This is really cute so far!
I love how Mrs. Weasly is smirking.
Great job, now... I am on to the next chapter, whoo!
Hm, he does'nt sound very happy.
AW! Yay! Maybe I should stop commenting on every chapter... but i'm bored. Yup, So... moving on! Next chapter!
Oh my gosh, I love Sirius in this chapter. It made me laugh out loud. But not too loud... because its 12:36. And if I wake mom up she will be maaaaaaad.
Now, THATS an ending! Both of the endings were great though!
Author's Response: Thanks! Personally I prefer the original - it just fits into the story better.
Omg, that was so hilarious! Poor Neville!