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I'll Hate You Forever (I Think) by kris250
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1038]

Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter agreed on only one thing since they first met: they'll always hate each other. But after five years, James begins to see things, to see her, differently, and wants another chance. But Lily is one stubborn girl. Can he convince her that his feelings are real? Meanwhile, the pair is thrust into many different dangerous and humorous situations with their friends. Will it take a disaster to help Lily believe in true love? Or will a tragedy just push her farther away? How many times does James have to try before he stops messing up? Follows with the information provided by JKR, with some fun along the way.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 66757 Chapters: 56 Completed: Yes
11/09/04 Updated: 09/27/11

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 08/15/09 Title: Chapter 51: A Christmas Eve Dance

hullo! i realy like your story. you should keep writing. i think it's better if each chapter be longer (I love the long ones.) and update soon.

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 09/04/09 Title: Chapter 52: Utter Melee

oh. i realy like it. i hope you update soon. and don't give up.



Mr. and Mrs. Potter- or, as they prefer to be called, Lily and James- are two well-respected and talented top field operatives for the Order of the Phoenix. But they have sacrificed having a home of their own and the careers of their choice to fight bravely against Lord Voldemort. Now, at barely twenty years of age, life has thrown them another curve . . . Lily is pregnant. How can you face starting a family when all you've ever known of adult life is war? In this tale, everybody's favorite couple is forced to grow up once again.

They were the couple that made single people jealous and older people shake their heads fondly, lost in thought.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 11743 Chapters: 7 Completed: No
08/08/05 Updated: 08/06/09

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 08/08/09 Title: Chapter 7: Something Wrong

i read this fic yesterday. it is awesome. i like the way james & lily are both feeling guilty and all. i hope you update soon. and please make each chapter longer. good luck!


Love Can't Be Stopped by ambush
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 146]

Summary: New year, new start, new feelings. Has James' newly deflated ego and mature attitude finally won over the heart of Lily Evans? With a mixture of embarrassing situations, falling out of bed, and roaming hands, this year could be an interesting one.

My first fanfic everybody, so any criticism is very welcome! enjoy!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 22333 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
12/09/05 Updated: 08/24/08

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 07/22/09 Title: Chapter 10: An Eventful Holiday Season (part 2)

good one, keep it up.


My Deliverance by TwinSuns
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 426]

Summary: Past Featured StoryVoldemort's rising reign of terror, NEWTs, death attempts, a Headship, a tangled affair with James Potter, hilarity, grief, love, secrecy, maddness... it's almost hard to believe that I've survived to graduate. I am Lily Evans, and this is my 7th year.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 93594 Chapters: 20 Completed: No
07/09/06 Updated: 10/29/09

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 11/25/09 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Nine: Bonded

oh my god that was realy gr8. amazing! i hope to read more & soon!

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 08/23/09 Title: Chapter 19: Interlude VIII

well... i read this story some days before and i think it's amazing. i always thought that Lily had fallen for James soon.even before 7th year. that's what i believe after reading DH. but she had waited for him to deflat his head. and i realy like these interludes and that you have not made another Hermione out of Lily. it's something new. i'm waiting for you to update SOON.

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 02/18/12 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Nine: Bonded

please tell me youre going to update again...


Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."

After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...

"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 46326 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
11/29/06 Updated: 09/18/11

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 09/19/11 Title: Chapter 15: Fourty-fourth detention.....and Potter's stupid spectacles

this was great. youre such a brilliant writer :))

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 09/06/11 Title: Chapter 14: fourty-third detention....... and the four 'C's

it is defenitly one of the best.update soon again :D

Author's Response: Thank you! it was definitely the hardest to write. More will come soon!

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 09/18/10 Title: Chapter 13: 37th Detention... and my confession under duress

it's a great story. i read all the chapters yesterday! the food fight was great. i think lily is dolt. and james... well his totaly head over heel. you showed it pretty good. what with not telling lily to go out with him every now and then. And sometimes they are so funny like the haircut thing! please keep writing.



2009 QSQs: Runner-up: Best Romance - Other Character Story

Add together one ladies' man, one Quidditch player, one werewolf, and one soon-to-be traitor. Then, mix in one imaginative idiot, one fiery redhead, one clever Ravenclaw, and one blonde artist. Stir counterclockwise until trouble occurs, and you are dealing with one of the best-loved group of friends in Hogwarts history. Follow the story of the four Marauders and four equally troublesome girls. See them deal with their first encounters of love, sorrow, heartache… and Death Eaters. How will these future Order members cope with the ordeals that life throws at them? Will love blossom in what was once thought a highly unlikely place? What do you do when the person you care about most in the world doesn’t seem to notice you at all? Will a well-kept secret shatter the foundations of a seven-year friendship? Follow the lives of these friends through their last year at school to the dramatic final battle with Lord Voldemort two decades later.

Warnings are for later chapters, and any sexual situations are very minor.

Chapter Twenty Two: "The Snakes Strike" is in the queue. Excerpt:

Perfume filled his nostrils as Emma walked passed and Rosier’s gaze lingered on her bare, pale legs as the group headed outdoors. “Don’t you just love summer?” he inquired of Regulus, a hungry sneer lighting his face.

“This is ridiculous,” Regulus announced in a furious whisper, “we’re never going to get them alone!”

“Have faith, Black,” commanded Rosier smoothly. “Girls are well renowned for their desire for girly chats. I’m sure they’ll slip off the shackles of their chaperones soon enough.”

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 175402 Chapters: 28 Completed: No
02/03/07 Updated: 01/16/10

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 01/22/10 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

I like it. And i'm happy you've updated again.

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 03/17/12 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

why????? please update again.i realy want to read more

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 09/04/09 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 21 - Who Said that Beauty and the Beast was just a Fairytale?

I love this fic. I really can't wait to read more. please update soon.


Learning To Live by MarauderWannabe
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 56]

Summary: Learning to live, just might cost them their lives.

Lily Evans needs to learn how to really live. Not her imitation of living. Real living doesn't involve homework, school, following the rules, or playing it safe. Real living is taking risks, breaking the rules, being spontaneous, and going to fast. And there is one person that is going to show her how. One summer and James Potter later and Miss Lily Evans might not recognise herself. Too bad, all good things must come to an end.....

"Lily, we're friends. I would never betray any of my friends. Plus, you honestly think I would let old Moldy-shorts get to me?" he joked.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 17483 Chapters: 7 Completed: No
11/14/07 Updated: 10/13/09

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 08/01/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Friends Help Friends Avoid Their Boyfriends...And Give Them Rides in Their Mustangs

Good story! i read it & i realy want to read more. i love james' character in your strory. WELL i always love his. but...

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 10/14/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Is Dumbledore's Beard Real?

good one. i liked last one much better. but i am waiting for the next 3 chapter!

Author's Response: I know, this isn't my favorite chapter either. I don't write serious well.....The next chapters a bit more of my style


A Different View On Love by helz_belz
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 364]

Summary: James would do anything to get inside Lily’s head. Lily would do anything to get away from James. Lily was brewing a banned potion. James went to find her. Lily made a mistake and the potion exploded. James got his wish, but is it much more than he bargained for?

Now Complete!

After a year the Epilouge is now up! Come read for a bit of fun!!

Runner up QSQ - Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Reason for Nomination:
This is the most unique take on how James and Lily really got to know each other. The story is hilarious and keeps you laughing throughout, but it never lets you forget the serious stuff. Plus, she somehow manages to end each chapter with a nice cliffhanger.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 51560 Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
07/23/08 Updated: 04/08/11

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 08/01/09 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: Objection!

I like your story, it's kind of funny. i like to see you post some more.

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 10/14/09 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen: Every Good Romance Needs An Exciting and Deadly Chase Scene

oh it was good. update soon


The Lions of Gryffindor by Equinox Chick
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 336]

Summary: Past Featured StoryIt is June 1976 and The Marauders are at the top of their game. From the outside they look to have everything.But appearances, as the saying goes, can be deceptive.

James is discovering that not everything in life is his for the taking. Sirius knows he will have to defy his formidable family. Remus lives in constant fear of his life beyond Hogwarts. As for Peter... Well, Peter is struggling to live up to his friends.

The ties of friendship are strong, but war is raging and with a dark power rising those ties will inevitably fray.

Added to the mix is an adversary called Severus Snape, some lost House Points, a prank or two and a whole lot of Lily.

This is a Marauder tale.

This is a story of what made them special.

This is a story of why it started to go wrong for The Lions of Gryffindor.

OH MY GOOD GODRIC! Lions of Gryffindor won the 2009 QSQ for Best Marauders' Era Story. Amazed and incredibly grateful to those who nominated, judged and have beta'd this fic. THANK YOU.

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Trick or Treat!
3. She clicks on her mouse and swipes her wand;
Some stories go up, and some stories are gone.
Stories of her own? Why, she has plenty!
Fewer than one-hundred, but far more than twenty.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 110875 Chapters: 23 Completed: No
09/10/08 Updated: 04/28/12

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 10/27/09 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The Full Moon

hey it was a good chapter. i want to read more and soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review ... I'm working on the next chapter now. ~Carole|~

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 11/18/10 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Dangerous Detention

it was good. but i had to read last chapters again to remember what was going on! update soon.

Author's Response: Yes, sorry. Unfortunately I have at least three stories to update, plus original fiction which takes precedence and my job. I do try and update as soon as I can, but I know I'm abysmally slow. Thank you for sticking with it. ~Carole~

Reviewer: jamlil Signed
Date: 03/24/10 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Hogsmeade

oh i definitly like this chapter! but you should try to make this story more exciting! but i'm waiting for chapter 16. update soon

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Exciting? Well, there will be more action in some chapters, but well, the story is what it is. Keep an eye on Rich ... Glad you're reading and reviewing. ~Carole~

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