on Sirius, and the moment was lost—apparently forever."

poor lily! she just has no idea.and they're both so stubborn....

Author's Response: Hee hee, you've quoted one of my favorite bits! Glad you enjoyed it too. Thanks so much for the review, I hope you enjoy the rest ~Gina :)

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 09/06/11 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

you're awesome! i can't wait to read more

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 06/23/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

oh i loved it!!!!! it's gr8.i'm soooo so intrested in the story.please write more.
oh and i would have slapped Lily if i were James!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Yes, Lily was quite rude, wasn't she? Well, she has her reasons, I suppose. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 09/22/11 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

your story just make me wana read more. but james must have really followed lily if he wants her.those people drive me crazy.keep going and as you said surprise me with the next

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm rather nervous about the next bit - it might be a surprise or an utter disaster, we'll see, lol! I hope you enjoy it, thanks so much for all the reviews! ~Gina :)

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