Wow, that is so sad!! I really love your story, it's so hooking!! Please keep writing!! JFig, 10/10
I like it!! Remus attacking Voldemort in werewolf form...that made me giggle. Thank goodness it finally came up! Can't wait till chapter 17 is up, my guess would be about two-three months...BAH! Great story!! 10~JFig
Author's Response: My dearest JFig! I was hoping you'd see this soon!... Oh dear God, I hope it's not that long for the next chapter!
Oh, timing sucks, doesn't it? I really like this FanFic, It's really the only Sanpe/Hermione I'm reading, but it's really intriguing!! I'm wating for more now...waiting...waiting...^_^
Author's Response: im glad ur liking it...and i wish u didnt have to wait so long for more....the next chapter has been in queque now for what seems like forever....^__^
I'm a bit of a new reviewer, but I really like this story! It's so gripping, please, keep it going! *JFig*
Well I, for one, thought that chapter was brilliant. I love how he wanted to make Hermione jealous, it's such a guy thing to do, and I love even more how he got caught! I'm gonna go on a limb and say this kind of entwines with HBP. I like it a lot, can't wait for 5 reviews!!!~10~JFig*
Wow, that was really sad, how he kept thinking of everyone, his best friends, his godson, blaming himself for all that's happened...I like the way it ended, too. It sounds...well, frankly, it sounds a bit crazy. That was really great!! 10~ *JFig*
Ooh I like it!! I can't wait to see what she writes about James! Keep it going, please don't make it 15 reviews! 10~
Loved the ending, very nice touch, the whole story was great!
Ahhhahaha I love this story. She's gotta be pissed, thinking he's still all evil but everyone's excepting him....and he's gotta be pissed about how she thinks that....too much emotion!! 10-- **JFig
That made me happy that it was updated.
You know, every time I click on this story to check for updates, I completely ignore the title. I mean, it's obviously there, but it doesn't register.
In other words, yeah, I completely forgot about the whole sleepwalking thing.
This chapter WAS pretty complicated, which is really good in my opinion. It's not just about their romance, it's about Harry Potter. I'm glad you've got a plot working, too. =)
Keep up the amazingness! Or, as Hermione would say, "bring it on."
Author's Response: Hahaha, so glad you liked it! And yeah, I thought it was about time I factored the sleepwalking back in again; seeing as it was the title xD to be quite honest though...i'm still not exactly sure what is going to end up happening with it. the skeleton of my plot -- as of now -- has nothing really to do with sleepwalking (shhh, don't tell anyone xD), soo...haha, i guess we'll just see what happens. thanks so much for reading
“Yes. But don’t worry, I think it’s cute.”
“Please refrain from ever using that adjective in my presence again.”
That gave me a chuckle. I liked this chapter a lot. So much, so fast! And now.. done. =(
I'm excited for what's to come!
Author's Response: well i tried to make it as long as i could xD thanks for reading!
Basically, wow. I don't know what else I could possibly say about this chapter. And the previous one, as I didn't leave a review on that page. They were full of internal struggles and screwed up emotions, and when he told her it wasn't her fault, and when she told them what happened, and the Howlers, and RON! OH my goodness, that boy is so... Rawr! *coughs* Anyway..
A particularly attention-grabbing line was, "that did not mean he wasn't continuously overcome by the desire to throw her up against the nearest wall and take her shuddering and moaning into the next world." Seriously, I don't know how you do it.
And I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing each chapter immediately.. I haven't had internet access for the past two months and am just now catching up with the important things (i.e. this story). But you're still a magnificent writer, and I'm greatly anticipating the next chapter.
Much adoration for your amazingness-
Author's Response: Ah! I was wondering where you had gone! :) \r\nSO happy to hear that you enjoyed the last two chapters -- sorry you were out of internets! that\'s rough! But, as always, thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!! p.s. that line you pointed, was without a doubt, one of my favorites from the last chapter xD
So first of all, I'm going to say that this story is literally KILLING me. I'm pretty sure bits of my life are dying when each chapter ends.
Now onto the good stuff. Especially that one part..
Hermione was a bit taken aback by the frankness of Snape’s words–and even more taken aback when he didn’t even wait for her reply before wrapping his hand around her neck and pulling her face to his, capturing her lips, her breath, and her heart all in one. So romantic, and just plain adorable. Pretty much I swooned. Also, the part out of the shower.. it was something along the lines of YES HE'S GOING TO KISS HER THEY'RE GOING TO---ohhh, cruel! Why, Lady Knightly? Why?
ALSO. The owl is an animagus, I'm almost positive. I'd be willing to bet my enemy's life on it. And on that note, I immediately thought Ron, then Dumbles. 'Cause of the piercing blue eyes and stuff.
Another thing is the golden hair thinger. I have a feeling that it's one of those things that only works with big injuries. So I'm thinking it's going to end up saving Hermione from what would otherwise be death. Abd it'll fool EVERYONE. Maybe.
Actually, now that I think about it, the owl seems to be Ron-ish. Because Dumbledore snuggling up to Hermione until she giggled would be.. strange, to say the least. Anyways.
The Portkey! Sirius! Ohh, I hope he's alright! I hope Bella doesn't get him, because maybe you do the thing where dead characters are still going to die... ohhh, I fear for him. And speaking of that part, I love that Snape yelled "Run, Hermione!" Because he used her name. Which should probably take a backseat to the action, but what can I say?
All in all, this chapter was PHEONOMENAL and long and full of goodness and excellence, and I'm excited to find out what happens next. Sorry about the extended predictions and stuff, but this chapter really excited me!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: oohoho i just want to reply to everything but i am petrified if i do i will accidentally give something away! but you are totally observant to the most awesome degree :D :D lol, you\'re response to the shower scene cracked me up, and i\'m so happy that you enjoyed the chapter! hopefully you will like the next one even more (ALSO, i am so happy that you liked the \'run, hermione\' because i totally put that in for my own benefit haha, because i think it is too cute as well). as always, thanks a bunch!
Yeah man! And I'm stickin' with this story 'til the end!
Author's Response: happy to hear it buddy :D
Oooh, this was particularly good!
I really really liked it a lot. =]
I had a feeling Sirius was gonna go though.. That's sad.
I personally like the fast updates!
Author's Response: I\'m so glad you enjoyed it! And yeah, poor Sirius :( \r\nSORRY ABOUT NO UPDATES!
I was going to say this with my other review, but I seem to have forgotten. Well, here it is now. Any OOCness that there might have been (with Hermione, at least) was cancelled out perfectly by the way that she was shaking and questioning herself on her sudden boldness. I think that the fact that she herself acknowledges her own character change truly enforces the idea that it's still just Hermione. Well done with that.
Author's Response: Thank you! I had hoped that would help keep her in character :D It\'s good to hear that it did.
Thaaaat chapter was amazing! I have to admit, a huge part of me wanted Hermione to say YES when Snape asked her if she "wanted to be fucked against a filthy, back-alley wall next to the dustbins." But she didn't, and that makes sense. Maybe one day..
Just one thing that I wanted to mention. In potions class, when they were looking at each other, Snape's look "said quite plainly that what she had just done would not be without consequence, and that she had better be on the look-out, because Severus Snape was not a man to be out-matched." I feel like maybe that was too much for one facial expression to say.
But this chapter on the whole was amazing! I wish he'd take the potion though..
Still your most devoted reader,
Author's Response: LOL xD yeah, that does seem like a lot to put into one expression -- but i feel like all those things could really be summed up into a look of "challenge" -- me being me, i just decided to flower it up with a lot of words xD xD And yay! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter :D sorry they didn't do it, lol -- but maybe...bah, who knows -- I don't even know yet xD and LOL at your signature :D :D :D
Also, Moonlight Path is my B&BW fragrance of choice. It's delightful. =]
Author's Response: hmmm, i will have to check it out :)