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Real name: Gayla Ber
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Still a huge fan of Harry Potter. My twins are now nine years old and they have started to fall in love with the stories. We have seen all 8 movies and we took them to Wizarding World. I have a new generation of Potterites living in my home.
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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: HP_Ber Signed
Date: 03/08/06 Title: None

I particularly liked the first chapter in which we are introduced to the characters (well, duh!) and there is a lot of subtle hints at the 'creature' coming to school, before long, it is revealed to be Remus Lupin - the quiet boy that no one would suspect. I like the way that was done - by at first, highlighting the wizarding world's common prejudice against werewolves, and then smashing that prejudice by showing Remus Lupin to be a mere boy! Well written!

 

The Lost Diary of a Muggle by Blossomlily
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: Coralie Roberts is a nineyear old Muggle. She is a witness to
the horrific scenes in the camp during the Quidditch World Cup. This is
her lost diary. Set during GoF. Oneshot

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1599 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/08/06 Updated: 01/08/06


Reviewer: HP_Ber Signed
Date: 03/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Lost Diary of a Muggle

What an absolutely interesting and fun way of observing the magical world! The mind of a 9-year-old Muggle at work during the Quidditch World Cup, at the campsite? Inspired! I thought her fear was quite well written, as well as her intrigue. I must echo the question - was her Uncle Richie a Death Eater? Or is the Skeleton mask a coincidence?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for those nice comments!!!! Uncle Richie is a nice, ordinary Muggle.. he's no Death Eater! He just happened to have a skeleton mask.. he's like that.. he loves to keep his boyhood things..lol. ~bL

Author's Response: P.S. You readers ask me such interesting questions!! Someone on another site asked me if the 'throwing rubbish' things were actually portkeys!! I said no, Britain hadn't hosted the cup the previous year, so it couldn't be like that. I'm so impressed that people can actually think of things like that.. thanks anyhow, and keep reading!! ~bL

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: HP_Ber Signed
Date: 03/09/06 Title: None

Wow! That was a great, action packed story! I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve for this fic! There were a few parts that had me a little confused, but nothing that detracted from the magic of your storytelling!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. That is really pleasing and encouraging. The next chapter should be up within a few days. Please keep reading.

 

Late Bloomer by Just Tink
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 110]

Summary: Cassandra Pralent was your typical pureblood- rich, spoiled, and prepared to go to Hogwarts as soon as she turned eleven. But Professor McGonagall delivers horrible news- Cassandra is a Squib. When she is rejected at home and at school, she is forced to accept unlikely friends. And just when Cassandra feels life is getting better, her fate becomes entwined with that of the Trio in a most sinister fashion…

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 31672 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
03/29/06 Updated: 09/05/07


Reviewer: HP_Ber Signed
Date: 03/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: The News

I enjoyed the beginning of the story, but what I didn't understand, and I'm not sure I liked, was, if Cassandra is essentially going to be a student at the school, why couldn't she arrive by train with the other students? I mean, sure, she's not taking Transfiguration or Charms, or any other classes requiring a wand, but won't she be taking Herbology and Potions and Care of Magical Creatures and the like? How come she's going two weeks early? I would have liked it if she got to go as a student and used her free time (when she would otherwise have been in wand classes) apprenticing with Filch. But otherwise, I really did enjoy it. I like your style. I felt part of the story, felt Cassandra's dread and could SEE that red highbacked chair her father was sitting in by the fire. Good job!

Author's Response: Cassandra is essentially going to school as an apprentice caretaker, not as a student. She will be taking a few classes, but they'll be scheduled around her caretaker duties, not the other way around. As for why she's going early, that will be (hopefully) clear in the next few chapters, so I don't want to give too much away... Thank you so much for the wonderful review!

 

Now I Have Everything by Just Tink
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: The big day has finally arrived. After family conflict, a war, and a werewolf attack, Bill Weasley and Fleur Delacour are getting married. a one-shot songfic to 'Now I Have Everything' from 'Fiddler on the Roof'.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1414 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/25/06 Updated: 04/29/06


Reviewer: HP_Ber Signed
Date: 11/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: Now I Have Everything

Wow! That was really good! I don't recognize the song, though I've seen Fiddler on the Roof more times than I can count, but I bet next time I see it, I'll be kicking myself!

Author's Response: It\'s the song between Hodel and Perchik, if that rings any bells... it\'s not the best known of all of them, though. Glad you liked it, and congratulations- you\'re my 100th review EVER! yay! *confetti*

 

No Time for Suspicion by nikkiolapotter
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 30]

Summary: After the final battle, everything was going just fine. Hermione and Harry were staying at the Burrow after the defeat of Voldemort. However, one day Arthur brought home two relatives around the trio's age to stay with them. Soon rage, jealousy, and insecurity filled the Burrow, and Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Ginny felt the pressure. Little did they know, they weren't the only ones. Then again, there's no time for suspicion when there's a life on the line...


Chapter 3 is in queue!

For those of you No Time for Suspicion fans, here are some minor changes that have been made to the fic:

Harry has moved in with Lavender and Neville a year after Alice is born instead of a year before.

The Weasley's cousins names are Nigel and Belle instead of Jeoffrey and Belle.


Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Dubious Consent, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse

Word count: 3619 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
09/02/06 Updated: 05/30/07


Reviewer: HP_Ber Signed
Date: 10/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

So, what did he do with the cane?

Author's Response: Tee Hee, you\'ll have to read to find out. I\'m getting ready to sent the next chapter to my beta, so you\'ll find out soon!

 

Summary: The Harry Potter Literary Storm has caused quite the sensation around the world, JK Rowling’s magnificent series of books touching the hearts of people of all ages. But what if Harry Potter was never written by JK Rowling in the first place? What if another genius was behind it?

Many thanks to the fantastic people who nominated this story for the Quicksilver Quills: Best Humour Fiction award. I'm truly flattered.

Chapter Seven, Part Five is now up - yes, that is the final chapter!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 37366 Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/10/06 Updated: 01/05/07


Reviewer: HP_Ber Signed
Date: 10/25/06 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five, Part One: A Troublesome Flashback

Your story is one I should never read at work! Good thing my boss is away and I'm reading it at lunch! My giggles would filter out otherwise! I'm very much looking forward to Chapter Five, Part Two!

Author's Response:

^^ I have the funniest mental image of a mad-looking word place and a bizarro boss, none of which is in the least relevant...

Thanks so much for reviewing; the rest of part two will be submitted as soon as my challenge submission is accepted... *Waits, giving a pretty decent impression of patience*

 

Summary: When Harry Potter is battling the Dark Lord, Voldemort, will he sacrifice everything so there will be peace in the Wizarding World for his friends and more generations to come? Yes.

But what will happen... If Harry realizes that it has all be a dream?

All reviews will be responded to. Thanks for reading and enjoy!


Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1744 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/30/06 Updated: 11/03/06


Reviewer: HP_Ber Signed
Date: 11/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: Wicked Dream.

Sooo, he knows all about Hogwarts, and now he's finding out about it all over again? Um. Well, I won't say it wasn't entertaing, because it was, but the ending was sort of - odd.

Author's Response: Well, i kind of meant for it to be that way. You know how JK is always messing with our minds.. i just thought that that would be a good plot twist for her to end the book that way. Thanks for your review!

 

A Past Reclaimed by nuw255
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1455]

Summary: Sequel to A Stolen Past. Please read that story first, as this one really won’t make sense if you don’t.

Harry Potter has rejoined the Wizarding world after a year-long absence, but still has no memory of his time at Hogwarts. Will he ever get his memory back? Will he be able to pass his classes without it? And most importantly, will he ever be able to defeat Lord Voldemort? Read on as the last of the mysteries introduced in A Stolen Past are finally revealed.

This is a story of friendship and mystery, with a healthy dose of H/G thrown in for good measure.

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 129677 Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/15/06 Updated: 03/17/07


Reviewer: HP_Ber Signed
Date: 11/20/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Sport Broomstick Repair

I keep checking for updates! This is a great story!

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to have another chapter ready soon.

 

The One Left Behind by Padfoot11333
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Victoria Shacklebolt has grown up as Toria Andrews, a common girl who has never heard anything about magic before in her life. Toria was adopted at birth, and she has always had to face questions about who she really is. But once Toria turns eleven and strange things begin to happen, she must face the facts about her real parents, how she happened, and why someone who would give anything to save the Wizarding World would let her go so easily.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Substance Abuse

Word count: 1867 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
08/14/12 Updated: 08/27/12


Reviewer: HP_Ber Signed
Date: 08/28/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I want more!! This is a great story. I look forward to seeing what more you have on this!!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like the story! I'm currently working on the second chapter, it should be up within the month.

Lily xxx

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