Penname: Windy Silvermist [Contact]
Real name: why bother I like this one better.
Member Since: 04/28/09
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I'm a thirteen year old person who is execeptinally weird, and who can't spell. Also I'm trying to bring into being a Teddy Lupin fic. Ummmmmmmm why is it that everyone else has something to say about themselves but I don't? I like reading romance novels. ( Which let me assure you bugs me to no end.) I also like to where lip gloss ( which also bugs me because it deflats the whole tom boy thing.) though I rarely wear it! And why am I telling you this? I mean really if you have any ideas say something. I'm mean and make nasty comments on song fics most of the time but I will most likely end up doing one. I'm also crazy, weird, and something. These qualities do nothing to get me far in society. I also love talking in a very bad british accent. So obviously I live somewhere, but it's not Britan. Otherwise I would have a completely good British accent. Instead of the totally Un-British accent I have. I also like to sing. Which also doesn't get me far in society. O.K. I want all you kiddies to enjoy my non-exciestant books, of nonexciestant origans, go on you'll love them! ( Ah I belive you've found my old friend crazy, or lunatic I can't tell which, they're so alike you know?) I've (slowly every so slowly) just picked up on this if you cut lunatic in half it turns into Luna like Luna Lovegood, whose is ( my role model, surprise surprise) esscentally a LUNATIC! Boy am I slow.


Windy Forever crazed and forever yours ( that sounds really mushy if you cut out the first part)

P.S. Can you do P.S.'s on an autbiography? Wellit doesn't really matter since I'm already doing it I suppose.

P.S.S. I want you (if you have the time, or extremely bored, which is slowly turning into insanity, join the club) to look at my reviews, and convay some way to tell me if you find them amusing. That is all
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A Different View On Love by helz_belz
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 364]

Summary: James would do anything to get inside Lily’s head. Lily would do anything to get away from James. Lily was brewing a banned potion. James went to find her. Lily made a mistake and the potion exploded. James got his wish, but is it much more than he bargained for?

Now Complete!



After a year the Epilouge is now up! Come read for a bit of fun!!

Runner up QSQ - Best Chaptered Canon Romance


Reason for Nomination:
This is the most unique take on how James and Lily really got to know each other. The story is hilarious and keeps you laughing throughout, but it never lets you forget the serious stuff. Plus, she somehow manages to end each chapter with a nice cliffhanger.

~~hestiajones

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 51560 Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/23/08 Updated: 04/08/11


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/15/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: The Head's Dormitory

Well this is interesting but a bit gross. I mean I really think James would respect privacy of the girls. Though it's really funny. It's all pretty good can't wait to hear more.

-Windy

Author's Response: Sorry for the long time it took to reply, and the fact that you don't like that it's a bit gross. Do you think James would respect the privacy of girls? Maybe. Most of the guys I know probably wouldn't. I must start hanging around with better behaved guys! I'm glad you like it, keep reading!

 

Secret Mischief by ginny112
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: As Luna Lovegood begins her seventh year at Hogwarts, she finds herself joining Ginny and the others in their plan to help a forlorn George Weasley move on from his misery and be happy again after the death of his twin, Fred. But when Ginny decides to spice things up by altering the plans secretly, Luna is treated to an unexpected surprise …

George/Luna

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 10053 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
12/08/08 Updated: 03/19/09


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 05/22/09 Title: Chapter 4: Letters

NIce cliffiesh thing, I like it. Luna, and George.....Coolio. Not a commen idea, it's new and interesting. I can't wait till Ginny actually starts the get together with them. I can't wait for the next chapeter. Hurry up please!

-WIndy the ever impatient.

 

Summary: It's that time of year. Time for an untimely winter ball, and Emma Weasley is not thrilled about Tyrone Thomas' relentless pursuit if her. But will his terrible singing and creepy stalker-ish antics woo her at last? And what the heck is Jordan Potter up to? DH is very disregarded. No Albus Severuses here.

I am Schmerg_The_Impaler of Hufflepuff House, and this is my submission to the Winter Snows thingy, in the "Melting a Winter Heart" category.

Categories: Melting a Winter Heart Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 8187 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/21/08 Updated: 12/23/08


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh that was sweet, but the last part wasn't really Emma, well that figures since Emma and romance are oppisites, but I always pictured Emma romance different. I notice that there were two film references by Emma there. Does being around Tyrone make Emma refer to everything as a film? I found it weird how she refered to everything as "like a fairytale" that's a rather far cry from Emmas normal response, but since none of this is normal for Emma I'll let it slide. Did Tyrone in his obession make her watch the wizard of Oz or did Hermione or Ivy do that already (I mean they both have a thing about showing people classics (Ivy in Pride, and Pre-juiced Plums, like you don't already know....))

Speaking of Ivy. I SEE A STRANGE LACK OF IVY & TEDDY!!Where were they during this one shot of rather startling love. Oh yes startling love that brings up another piont. dear little JOR-JUMS!( Oh dear I've started using Haley's nickname next I'll refer to Tyrone as Tyroonie, and spend my days wearing sparkling pink things, and singing musicals, while eating suger quills( Gasp I almost said pens, oh the travesty).(actually I manage to sing a lot I never stop really, but the only musical I sing is Wicked)Scary.)

Jor-jums, and Gorgi, a pressing matter. Will this display of love continue or is this just anothe little one shot thing, because if it is I'm going to be extremely miffed. After I finish harassing you with this review (which is not a review as much as a demending line of questions with rather bad jokes to accompany them.) I'm going to to look for stories about their future kiddes! If there isn't I'm going to spend more of my time being miffed at you. It seems I'm spending a lot of my time being potentially miffed at you.

Speaking of something totally random someday ten million years later the first chapter of my Ted Lupin fan fic. The reason is which I was going to origionally base all the teachers on my friends, but then I wanted to be a student instead, and get married of to one of the main characters ( creepy of me but I do that a lot anyway. It's not ted). SO then I felt guilty trapping all my closest friennds,as teachers so I have to go make them all students now. In which I'm having trouble creating all the teachers now. Confusing isn't it? Which is to say almost never. Apparently I've run out of random things to say if I'm refering to my book. So I guess it's byes for now till I find something else of yours to review! * Cackles Merrily Away* ( can you cackle merrily?)

-Windy the merry cackler

Author's Response: Oh thank you for your wonderful long review! As for the whole Emma seeming out of character thing, weirdly enough, the reason she's acting that way is that she's FINALLY relaxing and letting her guard down and being her real self, not trying to convince herself that she's thoroughly unsentimental and unromantic-- which is not true! And she refers to things as fairy tale because Emma constantly says throughout the series that she detests fairy tales of any kind... and this is kind of showing that facade melting away! And yes, Tyrone DID make her watch Wizard of Oz. It's one of his favorites, and Haley loves it, too-- she loves that kind of campy stuff.

Ivy and Ted aren't in this one because in my first draft, they showed up from time to time, but I realized that new readers who'd never read any other Potter's Pentagon stories would be confused by me introducing so many new characters in such a new story. So I decided to scrap them and develop the characters that I did have some more! SINGING WICKED IS FUN FUN FUN FOR EVERYONNNNNE! I LIKE TO BE MADAME MORRIBLE!

Jor-jums and Giorgi... well, this is the most romantic you will see them in canon. But that doesn't mean that they're not interested in one another! ;-) Affections are... certainly implied. As for Jordan's future, you will read all about that in the epilogue of The Past, and maybe a few other stories.

Hmm... about your story (and don't worry, I'd love to marry Jordan!), for teachers, I'd say to base them on teachers that you have or have had! A great teacher can be modeled on your favorite; a horrible teacher on your least favorite. I've had a lot of bizarre teachers who I really should've used in my story, but instead, I was just uncreative and made Zabini like Snape 2.0... though the significance of Zabini does go into play later.

MERRY CACKLEMAS!

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm back! (that took about 10 min.) why am I back you ask? I'm back because as I hit the submit button I noticed something something I wanted to say. I noticed at the end notes that you said "hohohoh" did you forget that "o" or did you plan this? This of course is not a valid reason but I have a few more things to say.

Microwave cat?

and I love that part with Tyrone, and the candy canes. I especially love how you described the owls. I wanted to laugh so hard! But I was supposed to be doing school, and I din't see anything amusing about geography so I had to stiffle them. This is a relatively short one for me. I can't think of anything else to say. Hola ( that mean by too? Oh well if it doesn't than it's another thing that either brings me closer to Gorgi, or Haley.) Oh! jus thought of something. I for one as a dedication to Haley, cannot lift one eyebrow, and since I like to pretend to be sarcastic, and witty, this doesn't go down very well. I can kinda make it look like I can raise my eyebrow by tilting my head special though. Has she tried that? o.k. I'm done now.

-Windy who cannot raise one eyebrow, in which this upsets her greatly

P.S. This is super short for me, so short it's actually normal, almost. Aren't you glad I decided not to doo the ten million P.S. things?

Author's Response: When I typed this story-- as you might have noticed-- several keys on my keyboard were broken. Hence all of the missing letters! WHOOPSIE DAISIES! I had to slide my finger around into the pit where the key used to be in little circles... and only sometimes would they appear.

I swear I've never microwaved cats! Just marshmallow peeps and cans of soup. And I'm so glad I made you want to laugh! This story wassss indeed meant to be funny.

Believe it or not, I raise my eyebrow WAY. TOO.MUCH. It kinda creeps people out, actually!

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow I kinda relised I made a ton of mistakes, on that last reviewer thing. I just noticed that this is a really really really long story. Yay it's an even number of reviews, it kinda bugged my I made it an odd number.

-Windy who is currently on a reviewing spree, of the exact same story except this one isn't a review its more of a rather unexpected comment

Author's Response: Psh, I made a ton of mistakes on the story. It's okay. And YES, this was such a long one-shot! But I had to get it in in time for the contesty thing, so I couldn't chop it into two chapters as initially written!

 

A Marauder's Cliche by KDTheRavenclaw
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 38]

Summary: What happens when our favorite foursome, plus Lily, Snape, and of course some impossibly perfect OCs return to Hogwarts for their 7th year? Why, absolute bucketfuls of drama, angst, tears, jealousy, unrealistic events, and cheesy, cheesy dialogue! Also staggering amounts of random insanity. You have been warned.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 2915 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
12/30/08 Updated: 02/28/09


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Always Start At the Beginning

Hehe this was HILARIOUS! I couldn't stop snorting (as you don't know when it's really funny I snort not laugh). I think my sister thought I was demented. So than I had to go, and read aloud to her the whole thing. Yay!

-WIndy the ever snortful

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/10/09 Title: Chapter 2: Unexpected Confrontations

Hehe. The moment I saw cheesy I was here. I love cheesy, and this was certainly cheesy. So cheesy that it became hilarious. Funny how that works. I also read this chapter aloud to my sister, because I can do that. I really liked but (oh yes always the but) it was funny the first twelve times you said it but after awhile stopping what is going on because of the plot, kinda of got annoying. On the other hand AMAZING. simply HILARIFICIC. I like making up words. *SIGH* right more please, theres a distinct lack, of next chapters. If you don't write "some evil reviews this way comes!" ( you know cheesy joke off of "something wicked this way comes. But I'm, totally serious about evil reviews.) WRITE! WRITE! GO FORTH AND WRIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Windy the insanelisous

 

Truth Be Told by Hyacinthe
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: Ever since Remus Lupin came to Hogwarts, his friends knew he had a dark secret, and in time, they found out what it was. But what did the future Marauders think Remus' secret was before then? They couldn't've guessed it the first time...

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6249 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
01/08/09 Updated: 01/25/09


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: New Transfer Student

Remus is a girl BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Oh yes I'm just that lame

-Windy child of supreme lameness

 

More Than A Memory by nancydrewgirl
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 21]

Summary: Travel back to that fateful Halloween night when the lives of two people were lost, the day the lives of many were shattered, and the day that that an evil darkness was defeated. James and Lily Potter never died, just thrown in a kind of limbo. Now they’re back, and assuming that Harry is dead, they try to figure out how they survived.

Meanwhile, Harry, Ron, and Hermione, later joined by Ginny, show up in Godric’s Hollow on Christmas Eve of 1998, searching for Horcruxes.

While visiting the house his parents lived in, they stumble upon something that totally shocks them. Join Harry and his friends for an adventure of a lifetime as they battle Death Eaters, confused and angry parents, Voldemort, love, an angry Mrs. Weasley, and more.
(Takes place during Harry’s supposed 7th year)

***Major Deathly Hallows Spoilers***
Do not read if you haven’t read the book yet.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death

Word count: 4955 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
01/23/09 Updated: 03/18/09


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/11/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Awakening

Aww jeez stop there will ya? Gosh you better write more or particuraly bad reviews will mysteriously appear here if you get my drift. Write more that's all I say. Wonderful but a rather nasty cliffie.

 

Summary:

Every reader of myths knows that Cupid is not always content with spreading love; occasionally he drinks a bit too much, and then he delights in pranks.


Cupid's latest prank is to pair up a former DA member and the son of a Death Eater. Susan Bones and Theodore Nott are both Trainee Healers at St. Mungo's Hospital for Magical Maladies and Injuries. The trouble starts when, on the first day of the four-day Valentine's celebration at St. Mungo's, each suddenly starts feeling differently about the other. With the prejudices left over after the war, can they sort everything out?

I am minnabird of Hufflepuff house, and this is my entry for the Cupid Gone Crazy challenge.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 7716 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/20/09 Updated: 02/22/09


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 05/22/09 Title: Chapter 1: Reason and Love: an Improbable Fiction

Well that was a heck of a long story. These may are may not make sense to you, I find I have that effect on people. Basically what I said was that was one long chapter. Now comes Miss Critical ( Your going to loooove her, with total sarcastic coating on every word, again may not make sense...deal with it. Now you have completly forgotton what I said at the beginning and you have togo back and re-read it.) I found that love part of the story was rushed. The spent most of the chapter trying to deny and aviod the love. Suddenly hes confronting her. Bing. Bong. Boom. The story is done. I found that slightly annoyong. Also I found that ( oh cool in this little prewritting thinger found and found are lined up! Felt I had to share that with you) the love sing was a bit short. I anticipated more stalling than that, but the where just like "I love you" ( I admit the stuttered which was good) " I love you too!" *The begin to snog* anyway not making fun of your story ( Your thinking a bit too late for that pal) I enjoyed it. I'm just handing out mean tacky comments, that people call my "opinions". The word opinions is in parenthisis since mostly people usaully ignore my wonderful, sarcastic, whitty ( *snort* yeah right) comments on their story ( ditto). Anyway wonderful book if not rushed.
-Windy the UnWitty

Author's Response: Heh. It was a bit needfully rushed between a) immediate love. b) one-shot-ness and c) a deadline, alas. Or maybe I'm just making excuses? x.x Probably. Thank you for the honest opinion though, always more helpful later on than the gushy reviews. (I have to admit that this was my first attempt at romance. Another excuse. :/)

 

Chasing the Scoop! by Equinox Chick
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary:

Two reporters. One Story.


Lee Jordan, former Potterwatch stalwart has been reduced to working for Sourcery Sounds Radio. When Digby Smyth says jump – Lee says ‘How high?’ What he wants is his own radio station again but first he must travel to Beauxbatons Ecole de Magic to report on the Triwizard Tournament.

Lavender Brown is the best the Daily Prophet has. She’s made it because she’s bloody good at her job despite the reputation that has followed her from her Hogwarts days. She’s looking forward to reporting on every aspect of the Tournament – especially when a former crush appears.

This is the story of two reporters following one story – The Triwizard Cup at Beauxbatons.

I am Equinox Chick reporting for Hufflepuff in the Second Task of the Triwizard Tournament.

I'm not JK Rowling but I doubt you're shocked by that particular scoop

Thank you Alyssa (Harry4lif) for beat'ing this story.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 2601 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
04/27/09 Updated: 04/27/09


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 04/30/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Chasing the Scoop

Nice nice loved it good start can't seew where this is going yet, but it looks good. Victore Weasly Tri Wizard Touramant. Sounds exciting. Thanks for the reminder I've been planning to write a story with the triwizard tournament and I forgot that they could be at diffrent places.

Author's Response: I need to get back to this fic, don't I. Lavender is becoming a bit of an obsession - LOL. Thanks for the review. Carole xxx

 

Je Suis En Vie by James And Lily 4eva
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 26]

Summary: It was a brand new day in a brand new world, and Harry Potter, just like the rest of the Wizarding World, didn't know how to begin living life again. This, above all, is his story. A story of rebuilding. H/G, R/Hr.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 10552 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Published:
05/01/09 Updated: 10/02/09


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 05/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Augh! What do mean by that leaving us there like that. Write on write on. Let me remind you, what I think is the truth. Prolouges are really just crap ( a.k.a. a way to hook the reader. Let me get this to you that's what the summerys for. Really if your going to write this at all, put it in the first chapter when you actually have something to go with that filler) unless the actually explain something that happened a. in a prior book meaning this is the sequal or b. something an important part of the story but too short to include. This was a hooker/filler. But it is without a doubt a hooker. I'm hooked keep writing.

 

I Still Remember by jenny b
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary: As kids, they were best friends. Practically inseperable, climbing trees every day at the Potters. It was always them. Teddy and Victoire.

But things change. And so do people. They grow up, move on. Make new friends, and forget all about lazy summers spent sitting in treetops. For a while.

But it doesn't take much to bring the memories back. And Teddy is determined to do just that.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1897 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/02/09 Updated: 05/09/09


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 05/21/09 Title: Chapter 1: I Still Remember

Yay! Victoire and Teddy! You don't see a lot of these fictions. I am however determined to write one eventually. And of course now Victoire is going to love to climb trees so thanks a lot. I probably shouldn't read these or my characters will be shaped for me. Sigh, of course I still need to finish naming the teachers. Anway cute little Romance thinger. Keep writing.

Author's Response: Thank you muchly, my dear! And good luck with your fic. ^_^

 

Never Ever by Black-Sand
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Never and ever are two simple words sometimes overlooked, but putting them together means something permanent. Never ever is a phrase that shouldn’t be said unless you mean it. The question is: does George mean it enough to never ever stop from following it through?

George/OC

Thank you, AlexPotter, for being my beta.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 8190 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/09/09 Updated: 09/20/09


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 05/21/09 Title: Chapter 2: 2. Safe Haven, Not So Safe

This is my favriote kind of romance. Where one person hates they other person, and the other person likes the other person, then the other person falls for the guy they hate, only I don't like with Hermione, and Draco so much, blech. Though this sort of plot is obvious, it's also amusing to watch. Keep it up.

-Windy

Author's Response: G'day My bad day is steadily getting better and you are one of the factors. i'm glad you liked the story and I agree with you about the Draco/Hermione plot, it's just wrong!! Thank you for saying that the romance is good and the plot's amusing, I just hope it's not to obvious. Thanks. ...xXxLove SandyxXx...

 

Summary: Ron and Hermione have always had a special connection. But mix in a fake French girl, a handful of dares, a cup of Hogsmeade trips, half a pound of Malfoy, and a pinch of detentions, there is definitely some trouble to be anticipated.

A look into Ron and Hermione's fifth-year minds to experience the spazzness and crazyism in first person.

Disclaimer: Sadly, I am not J. K. Rowling. I'm not even famous. Heck, I only have one story up on Mugglenet. But I'm still glad I can walk into J. K.'s world. And tap-dance back out again.

Additional warnings: May contain fluff, excessive randomness (AU), and minor plot twists!

I would also appreciate if NikkiSue/Nicole could mod this for me :]



Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 11212 Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/17/09 Updated: 01/21/10


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 05/19/09 Title: Chapter 1: I Dare You

This was really good I liked. I mean its a bit over the edge with all those "sigh but he''ll never love me that way" I just see this repeat a lot. Though I do love your impression of Ron it's head on. Though Hermione I'm not sure of, though I must admit it's pretty good. Another thing that slightly bugs me is the way they will go into this trance and think the other is perfect ( which I don't think thats how they would look at it, exactly, they basiclly grew up together they know each other has faults). Than suddenly there calling each other brute. Also I think Hermione might spaz a bit more on the detention. By the by you didn't mention Snapes name when he hands out detion. Though everyone here in crazed Potter fan world knows who that is if this was a real book it would smart to mention Snape's actual name. Sigh I just looked over what I wrought and it makes me feel like some grumpy old hermit ( YES I finally remembered what a person who shns people is I've been using hobbo and hobbit) who shuns other peoples work. Then again just be thankful I'm not one of those people who looks at your grammer,Pulls out the flame thrower and shreds it to bits. Thats what my sister is and its dang annoying. I feel kind of stupid sitting here shredding your story to bits without one of my own, kinda like a child correcting her teacher's grammer mistake ( GASP I would never do that, I'm way to shy and I can spot a grammer mistke as easily as I recite the whole tale of Oddesy.). Over all it was good ( Your looking over what I have written and thinking " Oh, sure it was good, if it was so good why did you correct every square inch of it!!!" aloud you snort sarcasticlly you know have to go back to the beginning of what I wrote to figure out what I said before this break) so keep writing I can't wait for the next part. Shoot for the Mily Way ( and bring oreos)

-Windy the talkative child who never shuts her yap box.

Author's Response: Heheheee. Thank you. Yes Hermione is hard for me to write and gets a little bit OOC for me sometimes. Thanks for the review! Chapter 2 is in the queue and Chapter 3 is being betaed....Oh man is that a job....

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/20/09 Title: Chapter 2: Detentions and Mysterious Girls

Oh dear a cliffie Tisk. Anyway yay another chapter. Really I think I almost started dancing when I saw there was two instead of one. Talk about waiting. The next wait shall not be this long I declare!!! And what I declare should most promptly come true *looks piontly, but slightly threating*. Love it Dawling ( what am i writing?) just make more soon or I will get miffed. (Isn't that a fun word miff?)

-Windy a delusional romantice ( I would suppose......BUM BUM BAAAAHHHH)

Author's Response: Lol I love reading your reviews. Chapter 3 was submitted about a day after this, so I promise the wait wont be so long. And in the chapter we'll get to see a little more of the "mysterious girl". It's definitely my least favorite chapter, but 4 will be better. (:. And I will definitely use the word miff somewhere. Lol. -Maddy(:

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 05/19/09 Title: Chapter 1: I Dare You

Wow, that review sucked. I made tons of spelling errors. Also most of it is me ranting about hobbos. You must think I'm a country bumkin. Sorry this isn't a review and I got your hopes up oops. Anyway wonderful story. See its kinda of a review.

-Windy the girl who can't and mostly never will be able to spell

Author's Response: Thanks! Check out my next cahpter when it's up!

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 10/21/09 Title: Chapter 4: Strange Dreams and Wild Common Rooms

SSorry I took tre long. (tre is a funny word isn't it) I love that part "well it all started fifteen years ago, when my mum and dad got married-" that was hilarious I also most say that that part were Nevillle answered the question I felt like saying. "And then Ron knew something wrong, very wrong, Hermione had missled her hand into the air probably amking a tiny sonic boom she had only thrust her hand into the air with the urgancy like a kid that had to go to the bathroom. And on top of all that she hadn't even been called on. Ron hoped she wasn't too heartbroken, this must be the first she had not been called on in a class that wasn't snape, or because she'd already answered four in a row. You know, now that ROn looked at her she looked a little glum, and angry. She seemed to be stabbing that plant pretty hard, I hope we don't find Neville in the hospital wing today."

Wow that was a completly random, and not funny dialouge by yours truly. I'm glad I'm always around to submit weird weird things into a story's review list. You got to give yourself a hand this is the first time a story inspired my to right dialouge. COngrats!. Also give hand to crazy people ! (the reaction of people reading this review Oo0, or O-0, or O-o, or 3;0 (that be the weird cowboy winking at me while being weirded out, or the same thing with a toupee)
HAve you had your weirdness fill yet? I suppose I can give you one more weird thing (even if your on your knees at the computer screen going please NO MORE!!)

Windy; MINI WON-WONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *runs of screaming into the....not sunset......hmm.......into the ocean hoping to escape the mini rons on broomstick dive bombing her telling her to stay out of his story, he's also doing some nasty spells for Hermione who would be here if she wasn't afraid of hieghts. For Harry ron is....Windy stops wondering why eaxctly Harry isn't here
Windy: Why isn't HArry here?
Mini Won-Wons(in unison): He's probably snogging Gin-Hey he probably snogging Ginny! *the mini rons all fly off to go beat up their best friend who is in fact blissfully unware of this whole arguement and is stuck in Snapes detention (for fighting with seamus) sorting through the good and the bad dead worms.
*WIndy laughs as she watches ron fly away. then she trys to whistle, and no sound comes out.*
Windy: Dang it how come I can never do that. GELDON!!!! *nothing happens* Sigh I can't believe he wants me to call him this. *shakes her head in dismay* BILLY BOB JOE!!! *a magic carpet appears and whisks her away, Windy flies happily away smiling at a full reviews weirdness until she hears tiny screaming. She looks down to find a mini hermione running in paniced circles. WIndy shakes her head and lifts hermione onto her palm.
WIndy: What do you want?
Mini hermy: No that i have your attention I have a couple questions/accusations. WHy are you so big? *windy shrugs* DOn't you know that having a magic carpet is illegal? Windy nods* Shame on you!!! Hermione suddenly smiles* Okay I'm good now take me home.
Windy: Can't you apparate??*mini hermione sahkes her head* Windy sgrumbles her way down to hogwarts , and drops hermione on the ground. Suddenly ministry officials appear and head toward Windy
WIndy: Well crap. *windy thens smiles and dispeers in a puff of pink smoke because she remembers that this only a story.

Well crap this is a review!!!!! I LOVE IT I LOVE LOVE IT I LOVE IT! *faints with from the awesomeness of this story pops up again* I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT* faints again* repeapts 20 times
There it's a decentish review now. I'm SO sorry I get side tracked like that! really next review for next chapter will- HOLY MOTHER OF COW THERES ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!!! *runs frantically to the submit button so she can go on to the next chapter, she is in such a hurry that she only leaves behind the word
-Inwy

Author's Response: Windy!!!! Yes, I know what you're saying about Hermione not being called on. But I think the teachers need to let other kids answer, too. But I am very honored you wrote me some dialogue. Oh, the thing about whistling? I TOTALLY can't either. I used to be able too. Darn braces. I'm sorry you disappeared in a puff of pink smoke. Lol, yes chapters four and five are both out now, and I'm sorry to say we're about half-way through the story :(. I think four or five more chapters. Btw, you signed our name as Inwy. Also, when the story's over, keep checking my author page. I might have a surprise for you kids ;).

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 10/21/09 Title: Chapter 5: Rough Punishments and Snogging in the Library

Aggggghhhhhhh! CLIFFIE I CURSE YOU FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway this was fastenating. THough I already know what happend with the before scene. Ron was minding his own business suddenly Avril the evil appears and begins to strike conversation with ROn. Naive Naive little Ron continues with the conversation. Then suddenly she says you know I reallly like you.. She thens proceeds to leap upon Ron and snog him ron struggles, then hermione pops up and drops her bag and runs away crying her eyes out. Ron with a show of garguntum strength throws Avril off himself. Upon which she hits her head on a chair ten feet from where she was snogging ron, she now has a concussion and goes into a coma for ten weeks. ROn spots Hermione's bag seeing it as an excuse to run after her. He begins do so shouting things like HERMION SHE CORNERED ME! WAIT! HEEEEEERMMMMIIIIIIIOOOOOONNNNNEEEE! Until Draco Malfoy hears the loverbirds and showing smarts that never seem to apear for actual schoolwork deduces wait happened. HE then spots Hermione bawling her eyes out and grabs her and waits. Hermione can not hex him into oblivion because she left her wand in her blag, she cannot punch him because he put a the body bind charm on her as soon as ROn comes around the corner Malfoy kisses hermione. They both pass out from the sheer awfulness and wrongness of the kiss, thought malfoy has a smirk on his face. Ron heartbroken rushes over to Hermione, while "accidently" crushing malfoys nose. He gently picks up Hermione. Suddenly she comes to. The both say that they were ambushed and forgive each other. They begin to snog.
THE END
P.s. After ten weeks in a comma Avril wakes up and is so behind in her work that she drops and spends the rest of her life working at Mcdonalds

O.k. O.k. that probably won't happen. I mean theres still the sixth chapter so they don't get over it that fast. ANd Malfoy probably won't weasel or should I say ferret his way into the story. Plus if Avril were to drop she'd probably become a model. Hurrumph. I really can' wait to read whats next. I'm sad to her that to your total reviews this will in fact be and odd number I just don't like odd numbers

-Windy who apparently doesn't like odd numbers, and the even number of fourteen because even though four is my favroite number 14 is seven plus seven and I dislike fourteen a lot, sadly next I will become fourteen so crapula to that, Humph, stupid fourteen, stupid cliffie, stupid lack of ability to drive go karts.
-WIndy again because her last windy was a tad bit long, as well as her review/not review you know what his one is getting long to so...

-WIndy of long not really reviews, reviews NOOO it's two lines lOng must do another one..

-WIndy of....FLOOGie WIndy of Floogie!

-Yes One Line I ROCK

-WIndy again just because it's fun

Author's Response: Windy! Rofl I laughed when I read this because part of your first paragraph was right! Shhhhh..... But maybe Malfoy WILL "ferret" his way into the story.... Hmmmm.... It's kind of funny, too, I always thought of Avril as the model type(:. I'm sorry you cana't drive go-karts. Lol and thanks for your review and all 5 of your signatures --Maddy(:

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 02/04/10 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue - 10 years later

I'MMMM BAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCCKKKK! Oh my gosh I've been gone for so long! *sobs* my little story (well your story but lets not be picky) has gone and grown up without meeeeeeeeeeeee! *breaks down completely. then randomly pops up* I'm so proud of you Maddy (in like friend proud of friend for finishing something...finally) This story turned out so good. and the ten years jump ahead was totally unexpected but perfect for this story none the less. I'm sorry I wasn't there to comment on it all of the way but I got fed up with mugglenet for awhile (I know what you're thinking. *gasp*). It was just I was sick of not being able to register my stories because of it's bad grammer. Plus I can never stay with one sight for too long anyway. But I'm back and all of my favriotest stories have just been updated or *sniffle* completed! Anyway if you want o see that Teddy Lupin fic that I may or may not have (but probably have) complianed to you about. My username there is Tilly of Silly. Just saying you don't have to. Though I wouuld love it if you did! Geez can't I give a single compliment without advertising my self...silly of course I can't being unobvious about what I really want people to do would be totally out of character. And would in fact make me slightly less pig headed and we couldn't have that now could we? *continues to chide herself* Anyway this really was a spectacular read. I'm still searching for a beta if you know any none busy ones (stupid advertising wheres lets not be a jerk spray when you need it?) not they really need to be unbusy because I'll probably send my chapters in here once a year (or maybe only a 11 and a half months). Anyway just saying. So Do have any other cute adorable awesme, hilarious other stories for me to compliment/advertise/be totally weird on? Just tell me if you need some crazy support and I'm there.

-Windy of Waverly Place (*sigh* not really but I think if I was I would be friends with Harper. Unless you've never scene the show then just pretend it's one of my weird sign off like WIndy wuvs Walruses. They are so teeny and cute *sarcasm heavily used here except may be the cute part, but only in stuffed animal form! *WOnders why she's diffending herself on matters of walrus cuteness. Decides to skip away singing "walrus oh walrus oh wear is thy bucket" * *this song is not actually patented we're not liablly for any dissapointment in the mater of it not existing*)

-WIndy who wuvs walruses (and that it fot tonight folks buh-bye!)

Author's Response: Windy! You are back! Ands it's okay to be frustrated with your stories for errors, but all you have to do is click that little link that says "Beta Forums", make an account and find a beta to help you edit your story! And what site is this fanfiction on (this Tilly of Silly...)? As for betas, just check the forums, I guarentee it's all there. Plus you can message me anytime(:. As for other fics, I don't have any up yet but check my username once in awhile cuz I do have some stuff I'm working on, I'm just slowwwwww. I will definitely miss your reviews though and hope hope hope that you make a beta boards account so we can chat! --Maddy(:

 
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