Summary: Adhara Jocelyn Black has always been torn between her loyalty to James Potter, her cousin Sirius's best mate, and Lily Evans, the sister she has never known. But in her seventh year everything changes. Join Jocelyn, Sirius, Lily, and the rest of the Marauders as they battle for their lives... and loves...
That's so sad I can't imagine knowing someone is going to die and not being able to do anything about it. It's quite depressing, really. But, once again, great chapter. And gee, thanks for leaving it at such a cliffhanger!! Can't wait for the updates! **JFig
Awww well I really liked it. I didn't realize the story was this much different than the BTV story! I do like this one better!!!! YAY! I seriously love this story. You should really post that one that you emailed me. It's fantastic. Much love and adoration--JFig
Okay, I know I already submitted a review, but who cares? I'm changing my rating to a 10! That's worth the extra review, right? Keep writing, I love it! J
Ohmigoodnesswow!! So sad, but awesome!! It's amazing, the foreshadowing, for OotP (won't say any more...) It's fantastic, and that was such a quick update!! Keep it up, 9/10! **JFig
YES! I just love all of your chapters!! No favorites here! Any new BTV? No rushing coming from this Fig...wow...that might have been a pun...it was SUPPOSED to be...that didn't go so well. Just...pretend I just said "FANTABULOUS! WRITE MORE!" Keep it up, you rock my socks RIGHT OFF! ~Yours in devotion~JFig
NO WAY!!! Trinity!!!! How could you?! Now I have to WAIT! Agh, well, chapter's like that make it worth it. I was, however, hoping for a little more; clues as to what's down there, where it leads....come on....you know you wanna tell us! Much love and admiration--JFig
!!! YES !!! I love your story!!! Update (BTV) soon!! 10~JFig
I LOVE YOU!!! Erm....your story, that is...YAY! Well, I've already read it, but I promised I'd comment here as well! This chapter had so much emotion in it! Anger from Sirius at Dumbles and Hector, anger from Lily at James, teenage hormones EVERYWHERE!! Ahh love it! Congrats on writing the ending, glad to hear there's lots more to come! 10/10~~JFig
Author's Response: Aww, I love you too.... Thanks for still reviewing here, I love your reviews! :D
Love the banner, dearie! Last chapter in queue? Ah! You're stories are amazing, never stop writing! ** JFig
Ooh, this chapter is so TENSE!!! I really liked the part with the hailstorm, though! Yours in devotion~JFig
"Sirius, you’re purple,” she added, catching sight of his face. “That can’t be healthy.” I think that's the quote I quoted at BTV. I love this chapter. It's like, this is what's supposed to happen! This should've happened ages ago! But there you have it. It did. 10~JFig
Oh I love it!! As I often say, only real men cry...Poor James, poor Jocelyn!! You are such a great author!! Keep 'em coming! 10! J
Oh my God oh my God oh my God!!!! This chapter was so eventful and, well, for lack of a better term, hearty! I really liked how her memories kept coming up and they meant something new to her. This is such a great story. I love it. You get a 10! As usual!! Wow, I just can't get over what a great chapter this is!!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! You rock!
*Sigh*....I love you....
I'M MENTIONED!!! I'm so glad you enjoy my reviews, I ADORE your story!! YOU ARE MY FAVORITEST FF AUTHOR IN THE WHOLE WIDE WORLD, along with GreenElfGirl!! (Sorry, she'd be so sad if I didn't mention her.) You are SO COOL!~~JFig
Author's Response: Of course you're mentioned! ... And the feelings are all mutual, I assure you!
How could you?!?! This is even more of a cliffhanger! Ahhhh!!! Congratulations on the quick update, the chapter was fantastic! But, please! Let us know what happens!! Man, you're good. Way to keep an audience! Keep it up, this story is BRILLIANT! 10/10 as always~JFig
Oh....my////gosh!!!! I seriously don't know where you come up with this, but it is such a brilliant story line....and turn of events....and everything is just so fantastic! I am in absolute awe over your talent....absolute awe. Just...wow. I take off my hat to you. 10/10 (duh, after all of that?) ---JFig
Oh my goodness. That was the most beautiful chapter you could've written. The ending was perfect. It wasn't happy, but hopeful. I swear, not checking to see if there are any new chapter updates for this story is like....part of my life is gone. Which, yeah, I know, it's pretty lame. But still. That's how much you've affected me. Keep me posted on new stories. 10/10, not for the last time -- **JFig
Author's Response: Aww, I don't think it's lame at all (but probably because I'm so flattered ;)). Thank you so much! I'm glad I wrote this story, because through it I kind of "met" you! So thank you!
Excuse me, Roachy? Stories are bound to have flaws, as well as everything else in this world. You found what you believed to be a mistake, and you reported it to the author, which I thought was a nice idea. Now we all know al little more about James; I didn't really remember if he was prefect or not. However, even if you did stop reading at that point, there was no reason to proclaim that for all to see; simply telling the author of her mistake seems alright to me. The thing is, it sounded a tad rude to me. Just the opinion of another reviewer-- **JFig
Wow. Just...wow. This is heartwrenching. I absolutely cannot believe how well done this whole story has been, from beginning to end. Like I said before, I am absolutely confident in your writing ability; these chapters are not mistakes. You have a gift, my friend. And I'm jealous. : ) 10/10 --- **JFig