i dont feel like writing the whole thing so if u care then see my mugglespace (edith longbottom) ironic?
Consequentially Yours by Nyruserra
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 329]
Summary:
It's a rescue, really. At least, that's what Fred and George Weasley manage to convince him of. After all, Hermione is sure to be a target for revenge seeking Purebloods - what could any right-minded Wizard do but step in to help?
But with the shadow of Voldemort still hanging over a frightened community, Oliver is about to find out that the consequences of doing the right thing can get very out of hand!
An Oliver Wood/Hermione Granger Romance
u are a good writer but i dont like the plot much
Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear that, though I appreciate that you still like my writing.
I'm not sure which part of the plot you don't like, but if it's the Marriage Law and Contracts bit, that's actually a very popular challenge issued by one of the fan boards about 5 years ago. What I have chosen to do with it, of course, is all mine.
I'm actually embarrassed when I go back and look at the first four chapters of this story. Some day, I will have to go and re-write them, but in my honest opinion, the story really shows it's quality from chapter five onwards, so if you keep with it for another two, you may find it improves. If not, I still appreciate that you've been honest.
Beneath the Shell by Afifa
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 13]
Summary: A typical love story: Boy loves girl. Girl loves boy. They end up being a couple. They are happy.
Another story: boy loves girl. But. Girl does not love the boy. No happy couple. So how exactly does the boy feel and what does he do to try to win over his love? Most importantly, does he succeed or does he make a gradual progress or does he even give her reason to hate him more?
i loved it write chapter two!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so much! :D
I'm sorry but this was a one shot, that means there are not future chapters. It was just a look in James' head, about how he feels when he keeps on getting rejected. However, I have a Marauder fic, which you can find if you visit my author page. It has the Marauders and Lily right from birth though Lily and James haven't met yet.
Thank you for the review! :)