i dont feel like writing the whole thing so if u care then see my mugglespace (edith longbottom) ironic?
u are a good writer but i dont like the plot much
Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear that, though I appreciate that you still like my writing.
I'm not sure which part of the plot you don't like, but if it's the Marriage Law and Contracts bit, that's actually a very popular challenge issued by one of the fan boards about 5 years ago. What I have chosen to do with it, of course, is all mine.
I'm actually embarrassed when I go back and look at the first four chapters of this story. Some day, I will have to go and re-write them, but in my honest opinion, the story really shows it's quality from chapter five onwards, so if you keep with it for another two, you may find it improves. If not, I still appreciate that you've been honest.
i loved it write chapter two!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so much! :D
I'm sorry but this was a one shot, that means there are not future chapters. It was just a look in James' head, about how he feels when he keeps on getting rejected. However, I have a Marauder fic, which you can find if you visit my author page. It has the Marauders and Lily right from birth though Lily and James haven't met yet.
Thank you for the review! :)