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Summary:

2009 QSQs: Runner-up: Best Romance - Other Character Story


Add together one ladies' man, one Quidditch player, one werewolf, and one soon-to-be traitor. Then, mix in one imaginative idiot, one fiery redhead, one clever Ravenclaw, and one blonde artist. Stir counterclockwise until trouble occurs, and you are dealing with one of the best-loved group of friends in Hogwarts history. Follow the story of the four Marauders and four equally troublesome girls. See them deal with their first encounters of love, sorrow, heartache… and Death Eaters. How will these future Order members cope with the ordeals that life throws at them? Will love blossom in what was once thought a highly unlikely place? What do you do when the person you care about most in the world doesn’t seem to notice you at all? Will a well-kept secret shatter the foundations of a seven-year friendship? Follow the lives of these friends through their last year at school to the dramatic final battle with Lord Voldemort two decades later.

Warnings are for later chapters, and any sexual situations are very minor.

Chapter Twenty Two: "The Snakes Strike" is in the queue. Excerpt:

Perfume filled his nostrils as Emma walked passed and Rosier’s gaze lingered on her bare, pale legs as the group headed outdoors. “Don’t you just love summer?” he inquired of Regulus, a hungry sneer lighting his face.

“This is ridiculous,” Regulus announced in a furious whisper, “we’re never going to get them alone!”

“Have faith, Black,” commanded Rosier smoothly. “Girls are well renowned for their desire for girly chats. I’m sure they’ll slip off the shackles of their chaperones soon enough.”


Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 175402 Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Published:
02/03/07 Updated: 01/16/10


Reviewer: padfoot2116 Signed
Date: 01/30/11 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

its been over a year, can you please please please update?

 
Reviewer: padfoot2116 Signed
Date: 02/21/10 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

please hurry up and write the next chapter! it's so good!

 

There She Goes by Jazzinator
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 25]

Summary: Love is not love,
which alters when it alteration finds...


Nyxandriana Brisk: Ravenclaw, sixth year, Shakespeare buff, designated 'odd one out', never been kissed, no one knows her name.

Nyxandriana Brisk: Just fell in love.

Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
But bears it out even to the edge of doom.
-William Shakespeare


Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Violence

Word count: 4159 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
07/29/07 Updated: 08/17/07


Reviewer: padfoot2116 Signed
Date: 10/24/10 Title: Chapter 3: Three

i love it, please keep going!

 

Gossamer Night by SexY_LydZ
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary:

Some one was dying, and he had to save her.



Sirius Black is drowning in darkness. Strange nightmares have been plaguing him - nightmares that may or may not be about a missing friend. Now he must confront himself and discover if he is truly brave... brave enough to sacrifice everything... to fight for someone he loves... to die for someone he loves...

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 20073 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
11/30/07 Updated: 10/21/09


Reviewer: padfoot2116 Signed
Date: 04/21/10 Title: Chapter 8: A Reason

When are you going to update again? you've left us with a major cliffie!!

 

Summary: Sirius has been best friends with Bree since their first year. And when he feels as though she means a little more than that, he does all he can to deny it.

That is, until certain events unfold which make denial impossible.

Now, he not only has to worry about getting the girl, but getting the girl to see he is more than an inconsiderate prat, and still worth having as a friend.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse

Word count: 3051 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
02/02/08 Updated: 04/06/08


Reviewer: padfoot2116 Signed
Date: 10/28/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Because Firewhiskey makes all decisions bad, and all situations awkward

this is really good, when are you going to update again?

 

The Mirror by Midnight_Unicorn
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: Remus Lupin is reading in Hogwarts: A History one day when he learns about a magical mirror that shows the soul's deepest desire. He persuades his friends to help him find it and the four boys each look. A story about what the Marauders really wanted and if they got it or not.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1421 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
06/23/08 Updated: 07/02/08


Reviewer: padfoot2116 Signed
Date: 12/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Discovery

i know its been a long time and that you've probably abandoned this story, but can you write more please? it's really good!

 

More Lives Than One by dashdott
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: “For he who lives more lives than one: More deaths than one must die." - Oscar Wilde

Follow the Marauders in their 6th year--a tale of the complications of friendship, the crippling effects of fear, and the power of love. This is what JKR didn't tell you.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity

Word count: 1733 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
08/05/09 Updated: 08/13/09


Reviewer: padfoot2116 Signed
Date: 10/24/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

i saw you havent updated in a while... can you please put more of the story up, it sounds like a good one!

 

Jemzi by Belledeg
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 260]

Summary: Jemzi Zabini is the seventeen year old daughter of Blaise Zabini and his wife Harper, and is about to join her fellow witches and wizards at Hogwarts for their final school year. Jemzi is famous for being the once best friend of Albus Potter. However, a mysterious argument last year that only the two of them were witness to has ruined their friendship and they are now practically enemies. No one knows the reason for their fall out, only that it has caused a great divide in their friendship group.

Jemzi's best friend and Albus' cousin, Rose, suspects that their friendship expired because of strange and unwanted feelings between them. Feelings which, despite their fall out, have not gone away. Feelings that are similar to those she has for a certain Slytherin...

So can the next generation of Hogwarts students learn to forget past actions and forgive?

Nominated for "Best Next Generation Story" and "Best Other Character" in the 2010 Quicksilver Quill Awards

This story features Harry Potter, Ginny Potter, Lily Potter, Luka Krum, Blaise Zabini, Harper Zabini, Zacharias Smith, Leon Holmwood, Tristan Wells, Rose Weasley, Scorpius Malfoy, Jemzi and Albus plus many more.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Self Injury, Sexual Situations, Slash, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 93043 Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/31/10 Updated: 09/14/10


Reviewer: padfoot2116 Signed
Date: 09/07/10 Title: Chapter 23: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

that was just fantastic! the ending was completely amazing, the way you worded it was beautiful :) please get the next chapter up quickly!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I intend to get the next chapter uploaded quickly :D

 

Summary: The first six years at Hogwarts have gone relatively smoothly for Scorpius and Albus. But now, going into their seventh and final year, these two best friends will get caught up in things way over their heads.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 6555 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
09/30/10 Updated: 11/21/10


Reviewer: padfoot2116 Signed
Date: 10/20/10 Title: Chapter 1: Scorpius's Idea of Fun

mmm i love scorpius! keep writing please!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much for the review. I'm really sorry this wasn't updated sooner. I have to explain. This was the third site that I posted my story on, and while it was being looked at for validation, I kind of forgot about it. I will update as often and as consistently as the site will allow me from now on, so look for the next chapter, and review that as well! =]

 

We'll Be Young Forever by Proserpina
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 57]

Summary:

“You and I, we'll be young forever!” *

After a long, interesting, sweltering summer the Marauders are back for their sixth year, and they feel as though their teenage lives have only just begun.

James has been pursuing Lily for years, and he sure as hell isn't going to give up now. Sirius might actually be falling in love (though of course that can't be possible, can it?), and Remus is struggling with problems in his own family. Meanwhile, Peter has to decide how much worth he can put on friends who he will never live up to. And then there's Lily Evans, a girl who's starting to fall for the very man she swore not to. Diana McKinnon, her best friend, keeps finding herself staring at a certain grey-eyed Gryffindor, even though every piece of logic she has tells her that he's trouble.

But even though there's the looming danger of NEWTs, pranks, oily Slytherins, and physical education, a much bigger problem has presented itself. The Marauders' sixteen-year-old world isn't the safe place it used to be. There are rumors of danger and dark magic throughout the school, and of a powerful dark wizard named Voldemort. The Gryffindor sixth years have to decide where their true allegiances lie and how much they are willing to sacrifice for a war that seems impossible to win.

*Title and quote taken from the lyrics of Katy Perry's summer hit Teenage Dream.

Note 3/26: Ok guys so I know that I haven't updated in forever, but I promise I'll finish the story! I'm struggling with some stuff, but hang in there, I haven't forgotten.

Lots and lots and lots of love, Olivia



Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Slash, Strong Profanity

Word count: 21942 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Published:
02/23/11 Updated: 05/12/12


Reviewer: padfoot2116 Signed
Date: 03/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Runaway

I absolutely loved it, you're doing great! Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm already done with them, so the next chapters will (hopefully) be up soon, don't worry. :) ~Olivia <3

 

The Final Cause by Pussycat123
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: When Marty Price entered the lives of the Marauders, they never expected her to come to mean so much to them. Their last years at Hogwarts were idealistic and beautiful. But a few years in the harsh outside world soon forces them to change. When faced with so much, it is unsurprising that they are tired and lonely and almost broken. Even optimists like Marty struggle to remain true to themselves - so what hope do the rest of them have when she leaves on a vital secret mission? Especially when everything else, if possible, begins crumble even further ...

Sequel to 'The Cause'

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 27739 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/03/11 Updated: 06/10/11


Reviewer: padfoot2116 Signed
Date: 03/15/11 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

hey thanks for coming back! I absolutely love this story, update soon please!

Author's Response: Ah, I'm glad, and I'm sure I will!

 

Refuge by hplvr1
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 30]

Summary: Everyone thought James was so...nice, so...perfect. Ginny knew better but she didn't want to give him up.
Draco somehow got himself caught up in the drama.

Categories: Draco/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Epilogue? What Epilogue?, Mild Profanity, Self Injury, Violence

Word count: 7034 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
06/26/11 Updated: 11/28/11


Reviewer: padfoot2116 Signed
Date: 08/29/11 Title: Chapter 5: Avoidances and Confrontations

Loved it! Keep writing :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I plan to!

 

High by Equinox Chick
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 233]

Summary: Past Featured StoryScorpius Malfoy is the Seeker for Slytherin. Not only that, he's the best Seeker at Hogwarts, and it's his catches that win matches. But this year things are different; Albus Potter has switched to Chaser and the new Gryffindor Seeker is his annoying little sister.

This is the story of how one match and one missed catch can change your life.

This story was accidentally deleted, so is being resubmitted ... very very quickly.

SQUEEEEE! High won the Best Next Generation QSQ award. Thank you so much for the everyone who has helped, either by beta'ing or encouraging me.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. I'm not sure who I am at the moment, but there must be some Arthur Weasley blood in me.

Thank you Natalie (hestiajones) for doing the vast majority of the beta work on this, and Apurva for work on the early chapters

Squish for Natalie, Jess, Kara and Bob for helping me sort this out.

Due to an archive hissy fit regarding any story with a rating about 3rd-5th, I have temporarily lowered the rating on this story. However, I have NOT changed the content. This story is still a 6th-7th. You click at your own risk.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity

Word count: 135569 Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/04/11 Updated: 01/14/12


Reviewer: padfoot2116 Signed
Date: 09/04/11 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - A Testing Time

ahh so sorry you lost it all! this chapter (and the rest of the story) is amazing. update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and for your commiserations. It was rather a shock but it's all fine now. Ch 18 should be up soon. I need to tweak some bits. Carole

 

Remember the Slytherins by iLuna17
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 62]

Summary: There is a thin line between love and hate. There is an even thinner line between Gryffindor and Slytherin; the willingness to do anything to achieve their goals. Gryffindors cannot see the big picture, and if they come to a decision to choose between the greater good and their loved ones or himself, they would sacrifice the world for their friends.

Slytherins are different. We know the value of sacrifice, but there is something else that separates us from those who wear red and gold. We will fight as hard as we can, in any way possible, even if it may be seen as unjustified or morally wrong. Gryffindors let their consciences get in the way of the greater goal. We don’t, but no one believes that we can fight for the right cause. They remember us as the evil, idiotic, or simply power hungry. They don’t remember us for what we are; who we are. We’re here to change that.

They will remember us, and they will remember us as those who fought all prejudice and cruelty simply because were were done with it. They will remember us, and the next time they think of a phoenix rising from the ashes they will remember this phrase:


Remember the Slytherins.


Nominated in the 2012 QSQ Awards - Next Gen/OC for Nick.


Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Mental Disorders, Strong Profanity, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 97777 Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Published:
12/15/11 Updated: 09/02/13


Reviewer: padfoot2116 Signed
Date: 08/20/12 Title: Chapter 12: Consequences

awesome story! I love nick, and everyone else in this story. Update soon please!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. :D The next chapter is in the queue. Thanks for the review!

Ellie

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