Summary: In this riveting sequel to the "acclaimed" Veiled Revelations, Voldemort has risen to his full strength and is threatening both the wizarding world and the muggle world in an attempt to gain total control. A small group of people - the Order of the Phoenix - are all that stand in his way. Join James Potter, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, Peter Pettigrew, and Lily Evans as they battle the most evil wizard the world has ever seen. (Reviews are always nice and appreciated - and Erik has rated this story 6th-7th years as a result of her incorrigible pride).
I LOVED your story! Got hold of it through a friend last year ... and when I made an account here at Mugglenet I just had to review it!! Sirius as a vampire was really cute and funny, and Remus ... well wow! Scenes between him and Fenrir were really cool! And the ending was so sweet - well sweet in a very sad way! I do hope you continue writing ... you're possibly the best writer I've come across on this site so far! :)
... And he Turned Around Snobbily and Strutted Away by Mind_Over_Matter
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 64]
Summary: "Strutting around the place with his friends and admirers..." ~Professor Snape, PoA
There may be some reason behind Snape's words.
Ahhh ... excellent!! :D
I really wanted to say something intelligent and constructive, but I think the other reviews have got it covered ... all I'll say is that I LOVED the story, and the concept, and even the way it ended. *lol*
You ought to write more such ficlets on mere whims ;)
Summary: James would do anything to get inside Lily’s head. Lily would do anything to get away from James. Lily was brewing a banned potion. James went to find her. Lily made a mistake and the potion exploded. James got his wish, but is it much more than he bargained for?
After a year the Epilouge is now up! Come read for a bit of fun!!
Runner up QSQ - Best Chaptered Canon Romance
Reason for Nomination:
This is the most unique take on how James and Lily really got to know each other. The story is hilarious and keeps you laughing throughout, but it never lets you forget the serious stuff. Plus, she somehow manages to end each chapter with a nice cliffhanger.
I was thinking I'd review the fic once I'd read all the chapters you've put up but seeing as how it's way past my bedtime and I gotta run I decided to write a quick review and say that I think the story's wonderful!! Your writing's kinda addictive and it can really get a reader hooked ;)
I hope you put up the other chapters real fast so that I don't have to wait before moving from one ch to another :D but even if you do, I'll follow it just as loyally :)
Keep up the great job, you're making a lot of people laugh/smile/giggle (in my case that is)!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review (sorry about the late reply). Chapter 11 is now up, and chapter 12 is in the writing process. Yay! I love making people smile and laugh. I hope you keep reading :)
Summary: Willing out every memory he could think of, he gasped for the boy to take them. He had no other way to explain. The boy had to end this. There was no other way now. Perhaps there never would have been any other way. Thank God that Granger girl was with him to help. It would be over soon if the boy would only look at him.
Lily’s beautiful green eyes met his. Lily. Lovely Lily. His Lily. The green eyes swam and swayed out of focus, but Snape could see green distantly before him as though looking through a cloud. As he continued to watch, it came back into focus.
This is a story of Severus Snapes journey on
Hey there :)
I loved the story!! :D Came upon it by pure chance while doing a google search for your beta (she beta'ed a story of mine too and I was wondering if she had an ID that I was supposed to include!) and I'm really happy that I did, because it's a great story! :D
Well anyway, so coming back to the story, I loved the scene between James and Snape, especially the part where Snape asked if James was going to take him to meet Sirius, and James' answer to it. *lol* How many more years do Sirius and Regulus need to patch up?!!
And wow, this has never ever happened to me before, but there were actually tears in my eyes when Snape was overwhelmed with emotions in the story on seeing Lily!! It was such a ... er ... I can't describe how good the scene was, sorry, but it WAS really nice, and well, to conclude lamely, it was a beautiful piece! :)
Author's Response: I am so happy that this story touched you. I my goal was to write a beautiful story. the world needs more beauty. Thank for your heartening review.
Oh wow! Kiss in the very first chapter :D
Ok, so I was guessing after reading the introduction that this wouldn't be the James/Lily type of love story ... anyway it was really nice :D
You seem to have done a great job with the characters, and moreover, the story is exceedingly well written :)
I do hope to read more ... do keep updating on time :)
Author's Response: Thank you for all your kind comments, dear! Unfortunately, this is just a oneshot. =/ If you check, it does say it's completed ... but if you're interested, I have a chaptered Rose/Scorpius fic up as well, which I'm still writing. :)