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What Imagination Has To Offer by luinrina
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]


A normal morning. A moment of magic.

A poem, haiku-style.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 107 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
06/07/09 Updated: 06/07/09

Reviewer: NearlyHeadlessNickS Signed
Date: 06/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Unicorn

Wow! That was suuuperb. You managed to paint a picture in my mind with apparent ease, you seem to be a natural writer :) The rhythm is melodic, and a good rhythm is essential in poetry, especially haikus. I also like that you taught a lesson. There were a few of your words that I really likes, including 'sickle'. :P Keep it up! Add some more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm writing on several stories, poems unfortunately not for the time being. There's going to be a very short one in a three-shot I'm writing, but I'm having a harder time with poetry at the moment. Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing!

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