Hey. I've been meaning to join Fan Fiction for awhile but never bothered. Oh well. I'll add more stuff here later but here's these little blibbets I found off of some girl's bio. that I think she stole from someone else (and yes, don't be dissappointed, I totally just think I made up the word blibbets)
-If you have ever fallen up the stairs copy this into your profile
-If you're one of those people who get excited when you see just two reviews, paste this into your profile.
-If you've been on the computer for hours on end, reading numerous fanfictions, copy this into your profile
-If you don't watch Laguna Beach or the O.C. or The Hills religiously, never have, never will, and are proud of it, copy and paste this into your profile.
Also, about my stories. Well, my poem forever isn't really anything special, but check it out if you dare. I love the plotline in my story, I Think This Love is Altering my Brain, but I despise the title. It's so stupid and amatuer. Oh well, I have about 6 plot bunnies in my head that I want to write. So there's definitely more of me to come! Also, I love reviews. ALOT! (hint hint)
Wow guys that's really embarrassing. I'm sorry you had to read that. I wrote that about two years ago...Anyway, I'm just a nerd who's obsessed with HP, making a writing comeback one day at a time. That's all. :) Continue reading now!
I'm am actually laughing out loud. That. Was. Amazing. Lol. Keep writing, I like your style! :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the good review! It was a fun story to write :)
Aww this was really cute. Hermione's got a lot of guts inviting him into her house. Hahaa nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you! And, well, Hermione IS a Gryffindor. ;]
I. Am. In. Love. With. This. Seriously, how did I not know you wrote all these Ron/hermiones? *adds to favorite author list* Anyway, I'm probably going to end up reading all your stories, seeing how amazing this one was. Everything you did with this was brilliant and fits so perfectly...I wish I could write these two as well as you do! Oh, and I loved Luna's little dinnertime declaration. You'll probably be receiving many reviews from me.... :)
Author's Response: Haha! Well, I hope you DO read all my stories and review them--what more could a writer hope for?? ;) I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, as it was probably the most fun to write of anything I have done. My inability to get this version of things out of my head was what sent me trolling for fanfiction in the first place, and then this story was the result. Thanks for the comment on Luna. She is such fun, but can be difficult to write, at least for me. Again, thanks for the sweet reviews--I appreciate you taking the time. It's always fun finding other R/Hr fangirls. ;) ~ Lori ~
Hey! So I'm huge a R/H fan/author myself and I really wanted to check this out. I really like all of your metaphors or similies or whatever like the thing about Neville's parents' minds crashing like buildings. And Ron's conversation with Bill. This is great though, keep going. Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Chapter four is in the queue, so I'm hoping to see it added soon. I appreciate you taking the time to review.
Lol! This was hilarious. I'm scard to ask where you came up with the idea. Nice job :D
I just wanted to say I am loving this so far:)! I love the whole historical Black family tree idea, and I loved the AVPM reference at the beginning. I cant wait to keep reading, great job!
I SERIOUSLY LOVE THIS. I can't wait to see what happens. This is so believable it's great. It reminds me of something...The Notebook? Titanic? I can't remember. OH WELL doesn't matter. I really hope you write another story about Sep&Cedrella.
I cannot thank you enough for writing this....Seriously, this might be in my top three favorite stories on MNFF. I feel like I know Drell and Sep and everyone, and it's so perfect because this could have easily happened in canon. This story is really powerful...Especially Charis' letter in the epilouge...for some reason it literally brought tears to my eyes. I feel so bad for her, not getting the thing she really wanted in life. I really do hope you write about these characters in the future, it's been great reading this all week.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you've enjoyed the ride as much as I did when I was writing it. I'm making no promises for more stories but I do have a few ideas for one-shots, so we'll see! You never know. Thanks again for reading and (thoughtfully) reviewing, you're awesome!
Hi there! This is for the Gryff. Review Circle!
First of all, I love the plot you have going here! I've only read two chapters and am excited to see what's coming next.
As for if you should combine the first and second chapter, I think they work better seperately. The first chapter is more of a prologue, and this is more of an opening chapter. I think they should stay how they are.
There are only two things I would like to comment on. In the first chapter you say that Clariss' parents were Ravenclaws. In the books, Marcus Flint was a Slytherin. So is this just part of your story, or is Clariss' dad a relative of Marcus? Also, in this chaper it says Albus was at Hogwarts. Al and Lily are two years apart, so if it's Lily's 6th year, how is Al still at Hogwarts? Is this also for the sake of Fanfiction, or something else?
Other than that, I'm really interested in your plot. I want to see what Clariss is Seeing, and how it plays out. It's refreshing to see a Next Gen. from the POV of someone other than the Potter kids! I will probably be back soon to read the other chapters!
Oh yeah- and I love the Frank Longbottom character! So cute he's the opposite of Neville!
See you on the boards,
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and yay for getting the review circle going! Clariss' dad isn't Marcus Flint. it's not really important to the story who her parents are so I might just change her surname because I get a lot of that type of comment. As for Lily and Albus, I've posted this story on two different sites and over a thousand people have read it, but you are the first person to point out that mistake! At first I didn't realise I'd made a mistake because I didn't check the book, but I've kept it that way because I want that extra tie to canon. The story wouldn't work with Clariss being a fifth year because of some of the content I have planned, so I decreased the number of years between Albus and Lily. I hope that's okay! Thanks very much for the review and I'm glad you found it interesting! Sarah x
Oooooh this was creative. Harry/Hermione is a ship that I don't totally understand (Mwaha, I think that's just because I'm a big R/Hr person) but I liked this cute idea that they were kind of each other's secret. Nice job :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you like it. Personally, I'm not a fan of R/Hr, (except for your story :p) so I thought that I'd go for Harry/Hermione. Thanks again!
Okay this one *did* make me tear up. You write Ron and Hermione perfectly. PLEASE write another story about them
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review :)
Also, where did the idea of Hermione going blind come from?
Author's Response: You know, after all this time, I don't remember! I'm sorry! :/
Aw!!!!! I loved this! It was so sweet. I think the end was the best part. I hope Hermione and Chris met up.
By the way--
I like the little "epilogue-y" feel of the end, with the pregnant Hermione. Hehehe ;)
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review! That's my favourite part. And yes, in my mind, they do meet up! Ron might get a little jealous though, but what are you going to do about it... ~ Jordana
Ohhhh my godddd. I saw your banner for this on the beta boards and knew i HAD to read it. As an extreme Ron/Hermione shipper, this was AMAZING. Seriously, it fits so well into the story and it's so believable. My favorite setting for R/Hr is definitely in Deathly Hallows, where their relationship is "tested", I guess, and this was a perfect example. I loved the bits about the wedding dance, and the funeral...just...*squee* so cute! But so angry-Hermione at the same time! Please post the epilogue ASAP
Author's Response: I am laboring away on the second half of this, and am still crossing my fingers that I might get it posted by mid-August. We shall see. Anyway, it looks like that beautiful banner by Julia is doing its job well, if that is what sent you this way. :) I'm so glad you liked this story. It began with just that first letter, and then I couldn't seem to let it go. This is such a pivotal time for those two, in my mind anyway... and I never tire of exploring it with words. Thanks for the sweet review--I appreciate you taking the time!
This made me want to tear up! Especially at Rose and Hermione's parts. *adds to favorites*
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm glad you liked it!
“Ron” he thought as he turned around and headed back to his compartment. “I hope he’s in Gryffindor…”
Oh my god that made me squeal
Author's Response: oh, thanks for the compliment... i think! :D
Let me just say I don't like Lavender at ALL, but this really makes me sympathize with her. It's a very creative detailed idea- great job!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading.
This is a really creative and interesting idea. I'd never really thought about this before, honestly. It does explain a lot, but I do find it very unlikely that Ollivander would live for all that time, but you never know. Great job, you should keep writing!
Author's Response: my thinking is - we never see his family, dude's supposedly really old - does he have a first name? all of this leads to "maybe he's been the ONLY owner of Ollivanders', and the shop is enchanted so while in it, he doesn't age." thanks!!