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Canis Majoris by trinsy
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 645]

Summary: Adhara Jocelyn Black has always been torn between her loyalty to James Potter, her cousin Sirius's best mate, and Lily Evans, the sister she has never known. But in her seventh year everything changes. Join Jocelyn, Sirius, Lily, and the rest of the Marauders as they battle for their lives... and loves...

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 56522 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
04/27/05 Updated: 04/04/06

Reviewer: JFig Signed
Date: 02/04/06 Title: Chapter 31: The Legend

That's so sad I can't imagine knowing someone is going to die and not being able to do anything about it. It's quite depressing, really. But, once again, great chapter. And gee, thanks for leaving it at such a cliffhanger!! Can't wait for the updates! **JFig

Reviewer: JFig Signed
Date: 11/23/05 Title: Chapter 26: A Wholly Sweet Easter

Awww well I really liked it. I didn't realize the story was this much different than the BTV story! I do like this one better!!!! YAY! I seriously love this story. You should really post that one that you emailed me. It's fantastic. Much love and adoration--JFig

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Date: 07/29/05 Title: Chapter 13: Bellatrix's Revenge

Okay, I know I already submitted a review, but who cares? I'm changing my rating to a 10! That's worth the extra review, right? Keep writing, I love it! J

Reviewer: JFig Signed
Date: 07/28/05 Title: Chapter 13: Bellatrix's Revenge

Ohmigoodnesswow!! So sad, but awesome!! It's amazing, the foreshadowing, for OotP (won't say any more...) It's fantastic, and that was such a quick update!! Keep it up, 9/10! **JFig

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Date: 10/27/05 Title: Chapter 23: A Shattered Struggle

YES! I just love all of your chapters!! No favorites here! Any new BTV? No rushing coming from this might have been a was SUPPOSED to be...that didn't go so well. Just...pretend I just said "FANTABULOUS! WRITE MORE!" Keep it up, you rock my socks RIGHT OFF! ~Yours in devotion~JFig

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Date: 01/12/06 Title: Chapter 30: Of Trust and Promises

NO WAY!!! Trinity!!!! How could you?! Now I have to WAIT! Agh, well, chapter's like that make it worth it. I was, however, hoping for a little more; clues as to what's down there, where it leads....come know you wanna tell us! Much love and admiration--JFig

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Date: 10/18/05 Title: Chapter 20: About Time

!!! YES !!! I love your story!!! Update (BTV) soon!! 10~JFig

Reviewer: JFig Signed
Date: 09/18/05 Title: Chapter 17: The Greatest Weakness

I LOVE YOU!!! Erm....your story, that is...YAY! Well, I've already read it, but I promised I'd comment here as well! This chapter had so much emotion in it! Anger from Sirius at Dumbles and Hector, anger from Lily at James, teenage hormones EVERYWHERE!! Ahh love it! Congrats on writing the ending, glad to hear there's lots more to come! 10/10~~JFig

Author's Response: Aww, I love you too.... Thanks for still reviewing here, I love your reviews! :D

Reviewer: JFig Signed
Date: 03/31/06 Title: Chapter 1: Jocelyn's Predicament

Love the banner, dearie! Last chapter in queue? Ah! You're stories are amazing, never stop writing! ** JFig

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Date: 10/12/05 Title: Chapter 19: Charmed and Charmed Again

Ooh, this chapter is so TENSE!!! I really liked the part with the hailstorm, though! Yours in devotion~JFig

Reviewer: JFig Signed
Date: 11/10/05 Title: Chapter 25: Enough

"Sirius, you’re purple,” she added, catching sight of his face. “That can’t be healthy.” I think that's the quote I quoted at BTV. I love this chapter. It's like, this is what's supposed to happen! This should've happened ages ago! But there you have it. It did. 10~JFig

Reviewer: JFig Signed
Date: 08/02/05 Title: Chapter 14: Patrolling with Prongs

Oh I love it!! As I often say, only real men cry...Poor James, poor Jocelyn!! You are such a great author!! Keep 'em coming! 10! J

Reviewer: JFig Signed
Date: 12/01/05 Title: Chapter 28: Going After

Oh my God oh my God oh my God!!!! This chapter was so eventful and, well, for lack of a better term, hearty! I really liked how her memories kept coming up and they meant something new to her. This is such a great story. I love it. You get a 10! As usual!! Wow, I just can't get over what a great chapter this is!! JFig

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! You rock!

Reviewer: JFig Signed
Date: 10/11/05 Title: Chapter 18: Grave Danger

*Sigh*....I love you....

Reviewer: JFig Signed
Date: 10/21/05 Title: Chapter 21: Christmas is {Not} a Time of Romance

I'M MENTIONED!!! I'm so glad you enjoy my reviews, I ADORE your story!! YOU ARE MY FAVORITEST FF AUTHOR IN THE WHOLE WIDE WORLD, along with GreenElfGirl!! (Sorry, she'd be so sad if I didn't mention her.) You are SO COOL!~~JFig

Author's Response: Of course you're mentioned! ... And the feelings are all mutual, I assure you!

Reviewer: JFig Signed
Date: 12/06/05 Title: Chapter 29: Inscriptions

How could you?!?! This is even more of a cliffhanger! Ahhhh!!! Congratulations on the quick update, the chapter was fantastic! But, please! Let us know what happens!! Man, you're good. Way to keep an audience! Keep it up, this story is BRILLIANT! 10/10 as always~JFig

Reviewer: JFig Signed
Date: 02/17/06 Title: Chapter 32: The Summary!!!! I seriously don't know where you come up with this, but it is such a brilliant story line....and turn of events....and everything is just so fantastic! I am in absolute awe over your talent....absolute awe. I take off my hat to you. 10/10 (duh, after all of that?) ---JFig

Reviewer: JFig Signed
Date: 03/31/06 Title: Chapter 34: Beautiful

Oh my goodness. That was the most beautiful chapter you could've written. The ending was perfect. It wasn't happy, but hopeful. I swear, not checking to see if there are any new chapter updates for this story is like....part of my life is gone. Which, yeah, I know, it's pretty lame. But still. That's how much you've affected me. Keep me posted on new stories. 10/10, not for the last time -- **JFig

Author's Response: Aww, I don't think it's lame at all (but probably because I'm so flattered ;)). Thank you so much! I'm glad I wrote this story, because through it I kind of "met" you! So thank you!

Reviewer: JFig Signed
Date: 03/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: Jocelyn's Predicament

Excuse me, Roachy? Stories are bound to have flaws, as well as everything else in this world. You found what you believed to be a mistake, and you reported it to the author, which I thought was a nice idea. Now we all know al little more about James; I didn't really remember if he was prefect or not. However, even if you did stop reading at that point, there was no reason to proclaim that for all to see; simply telling the author of her mistake seems alright to me. The thing is, it sounded a tad rude to me. Just the opinion of another reviewer-- **JFig

Reviewer: JFig Signed
Date: 03/13/06 Title: Chapter 33: You and Me

Wow. This is heartwrenching. I absolutely cannot believe how well done this whole story has been, from beginning to end. Like I said before, I am absolutely confident in your writing ability; these chapters are not mistakes. You have a gift, my friend. And I'm jealous. : ) 10/10 --- **JFig

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