I have been working on a post HBP story and it is being reviewed...I hope. Please be brutally honest in your reviews. The more blunt and honest you are the faster I can update!
Great Chapter. Keep up the good work!
i just read through your whole story. You have really developed the characters well. I think that you have so many subplots going on that it might be easy to get confused. Perhaps if the update gets posted quickly your readers will be able to respond and enjoy your cliffhangers a little better. (This is has been a long winded version of: PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY!!!)
Author's Response: I'll definately be trying to post more frequently. As for subplots- I could be wrong, but I think they get fewer as the plot moves on. I had a lot of background stuff to get through, but I'm almost done. Well, I'm almost done WRITING it, that is, but you guys aren't close to being done reading. (I hope, any way!) Updates soon, and thanks for pointing it out! I'll try to keep tabs on it!
Great job! I love the cliffhanger! I hope you get the next bit up soon! have I mentioned I just love your stuff and you rock out with your socks out? Great Job love!
Oh please get the next chapter up quickly! I have always liked your writing style, I love this plot!! Can't wait to see what you do next! 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks sooo much!!! And I promise I'll try to fit some writing into my sechedual soon, but college life is pretty crazy so far....but it wont be as long as it was for this chapter....that I promise...
Interesting, I can't wait for more! I can relate to you, senior in college, life...why does it vex us so? I hope you are well and that you know there is a huge family out here for you to converse with when life bites you in the butt. And they wonder why I sit on a pillow...
ooo I am so glad that everything is getting updated! I have always loved your style! Please update quickly! 10/10
Author's Response: I'm glad the queue is open too. Maybe people will stop sending me e-mails to ask for the rest of it now. If you are reading this, don't bother. I have not, and will not send anyone the rest of the story.
CHAPTER 14 IS UP! CHAPTER 15 IS IN QUEUE!
Interesting, very interesting. I like, love it, just want more of it! great job!
Author's Response: Are you by any chance a country music fan? :)
I hate you and your cliff hanging ways. Its fabulous and you know it update soon. Very soon. Im off to find something blunt to hit you with for such a wicked cliff hanger...
Author's Response: Ouch! That hurt! You didn\'t have to hit so hard! For all of you who are sick of the evil cliffies...I can pretty much promise you that the next chapter ends on a nice, flat area. As far as I know, there are no cliffs there. Of course...I do still have a few pages to write :)
great job, good start. You did a very good job establishing the situation and characters. Update soon!
Author's Response: thank you very much :)
beautifully done! I want that sequel out quickly. And I'm a die hard RW/HG shipper. Go figure. You must be talented or I'm out of my mind...quite possibly... :)
Author's Response: wow! thank you soo much! I have to secretly agree with you, since i wrote a Dr/H story. But i really am so happy that you loved it that much. xoxo thanks babe!
Funny, but he had never thought of using the Invisibility Cloak in his schemes to woo Ginny.
I loved it. Very realistic. Please write more. I am a first time writer too and I thought you did a fabulous job!
Author's Response: The happy hour by the lake is giving me some problems, but I hope to post it soon. The trouble is coming up with something a sixteen year old boy would want to dwell on that won't throw me into an NC17 rating - and hour of hand holding just won't do. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Oh it was so sweet! I love it when four chapters describe one day! Please update quickly! 10/10!!! Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
This is an excellent beginning! I hope that you update quickly!
*giggles and blushes* I like it, very reminiscent of those silly crushes we all had in school. Great job
To my fans I would like to say that I am back to writing, and I have now updated many of the chapters! Some changes are just grammer edits, but there are many adds and changes to chapters. Some based on your reviews or small things I felt needed to be added. Please take a look at the changes and let me know what you think. I am looking forward to hearing what you have to say about the changes and up comeing chapters.
So letís try this whole reviewing thing again! So, your story moves quite quickly. It is a fast and easy read. I like the fact that you donít venture away from your plot. You are a very calculated writer. I would like to see you go much more in depth in the scenes, character relationships, and general reactions. These characters all have a lot of intensity and emotion, donít shirk that. I donít know how I feel about Harry being the head of the Order. He has a big task to find and destroy the Horcruxes. How can he do that, study, and run the Order. Itís an awful lot for a teenager. Another thing that bugs me is Ginny. She isnít really the wait-and-see-kind of girl. She would fight for Harry, even if it is subtly. I like that you are bringing his relatives into a more active role in your story, but it kind of feels glanced over. It is still early yet, so I think you will probably give us a lot more before the fic is over. Overall, this is a really great job. I canít wait to see more!
Author's Response: Well as to Harry being the head of the order and finding the Horcruxes with a helping of study time. Well running the order and finding Horcruxes is one in the same, also when you have people as good as Harry does alot of the work is done for him. He set the direction and tone the order does the work. Also all the studing so far has been review. They will step that up, but a change in day to day life is comming for the group.
As to Ginny, I wont defend that I admit she was not compleatly in char. That had a lot to do with the story taking me where it wanted to go. I think I will at some point revise her part some.
I would agree they have been glanced over a bit much. I may druing a revising work on that.
I am happy to have you reviewing my story you will most likly keep me honest, and give me the carp I so richly have comming.
You have a very real talent for writing full complete tales! I love what you are doing! I am especially interested to see how Harry will handle the new role as Head or will he delegate his powers? Can't wait for the next chap. 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review! I have tried to come up with a replay on Harry will lead, and not give to much away. So I will say this most of what I will write will really be him sholdering the load but most of the work that will be done will be though delegating to others. That work will be the stuff that only needs a line or to but if I went in to a lot of detail would be a chapter by it's self. I may do one shots if I feel that it would be good enough for a one shot, but would not really fit in the main story. Again Thank you for the great review.
I really like your beginning. I can't wait to see how Ginny fights to keep Harry. Please update quickly!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I am glad you like the story so far. The second chapter is in que now.
Oh I can't wait to see how Petunia turns out. What does the Dementor cause her to see? I love it and you know it!
Author's Response: *Smile* Thanks for the review, sorry I have to gotten that chapter back to you. I have not been able to do much that I want to of late. I will find a way to make it up to you.
Excellent start! Definately get a beta, they are the best people in the world. To get one got to forums from the homepage before you sign on then scroll down to 'Want to be a beta' that forum is designed to let experienced or at least qualified people advertise to help others with their stories. You have got an excellent beginning! I really think you can expand upon it and make it fuller so take your time and enjoy it! Great job
Oh that was so sweet! I hope you keep writing that was lovely. I wouldn't say no to a sequel either! ;)