Summary: 7th Yr Sequel to Ancient Magic. It is now known the power of immortality resides inside Harry and Ginny. Will their combined powers be enough to protect them from the Dark Lord?
Nice to see how you seem to find the characters moving and talking for themselves. Whereas its still your imagination that keeps them flowing, rest assured they're alive.
"The sound of laughter was soon drowned out by the whiz, whir and boom of the Weasley Wizarding Wheezes Fireworks for Two. "
I feel there's a hidden meaning in that phrase... Am I reading too much into it?
Thank you so much for this. Just finished reading. Think it took me only 2 days...
Summary: It's baaaaaack...........
As the name implies, the ever-wacky, ever-evil Power Of Suggestion has returned to Hogwarts! What insanity will occur this time?
Note that this is a sequel (duh), so it's strongly advised to read the first part first. Just check my author page for a link!
Chappie nine is UP! Enjoy!
“I believe our mutual arch-enemy wears the exact same model…” said Snape.
I LOVE YOU DUDE.
Summary: This is book two in the "Potter's Pentagon" trilogy. Read "Potter's Pentagon: The Five" first, myesss? Cool.
WARNING: This story contains French people, an internal monologue about a blue orange, adolescent facial hair, good old-fashioned snogging, superstitious truck drivers, a portrait who calls everyone "Mavis," a zoo break-in, some very strange clothes, romantic conflict galore, and Ron Weasley's caffeine addiction. And worst of all, Professor Zabini!
Hogwarts is hosting the Triwizard Tournament, and when one of the members of Potter's Pentagon is selected to represent the school, much excitement ensues. Simultaneously, elections are being held for Minister of Magic, and things are getting busy at the Ministry.
Not to mention the fact that Jordan's made a new Muggle friend without informing her of the itty-bitty fact that he's magical, Haley has found an enchanted diary of dubious origin, Ted's met a werewolf from Beauxbatons, and Emma... well, Emma's not having a good year.
And what exactly is Ivy up to, anyway?
Everyone has secrets. But in the end, the truth will have to come out.
Starring Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character Nominees Ivy Potter, Emma Weasley, Haley Potter, and Giorgi Anderson, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin! Nominated for Best Post-Hogwarts story in the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Awards!
Umm, actually I thought Lee was Lee Jordan... Now I'm kinda embarassed I didn't realize it was Lily Evans -.-"
Author's Response: That's okay, I was trying to mislead the readers!
Teddy Lupin's first year at Hogwarts. Canon-compliant. Nominated for a 2008 QSQ for best Post-Hogwarts story.
The war is over, and all is well, they say, but the wounds remain unhealed. Bitterness divides the Houses of Hogwarts. Can the first children born since the war's end begin a new era, or will the enmities of their parents be their permanent legacy?
I still don't like the multi-POV style but this is definitely a good story. Your characters are strong and consistent, as well as using accurate and colorful descriptions for scenery. You most definitely did a great job. Congratulations !
Summary: What do you when you're a Dark Lord who can't kill anyone? Ever since his last Avada Kedavra went so horribly wrong, Voldemort just can't bring himself to sling another one. In his long journey back to emotional health, Voldemort must battle post-traumatic stress disorder, learn about religion, and, finally, realize that love really does conquer all. Just not exactly the kind of love Dumbledore had in mind...
The story is not all together what you'd call "brilliant piece of literature", but it isn't meant to be.
"When Wormtail peeked in the next day, he found Lord Voldemort lying on his bed with the shades drawn, moodily throwing darts at a giant picture of the Boy Who Lived."