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Crossed Wires by SaraWinters
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: In the spring of 1996, Remus Lupin composes and delivers his first love letter.

Categories: Remus/Sirius Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Slash

Word count: 1694 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/10/08 Updated: 10/20/08


Reviewer: Sohl Signed
Date: 02/17/09 Title: Chapter 1: Crossed Wires

This was simply an amazing read.
First of all, I was impressed by how you were abel to include a love letter without it being incredibly sappy and badly written. And when Remus gave Sirius the letter and left, I had butterflies in my stomach, understanding completely the feeling Remus was having at the moment. When Sirius comes to Remus afterwards and seems so happy, I thought it was going to be a happy ending, with no complications, but I didn't mind, because the story had been so well written that I would have loved it anyway.
However, the plot twist you add is so unexpected and great, it leaves me feeling sad for poor Remus, and happy for what a great fan fiction I had the pleasure of reading. I absolutely loved this. :)

Author's Response: I'm not sure it's possible for me to write a romance with no complications. I don't think I have the fluffy gene. I'm flattered you enjoyed the story so much. Thanks for reviewing.

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