Summary: Harry wakes up in an unfamiliar house with an unfamiliar son. Harry's son, Arthur, must overcome his Muggle background to help his father regain the life he lost track of fifteen years before.
I absolutely LOVED this story! The whole concept fascinated me, and I loved the characters! I have to say, the non-canon-ness threw me a little, but I got over it because the rest is so amazing, haha. Yes, I love arthur, he is such a great character. I also love reading about harry in the role of dad, in general, but in this case it was ESPECIALLY cool, considering the added drama of the nature of his relationship with his son throughout the story.
plus you are a great writer in general; this was such a pleasant read as far as flow goes, and the plot was so great, and I am so impressed that I am recommending this story to everyone I know! haha
I do want more, but i like where it ended, actually. I think mostly I want to get more from the period where harry's still adjusting to the world he's been absent from for so long, I want more of his perspective, etc.
plus I loved all the cool little futuristic technology stuff you threw in there! that was great.
ok well I could ramble on forever simply because I love your story so much, but I think you get my point. haha
ok once again, AMAZING JOB! thanks so much for a great ride.
(ps- I thought I should mention that i started reading this at 11 last night and stayed up till 6 this morning reading the whole thing. haha)
Summary: It is a snowy Christmas Eve. An old man sits by the fireplace and eats roast chestnuts, not knowing that a woman, whom he has not seen for years, will make one last appearance.
A simple tale of Christmas, by Apollo13 of Slytherin House, for the Winter Tales contest.
wow. that was great.
...not much more that I can say about that.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)