Penname: Honking Daffodil [Contact]
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A One-Sided Affair by midnightblack07
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: “Or had it begun when he insistently seemed to find one way or another to shun her aside, as if she were no longer of any significance to him? As if there was never a point in time when she was? As if it had always been a one-sided affair?”

Categories: Draco/Other Character Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2227 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
09/02/09 Updated: 09/11/09

Reviewer: Honking Daffodil Signed
Date: 11/17/09 Title: Chapter 1: A One-Sided Affair

This is a very interesting story. I have read very little fanfiction that develops Pansy's character past what it is in the books. I think you did a good job of portraying a side of Pansy that is softer, but still true to canon. Sometimes writing in third person sounds distant and detached, but I think you made it work well here. Overall, a nice one-shot.

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review, it really does mean alot!! :) I'm glad you think I stayed true to canon, I was a bit afraid that by showing this softer side, I may have lost the character we know from the books, but I reconciled that in the end, no "one note" character can pass for a realistic character *-)

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