Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter agreed on only one thing since they first met: they'll always hate each other. But after five years, James begins to see things, to see her, differently, and wants another chance. But Lily is one stubborn girl. Can he convince her that his feelings are real? Meanwhile, the pair is thrust into many different dangerous and humorous situations with their friends. Will it take a disaster to help Lily believe in true love? Or will a tragedy just push her farther away? How many times does James have to try before he stops messing up? Follows with the information provided by JKR, with some fun along the way.
hullo! i realy like your story. you should keep writing. i think it's better if each chapter be longer (I love the long ones.) and update soon.
oh. i realy like it. i hope you update soon. and don't give up.
Mr. and Mrs. Potter- or, as they prefer to be called, Lily and James- are two well-respected and talented top field operatives for the Order of the Phoenix. But they have sacrificed having a home of their own and the careers of their choice to fight bravely against Lord Voldemort. Now, at barely twenty years of age, life has thrown them another curve . . . Lily is pregnant. How can you face starting a family when all you've ever known of adult life is war? In this tale, everybody's favorite couple is forced to grow up once again.
They were the couple that made single people jealous and older people shake their heads fondly, lost in thought.
i read this fic yesterday. it is awesome. i like the way james & lily are both feeling guilty and all. i hope you update soon. and please make each chapter longer. good luck!
Summary: New year, new start, new feelings. Has James' newly deflated ego and mature attitude finally won over the heart of Lily Evans? With a mixture of embarrassing situations, falling out of bed, and roaming hands, this year could be an interesting one.
My first fanfic everybody, so any criticism is very welcome! enjoy!
good one, keep it up.
Summary: Lily Evans remained shadowed and distant from the world she loved so dearly. Control was Michael's weakness; temptation hers. Yet, when James Potter enters her life, without so much as a warning or brief hesitation, Lily finds truth. For James Potter refused to give up on her.
WOOW! it is just wonderful and charming and... i don't know. Just keep writing.ok? Please. i just want to read more. its realy perfect. you shouldn't give up.
Summary: Voldemort's rising reign of terror, NEWTs, death attempts, a Headship, a tangled affair with James Potter, hilarity, grief, love, secrecy, maddness... it's almost hard to believe that I've survived to graduate. I am Lily Evans, and this is my 7th year.
oh my god that was realy gr8. amazing! i hope to read more & soon!
well... i read this story some days before and i think it's amazing. i always thought that Lily had fallen for James soon.even before 7th year. that's what i believe after reading DH. but she had waited for him to deflat his head. and i realy like these interludes and that you have not made another Hermione out of Lily. it's something new. i'm waiting for you to update SOON.
please tell me youre going to update again...
Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."
After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...
"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"
this was great. youre such a brilliant writer :))
it is defenitly one of the best.update soon again :D
Author's Response: Thank you! it was definitely the hardest to write. More will come soon!
it's a great story. i read all the chapters yesterday! the food fight was great. i think lily is dolt. and james... well his totaly head over heel. you showed it pretty good. what with not telling lily to go out with him every now and then. And sometimes they are so funny like the haircut thing! please keep writing.
I like it. And i'm happy you've updated again.
why????? please update again.i realy want to read more
I love this fic. I really can't wait to read more. please update soon.
Summary: The first war with Lord Voldemort is constantly getting worse; people are dying left and right, dementors are attacking people on the Death Eaters' orders, and nobody knows who is trustworthy anymore. Lily Evans, in her seventh year at Howarts, does not want to be a part of the war -- but some things are unavoidable.
Oh my gosh! this is brilliant. i liked the whole parts. and they're together again. i'm so glad. and i hate petunia. she's such an asshole. i love reading this story. update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I shall try.
I definitly hate Lily. why she just didn't talk to james. the bitch!! but i totally liked it. i definetly hope them get back together soon.
Author's Response: Nah, she's not a bitch. She's just really nervous and avoiding it, and the longer she avoids it the harder it gets to explain it.
i love this story. i love to see you update again. i read this whole story i 2 days. i don't know if you want to ever update again. if so update quickly and if you're not please change your mind. this fic realy amazes me. you're putting new things in it.
Author's Response: I'm trying (though I realize you reviewed 7 months ago)! I've been unbelievably busy.
hey it was so saddening.but i liked it.update sooon. we're waiting.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :D Ch. 26 just needs some tweaking.
oh i didnt accept you to update! this fic is special and its kind of different! i like your characters. and im happy you want to update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! To be honest, I hadn't realized how much time had passed since my last update until I updated again and saw comments from early 2009, haha.
i realy liked it. i was just looking for a mention of L/J but i think it's already great! update soon. i had to read the last chapter again to remember some parts.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I'll try and update faster this time.