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Body of Work


There’s something for everyone, unless you like reading Snape romances, which I don’t write. Or Voldemort’s children. Or Snape’s children. You will, however, find two Snape/Lily and one Voldemort/Minerva poems. Other than these, I’ve written:

Completed Fics:

Alternate Universe: Going against Salazar’s Grain, Winner of 2011 QSQ for Best AU.

Dark/Angst: To Follow the Dark Lord, For I Am a Mother, Killing Meda’s Daughter, Him Alice and Me, Carousel, The Receding, Becoming Rita, On No One’s Side and Lacuna Mentis, Winner of 2011 QSQ for Best D/A.

Draco/Astoria: Because You Came, Winner of 2011 QSQ Best Canon Romance.

Femmeslash: Cut, Bleed, Susan, Hands That Fit, Desire And a Half.

Humour: I Like a Healthy Breeze Round My Privates, Bit of a Nasty Shock. Mmm. These are exactly about what you’re thinking.

Harry/Hermione: Over a Mug of Tea, Harmony. I have delusional friends whom I love.

Historical: Waiting, An Act of Love

James/Lily: Ain’t Love the Sweetest Thing, Always Come Back to You

Maleslash: In the Back of the Shack, At the End of It, Anchored, Something Strange

Marauder Era: A Tale of Six Perspectives, Wish You Were Here, Common Cold Won’t Keep Me Down, Always … But Not Who You Think

Next-Gen:
Non-pairing: Sunday Lunch with the Malfoys
Scorpius/Rose: Breaking Rules, Of Weasleys And Malfoys
Scorpius/Hugo: In the Back of the Shack, At the End of It, Anchored
Dominique/OC: Cut, Bleed
Lucy/Lorcan: Whirlwind

Post-Hogwarts: Seamus’ Break with a Banshee, Mirrors, A Splendid Fate, and The Substitute, Winner of 2011 Best Non-Canon Romance

Ted/Andromeda: Eternal Flight, Five Christmases, Soul Sister

Crack Pairings:
Ron/Mary Cattermole: The Substitute
James/Severus: Always … But Not Who You Think

Character Studies:
Rita Skeeter: Becoming Rita
Merope Gaunt: The Receding
Florean Fortescue: Florean Fortescue - An Unsung Hero
Albus Dumbledore: Going against Salazar’s Grain
Bill Weasley: Never too Late
Andrew Carlton, OC: Being Muggle with Rooney
Tom Riddle: Commencement
Mrs Zabini: Rendezvous with Mrs Zabini, Desire And a Half
Pansy Parkinson: Carousel
Molly Weasley: Knowing Who She Was, The Solitary Prewett


Poetry:

Snape/Lily: The Silver Doe, In Winter in My Head
Tom/Minerva: Spiral
Draco/Harry: Dreams Made of Green
Remus/Tonks: it might not be, but still
Hogwarts: The Battle of Hogwarts, May 2nd and The Clarion Call, Winner of 2010 QSQ Best Poetry
Lily Potter: The Gathering Storm and the Crib
Harry/Ginny: A Night of Love
Harry Potter: Memories Are Not Enough
Draco Malfoy: I Am Shame
Regulus Black: My Black Brother
Bellatrix and Narcissa: The Black Sisters
Bloody Baron/Grey Lady: Murder for Love
Hestia Jones (oh): Drive Your Car On
Draco/Hermione: The Other Woman


WIP/Abandoned:

A Marriage Made at Hogwarts: I’m afraid I won’t be continuing this. :/ I had completed it ages ago, but I lost the draft twice and I don’t have the heart or the motivation to finish it. Or delete it.
Before I Forget: A Maleslash featuring Regulus/Rabastan. I will definitely complete it next year.
One Day in the Life of: A Next-Gen fic featuring all the - well - Next-Gen kids. This too will be finished in the coming year.


Upcoming Fics:

As of now, I’m severely blocked. D: However, I am working on the following projects and both will be posted before 31st January of next year:

Songs, Lovers and Everything in Between: A string of post-Hogwarts romances featuring rarepairs.

Bill Weasley and the Temple of Lsulaph: An Alternate Universe as well as Parallel Universe crack!fic-cum-adventure featuring the most dashing Weasley to grace your consciousness along with twelve daredevil and powerful sisters. Together, they must defeat the evil sorcerer/non-Egyptian pharaoh Lsulaph, who has taken over the Incaff sisters’ kingdom.


UPDATE: If you're looking for Fireworks Inside, here's a link: http://clickysmut.livejournal.com/2930.html

That’s pretty much it. Hope you enjoy the stay!
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Flying with Dragons by epiphany212
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Oliver Wood to Harry Potter: "I wouldn’t be surprised if you turn out better than Charlie Weasley, and he could have played for England if he hadn't gone off chasing dragons."

So how exactly did Charlie decide between Quidditch and dragon-keeping, after all?

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2131 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/20/12 Updated: 07/30/12


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 08/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hello! :D Thank you for writing the full version, and thank you for letting me know! This is a fresh take on Charlie, and I love how you used the prompt to write about this life-changing moment. That was certainly unexpected. :)

Author's Response: Hello back! It is so nice of you to read and review this light little piece... to use your words, certainly unexpected! Thank you very much for taking the time to drop by and for the kind review. :)

 

Heart's Desire by Squibstress
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 8]

Summary: Past Featured StoryIt takes sixty years, but Minerva finally comes to understand the truth of George Bernard Shaw's pronouncement on tragedy: "Life contains but two tragedies. One is not to get your heart's desire; the other is to get it."

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Slash, Strong Profanity

Word count: 7487 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/21/12 Updated: 08/02/12


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 08/07/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a very strong fanfic armed with thoughtful characterisation and wonderful writing. I have entertained thoughts of Minerva/Amelia in the past, but I couldn't have written it into canon, with Minerva's other love(s). Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks. I've always like the idea of Minerva/Amelia, and it was a fun challenge to shoehorn it into Pottermore canon. I'm glad it worked for you. Cheers!

 

Summary: FeatureScabior and Greyback had to escape the Aurors somehow - they just hadn't expected to end up in Florida.

This is minnabird of Hufflepuff writing for Round Two of the 2012 Character Triathlon.

It earned an honorable mention in that round and won joint first for Best Humour Story in the 2013 Quicksilver Quill Awards.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 1589 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/25/12 Updated: 08/02/12


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 08/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: Oneshot

Hahaha! I enjoyed this and nearly died when the boatman imitated their accent :D The ending line is rather fabulous. I have to admit I kind of want to read a novella about their experiences lol.

There were a few lines that threw me off, for e.g.:

Like a week after the guide in the swamps. Lightning striking practically overhead and I was stuck outside, jumping at every flash and thinking the next one was going to bring a burning tree down on top of me or hit me directly.

D: Is there something missing in the first line, or should the next line be a continuation of it?


Nice work, Minna! Silly, but definitely entertaining.

Author's Response: Ha, glad you enjoyed the accent-imitating (I kind of winced at it in retrospect, but that may just be how horrible his imitation is). Actually glad in general it's not as stupid as I feared. :D I'm not sure entirely what confused you about those lines, but I've gone back and made them more...grammatically correct. Poke me on AIM if that's not the issue? Anyway - thanks for the reviewww <3

 

Just Before Healing by WeasleyMom
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: FeatureWith Hannah, things always go to yellow.



Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 988 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/11/12 Updated: 08/11/12


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 02/23/13 Title: Chapter 1: one shot

Lori, I have no idea yet if this fic will be chosen for discussion or not, but let me say that it is one of the most beautifully written stories I've read. It's just very evocative. I'll confess I teared up in the middle, but finished with a smile. Great work!

Author's Response: Aw, Natalie, that means so much coming from you. I always enjoy writing Hannah -- something about it gets very close to home with me. I think its some of the most personal writing I do. I'm glad you were able to connect with the piece enough to tear up. Thanks for the review! *hugs*

 

Footprints in the Sand by Equinox Chick
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: It was a summer like any other for Danny. He worked at his parents' Bed and Breakfast during the day and partied hard on the beach at night. He played the game, and played it well. But then he met Oliver Wood, and his life was irrevocably changed.

This is Equinox Chick and this is my entry for the OC challenge in the Character Clinic. This is the Shipping Prompt. (and has nothing to do with ships - hee hee.)

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. Sadly Oliver Wood belongs to her, but Danny is mine.

My protagonist, Danny, was briefly mentioned in my story Drowning, not Waving. This is his story and has been written nearly a year after Jess (ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor) asked me to write it.

This story won the 2013 QSQ for Best SSP and Danny won the 2013 QSQ for Best Original Character. I thank the judges, very much.

Categories: Same-Sex Pairings Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 9481 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/31/12 Updated: 08/31/12


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 09/04/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I don't have a lot to say, but I hope the following few words can fully convey how much I enjoyed this.

I love how different this was from your other fanfics. There is something very OF about it. The characters and settings are so refreshing, and without Oliver being a wizard, it would still have been engaging.

This is in my opinion one of your best, seriously. The ending had me grinning!

Author's Response: Thank youuuuuuuuuu! I think the ending was a tad rushed, actually, but I had a deadline to reach. If I get the chance after the comp, I'll add a little more, perhaps.

I am pleased you liked this, Nat because this was one of those fics that kind of took over (you know that feeling) and so I wasn't sure if it actually worked and was interesting or whether it was just me quite liking it. Ohhh, and OF ... hmmmmmmmmmmm .... thinking, now :)

Thank you very much again :D ~Carole~

 

Kiss by HalfASlug
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary: The trio's friendship hangs in the balance when one of them makes an unexpected move on another. Trio friendship fluff.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 1174 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/02/12 Updated: 09/11/12


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 11/03/12 Title: Chapter 1: Kiss

Hahaha! This was priceless. Oh dear, I'm having a terrific time today raiding your author page! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Haha, yeah, I noticed! Cheers for all of it. You're awesome :)

 

Dust to Dust by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 20]

Summary: Past Featured StoryAdrian Pucey has always had a tumultuous relationship with Miles Bletchley, but as the years tread on, 'tumultuous' is just the beginning. And when Miles is found dead at the Battle of Hogwarts -- and as a Death Eater -- Adrian's sense of loss pales in comparison to what he finds at the funeral.


This story has been nominated for a 2013 Quicksilver Quill Award: Best Dark/Angst.


Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Dubious Consent, Mental Disorders, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations, Slash, Strong Profanity, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 13220 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/03/12 Updated: 09/07/12


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 09/04/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Er ... Why does this not have any other reviews? I am perplexed. People, come out of the damn closet!

Anyway, Miles and Adrian. How many times were they even mentioned in the books? :D But that's what's great about these characters, isn't it? You have a canon network that you can play with whichever way you want, but one who is deemed a good fanfic author is one who does that well. And you have so far!

This story is not pretty. Neither are the characters. It's not one designed to make the readers fall in love or make them think that - hey, life is beautiful. Because it often isn't. You haven't wasted any time establishing a dark, uncomfortable and unpleasant mood.

The characterisation shows promise as of now; the plot is still very raw. I am trying to figure out how the rest of the story is going to pan out. But what you have given us so far has me caught, and I eagerly await the update.

Welcome back to writing!

~Natalie

Author's Response:

I feel like I've lived with these two for so long, because I've always had head canon for them both. Adrian's is less unpleasant than Miles's, but both of these boys have a story to tell.

It's almost surreal for me to see someone read this, not knowing what I know about how it ends. It feels like it's cast in a different light than it is in my head, and I do wonder what sort of epiphany will happen once the fic progresses to the next stage.

In a couple ways, Adrian isn't that much different than Harry. Both of them had s*** childhoods, but they take these things in stride and look for better things. Miles...is a different story, one you will see in full force next chapter.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and it feels good to be back!

~Jezza

 

Night Terrors by Karaley Dargen
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 41]

Summary: In their seventh year at Hogwarts, every student has only one thing on their mind: NEWTs. And Quidditch. And bickering friends. And people who are mysteriously locked away in the hospital wing... Or maybe Nymphadora Tonks and Charlie Weasley are just having a particularly unusual term.

Anything that you recognise, including names, spells, potions, and Quidditch moves, belongs to either JKR or the copyright holders of various HP games and other media.




A million thanks must be sent to Carole/Equinox Chick, whithout whom I'm not sure I'd have a story. She's a fabulous beta and one of the best people that I have ever known.

Also lots of thanks to Natalie/hestiajones for reading the first chapters and especially for making me see that they needed work!

Aaaand many many thanks and hugs to Hannah/coolh5000 for being a really fantastic friend and always encouraging me.




Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Pottermore Spoilers, Violence

Word count: 33786 Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/16/12 Updated: 12/19/12


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 12/27/12 Title: Chapter 1: Slightly Drowsy

I have begun reading :x

Author's Response: :x

 
Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 12/28/12 Title: Chapter 1: Slightly Drowsy

Oh my Kara!

This is such a fantastic story. UGH! I don't know if I can explain my feels properly in this box :x

The characterisation is just so spot-on, and I don't just mean the main characters of the plot, but the house qualities and even the minor ones, including the gargoyles guarding Dumby's office. The banter was absolutely entertaining to read, too. It just had a ... Tonks vibe to it. I can't describe it exactly; it just fit so well. The only thing I doubted at the beginning was Oliver being the captain of his team. He's in fourth year here, right? But then, it dawned on me that apart from Charlie, the other players are also rather young, and he might have wanted to concentrate on his NEWTs instead. Actually, the more I think of it, the more it made sense not to make Charlie captain. This way, it's clear he loved Quidditch but his top priority was not it.

The details, though. That is something that I admired - nay, envied - endlessly about the Unbreakable Curse, and it was no different here. The way you planned classes and curriculum is awe-inspiring. I've said it before and I'll say it again: if there's anyone I know in our friend circle who will make it in the fantasy literature world, it's you. You have the kind of expansive imagination and attention to detail required. Seriously, I'm a sucker for the "magic" part of the Potterverse, and there's been plenty of times when I wondered what NEWTS would be like, and this satisfied my cravings!

And the plot! GAH. Perfectly paced, my darling, and how well-executed. l like how easily I was fooled into thinking Martha was going to be a possible victim. Hahaha! The dream realm was an endlessly intriguing character in itself. Quite scary, actually.

My only crit is that a few of the chapters suffered from minor technical issues: missing punctuation, capitalisation issues (in naming), and spelling errors. I saw a Venomous Tentacular somewhere - it was the second chapter in which it was mentioned - and Laura Byrd became as Myra in a later chapter, and Lisa in the final one. :O

These are things that can be easily fixed when you read the chapters again. The core content remains wonderful and exciting.

My haircape is off to you, Fraulein Dargen!

~Natalie

Author's Response: Nataliiiiiee! Wow, you read quickly!

I could kick myself especially for these name issues! I fixed everything you pointed out now - thanks! I changed almost everyone's name two times at least and thought I'd caught everything, but then I had different versions of chapters floating around between betaing and editing etc. -- anyway, thanks for pointing it out, and if there's anything else I'd appreciate if you'd let me know!


Thank you so so much for all your kind words. I don't quite know what to say, but you have to know that I'm feeling very fuzzy inside right now.

Oliver being Quidditch Captain that year is actually canon (because Fred and George knew his speech, and Tonks and Charlie graduated the year before Harry got there), as is his age. I tried to show him as a slightly less secure Captain. And yeah, Charlie used to be Captain but gave it up (in my opinion) to focus on NEWTs, in an uncharacteristically sensible move ;)


Again, thank you so much. wow.

 

Jumper by HalfASlug
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: All these years, Hermione has been waiting for this and there is only one person who really understands why.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1565 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/17/12 Updated: 10/20/12


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 11/03/12 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

Oh this made me all fuzzy :) Since SSS is the first fic of yours that I've read, I haven't seen much of your Harry yet. Now that we've been properly acquainted, let me say that he's as well-written as the other two. Thanks for writing something that warms my heart this foggy November evening! - Natalie

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing :) Yeah, Harry makes the odd cameo there but that's it really. Thank you! Of the three, Harry is the one I struggle with the most so it's nice that you think I've done all right there! When better for a Christmas fic than... er... November?

 

To Dwell On Dreams by Equinox Chick
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: 'Sometimes I catch a glimpse of myself in a mirror or a window, and I do not recognise the face staring back. Even the eyes, which never truly change, seem dulled in comparison to what they once were.

It is not age that dulled them but you, and him, and her, and the myriad of dreams that came to nothing.'


Albus Dumbledore dwells on his life, and love, and the Hogwarts' students he shaped.

This story is for Natalie (hestiajones) because it is her birthday and she is a fantastic friend. Have a good one, my love.

Disclaimer: I'm not JK Rowling. I think that's obvious.

Thank you very much, Kara (Karaley Dargen) for beta'ing this story and helping me rethink bits. :)



Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Pottermore Spoilers

Word count: 4158 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/29/12 Updated: 10/29/12


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 10/31/12 Title: Chapter 1: ~*~

I am crying. Yeah, this is what I meant on AIM lol. This is just one of the most amazing things I have ever read, not only because it was written for me (hehehe), but because it is utterly brilliant in its execution! There were so many lines that literally made me shiver, and I think my brain had multiple nerdgasms as each student was assessed.

Interlacing their entrances with his internal monologue about Gellert was brilliant! I always think Albus/Gellert is a ship that cannot be written on its own merit; it is much deeper, sadder and more meaningful when we fully understand the impact it left on the rest of Albus' life.

I don't know what to say more, except that it was spectacularly done! Thank you so much, my darling ho.

Author's Response: PHEW! *wipes brow* The decision to delete three attempted Luna/Rolfs is vindicated. :)

So pleased you liked it, Natatat. I was struggling for an idea, but once I thought of Dumbledore, I knew what I wanted to do. (and then just prayed it didn't clash too much with your thoughts about the man.

I agree about Gellert and the impact on Dumbledore. It shaped him in so many ways, not least the fact that he appeared too awed to ever form a love relationship again, although he doubtless loved many people. *sigh* I'm all sad for Dumbles now.

Thank you for reading and reviewing. So glad you liked it. ~Carole~

 

Master of the Inner Eye by Equinox Chick
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Tiresias Trelawney makes his living conning Muggles into believing he can commune with the dead. With his side-kick, Mundungus Fletcher, they fleece the gullible with magic tricks and a few sad laments.

But one stormy Halloween night, everything changes.

A spooky Halloween story for all the lovely readers on MNFF.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. Boy, did she know how to weave a spooky tale!



Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 1502 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/31/12 Updated: 10/31/12


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 10/31/12 Title: Chapter 1: Master of the Inner Eye

I went from :D to :( Happy Halloween to you too, and thanks for this lovely present :D (Yes, I am going to claim it as mine.)

Author's Response: Yes, it is a bit of a turnaround, but I couldn't find the 'conflicting emotions' or 'sting in the tail/tale' warning - heh heh.

Thank you for reviewing, and as you're the first then you may claim it - you ho!

~Croll~

 

One Fateful Night by Gmariam
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Remus Lupin’s life is changed forever in one dark moment on Halloween night. Shock prompts bitter laughter, but reality brings sorrowful tears, as Remus struggles with the devastating loss of his best friends one fateful night.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 4003 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/31/12 Updated: 10/31/12


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 11/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: Bitter Laughter, Sorrowful Tears

:( this was rather ... Heavy stuff, gina. The tension, anger and confusion were all so thick and palpable. I'm now registering what it must have been like for remus that night. The only thing nagging me is that in POA, sirius and remus reveal they had suspected each other of being the spy; or was that all sirius at first? But this is a nitpick that doesn't cause damage to the overall great quality of the fic. Nicely done! -Natalie

Author's Response: Natalie! Thank you so much for the review! You know, I really did think about those lines from PoA, I did. Well, I don't know why I didn't include it the first time around, but as I was editing out Snape I thought about trying to include it in the rewrite. Dumbledore does mention something. We do know that Sirius didn't tell Remus the location because he suspected Remus. I think Remus says something then in return about suspecting Sirius. I guess I just saw Remus *at this moment* as simply not believing Sirius could do such a thing. I think I've been influenced by too much fanfic, lol - esp. Remus/Sirius. WHICH is not going on in this story, but maybe, just maybe, Remus didn't really believe it was possible until after it all happened. Plus, I just wasn't sure where to add it. I focused Remus's anger more on the fact that the charm failed, the Potters were dead - even a bit on Snape (the original had him punching Snape in the face, lol) So yes - hope that answers your question a bit. I hope it wasn't too distracting. I bet someone else will call me on it too, lol. But I do (as always) think there is room for interpretation when it comes to this...at least until PoA comes out on Pottermore. Then I'll have to delete half my author's page, I'm sure, lol. Thanks again for reading!! I really appreciate the review. :) ~Gina :)

 

A Palisade of Persuasion by Equinox Chick
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 69]

Summary: It was true that Daphne and Lee had met at a most inappropriate time, but they had found love, lust and the glimmerings of a life together.

But the power of persuasion should never be underestimated. When they meet again, years later, his indifference cuts to her core. Can the past ever truly be recaptured?

This story is a present for Julia (the opaleye) because she is amazingly talented and has inspired me in so many ways. It is also her brthday.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling.

I am not Jane Austen.

I am not Sporty, Scary, Baby, Ginger or Posh.


Winner of the 2013 QSQ Best Chaptered Non-Canon Romance ~ I am gobsmacked and grateful to everyone especially JK Rowling, Jane Austen and the Spice Girls.



Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 89290 Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/22/12 Updated: 09/21/13


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 06/10/13 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Impulse

how dare you make fun of terry boot?

how

very

dare

you?

Author's Response: Uhm ....



Sorry?



-snigger-

 
Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 06/19/13 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 ~ Friendship

for a minute there, i thought you had hooked tracey up with susan. oop. see, caron still stuck in my head :P

Author's Response: I know, it all gets very confusing in my head, but Tracey was with Demelza in one story, and Susan hooked up with Lisa. It's when i still have them doing the same jobs that I get very confuzzled. This story isn;t caron, though. Well, it doesn;t fit with High or Sabrage or ... whatever else I'm joining together to make one huge fic that JK will never take down. Mwahahahahahahahahahahahaa.

Thank you - tee hee. ~Croll

 

A Lightness by teh tarik
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary:

My fingers on her face, in her hair, scraping on that rough patch of skin pulled over her knee. We lay in the grass, a tangle of legs. The way she spoke, slow, quiet. I whirled through classes. Fluctuated. I breathed brightness. I spoke laughter. I wouldn’t change a thing.

Lavender Brown is alive.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Slash, Violence

Word count: 9621 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/01/13 Updated: 01/01/13


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 03/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: not quite her name

Woooooow. Never before have 9000 words been so quick to read. You have fleshed out Lavender really well, especially her relationship with Ron ha ha ha. And the bit with Padma was nicely done. Love affairs usually have a nasty habit of taking over the narrative, but you've maintained a perfect balance between everything. Honestly, you're very a very inspiring writer!

Author's Response: Ooh, glad to hear that it didn't feel like 9000 words to you! Whenever I reread this fic, it feels like 190000 words, maybe because I know this story rather well and all. And yes, I LOVE the Won-won bit in HBP, so I just had to include it in my fic! It's just one of those things that are so characteristic of Lav-Lav. Love affairs usually don't take over too much of my stories because I'm really awkward at writing them :D But ah, sososo happy that you found balance in this fic and that the Padma bit wasn't too contrived! Honestly, thanks so much for all your lovely favulous amazing wonderful awesomesauce reviews. They mean so much to me. And I will definitely have to swing by your page and read some of your writing! I don't read enough on this site! - Nicole

 

Consolation by Gmariam
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: For years, Remus Lupin found comfort in the arms of Rosmerta Richardson...until the day he no longer needed her consolation.

This is Gmariam writing for the Great Hall Cotillion Challenge of 2013.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse

Word count: 6754 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/11/13 Updated: 01/11/13


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 02/26/13 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Great work gingin!i just typed out a longish review and my phn lost the text.will review properly again tomorrow :x

Author's Response: As per Croll's orders, I am finally responding! That you for the review and especially for calling me gingin as I haven't heard that in a long time! Is this enough? I will respond properly to the next one. Thanks again! ~Gina :)

 
Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 02/26/13 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

I'm back!

I thought this story captured so many terrible losses of the war even though it restricted the action to a series of conversation between two characters. So, that was genius on your part. Remus was heartbreaking, as usual, but you also wrote his anger well. The thing is, in the books, we see hints of it but don't see it. He's bitter, and it's only in that scene in DH where we see the extent of his bitterness, isn't it? I remember being shocked because I'd mostly thought of Remus as someone who's usually calm and in control. This fic, however, does show that the anger has been building up so long.

I loved how the balance shifted in the end, with Rosmerta in need of consolation, not Remus. Her tryst with the Imperius Curse and its consequences are things I've wanted to read about, and I thought you did justice to hit.

But what I most liked about your story is the relationship between the two. It's almost platonic, isn't it? Kind of sacred, actually. I'm so pleased you didn't focus on the sexual side of their extended affair, but on the emotional. Refreshing and subtle ;)

So, this was what my original review was all about before the phone decided to lose it >.< I shall gradually attack your other fics!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review - for taking time to type it again, too! I'm so glad you liked it. You're word 'sacred' is really a perfect word for what they have. It's special and unique, open and important - sacred. Yes. And you know me - I don't tend to focus on a lot on the sexual sides of things, so I'm glad you didn't miss that, haha. I really love Remus, and felt bad for him sometimes here. But he had Rosmerta, even to the end. And then he was able to console her. Oh sigh. But in my mind she finds someone over the course of DH, so she's all right. It would be sad to write a story about her reaction to Remus's death, although now that I've said it, I'm sort of interested. Hm. Anyway - thank you so much! ~Gina :)

 

Deceptions by Equinox Chick
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: Beautiful and headstrong, with Veela blood running through her veins, Fleur Delacour understands the importance of looks, but as she seeks to ensnare the intriguing young Auror standing guard at Hogwarts, she forgets the most important truth of all: appearances are often deceptive.

This is Equinox Chick and this is my first entry into the Great Hall 2013 Cotillion (yes, I did say first!)

Disclaimer; I am not JK Rowling. I'm also not very good at French.

Thank you Sophie (the owl) for fabulous beta job, and Natalie (hestiajones) for giving me some pointers.

Categories: Femmeslash Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 15308 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/13/13 Updated: 02/11/13


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 02/28/13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Distractions

Perfection.

But hahaha let me first laugh at Ron blundering into a pivotal moment, It made me giggle, as did that momentary lapse of Snape's solid demeanour. I wonder if I should write Severus/Fleur. Fleverus. YES!

Ahem. Wow. As I said, this pair has chemistry that - er - showered down on my biology, after a fashion. Their relationship is amazingly sensual, but I also love how they show their vulnerability to each other. I never did think about Fleur being that lonely, with her girl friends unwilling to be not biased, and boys preferring to droll rather than lend an honest ear. That was startling.

Tonks. Oh dear. I now have the hottest hots for her. I've always adored Tonks, but never felt so much attraction towards her. Her characterisation was fabulous as well!

But Bill and Fleur... that's like a sacred pairing ... so sorry, Tonks. You do get Remus in the end.

~ Natalie

Author's Response: FLAPE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You must write it.

I demand FLAPERY!

So pleased you liked this. I had horrible issues with it, having started initially for the Rainbow Challenge then stopping when I decided I hated it. But then I liked the peaches bit at the beginning, and after rereading decided to rewrite and add (and add a lot lot more - ooops)

Mmm, for some reason Fleur didn't come over as that hot, but I think that's because I was writing from her POV and so while we were experiencing her thoughts and reactions, it was her reactions to Tonks that we were reading. I've never written smutty Tonks ... not sure I can believe that - ha ha.

Yeah, I had to split them up because Bill and Fleur are just too hot not to meet. If I dared do a Tarentino and Kill Bill (geddit) then I'd reunite them, but alas, I believe half teh flist would rewrite the scenario and Kill Croll.

Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ~Carole~

 

You Can Write The Book by teh tarik
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: Past Featured Story

That's what Colin's pictures do to you - they make strange folks out of the people you know.

Colin has an eye for detail. So does Dennis.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 3392 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/15/13 Updated: 01/18/13


Reviewer: hestiajones Signed
Date: 03/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: it's all in the details

Oh, Nicole. You are clearly a witch. Your writing is so bloody refined that, honestly, I'm seething with envy :) (The smile is supposed to tell you not to be scared.) I've written Dennis after Colin's death, and though the relationship between the two brothers was an important theme of that story, I have to see I'd never been able to look it with such clarity. I just love the way you made those photographs so, so vivid. I can easily picture all of them in my head. And the ending? Unexpected, and all the more beautiful for that. I must go and read the other stories. Thank you for such amazing writing!

Author's Response: Hello Natalie:D TELL ME HOW DO I RESPOND TO THIS REVIEW. HOW SERIOUSLY HOW. First, I'm so incredibly flattered that you dropped by my page and read my other stories asljkd;sdfjhklj THANK YOU SO MUCH OMG. Dennis has become one of my favourite characters (but only after I started writing him :P ) I will certainly have to read your Dennis story. I'm glad you liked the ending! I wanted to have a little shift in tone, and end the story on a bit of hope, rather than just stopping at Colin's death. Dennis is going to be fine, honestly :) And thank YOU for your amazing reviews *hugs* - teh/Nicole

 
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