I'll Pick You Up by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 360]
Summary:
“Guilt brings people together. It’s a takes one to know one type thing.”
James Potter has always been a spoiled, arrogant, lazy show-off. When he enters his final year at Hogwarts School, he’s Head Boy . . . and he’s still a spoiled, arrogant, lazy, show-off. But because of that terrible summer, he’s also guilt-ridden.
Lily Evans has always been a self-righteous, impatient, temperamental know-it-all. When she begins her last year at Hogwarts, she’s Head Girl . . . and still a self-righteous, impatient, temperamental know-it-all. But the first night back — and the murder that takes the entire school by surprise — leave her guilt-ridden as well.
With the darkness that’s surrounding the Wizarding world slowly seeping, at long last, onto the grounds of Hogwarts and into the lives of James Potter and Lily Evans, what comes next?
*Completed*
I realy love this story. Please update soon. i know you will. and i love detective James. it's realy funny.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try and update as soon as I can!
good one. i like the characters. i'm already in love with this story! o'course i like chapter 2 better. i am waiting for you to update
Author's Response: An update isn't too far off! I'm glad you like the story so much already; thank for the review :)
oh. i realy love your story. i am totaly in love with everything you write. in this chapter i loved James outburst and lily apologize. And about that Katrina girl. i hate her. but i must admit that she makes the story somehow interesting by her stupid actions. and i completly agree with passion for prongs. she should live for now and then die from jealously! oh and please update soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think Katrina adds to the story -- I do, too, obviously! And I'm glad you liked James and Lily in this chapter. Thanks for the review. I'll try and update as quickly as I can!
I really LOVE this story! I want to read the whole story right now. please update as soon as possible
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter has been in the queue for almost two weeks now. I have no idea what the hold up is, but I'm starting to get a little frustrated. Hopefully it'll be posted soon, though!
wow you've wrote the James & Lily part totaly different. i love it! please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try. :)
hey it was so gr8. i love it as i did the last chapters. sorry for my late & short reveiw. But i'm kind of busy these days. hope to see you've updated again soon.
Author's Response: Any review is fine with me -- I'm glad you left one even if you're busy :) And I'm glad you liked this chapter! The next one should be up soon (I've already submitted it to the queue).
Hey! it was a wonderful chapter. i want to read more. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is almost finished and should be posted soon!
Things Change by Gmariam
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 79]
Summary:
James Potter has changed: no longer an arrogant, irresponsible prankster, he has matured into a responsible Head Boy with tops marks in Transfiguration. Lily Evans has changed as well: normally studious and in control, she has lost focus as she struggles with Head Girl responsibilities and N.E.W.T level studies. An unexpected encounter in the corridors one weekend leads to several startling realizations, the least of which is that things have definitely changed between James Potter and Lily Evans.
This story was nominated for a 2010 QSQ and is now complete.
Hey! I realy like this story. Poor James!! And i think lily has a right to be upset. but wait... oh no... she cant accept James to let remus down cause remus' his friend of 7 years. james told her that remus was waiting. i realy should go update soooooon
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! James is sort of in a tough place, isn't he? I'm glad you are enjoying the story and hope you like the next part! Thank you so much for the review!! ~Gina :)
A Different Kind of Magic by unjellify
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 105]
Summary: James Potter is Head Boy and Gryffindor Quidditch captain in his seventh year at Hogwarts. He has three best friends and his life seems perfect--except that Lily Evans, the only girl he's ever loved, can't stand him.
Lily Evans is Head Girl and top of their class. She's always been disgusted by James' arrogance, yet she can't seem to stop blushing when he's around.
As their Head Boy and Girl duties bring them together, can James find a way to win Lily's love?
A Different Kind of Magic has been nominated for the 2011 Quicksilver Quills: Best Canon Romance. Thank you!
I've temporarily changed the rating to 3rd-5th years due to site glitches. I don't think there is anything graphic in the story thus far, but please read at your discretion anyway.
OH MY GOD!! That was amazing! please update soon again!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I don't know if I can get chapter ten out as soon as this one (I wrote this in record time) but I've started it already. Glad you liked it!
i dont want to be lily because she's now waiting.i know it's realy hard.however it's a sweat thing.(love, i mean)
please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for the thoughtful review! Yes, I think a lot of people can identify with what Lily's going through, but love endures all things. And I'm almost done with chapter 11 so it can be beta'd soon and then posted! :)
oh that was great.you're doing fine.update soon please :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I'll try to make the next chapter even better than fine! :)
I like this story.it's good.update soon.
I like this story.it's good.update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! And I'll try. :)
wow!!!!!! i realy like this story.keep on writing and update soooooooooooon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! :) I started chapter 9 last night, so it shouldn't be too long of a wait.
it was so sad.but you wrote it well.update soon
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad you liked the chapter! And I'll try to get the next one out soon. :)
it was good. i thought james had told sirius about his mom not Mr Potter. he is such a stupid person.sirius has a right to cut his friendship with james.update soon
Author's Response: Thank you! And no, James didn't tell Sirius. That was part of the reason Sirius was crying in the last chapter because Sirius felt like James had no right to keep something like this from him. Don't give up on James yet. He is selfish--that's partly from the way he has been brought up--but people can change. Anyway, yes, I'll try to update soon!
Stars Apart by Willow Rosenberg
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 430]
Summary: The sequel to “Trickster”: The Marauders return to Hogwarts for their seventh and final year. Lily and James juggle more responsibility than ever, and James learns that convincing Lily to go on an actual date with him is harder than he would have imagined. Remus frets about post-Hogwarts life while Peter drifts even further from his friends. But when Sirius discovers a group of fourth-years who are bound and determined to steal the Marauders’ title of Greatest Hogwarts Troublemakers he wages war, rallying his friends so they can maintain their legacy. Meanwhile, outside the castle grounds, Voldemort is gathering supporters in unending preparation for a much darker battle…
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)
-E. E. Cummings
September 2012: HEY guess what I couldn't wait, and the third installment, "World Enough," is UP NOW under James/Lily. Or just under my name. Or at this link: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=92131. Yay! :D
hey dude! this story is just great.can't wait to read more :))
Author's Response: thanks!! the next chapter's in queue :D
oh great brave loyal great sirius.i just love him.it was great.keep going :)
A Touch Too Much by MerrryD
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 18]
Summary:
i was searching last night and i happen to see you've not updated as you've promised.why have you stoped? it IS a great one realy.are you gonna update?
It was gr8. i love it.i think lily is an idiot cause james was somehow trying to tell her he still likes her.but you've put the feelings so great. i think it's completly true! waiting for the the next one impatiently. update soo.
Author's Response: haha, thank you! I'm writing the next chapter. :) <3Mere