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I'm a thirteen year old person who is execeptinally weird, and who can't spell. Also I'm trying to bring into being a Teddy Lupin fic. Ummmmmmmm why is it that everyone else has something to say about themselves but I don't? I like reading romance novels. ( Which let me assure you bugs me to no end.) I also like to where lip gloss ( which also bugs me because it deflats the whole tom boy thing.) though I rarely wear it! And why am I telling you this? I mean really if you have any ideas say something. I'm mean and make nasty comments on song fics most of the time but I will most likely end up doing one. I'm also crazy, weird, and something. These qualities do nothing to get me far in society. I also love talking in a very bad british accent. So obviously I live somewhere, but it's not Britan. Otherwise I would have a completely good British accent. Instead of the totally Un-British accent I have. I also like to sing. Which also doesn't get me far in society. O.K. I want all you kiddies to enjoy my non-exciestant books, of nonexciestant origans, go on you'll love them! ( Ah I belive you've found my old friend crazy, or lunatic I can't tell which, they're so alike you know?) I've (slowly every so slowly) just picked up on this if you cut lunatic in half it turns into Luna like Luna Lovegood, whose is ( my role model, surprise surprise) esscentally a LUNATIC! Boy am I slow.


Windy Forever crazed and forever yours ( that sounds really mushy if you cut out the first part)

P.S. Can you do P.S.'s on an autbiography? Wellit doesn't really matter since I'm already doing it I suppose.

P.S.S. I want you (if you have the time, or extremely bored, which is slowly turning into insanity, join the club) to look at my reviews, and convay some way to tell me if you find them amusing. That is all
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Sirius: The Black Knight by Pussycat123
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 378]

Summary: Sirius was killed by Bellatrix. When he lands headlong at his dead best friend’s feet, he is a little perplexed. All is soon explained, however. He has reached Heaven, and James is here to welcome him. Before he can begin to get used to life in Heaven, he must first “watch his life” on the large screen in front of him, because it will help him understand things better. And so, that’s what he does. From the very beginning, to the very end. You too, can follow him through the ups and downs. Follow him through the highs and the lows. Follow him through the laughter, the pain, and the romance. Follow him through the story of his life. This fic is a tribute to Sirius Black. It is not all marauder-era, although a bulk of it is, and that is why it’s in this category.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death

Word count: 60481 Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/31/06 Updated: 03/02/07


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 08/13/09 Title: Chapter 21: The Beginning

I feel it is impossible not to write a review, so here it is enjoy:

That was incredible!! Yay I liked all of it. But here are my few questions and complaints (oh yes Always some of that):
One why did you call Sirius "The Black Knight", Huh? A tad bit confusing.

I'm not sure about this but I think alice longbottom, and Lily were best friends, or maybe I've just read too many fan fics.

I also think that maybe there should have been a bit more time in "home" Like how Sirius reacted to Tonks, and Remus being together or how he followed Harry through the rest of his journey. Or what it felt like to be whisked back to earth by the ressurection stone, and how it felt to watch Harry die. Search for him in "home" and then relief of seeing him go back. And maybe how Lily gets a bit miffed that Harry goes to Dumbledore instead of her and so on and so forth, excetera excetera. Maybe you could add on a chapter or something or is once it is completed is it doomed to be completed for ever. Maybe like a however old this book is anniversary bonus chapter.

Anyhoodledoodle that was awesome I even forgot for awhile that this was all leading up to heaven. It was great about how you explained the things that were missing .

Also I find that at some points you were a little bit less than specific. I mean I know you couldn't dwell on tiny details too much but don't you think that Sirius would reacte a bit more to a dementor's kiss than "booger"? Don't you think he'd be a tad bit more pleased at escaping I would have gone through a bit more detail on some seens that are inspiring like that also when he first see Harry.

I'm a bit nitpicky on the plot of stories. Thankfully I'm not nit -picky on the grammer, I mean I'm only human. It was awesome your a really great author, and I hope you check back on this once in a while just to read the reviews. They might have some good advice, and compliments of course.

-Windy who is a plot point ( Yeah well that better not make sense to you and if it does? well thencontact me I'd like to know why, cause I sure don't get it)

Author's Response: Well, I can probably answer almost all of your questions/criticisms with the excuse that I wrote this aged 13-14. "The Black Knight"? Who knows why I used that. Possibly because I liked that it was a bit of a play on words (or rather, names) and so I used it without thinking too deeply into it. Or maybe I was making some kind of statement to do with his heroism yet undeniable dark side. As for Alice Longbottom, I really don't know if they were supposed to be friends or not. Well, I'm sure they probably were when they were in the order, but I don't think they were ever specifically described as best friends at school, and certainly they hadn't been at the time this was written. As for more detail, I absolutely agree with you. It's one of the many reasons that reading this fic a few years on is so incredibly painful (although I'm still glad you liked it, I'm just incredibly nit-picky too, especially when it comes to my own writing). The extra chapter won't be happening, but you can assume all those things DID happen. But I really didn't want to dwell on heaven too much, I wanted that to be kind of final. At least, I think I did. I can't really remember why, though (BTW, you really don't have to refer to it as "home"; I hate that my 13/14 year old self thought that was a great idea. It's a horrible idea). Finally, the more detailed explanations in later chapters probably would have been good, but at the time I was very self-conscious about writing directly in JKR's plots, and basically wanted them other with quickly. A shabby excuse, I know, but like I said - 13/14. Nowadays I wouldn't even attempt to write a fic like this, but hey, we learn from our mistakes. To conclude (wow, this must be one of the longest responses I've ever written ...) thank you very much for a very thorough review, and remember: I was only young! ;D

 

Cupid's Liquid Arrows by moonbeamfairy16
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 153]

Summary: What happens when Fred and George test a love potion on Harry, Ron, and Hermione? Trouble happens of course!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 12545 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/17/06 Updated: 11/04/06


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 08/13/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow that was trialing for me to read. I almost didn't read it because it was so stinken embaressing. Sadly Schmerg got me interested so I couldn't quit. Great ending yay Happy happy joy joy.

-WIndy who doesn't like embaressment which makes this story a perfectly bad choice but which she endured anyway because it interested her

THE END

 

Senses by Gryffinpuff
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 569]

Summary: Sense: a word of so many meanings. This is a story about senses. The common sense notion of self preservation that is lost when friends are in need, the senses of the body that can be damaged so easily, and the intuitive senses of the heart that tell you when things have changed. R/Hr focused with a little bit of H/G, not a lot of fluff, with rotating views between the characters on a truly horrific day.



Quicksilver Quills Runner-Up - Best Romance, Canon

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 44591 Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/01/06 Updated: 05/01/07


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/22/09 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue

Ahh that was sweet. I really almost reviewed youu badly fro the ending to the last chapter. I sorry to hear that Mrs.Weasley died, but it was a nice ploy to make us think that this was Hermiones funeral. All in all simply Marvelous. That was great. The tension was really good. I'M SO GLAD HERMY IS ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-WIndy who hates it when Hermy dies

 

Summary: After taking different paths a couple of years ago, Ron and Hermione find each other again, both of them wondering if their separation was a mistake. This applies especially to Hermione, who is leading an empty, unhappy life next to her fiance.

UPDATE (12/7/11): Newest chapter posted. Let us hope next one doesn't take me a year.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Sexual Situations

Word count: 84935 Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Published:
08/06/06 Updated: 12/07/11


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 09/05/09 Title: Chapter 17: Uncertainty

Wait was he dead or did he just leave? Slightly confused here. And if he was dead than how in the world di he die?Confusing confusing. Yes yes fine. Micheal isn't a bad person, and theres only minimal reasons to hate him. Hurrumph. Hes just an idiot. O.k. so hes a regretful idoit and feels bad about his idiotcy. Grr. Still don't like him that much but your right there no need to hate him *mumble* only dislike him strongly *end mumble*. All in all good. I totally wasn't expecting the blind part. I expected brain damage actually. You know I just re-read those last few lines so now I'm pretty sure he's dead. To show respect I''l give a couple seconds of mourning: Micheal you weren't really that bad of person, you just made stupid mistake, rest in peace." Wow I impress myself that mourning speech wasn't even the snarky! Can't wait to see what happens, and how his really nice girlfriend ends not being his girlfriend. So sorry for her by the way. Hope she just randomly dumpd Ron, and no hard feeling on her part.

-Windy who is feeling slight sympathy towards MIcheal slight

Author's Response: He died. I thought you would have gotten that but a lot of people have been confused. Hmm. Maybe it was my cryptic writing... And no, Michael wasn't that bad :)

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/13/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Right Decision?

My opinion of of Michael, and what Hermione should do:

RUN HERMIONE RUN AWAY FROM MICHAEL! HES AN EGOTISTACAL FREAK AND HE'S TRYING TO KILL YOU! RUN TO YOUR STRONG AUROR WHO WILL PROTECT YOU! AND THEN KISS RON JUST TO MAKE MICHAEL MAD! RUN TO RON HERMIONE RUN!

well o.k. maybe he's not trying to kill her but the rest is true!
-Windy who is very suspicous of this "michael" person

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/13/09 Title: Chapter 8: The Wedding of the Year

Well if this is the Wedding of the year I can't wait to see the Divorce of the year. Cheers!

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/13/09 Title: Chapter 13: Flowers

*cough* Ron*cough cough* this is *cough* a *cough* Ron & * cough cough* Hermione fic *cough* right? *hack cough* Wonderful chapter ( did you like my subtle hint?)

Author's Response: Lol this is one of my fav reviews.

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/13/09 Title: Chapter 14: Everything She Needs

Aww you did get my hint even if it was after you wrote this chapter.

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/13/09 Title: Chapter 15: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words

I can just imagene the conversation
Hermione: You know what I'm a really nice person, and if I haven't been in love with Ron I would probably forgive you. But since I am I'm going to divorce, and take Jane away. MWHAHAHAHAHA!
( Ahhhh such a nice mental picture, though I'm not sure about the evil laugh)
As you can see I'm a great fan of Micheal.

-Windy the slightly deranged

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/13/09 Title: Chapter 16: Failure

Oh well that gets micheal out of the picture. Now it's only That girl who is really nice, ands dating Ron. I hope theres a way you could do it without killing, giving her a mental disorder, or breaking her heart. Yes I really really don't like Michael. Even in his reformed self. Or mentally disabled self. Write soon!

-Windy who dislikes Michael

Author's Response: Lol. Thanks for all ur reviews! And don't hate on Michael that much. He's not that evil!

 

Letters by belladonna_tb
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 49]

Summary: Ginny never expected for things to turn out the way that they did after Voldemort's defeat. Who knew that Harry would push away? Who knew that he was capable of walking right out of her life? Yet still he did, without a single word to her for five years.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 16405 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/30/06 Updated: 01/04/07


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/09/09 Title: Chapter 3: The Beginning of the End

I love you.....Harry. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That still doesn't express the glee I felt at the piont I almost rolled around laughing over over again on the floor. Yay I love this it was ultimately wonderful. He I loved the whole part praticlly. I didn't not however love Eric. But since he made that whole I love Harry line possible I forgive his excistance. That was a extremely satisfying ending. Shoot for the mily way! (and bring oreos)

-Windy who is pleasently pleased

P.S. Wow I just realised the please comes from pleasent. I'm waaaaaay to slow on the pick up of vocab.

 

To Return To Life by Gmariam
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 27]

Summary: A young woman meets her love one last time before she can move on and return to life.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 2030 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/28/07 Updated: 02/28/07


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh that was so sad, I almost cried. As in as I type the tears well up in my eyes. Oh look at that I've squeezed them out. Sadly there not big enough to run down my face, I have to be super caught for that, I probably would have been super caught up if I hadn't quit every two minutes because someone was looking over my shoulder.If I wasn't so choked up I'd tell you off for making Ron die, oh well I'll do it later. Anyway this is the first time I've cried because of what I've read on here, thats a great accomplishment. Be proud of this one, even if it does kill Ron.

-Windy who is choked up at the moment

Author's Response: Aren't you glad DH didn't really turn out that way for Ron? ;) Thank you for reading this story! *hands over tissues* I appreciate the kind review. I'm glad you liked the story--even if it did make you cry. ;) Thanks again! ~Gina :)

 

I'm Not That Girl by nikkiolapotter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 42]

Summary: With Harry dead, and Hermione's true love marrying another girl, how will she cope? Will she ever come to the realization that she might acutally not be that girl for Ron Weasley?

Based on 'I'm Not That Girl' from the beautiful musical, 'Wicked'.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 3067 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/24/07 Updated: 05/01/07


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Not That Girl

Yay happy ending! I was getting scared for a second. I mean this song does not end well, but this story did! I also loved the quotes, and stuff like the rose, and the pearl, and dancing through life. I love this song, actually I love the whole musical. WICKED BOOM WICKED BOOM WICCCCCCKKKKKKKEDDDDDDD! (end of musical). As you can see my imagenation knows now bounds, lovely one shot thinger.

-Windy Wicked lover

 

Killer Instincts by Ginny Weasley Potter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 228]

Summary: London: Four murders have taken place under bizarre circumstances, for what seems to be an equally bizarre reason.

Harry, a happily wedded man with a wonderful wife and a cute daughter, is an Auror at the Ministry of Magic and is now given a new case to solve with Ron and four other Aurors. Incidentally, the four Aurors include Ginny, Harry’s ‘schoolboy crush’; and it turns out to be much more than a crush when Harry sees her again. What’s more is that Harry is working upon a case that seems to connect to him directly. And once again, it opens up old fears: fears of losing loved ones.

Ron, on the other hand, seems to be tired of Hermione. Tempers are running high and fights are breaking out more often than usual. Are they really falling apart? Or can they sort this out before it is too late?

Then there is the case itself. Who is trustworthy, and who is not? Who is deadly enough to murder four people in cold blood?

Indulge into the gut-wrenching action, combined with warm romance and tingling suspense; while I tell you a story of love, ambition and obsession… a story of what those killer instincts can do. EDIT: MAJOR revamping going on, with regard to plot, characterisation, and general style of writing. I would urge you not to read this until I've removed this notice because I wasn't very good six years ago, and this is as bad as I was. *Places traffic cones*

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 130889 Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/27/07 Updated: 10/03/10


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/12/09 Title: Chapter 11: Uh-Oh!

Ron ruler of all prats, wait ago man wait ago

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! :)

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/21/09 Title: Chapter 14: Halloween Scare

AAUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was not nice. YOU NO KILL HERMY!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Windy says no kill kill hermy

Author's Response: :D Sure, dear, you'll know about Hermione in due time. Just stay on! :)

 

Ron's Best Friend by lucilla_pauie
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 54]

Summary: PRE-DH Happiness and love can be learned from the strangest of packages. You just have to open your eyes and untie the ribbons.

Ron and Hermione discover this in a little bundleor ballof joy and hair.

~This is especially written for my mongrel, Jego, and all doggies and dog-lovers in the HP Universe.




Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 13220 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
05/23/07 Updated: 06/22/08


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: First Caper: Bingo!

Puppy, and whats with the diamond?

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/04/09 Title: Chapter 4: Fourth Caper: Fetch!

I'm confused about that last part explain?

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/04/09 Title: Chapter 5: Fifth Caper: Bad dog!

Hee hee, that was funny

 
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/04/09 Title: Chapter 6: Sixth Caper: In the doghouse!

Ooh what happens next? I can't wait write more write more.

 

Not Another Row... by Lalalalatina
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: Hermione froze at the door and whirled around. She didn’t look angry anymore, but was instead looking rather miserable. Tears were leaking out from under her eyes and leaving wet trails down her pallid cheeks. Though she looked hurt, she still managed to spit out heatedly, “Maybe I will write to Viktor. Maybe I need a friend who doesn’t have such a thick skull.”

“Well, fine!” roared Ron, his hands no longer in fists but clenching and unclenching much like Crabbe and Goyle’s would when they would try to look particularly menacing. “You should tell him to come over and then you could take turns snogging him and McLaggen!”


Ron and Hermione are at it again, but is this the chance they need to break the ice and reveal their true feelings... or are they just too stubborn to seize the oppotunity?

Takes place during the trip home at the end of HBP.

(A R/Hr one-shot with just a dash of H/G.)
... (8/21/09) Over 1000 reads since they added this read count thing, which was a long while AFTER I published! Wow.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2561 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/13/07 Updated: 07/17/07


Reviewer: Windy Silvermist Signed
Date: 06/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What do you mean not another row? It's ALWAYS another row with Ron & Hermione!!! Even if they ARE madly in love with each other. And WHY do I keep captilazing the second word in EVERY sentance.

-WIndy who enjoyed this but is slightly captilisation addiction

Author's Response: Oh dear I'm never on here and I haven't submitted in the longest time; imagine my surprise when I saw a new review!! Thanks you so much! And yes, Ron and Hermione are always arguing, and yet they are so cute together. ^_^ Thanks for the feedback Windy!

 
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