Penname: xxbabewithbrainsxx [Contact]
Real name: Soraya
Member Since: 06/22/09
Website: soraya786.livejournal.com
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Bio:
Hi there! I’m Soraya. I’m seventeen years old and am a proud Muslim British Bangladeshi. I live in East London and have loved reading and writing from a young age. I’m rather obsessed with Harry Potter (aren’t we all?), tea (not a surprise considering I’m a Brit) and good grammar. Recently, I've also got into the Supernatural fandom. After watching the first episode, I had already fallen head over heels in love with Sam Winchester, so it's no surprise that I am now a huge SPN fangirl as well as a Potterhead.

My writing has changed quite a bit over the years, and I think you'll probably notice that, the further down my author page you go, the more the quality seems to drop :P I started posting stories on here at the age of fourteen, and at nearly eighteen, I can see how much my writing has improved since those Dark Ages. So, for that reason, I would advise you stick to the more recent stuff, if you choose to read anything of mine.

My Stories

Just so you know, these are posted firstly according to what kind of pairing, if any, is in the story, and then in chronological order in accordance to my own canon, not necessarily the order in which they were posted.

Canon Pairings

Checkmate (James/Lily)

My first chaptered fic. It’s terribly written, but I still have a place in my heart for it because of how much fun it was to write. This story has now been deleted on MNFF, but if you really, really want to read it, you can still find it on FF.net and HPFF. (I advise you don't, though :P)

Second Childishness and Mere Oblivion (James/Lily)

Written for Round One (Major Characters) of Madam Pomfrey’s Character Clinic Triathlon, this one-shot is about James and Lily’s relationship getting rockier and rockier after they left Hogwarts, especially when Lily is faced with the trials of being a wife and motherhood. A little smutty.

My Love is Always Here (James/Lily)

This was a belated birthday present for the wonderful Gina/Gmariam, aka the queen of James/Lily. This is mostly about Lily dealing with becoming a mother for the first time and the problems (as well as the joys) that come with that.

There's an Answer (Remus/Tonks)

Written for Sophie/The owl for SPEW Summer Swap IV. Tonks is sent on an interesting baby Auror assignment to do with werewolves. Remus and a dangerous Muggle are thrown into the mix, with interesting results.

Left Behind (Remus/Tonks)

An expanded version of one of my LoveNotes, written for SPEW. It's a missing moment set between OOTP and HBP, where in my head canon Remus and Tonks have been together, in secret, for a few weeks already and Remus is then told to go on his werewolf mission. Slightly smutty.

One and Only (Remus/Tonks)

Written for the lovely Alex/Ithinkrabis2people in the Ravenclaw Christmas Drabble Exchange. This is a missing moment set just after Tonks’s outburst to Remus in the hospital wing at the end of HBP.

Out of My Life (Harry/Ginny)

My only AU (kind of). I tweaked a small part of canon in this -- basically, Harry actually said goodbye to Ginny properly when he broke up with her. Very angsty, and this is only up for sentimental reasons, as I wrote it during The Dark Ages (aka when I was fourteen).

A Different Kind of Magic (Harry/Ginny)

Written for the You’re Having My Baby challenge at SIYE. Ginny finds out she’s pregnant, but Harry receives the news before her and therefore has to tell his wife. This was my first ever story at MNFF. It was written when I was thirteen, and it definitely shows.

A Different Kind of Magic 2: Parenthood (Harry/Ginny)

A sequel, obviously, to A Different Kind of Magic. Ginny goes into labour, and both Harry and Ginny realise what it means to be parents. Again, this was written from Back in the Days.

Same-Sex Pairings

The Caustic Ticking of the Clock (Rowena/Helga)

Written for the Great Hall Cotillion, this story is my only Founders story so far, and it’s about Rowena and Helga’s secret relationship. I am proud of this one, which doesn’t usually happen :)

Catching Fire (James/Sirius)

This was written for SPEW 007. My prompt was “Embers”, and it’s set just after Remus’s second transformation with the Marauders. James is badly injured, and he and Sirius realise, inadvertently, that they might just have feelings for each other. I like the pairing but still think the story needs work. One day I will go back and edit.

Flicker and Fail (Katie/Leanne)

This was written forSecret SPEW, and my recipient was the absolutely fabulous Alex/welshdevondragon. It’s my take on Leanne and Katie’s relationship from way before they were even at Hogwarts as well as what eventually happens to Katie in HBP, when she was cursed.

Next Generation

Skinny Love (Louis/Lily)

Written for the 2013 Great Hall Cotillion. Set during Teddy and Victoire's wedding, Louis helps Lily come to terms with her bulimia. This one was pretty difficult to write.

Blood and Roses (Scorpius/Rose, Scorpius/Dominique, Dominique/OC)

Written for the Great Hall Mysterious Maychallenge, this was my first Next Generation fic about Scorpius, mostly, and the trials he faces after his daughter is murdered.

Broken Glass (Louis/Lily)

This is the story of when Loulily really began. After the deaths of his immediate family, Louis is finding it hard to cope, even six months later. Lily somehow helps. It’s a little smutty. I’m proud of this one, too :)

The Highway of Regret (Scorpius/Lily, Scorpius/Rose, Louis/Lily)

Also written for the Great Hall Cotillion. It’s my one and only Scily. This is all about secret relationships and mistakes people make. Lily’s angry at Louis, and Scorpius has just broken up with Rose; when Lily gets drunk in the pub, things... happen. :P

I Will Lay Down My Heart (Albus/Rose, Scorpius/Rose)

Written for Round Two (Minor Characters) of Madam Pomfrey’s Character Clinic Triathlon. Albus has been in love with Rose for years, but what happened with them when they were younger has put a dent in their relationship. It doesn’t help that Rose is actually in love with Scorpius, either. This is smutty too.

One More Night (Albus/Rose, Rose/Scorpius)

Companion piece to I Will Lay Down My Heart. This goes into more detail about Rose and Albus's changing relationship as well as the aftermath of the events in said companion story. Probably the smuttiest thing on my page. :D Written for the Great Hall Cotillion 2013.

Glass (Louis/Lily)

This was written for the Great Hall-iday challenge for the Operation: Mistletoe prompt, and this was where my love for Loulily began.

Poetry

Excruciatingly Painful

This is about how five men in Potterverse dealt with remorse in different ways.

Always

This poem is about how Remus feels about Sirius (not slashy, btw).

Regret

Written for the Magic in Music challenge over inPoetry, Anyone? This was set to the track “Obliviate” in DH1 and is about Hermione modifying her parents’ memories.

Farewell

Written for the Goodbyechallenge in Poetry, Anyone? This was about saying goodbye, and how difficult it could be.

After All This Time

Written for the Deathly Hallows challenge inPoetry, Anyone?. I ship unrequited Snape/Lily, and this is probably the only time Snape will be on my author page, lol.

Hush, Dominique

Written for the MC Kreacher challenge inPoetry, Anyone? This was written from the POV of Bill Weasley after his wife’s death.

Miscellaneous

Bruises

Written for the Great Bannermakers’ Hallchallenge. The banner I picked had Merope Gaunt on it, and it’s probably my darkest story; it’s definitely the only one to have a dubious consent warning. It’s about, as you might guess, the abuse Merope suffered from her father and brother.

In Care (Marlene/OC)

Marlene McKinnon, as a care kid, eventually falls in love with another care kid, Jamal Olawumi. But he's a Muggle, and keeping her world secret proves difficult. This is definitely a story I would like to revisit and tidy up.

Just Across the Bar (Sirius/Rosmerta)

Sirius is just about of age, but obviously Rosmerta has misgivings about having feelings for Sirius, who is still a student. Written for the 2013 Great Hall Cotillion and also smutty.

Butterbeer Bottles

Written for SPEW 007. My prompt was “Juggling”, and it’s just a silly piece of dialogue-only banter between Remus and Sirius. Sirius realises Remus likes Tonks, and he tries to persuade Remus to act on his feelings.

Hanging by a Thread (Katie/Oliver)

Written for the lovely Jess/ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor for Secret SPEW VII. Katie is grieving and drowning her sorrows in alcohol and Oliver is trying his best to save Muggles, while trying also to bury feelings for Katie that he thought he had long since forgotten about. There is also, surprise surprise, some smut in this.


And that’s it! Along with being a moderator, I’m also a member of SPEWand SBBC. I hope to see you around on the forums; feel free to contact me via PM or review if you have any questions or comments about my stories!
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Through Different Eyes by hogwartsbookworm
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 41]

Summary: Formerly titled 'From Wading to Redemption.'

Ron leaves. Ron returns. Ron saves me from Malfoy Manor. Ron and I descend together into the Chamber of Secrets. And, finally, Ron Weasley comes to understand S.P.E.W.

You've heard Harry's side of those stories -- but don't you want to hear my side?

Hermione's Point of View. Based on events in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows.

EDIT: This story, which was written almost a year ago, is undergoing a sort of Spring Cleaning. In other words, I am revising and resubmitting the chapters to take care of the things that now make me cringe. Rereads and new Reviews are welcome!

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 13096 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Published:
04/09/10 Updated: 02/08/11


Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 05/31/10 Title: Chapter 5: Redemption

A great ending to the story. You portrayed Hermione's feelings very accurately - well done!

~Soraya~

Author's Response: Thank you and thank you! Very kind of you. Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 04/15/10 Title: Through Different Eyes

This looks like a good start to the story. How long will it be?

Author's Response: Thanks! It will be 4 chapters. -Hogwartsbookworm

 

The Date by Amelia Bedelia
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Lily and James strike up a friendship after James outgrows his habit of asking Lily out on a daily basis. Once Lily thinks she is free of his habit, James asks her out for butterbeers and realizes that she might have just accidentally agreed to go on a date with James after all. (Three-part L/J one-shot)

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 10241 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/20/10 Updated: 04/29/10


Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 04/29/10 Title: Chapter 3: Part Three

Great ending. I must say, I am kinda surprised that no one other than me has reviewed this, when it is clearly a good fic. I like the way it kind of was like a parallel to Harry and Ginny - they kissed in the common room, etc.

It was a great story, regardless of the number of reviews. KUTGW!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks for the support nonetheless! I kind-of expected a low review count, to be honest, primarily because I haven't updated on here in YEARS, but I'm hoping that when I start updating other stories and uploading more works, perhaps that will change!

 
Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 04/24/10 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

Good start to what looks like a great story. kutgw!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you like it!

 
Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 04/24/10 Title: Chapter 2: Part Two

Great chapter. I liked the James/Lily interaction, the way that it was kind of clumsy but not quite awkward. No offence intended, but maybe you might have more reviews if you update a bit slower? As in, you published the first chapter four days ago. And you're already publishing the second? Maybe that's why there's just one review for your first one (mine). My advice is that you wait a bit more before submitting the next one - the one I assume is the final one?

Author's Response: Yeah, actually that was my plan... I figured it would take longer to get the second chapter approved by mugglenet so it got posted much earlier than I expected! I certainly know what you mean, though! Normally I'm a little more careful about that! Thanks for the advice, though!

 

Acorns by Equinox Chick
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary: Bill Weasley is overjoyed when Fleur tells him she's pregnant. As the eldest of a large family, he can't wait to be a dad. But as the baby grows, a small seed of fear grows too. Bill is scared and he's not sure who to turn to.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. That shouldn't come as a huge surprise.

Thank you to Hannah (coolh5000) for beta'ing this fic and to Natalie (hestiajones) for letting me play with Bill for a while.

This is Equinox Chick of Hufflepuff and this is my entry for Round Two (Minor Characters) of Madam Pomfrey's Character Clinic Triathlon.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2764 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/29/10 Updated: 04/29/10


Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 04/29/10 Title: Chapter 1: Acorns

A sweet fic. Great job. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

 

Summary: "Do you know what he tried to do to Mary Macdonald the other day?"

"That was nothing," said Snape. "It was a laugh, that's all --"

"It was Dark Magic, and if you think that's funny --" **

Two versions of the same incident. But what did Mulciber actually do to Mary Macdonald that could be viewed in two different ways, and why was Severus Snape so keen to defend Mulciber?

** The words at the beginning of this summary are taken directly from The Prince's Tale, Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. I doubt that surprises anyone.

Thank you very much to Natalie (hestiajones) for beta'ing this fic for me.



Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 1926 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/02/10 Updated: 05/02/10


Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 10/31/10 Title: Chapter 1: What Mulciber did to Mary Macdonald

Ah, I see how this could be viewed as a laugh and Dark Magic. Especially since it sounds like a Prince hex - one that Snape made up by himself as opposed as finding it in a textbook. It's very typical of Lily to pin the blame on James and I don't blame him for being angry, really. Great job, on the whole. One question: are those their actual names? As in, Lucan Mulciber, Angus Avery, etc?

~Soraya~

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I made the names up, they're just Mulciber and Avery in the books. Glad you liked the story. ~Carole~

 

The Rat's Lament by Virgil
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Peter Pettigrew's shame, embodied in the form of a sonnet.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 122 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/06/10 Updated: 05/15/10


Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 10/18/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Rat's Lament

I really liked this sonnet. Usually I'm not a fan because they're so short but I really think you captured what you wanted to say there. Well done!

~Soraya~

Author's Response: Thank you! Sonnets, while short, are also quite difficult >.< I'm glad you liked it! Peace, Virgil

 

The Only One by U-No-Poo
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Victoire Weasley walked down the aisle on her father’s arm. Her strawberry blonde locks danced freely down her back, and her simple, white wedding dress brought out every beautiful curve in her body. Her face broke into a smile as she saw her fiancé, Teddy Lupin, standing beside the minister. Today, they would become husband and wife.

This is U-No-Poo of Ravenclaw House writing for the Great Hall's Weddings Challenge; prompt - The Big Weddings.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3987 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/14/10 Updated: 05/22/10


Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 05/22/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Only One

Aww...made me feel a bit soppy inside - but I'm a hopeless romantic. Great story, keep up the good work!

~Soraya~

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Sounds like me... I just love a good fluffy romance!

 

Summary:

Growing up as Albus Potter was not an easy task, and being the son of the Chosen One wasn't a piece of cake, either. Expectations of greatness have the startling ability to crush someone, especially an eleven-year-old boy.

Join Albus Potter in his rocky journey to adulthood and what it's like to live, to learn, to love, to lose, and to be the middle child.

 

This story is going to be epically long, and yes, I will update. It may not come as fast as the updates to The Vindication of James Potter did, as I'm posting this as I write it, but I do promise that this story will not fall victim to apathy. Hopefully, you enjoy this story if you decide to read it. :)



Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 18937 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
05/21/10 Updated: 07/31/10


Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 07/28/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow. This is really good. Usually I get bored with the adventures of first-years, even next-gen kids, but still, this fic is probably the first that I actually like. Are you going to get Rose and Scorpius together? You have to, they're my favourite next generation couple along with Teddy and Victoire of course. I actually liked the Sorting Hat song - you did a great job of it. Scorpius is somewhat like his father, ditto Rose and her mum and Albus and his dad. And, of course, James and his cockiness is just like his grandpa and a bit of Fred and George too.

I really liked the way you had Albus met Snape, although I think Snape gave away too much to Albus for a first meeting, to be honest. I'm glad to see Snape hasn't changed much; I don't expect him to be angelic or anything after all he's did.

Also, Albus' nonchalant reaction when Snape says he has his grandma's eyes is very Harry-like too, even though in general Albus is more childish than Harry.

I really really reallly hope that you hook up Rose and Scorpius in this fic. That would make things really interesting as I'm guessing Al and Rose will hang around together a lot, being cousins and all, so Al would hate it if Rose liked Scorpius and stuff.

Excuse my rambling - I just haven't read a really decent fic for a while. I look forward to the next update!

~Soraya~

Author's Response:

Well, I'm glad you like it. :)

A lot of different things are going to happen in this story, and I'm trying really hard to properly separate Albus's Hogwarts experience with Harry's. It's something that I personally see a lot in fan fiction, turning Albus into the next Harry. To me, they're virtually nothing alike,and in the next few chapters, that will start to become very obvious.

Thank you for reading, and I hope you do enjoy future installments. This won't be a fast updating story, as it's sort of a long-term WIP when I have time, but I'm going to try to get at least one chapter out a month at the very least. Take care and happy reading!

Jess

 
Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 07/31/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh God! Did you have to do that to Albus? I feel so sorry for him now. You've made this so believable and so unlike Harry's first year yet so similar at the same time. Getting lost and getting in trouble - but I have to admit, it was a huge surprise for me to find out that Albus is afraid of heights! I really didn't expect that. Rose is so Hermione-like except for when she's better than Albus.

I like how you included that Pinky is Winky's daughter. The elf names are so cute: Dobby, Pinky and Winky. Speaking of which, who's Pinky's father? I hope it's Dobby :P

Overall, a brilliant chapter. You have me hooked on this story. And the best thing about you, Jess, is that you're such a fast updater compared to some of the other authors, so I never have to wait long between chapters. I'm moving house at the moment too and my life is just packing right now. It's awful, seriously. So don't feel bad if you can't update as regularly as you'd want, I totally get it anyway.

You're a very talented author and I can't wait for the next chapter! (I can see why it's your baby!)

~Soraya~

Author's Response:

Do I like torturing Albus as a character? Not particularly, as he is my favourite. But, I do hold that one of the main driving forces of the story is that he has a rough go of things simply due to his weaker personality. He's actually a lot like Neville, which is why a teacher went against the Deputy Headmistress's wishes and let them off the hook easier. It's just the subtle differences between him and Harry - the motion sickness, the social ineptitude, the fear of heights - which separates him from being Harry Potter Round Two.

You know, I never really thought about who Pinky's dad is (Pinky is actually a boy, though. I don't think I mentioned that.). It could very well be a case of him being born after a particularly bad night of Winky's butterbeer-lubricated sulkies that she'd had over the years. Her getting knocked up (and now I'm trying to banish the idea of drunken elf sex from my head...eww) could be what drives Hermione to get her the help she needed to be happy in clothing.

I'm glad you like the story so much. As you can tell, it's going to be really long, but it's sort of Albus's life story, and I'm not going to kill him off. This will actually lead all the way into Al's adult life, since that is where all of his time at school is leading. I probably could have broken this up into 'books' for each year, but for all I know, I might even gloss over an entire year. We'll see. I will, however, keep this story going as a side project to pick up when I feel Albus in the back of my brain, asking for me to get cracking.

Thank you so much for your praise and for your support. Authors appreciate it so much. Take care and happy reading,

Jess

 

Moon by Northumbrian
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 24]

Summary:
**WINNER in the BEST ORIGINAL CHARACTER (Mark Moon) – Quicksilver Quills Awards 2010.**
Meet Mark Moon, a bailiff in the Department of Magical Law Enforcement (Scottish Office). Mark has girl problems, or a problem girl, he isn't certain which. The girl is named Lavender.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 11678 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/22/10 Updated: 08/17/10


Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 03/06/11 Title: Chapter 6: Zenith

Hi, Neil!

I finally got a chance to read this, despite my protestations against anything chaptered because I simply don't have the time :D

I really enjoyed this. Mark Moon definitely deserved the QSQ he got for Best OC. I loved Mark as an OC and it's rare for me to like any OCs because they're normally so Mary-Sueish (or Gary-Sueish, in Mark's case) but in this story, I think it was the complete opposite. There's something very endearing about an ordinary guy who can actually stand Lavender Brown. :P

In this chapter you did the contended/contented thing again a couple of times and also, it should be ‘That’s the smell of my girlfriend burning eggs instead of frying them,' he told her. (You put the speech marks in the wrong places.) There are other errors too, but they're in other chapters and I'm too lazy to point them all out in a review :D

What I liked the most about this was the characterisation of Lavender. She comes across as such an airhead in HBP but truly, she was just an ordinary schoolgirl who was perhaps a bit too girly, but nevertheless had a good heart.

And I think she, like many other people, both HP characters and people in RL, tend to mellow out and become more humble when life-threatening things happen to them or when they make proper friends, so I'm really impressed with the way Lavender's changed. She's still got the girliness but she's also got the toughness and maturity that she needs to make up for her flaws. I loved Parvati's characterisation too.

What I found the most interesting was Lavender's transformation. When Lavender asked if Mark was sure they should do this, I was wondering if it was the...erm...other bedroom activity, but no, it was full moon. It intrigued me, the Potion, and I think that it's one of your many ingenious ideas which, in my opinion, rivals Fred and George Weasley's in terms of creativeness, so well done for that.

Janey Scott was another interesting idea, although she wasn't too likeable as a character -- and I know that that was your intention. Overall, I'm very glad to have read this, Neil, because it clears up a lot of queries I've had about Lavender, who, in my head, did not become a full werewolf when Greyback attacked her in the Final Battle -- "my" Lavender just has a similar condition to Bill. Besides, I kind of like the idea of a girly girl having a liking of rare steaks :P

Still, this fic displayed how relationships are always imperfect but that doesn't mean they're bad. In fact (for Lavender) they're actually pretty good, minus burnt eggs. :D Ta for writing, Neil.

~Soraya~

Author's Response:
Soraya

Thanks for the review. Moon may well have won the QSQ, but this is one of my least read (and least reviewed) stories. Mark is, I hope, fairly ordinary, a little quiet and very tenacious. I reckon that Mark is better organised, tidier, and a better cook that Lavender, too.

You’re going to make me reread the entire thing to spot my mistakes? :-D Fair enough, it’s always easier for me to find errors six moths later (embarrassingly so).

Lavender is often there in the background, helping. She joined the DA before Prof. Trelawney was targeted by Umbridge. In another of my stories I had Ginny describe Lavender as “a steel fist in a frilly pink lace glove”. That’s how I see her.

I had a lot of fun writing both the “scar” scene in chapter 5 and the bedroom scene in chapter 6. I tried to keep the bedroom discussions sound like they were talking “bedroom activities” (though I suspect that Lavender wouldn’t restrict herself to bedrooms anyway) for as long as possible.

I really like Janey. She’s simply lonely and alone. Her accent was a risk, and I toned it down considerably after the first draft.

Neil

 

Breaking Rules by hestiajones
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary:

Rules.

How easy it was to break them.

All it took was a smile, a few good conversations, and some daredevilry on your part to take risks and do the impossible.





A birthday present for my e-bestie Jess (ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor), who always manages to make me laugh without even trying. Happy Birthday, love!



DISCLAIMER: Not J.K.Rowling. All characters belong to her.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 1196 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/01/10 Updated: 06/02/10


Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 06/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: For Her.

A great story! Really interesting, and I like how you didn't mention a single name until the end. I like the way Scorpius just went up to Rose to say hi, and they eventually became friends, then a couple. I liked the kiss too. Well done.

~Soraya~

Author's Response: Hello Soraya!!



It's great you liked my 'no-names' approach. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!



~Natalie.

 

The Secrets of the Chamber by Hermione Jane
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: Missing Moment from Deathly Hallows. This is my interpretation of what happened in the Chamber of Secrets while Harry was looking for the diadem. Enjoy!

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 4291 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/04/10 Updated: 06/06/10


Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 06/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was great! I've read a few fics trying to fill in this moment and this is one of the best.

~Soraya~

Author's Response: Oh, wow! thank you so much.

 

Veils by Equinox Chick
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 28]

Summary: It is the night before Petunia Evans' wedding. As she stares at herself in the mirror, she is satisfied with her appearance. The dress is perfect, cleverly cut to give her curves, and she looks like a dream. Yes, the dress is perfection ... but what of the veil?

She has promised Vernon and his formidable mother that she will wear the Dursley veil. It is an antique. A family heirloom.

It is hideous.

What she needs is a miracle to rid her of the ugly thing ... or perhaps a touch of magic.

This is Equinox Chick of Hufflepuff and this is my entry in the Weddings Challenge - prompt Big Weddings - in the Great Hall Challenge over at the MNFF beta boards.

Thank you to Samarie (Hopeful_Song) and Kara (Karaley Dargen) for beta'ing this.

Disclaimer: I'm not JK Rowling. I doubt anyone is surprised by that.

Holy Moroley and all things Padfoot! This won the QSQ for Best Marauder Era story. Thank you!

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5393 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/05/10 Updated: 06/05/10


Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 06/26/10 Title: Chapter 1: Veils

This one actually made me weep a bit - but I'm a bit of a softie to be honest when it comes to good fics. The last time Petunia saw her sister should've been a good time, and it was, until Vernon's obesity spoilt it. I loved the note from Sirius at the end - really sweet. The dog disguise and how Lily and James covered for Sirius was really funny. I think this fic showed a bit of the compassionate side of Petunia - a side not really shown in the books.

Great job, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. I have to confess that I went rather blurry eyed myself when I wrote the last section about her packing away the veil and knowing she has to leave Privet Drive.It was a shame that Vernon being fat (and vain for not getting the suit altered) ruined what should have been a reconciliation. Thanks again ~Carole~

 

By the Light of the Fire by Miss B
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: It was the last night of term; the last night of their seventh year at Hogwarts.
It was the last night they had together.

A short story about James Potter and Lily Evans.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1164 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/18/10 Updated: 06/22/10


Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 01/24/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Aw! That was really sweet. I loved the descriptions at the beginning as well as how you managed to tell a story in such a short space, which I think (as a generally verbose writer--and reviewer!) is a real talent. I absolutely adore the idea of leaving the school in the boats, the same way that they had arrived, but of course I think they'd need more than they did to start off with, having grown so much over the years.

Your story, particularly the ending, ties in with the title nicely, which I really appreciate and enjoy. I liked this story very much, but I do think that it would have been better if you had a beta, because my inner beta reader eye already spotted a few errors with regards to spelling and punctuation and grammar. That was the only thing which distracted me from what would otherwise have been a pretty flawless story. Still, well done, and keep it up!

~Soraya~

Author's Response: Wow thank you so much for the compliments! I'm so glad you liked my story. I did some research, and J. K. Rowling mentioned that the seventh years left Hogwarts in the boats, so that's where I got that. I know that I really should have beta readers, but I don't like people seeing my work before they're published, and I don't like people telling me how I should write, so some grammatical errors do get past me sometimes. Thanks again for the review!

 

Summary: Four years after the Battle, a strange desire draws Hermione Granger. What could possibly make her visit Malfoy Manor?

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 4777 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/26/10 Updated: 06/28/10


Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 03/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Secret Diary of Hermione Granger

The title made me think that this was actually going to be Hermione's diary. LOL, how wrong I was! Still, it was an interesting one-shot. I know how much you hate the Malfoys so I can tell you had fun writing about him!

I know that this was a great way of getting back at Dramione writers for writing Draco as a loving, handsome guy who you clearly don't think he is. Kudos to you for that, because now even my image of Malfoy has gone somewhat hazy.

I loved the way Hermione put up the Galleon with Dobby's picture on it. What I like the best about your writing is that fact that you're so creative when it comes to creating non-canon magical stuff like the Portbooks and Portcards and all of that. It makes things so much more interesting and they're really original ideas.

Nitpicks again: I don't think it’s necessary to capitalise “Good morning, sir and madam”. At least, not the “Good Morning” bit. Also, when you said “Draco didknow” you need a space between “did” and “know”. Maybe, when Hermione goes back in time, you could have the memories in italics?

Finally, I really like how you've given Zabini a backstory after the war. I've always thought his mum was a character -- marrying a toyboy! Anyway, well done.

Author's Response:
Soraya

I don’t hate the Malfoys, I hate poor characterisation (and the bizarre idea of Draco Malfoy as a sex-symbol). The Malfoys are brilliant characters. Every story needs conflict, and without the conflict between Harry and Draco the books would not have worked. The Malfoy’s are capable of love. Cissie loves Draco (she may even love Lucius too). Draco definitely loves Draco (at least he did until HBP).

Draco is a pale boy with grey eyes and pointed features, and that’s all we know. JKR gives us very little in the way of descriptions for any of the characters. The Quidditch girls all think that Cedric is good looking, no one else gets rated (apart from Fleur). I assume that Draco is at best, average looking, he was (possibly) the second choice (after Blaise) of “pug faced” Pansy, who is no great catch.

The Galleon was Luna’s idea (in my story “Grave Days”, but she thought of it, not me) and the Portbook/Portcuffs first appeared in “Aurors and Schoolgirls,” I re-use my own stuff.

Zabini is the person I’m least happy with in this story. This is another one-shot for me to look at again and try to fix your criticisms.
Neil

 

The Best Team in East Anglia by minnabird
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: Past Featured StoryEvery year, the best amateur Quidditch team in Suffolk faces off against the best team in Norfolk in the East Anglia Summer Tournament. Isobel Jones, one of exactly seven young witches and wizards in the tiny town of Eleigh St. Mary in Suffolk, decides that not only is she going to form a team for the tournament, her team is going to win it.

The problem? Well, let's see. One of her seven possible players is an utter klutz at Quidditch. Two others are often too busy with their school Quidditch teams to practice hard during the school year. And then there's just the little matter of getting to the finals, facing up against a team that's won two years running and isn't afraid to play dirty, and getting her team through the game unscathed...

"We'll win," she says. "We're going to prove that weā€™re the best team in East Anglia.ā€¯

People scoff. But her team believes - and that's all that really matters.



Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 10193 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Published:
06/27/10 Updated: 11/27/11


Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 10/13/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Minna -- I just finished reading the prologue and the two chapters. (I'm just reviewing this chapter because it hasn't got any reviews.)

And it's such an injustice that this has so few reviews! It deserves more, it really does. Even for me, a complete and utter sport-tard, I can see how hard you've worked on this and how much research has gone into it too. I mean, I'm trying to imagine how difficult it would be to write a story set in a country I've never been in. I've attempted it several times and it's never worked, so kudos to you for being able to do so, and so well, too :)

I really like all of your OCs and I think your strengths are definitely dialogue and organisation. Not once was I confused at where the story was going, and all the characters had their own personalities and are fully fleshed out. I think I like Eleanor the best -- she reminds me of me and how sportially illiterate I am! (And I know sportially isn't a word lol.)

I'm intrigued. I shall start betaing now :)

~Soraya~

Author's Response: Aw thank you Soraya. <33 (And I'm a sport-tard too, I just like Quidditch). Personally, I love doing the research about other places, especially in the UK! I honestly tracked down a book called "The English Landscape" in order to have it in my life, and it has useful chapters about different bits of England - best, of course, when writing things set in the countryside. I worked/am working hard on characterization with this story, as in 'actually taking the time to flesh out OCs', so I am glad you like them. I identify with Eleanor best too, haha - if anyone in this story is self-insert, it's her. Anyway - thank you! Wasn't expecting you to read and review along with betaing.

 

Summary: Little Teddy gets a bedtime story from his parents. It is a story that we know parts of from the Harry Potter series. It is the story of Remus and Dora, and how they fell in love.

I don't own Beauty and the Beast or Harry Potter.

Chapter 2 is here!

Categories: Remus/Tonks Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5323 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
07/02/10 Updated: 07/27/10


Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 07/28/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Aw. That' so cute! This fic was a great idea; it's different to the other Remus/Tonks fics which usually focus on what happened earlier on in their relationship before Teddy was born. This one is great as well because it's a mixture of both. Great job :D

~Soraya~

Author's Response: Thanks, I thought the R/T shippers could use a fresh story style. I really like the story telling aspect as well. It allows me to show how they both felt and thought at a given moment, and it lets the reader see their relationship with eachother and their son when they aren't stressed out, which we never really saw in the books. =) Thanks for reviewing again!

 
Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx Signed
Date: 07/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, how cute! I really like this story - it provides an insight as to what Remus' and Tonks' lives were like during that brief time when they had Teddy. Well done.

~Soraya~

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. =) And thank you for reading my work!

 
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