Can you tell us where you're updating? I love this story and I really want to get to the end.
Summary: This is the story of the adventures of Lily and James Potter as they watch their son grow up from afar, only allowed these small moments....
i love this, sadly... you update really slowly... and i already have like 5 othr fics I'm following so.... aww, what the heck! I'll follow you too!! plez keep writing!
Summary: Lily Evans remained shadowed and distant from the world she loved so dearly. Control was Michael's weakness; temptation hers. Yet, when James Potter enters her life, without so much as a warning or brief hesitation, Lily finds truth. For James Potter refused to give up on her.
why is lily so self-destructive.... uggghhh. james trusted her with the tree, THE TREE!! how COULD she?? THEY WERE SO CLOSE TOO!!!! i hate how good this is, update please!
Summary: SEQUEL OF LESSONS: After successfully completing their Herbology project, Lily finds out from her ex-partner James Potter that the two of them have been paired together to work on a new Potions assignment as well. How will Lily react when she realises that after having spent one whole month in James’s company yet another four weeks await her with the same task? And, moreover, will they be able to finish this assignment with out killing each other first?
i love this.. and i too miss "Harry". please update! i check evrytime I'm online and I nvr find new stuff, this makes me sad...
Summary: London: Four murders have taken place under bizarre circumstances, for what seems to be an equally bizarre reason.
Harry, a happily wedded man with a wonderful wife and a cute daughter, is an Auror at the Ministry of Magic and is now given a new case to solve with Ron and four other Aurors. Incidentally, the four Aurors include Ginny, Harryâ€™s â€˜schoolboy crushâ€™; and it turns out to be much more than a crush when Harry sees her again. Whatâ€™s more is that Harry is working upon a case that seems to connect to him directly. And once again, it opens up old fears: fears of losing loved ones.
Ron, on the other hand, seems to be tired of Hermione. Tempers are running high and fights are breaking out more often than usual. Are they really falling apart? Or can they sort this out before it is too late?
Then there is the case itself. Who is trustworthy, and who is not? Who is deadly enough to murder four people in cold blood?
Indulge into the gut-wrenching action, combined with warm romance and tingling suspense; while I tell you a story of love, ambition and obsessionâ€¦ a story of what those killer instincts can do. EDIT: MAJOR revamping going on, with regard to plot, characterisation, and general style of writing. I would urge you not to read this until I've removed this notice because I wasn't very good six years ago, and this is as bad as I was. *Places traffic cones*
UUGGGGHHHH. PAVARRRTTTTIII!! NOOOO! and yet, i'm slightly happy... god i'm a sick one. plez keep updating, i kno how hard being in college must be but plez, find a time wen u can update for those of us who only have high school to contend with..
Rose was a Weasley. She never gave Scorpius Malfoy a second glance. They were sworn enemies, even though they’d barely even spoken to each other. But sometimes all it takes for love to blossom is a Potions lesson, a few snide remarks and a dropped book.
Two people. Two entirely different worlds that are suddenly intertwined.
UGH! AMAZING! I have some serious love for this fic, like its not even funny. PLEASE UPDATE. I've been wondering why the rating was 6th- 7th.... i guess now i know. awkward lol. cant wait to hear how this ends...
Author's Response: Awkward? That's why I added the warning at the beginning of the chapter. ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Pride and Pre-Juiced Plums: A Potter's Pentagon Love Story by Schmerg_The_Impaler
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 266]
Summary: A companion piece to the Potter's Pentagon trilogy... it's better if you've read the Potter's Pentagon trilogy, but you don't necessarily have to.
It's five years after Emma Weasley and her chums graduated from Hogwarts. Ted and Ivy are married, Haley is working at Madame Puddifoot's while trying desperately to break into show business, Jordan's doing whatever it is he does, and Emma is an Auror trainee working as a guard at the Chudley Cannons' stadium. The Cannons have actually been doing much better lately, due to their new star Beater, Tyrone Thomas. Unfortunately, Tyrone is Emma's ex-boyfriend. OH, THE AWKWARDNESS.
Follow Emma through her awkward adventures told in her usual insane way, as she experiences angst, hilarity, obnoxiously strange people, misadventures involving a deceptively dashing cad, Haley's wedding, the birth of Ted and Ivy's baby, and her own eventual descent into LURRRVE.
Written for the marvellous Vindictus Viridian's Pride and Prejudice NEWTs class on the Fanfiction Beta Boards, based on Jane Austen's fantastic novel, "Pride and Prejudice.".
Nominated in the 2008 Quicksilver Quills Awards for Best Non-Canon Romance Story! And its lovely (haha) heroine, Emma Weasley, received two nominations for Best Female Original Character, while Haley Potter and Ivy Potter each received one! Thanks so much, guys!
OH MY LORDYS!!!!! I LOVE YOUR FANFICTIONS!!! (ESPECIALLY THE MUSICAL SONG PARTS OF HALEYS- speaking of which, what's going on with her musical??) AND since i LOVES ME some pride and prejudice this is awesome!! I WANT SOME TYRONE ATION!! HE'S MY FAVE GUY (I dont count Tedders anymore becuz i secretly married him ages ago) and btw (ok, so ur not freaked out by me- i have a slightly- lol, ppl who know me would raise there eybrows right now and go "SLIGHTLY!?"- random brain pattern) i love ur version of gaston for Tyrone and I recorded myself singing the whole wicked thing. oh snapple this is getting long... in conclusion: UPDATE!!!!!!!! BYE, HAPPY WRITING!
Author's Response: Yoooo, hey there! I love Tyrone, too. He's adoraburble. And we will see much more of Haley in a few chapters, including the opening night performance of her moosical. I love getting to put my favorite show tunes in the story, though! I just wrote my evil Harry Potter version of "Evita' today while on a car trip (I always write on car trips)... bleeeeh... oh, I totally found a piece of flair on facebook that said 'Jor-jums,' and it made me happy....
Summary: With McGonagall firmly entrenched as Hogwarts’ new headmistress, Harry is enticed to return for his seventh year under unique conditions. Aided by Ron and Hermione, he embarks upon a Horcrux search-and-destroy mission using the school as the base of operations. Recognizing that saving the wizarding world from the ultimate evil is a rather daunting task for a seventeen-year old wizard, the Order of the Phoenix steps in to assist Harry on his journey. It soon becomes clear, however, that not everyone has the same lesson plan in mind for our hero. As the headmistress attempts to lay a clever trap to reveal hidden agendas, Voldemort waits in ambush at the one site that Harry is sure to visit.
But before Harry can face his nemesis, he must face down the inner demons that plague his own life and truly grow into adulthood. His activities are punctuated with school pranks, Quidditch, parties, and the requisite amount of rule-breaking that readers have come to expect from the trio.
OMG, I WAS SO HAPPY...now I'm slightly depressed- its so much easier to believe that Tonks and Lupin didn't die...
Author's Response: I quite agree! I really wanted a happy ending, too, but DH made that impossible. Blame my compulsive need to adhere (somewhat) to canon. I can seek to rectify the wrongs, but can’t change reality, unfortunately.
There is no doubt that the Harry that we see in the epilogue is a fundamentally different character than the one who appears in the remainder of the story. Think of it as AU-Harry versus post-DH Harry. It was my intent that readers recognize Harry’s closing angst as being so much like our own: we, who seek out new stories to read or write so that our cherished characters can live on. In making that Harry echo our own feelings of loss, it strengthens the bonds that we feel with the character, the little bit of ourselves that we all see in Harry and which had endeared him the world over.
If anything, the reviews concerning the twist in the epilogue have confirmed that readers, too, share my sense of loss and outrage (and all those other stages of grief) for many of the characters who were dispatched in DH. Some were not even deemed important enough to be given a death scene. Luckily, fan fiction is not like real life (reality is a… witch… isn’t it?) and although I may have accepted JKR’s plot decisions intellectually, I find the characters still haunt my imagination, refusing to be dead and buried as long as someone is still willing to take up a quill, or pen, or keyboard.
So don’t despair. Remus and Tonks live on in our imagination and in my sequel, The Dark Phoenix. The first chapter sets the stage by exploring the post-DH Harry, so if you find that too dark for your tastes, I promise I won’t be offended if you just jump right in to the AU part of the story which begins with chapter 2. The tone is playful, but hopefully manages to avoid fluffiness.
Summary: The final installment in the Potter’s Pentagon Trilogy. Read “The Five” and “The Truth” first, myess? Okay!
WARNING! Contains Muggle adventures in Diagon Alley, unusual eyebrows, cheesy clichés galore, psycho Ted, the not-so-lost years of Merlin, a school-wide singalong, the old potato joke, Tyrone’s Princess Bride obsession, Emma’s stubborn denial of the existence of Tyrone’s mustache, a graphic death, a joke shop product as a major plot device, hobo Jordan, Jordan hugging, Jordan pulling pranks, time travel, the Love Shack, angst, and worst of all, Professor Zabini.
It’s the sixth year for Potter’s Pentagon and company, and our heroes learn that in the wizarding world, coming of age has a somewhat weightier significance. Students are busy with an Inter-House Unity Project, Jordan is having weird dreams, Pansy and Ophidias Malfoy have been released from Azkaban, Professor Zabini has a mysterious project of his own, and almost everyone is acting strangely. Meanwhile, at the Ministry of Magic, a man with a vendetta against Ron Weasley is trying his hardest to get him in the biggest trouble possible. Is the only way to save him to travel into the past?
New talents are discovered, new friendships form and old ones change, pasts are dredged up, and, of course, there’s lots of good old-fashioned snogging. And one of the five kills for the first time… while another becomes a casualty of war.
Starring 2008 Quicksilver Quills Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character nominees Ivy Potter, Haley Potter, Emma Weasley, and Giorgi Anderson, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin! Nominated for 2008 Quicksilver Quills Best Post-Hogwarts Story.
loved it of course... although i really cant stand the fluff between Tyrone and Em, its cute though!!! Why is Cecelia so randomly there!?? Will Jordan evr actually get with the muggle with awesome hair and clothing sense?? TED CAN'T BE AN EMO WEREWOLF! positively CANT wait for the next chapter!!!! good luck on the musical/play!! luvyah! UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: Thank you! The fluff between Emma and Tyrone is SUPPOSED to be horribly cheesy, hahaha... the idea is that all their friends want them to get together, and then once they do, it's, "WHY DID WE EVER WANT THIS???" Har haaaaar... By the way, Cecilia was always there. Remember when Jordan went to get her from the Ravenclaw common room. Updates will be soon indeed.
awww, this was such a sweet/revealing/sad chapter, i loved it! TED KILLED SOMEONE!!!?????? NOT TED!!! It was expected.... SO glad Ivy's not a werewolf too, that would have confused things. Tyrone (my secret lover) Thomas.. he is sooo sweet! plez tell me that they can fix emma and grow back her hair - i need a happy ending... UPDATE!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yeah, it would be confusing if Ivy was werewolfified... but that's not what Balthazar was going for-- he just wanted to eat her! I love Tyrone, too... GASP! He's cheating on Emma with you? How could you! Har har, updates are coming soon.
Summary: James would do anything to get inside Lily’s head. Lily would do anything to get away from James. Lily was brewing a banned potion. James went to find her. Lily made a mistake and the potion exploded. James got his wish, but is it much more than he bargained for?
After a year the Epilouge is now up! Come read for a bit of fun!!
Runner up QSQ - Best Chaptered Canon Romance
Reason for Nomination:
This is the most unique take on how James and Lily really got to know each other. The story is hilarious and keeps you laughing throughout, but it never lets you forget the serious stuff. Plus, she somehow manages to end each chapter with a nice cliffhanger.
PLEASE.PLEASE.PLEASE.PLEASE.PLEASE.PLEASE.UPDATE. you do not know how agonizing it is to make my weekly little trip to mugglenet, check all of my lesser fics i read (all of THEM updated, 4 in total ), then get here and.....no update. it makes me so sad inside. please, i speak for all of us when i say "please update b4 i have to find a new addiction and/or reason to procrastinate"
Summary: James has tried. Now it's time to give up.
I’m going to let her go. I’m going to let her be her own person, without me around. Without me around to bother her anymore.
A one-shot from James POV about trying to give up
SEQUEL It Wasn't You, It Was Me NOW ON MNFF!
awwwww... this.is.so.Briliant. U should totally keep writing this.. not just for the one shot but for until Lily starts liking him and stuff like that. u dont have to tho... just an errant thought of mine.
Summary: It is June 1976 and The Marauders are at the top of their game. From the outside they look to have everything.But appearances, as the saying goes, can be deceptive.
James is discovering that not everything in life is his for the taking. Sirius knows he will have to defy his formidable family. Remus lives in constant fear of his life beyond Hogwarts. As for Peter... Well, Peter is struggling to live up to his friends.
The ties of friendship are strong, but war is raging and with a dark power rising those ties will inevitably fray.
Added to the mix is an adversary called Severus Snape, some lost House Points, a prank or two and a whole lot of Lily.
This is a Marauder tale.
This is a story of what made them special.
This is a story of why it started to go wrong for The Lions of Gryffindor.
OH MY GOOD GODRIC! Lions of Gryffindor won the 2009 QSQ for Best Marauders' Era Story. Amazed and incredibly grateful to those who nominated, judged and have beta'd this fic. THANK YOU.
Trick or Treat!
3. She clicks on her mouse and swipes her wand;
Some stories go up, and some stories are gone.
Stories of her own? Why, she has plenty!
Fewer than one-hundred, but far more than twenty.
great chapter.. this always happens to remus (do i tell her? do i not?) in the end he always just causes himself more pain... cant wait for an update!!! ur so good. if u evr need a beta I'm free. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Remus is a bit of an idiot at times, but in this case perhaps he has cause to fear what will happen . ~Carole~
‘Thou shalt not sin’ – Bible
Sirius knows what he wants and he’s not afraid to chase it. She makes him feel more than he’s ever felt before, but getting what he wants may cause him more heartache than he ever imagined. Thus begins a thrilling game, a game of vice and virtue, of betrayal and affection, of sin and atonement.
The forbidden fruit tastes the sweetest.
I LOVED IT. IT WAS BRILLIANT!!!!!!!! I AM SO IN LOVE WITH SERIOUS, HE'S LIKE MY HUSBAND.
Summary: Draco Malfoy was in a mess. His father was determined to get their stance back in the wizarding world, even if it meant ruining his son's life. Draco needed to find a way to stop his father's disgusting plans, and fortunately, he found just the answer: Astoria. The solution? Pretending to be engaged to Astoria when they're truly not, so that his father doesn't get him married to some Mudblood.
But what happens when this little game called pretend turns into something more? Will it be too late before they both realize their feelings for each other?
i love you story, please udate faster!!! I really look forward to hearing what happens after this!!
Author's Response: Thaaaank you! I'll try to update faster. RL issues and beta-ing takes up time... >_<
Summary: The year is 1979 and the Marauders are out of school and working for the Order. One Marauder is about to get married, one is finding life outside school harder than even he expected, one is about to turn traitor and one is about to fall in love.
When Sirius Black flew away from the two Muggle policemen with James Potter on the back of his motorbike, he didn’t know he was about to come face to face with the one person who could change everything.
Abigail Sampson was a shy, unassuming girl when she went to school at Hogwarts. She was friends with Lily Evans, but not the Marauders. She graduated and went to work for the Ministry. What very few people knew was she also went to work for the Order.
What happens when this shy girl finds herself working with one Sirius Black to discover the truth behind his brother’s disappearance? Could this quiet girl hold her own with the legendary Sirius Black? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This story starts immediately after J. K. Rowling’s prequel which she wrote for charity. If you can find a copy to read, I would suggest reading it before reading this story. Of course, you don’t need to read it to understand this story, but you may feel as if you missed something in the beginning of this story. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
By the end there will be a slight hint at Alternate Universe. I believe what happens in this story was possible, but it strays a bit from what we know of in canon. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is the prequel to my story The Unknown Heir. Though both stand on their own.
AH- MAZING! I love their little love hate relationship (well its more like sirius loves her, while she just sort of goes thru mood swings and overreacts to things) plez update!
Summary: After the disastrous events of the end of the Marauder's fifth year, a fuming Lily Evans decides that that arrogant James Potter and his friends need a taste of their own medicine. The straight-laced Prefect suddenly finds herself pranking her class's trickiest boys--and maybe even enjoying it. Coupled with a series of mysterious apology letters that Lily has begun receiving, it's bound to be an interesting year.
Winner of the 2010 QSQ for Best Canon Romance!
OOOOHHH! I'M so excited! plez update! this is like the WORST cliff-hanger becuz now i'm sitting here waiting fr the pranks to begin... UPDATE!
Summary: It was a brand new day in a brand new world, and Harry Potter, just like the rest of the Wizarding World, didn't know how to begin living life again. This, above all, is his story. A story of rebuilding. H/G, R/Hr.
i like this alot, keep writing! i kno how u feel, on occasion I have a weird writing thing go off in my head and i have a million and one things to write for my story but the next I cant think of a single thing to write- but the difference is I dont have AMAZING reviewers like myself waiting for an update. so get to it PLEZ!- Elle
Summary: Ron and Hermione have always had a special connection. But mix in a fake French girl, a handful of dares, a cup of Hogsmeade trips, half a pound of Malfoy, and a pinch of detentions, there is definitely some trouble to be anticipated.
A look into Ron and Hermione's fifth-year minds to experience the spazzness and crazyism in first person.
Disclaimer: Sadly, I am not J. K. Rowling. I'm not even famous. Heck, I only have one story up on Mugglenet. But I'm still glad I can walk into J. K.'s world. And tap-dance back out again.
Additional warnings: May contain fluff, excessive randomness (AU), and minor plot twists!
I would also appreciate if NikkiSue/Nicole could mod this for me :]
pleaseupdate!!!!! i looovvveee how whenever someone says "i have to tell so and so this" then all of the sudden there like "tell me what?" its hilarious!i dont understand the whole ginny and harry thats going on. i love harry when he starts stuttering though *looks up into the sky dreamily wondering if there are n e guys out there like harry and ron, but contents herself with knowing she can alwys find them in her precious books*
Author's Response: Heh heh, thanks. Chapter 5 is in the queue. And yes, secrets do tend to come out. As for H/G They both like each other, but Ginny told Seamus she was going to the village with him to make Harry jealous :O. And I bet there are some Harrys and Rons out there. *dreamysigh* Ron Weasley.... --Maddy(:
OOH!!! THIS WAS AMAZING AND I LOVED IT LIKE ALL YOUR OTHERS! UPDATE SOON! NOW WHERE'S MY RON WEASLEY??!!.... its not worth it, I'm still waiting for Sirius Black to come to my window and in my worst moments Tom Riddle (long story u can find on mugglenet). UPDATE!!
Author's Response: Thanks!(: Anyway I haven't submitted 8 yet, and I probably won't until this week. Get excited!!!!! --Maddy(: