Hmmm...well, not much to say on this end. I'm a teen girl who, obviously, loves J.K. Rowling's "Harry Potter" series. I really enjoy writing fanfics, and I want to be a published author someday. Yeah...that sounds really boring. Oh, well.
Oooh, very good! I have a verrrrrrry strong suspicion as to the mystery of the white cloaks *coughBellatrixandgangcough* but I suppose I will just have to wait and see. But yes! Ingenious story, really, I give it 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you! The next two (or three) chapters are the result of a wonderful and random epiphany I had a week ago while showering. I'm very excited about it! You'll learn a lot of unexpected things in the next few chapters.....
I just read "When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning"--I very nearly cried when I got to the end of it--and then read this one. They were both excellent! I very nearly cried at the end of Hmmm...as for ConCrit...it really is very hard, you know, to think of things to say on that line. I give this story 10/10! Keep up the good work!
I just read "When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning"--I very nearly cried when I got to the end of it--and then read this one. They were both excellent! Hmmm...as for ConCrit...it really is very hard, you know, to think of things to say on that line. I give this story 10/10! Keep up the good work!
Wow. Wowowowowowow. Very moving story. There were times when I laughed, times when I cried, and times when I gave my computer screen an ironic smile. You portrayed the characters very accurately indeed...I liked how you had Lily being friends with Peter. Too many fanfics have her having this uncanny sense that he's not to be trusted...but if that were true, she would never have allowed him to be Secret Keeper. A haunting, chilling tale, very well written. 10/10 I can't wait for the sequel!
Author's Response: Thankyou very much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. The prequel is coming next.. and then the sequel. I live writing this story line SO much, and I'm definately going to see it through to the end. I hope that you;ll continue to read my stories. Lexi xxxx
Hey there! I'm a friend of Tara's and she asked me to get on and make this little update for her. Her computer has...well...died. And I mean actually died--completley crashed. So that's why she hasn't been able to update. She says sorry to keep you all waiting and she'll update as soon as she can. So I thougth I'd just let you know! ^^
Chapter Three is *finally* in! Yay! Now you better go and read it and review it, and make me happy! Chapter Four is already written, I'm just waiting for incentive from your *wonderful* reviews before I send it in ;) So hop to it! ^_^
"POTTER!" she yelled. "LET ME OUT THIS INSTANT!" He smiled to himself.
"Aw, I don't know, Lily, I mean if I let you out, you'll hex me," he replied. He heard her curse loudly and try to get out--"Alohomora!"--which, of course, did her no good. He waited for a few moments until she stopped.
"That's better. Now, I will let you out on one condition...and one condition only," he continued, pausing as he waited for his words to take effect.
Hmmmm...better keep reading when Chapter Three comes up to find out what's happening!
wow everyone, thanks for all the support. i was awol for a long time, had a lot going on in my life. it's been a REALLY long time.
i've decided that i will probably continue this story. for those of you still checking on it hahaha.
i'm sorry for disappearing on all my readers. but i'm back now! yay!
Wonderful first chapter! I really like the way you have portrayed Sirius. Keep it up and don't leave me hanging for too long; update soon!
Author's Response: Thanku ... i'll update as soon as i get a considerable amount of reviews (for a first time ever submitted story, first chapter, anyway..lol) I'll try to keep up to your expectations....thanks again!
Verrrrrrry good story! I really enjoyed the first chapter. I liked how you portrayed all of the characters; they all seemed to be perfect to me. It's summer break, everyone just wants to have a little bit of fun! I give it 10/10. Update soon!