Thanking EVERYBODY EVER for the runner-up QSQ given to The Cause. Honestly. It was amazing. Both Marty and I thank you! (I'm sure Remus would as well, but I can't claim ownership of him). I would put the banner up but for some reason it's not working (stupid HTML).
Order of the Janey fics (it doesn’t matter what order you read my other stuff in)
“It Unscrews The Other Way”
Trouble With Exams – A Janey Weasley One-Shot.
Everybody Loves Janey Weasley
Being Janey Weasley
Janey Weasley Springs; My Mother
Living In The Weasley-Springs Family ... Merlin Help Me
HELLO to my bestest friend Chomione, you're truly the best, and hi to my brother CheeseKing, too.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy my fics! I would reccomend the later ones; I only keep the early stuff because I can't bear to delete it. However, I can't bear to read it, either, but maybe you'll have some more luck. =)
Lily Evans is not the sort of girl who would normally be found writing in a diary. Yet, when she starts, she finds that the easiest way to overcome all the obstacles in life is to let her emotions out onto paper.
This is all good so far. The chapters are pretty short, but that's ok, sometimes I just don't feel like ploughing through 5000 words or whatever. Update soon!
Author's Response: The chapters get longer eventually, but nothing like 5,000 words.
Haha! You've succeeded in cheering me up again. It was really funny, I love the way this is written. It's oddly refreshing, I'm not sure why exactly ...
Lol, that was funny! I love the way Lily seems so clueless at times, but still really likeable. It's excellent. This is great so far, keep it up.
Haha, that was brilliant (again). I loved it. It was so hilarious, Lily's character is absolutely ... Damn, I can't think of a word other than "charming" again. This happened, last time, I'm sure of it. Stupid vocabulary *grabs a thesaurus* ... delightful, amiable, pleasant, charismatic, polite, fascinating ... Nope. Well, you get the idea. It's brilliant. And I'm rambling again, so I'll leave it at that.
Summary: "Good Morrow dear reader. If you are reading this, you have found the diary of Pugnatious Aramor Weasley. As to how you found this diary I have no idea as I’ve decided to toss the ruddy thing as soon as I become famous for fear that this incriminates me in any fashion. Unless I haven’t become famous in which cause that ruddy well blows doesn’t it?"
Hey, this was so funny! I loved it, especially how Pug was so oblivious to everything going on! Loved it!
Lily Evans is just beginning her 7th Year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. She is the Head Girl alongside James Potter. This story isn't far-fetchedly love/hate. This story is NOT Mary Sue. This story follows the canon to the best of the author's ability. Don't believe me? Find out for yourself.
Hey, this was good! I liked your descriptions (of places and characters) and how well this is written. An all round good job! I liked Lily particularly, although that's probably because I just like Lily in general anyway ... But you wrote her (and James, for that matter) very well!
Author's Response: aww...thank you so much for your wonderful review! It was great to hear some positive feedback, because I\'m particularly attached to this story =D I\'m really glad you liked Lily, I\'m quite the fan of her character as well, so I know exactly what you mean! Thank you again for taking the time to review! I really appreciated it!
Hey, I really liked this. And since when was it OOC? Oh well, I think it was really good, nice to have some background and stuff ... :D I love this ship so much. Update soon, and don't worry too much about how good they are or whatever. You have good writing skills.
I think this was really good, I just have one comment to make - it being all in bold is very annoying. Sorry, but it is. Appart from that, I loved the Sirius/Peter part, I like how you wrote Peter as a real person, something I have trouble doing in my fic (please read it by the way. If you want. I'm feeling un-loved and reviewless. Just go to my author page, etc etc). Anyway, it was good.
I think this was really good, I just have one comment to make - it being all in bold is very annoying. Sorry, but it is. Appart from that, I loved the Sirius/Peter part, I like how you wrote Peter as a real person, something I have trouble doing in my fic (please read it by the way. If you want. I'm feeling un-loved and reviewless. Just go to my author page, etc etc). Anyway, it was good. By the way, you do know that graphics aren't allowed in summaries, right? I'm just warning you, because the mods have that whole spring cleaning thing going on, and I would hate for this to be deleted.
Author's Response: lol thank you for your review! Ironically, I couldn't agree with you more in all areas of this review...I was really tired this morning and must have left a bold command without a stop command or something, but for the life of me I couldn't figure out where! I went back and now it's showing up normally on my screen, and I hope it is on everyone else's. Thank you for the banner tip as well, I've never posted on Mugglenet before, so I didn't know...they deleted it and now all is well (I hope). It's taken a long time to write Peter as a real person, I have to admit. I will read and review your fic, too...so I guess you'll be hearing from me again then! Hope you keep reading and that I hear from you again in the future! Thank you!!!
Summary: Amelia Bones's death left one man in deep sorrow.
Hmm, liked this one too! Aberforth is Dumbledore's brother, right? *cringes at lack of minor character knowledge* Joe may be a genius but she sure gives a lot of names to remember. I think this was well done.
Author's Response: Yeap, he is. And thanks for the review!
Summary: August Worthington, an ordinary Muggle boy, is obsessed with the Harry Potter series and insists that the stories they describe are real. His parents are trying to convince him they're not, but maybe August isn't that ordinary a boy after all...
Aw, that's so sweet. I love the name August for a boy, it's really interesting. Although it made me smile that his sister has such a normal name like "Susan". I hope you keep writing more stories, because I think you could get really good! And I liked this. The children insisting they believed in something that the parents just found strange was adorable. I guess the secrets you hinted at were that he had been showing signs of magic or something?
Anyway. Nice job.
PS: Didn't I tell you I'd get round to it eventually? :D
Author's Response: hey...thanks a lot for taking the time... :-) i once found a character named August in a book i read long ago(his full name was August August!) and since then always wanted to write about someone with that name. maybe i especially liked it bcoz i was born in August. i really wanna write more...but although i find it quite easy to write, i just can't come up with a good plot...n when i started writing more about August, like when he goes to Hogwarts and makes friends, i found it really hard to keep the events un-Potterish! and yeah...u got it right about the secrets! :-D
Summary: Professor Granger deals with a pair of students who have inherited a knack for trouble...
This was great! I loved it! Yay! I really liked the comparison of the formal letters to the little notes - hilarious!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it-I had a ball writing it. Thanks much- Daisy
Summary: The Marauders are in their second year and it is a beautiful day. Of course James would want to play some Quidditch. But is Remus the athletic type?
This is just a little piece I wrote for Quidditch Tryouts on the MNFF Forums last fall. I see it as a companion piece to my larger fic, Moments of Bliss, a sort of missing scene, if you will.
=D I love this! It's so beautifully Remus, so perfect, I love it!
Also, I know that I struggle with writing the Quidditch scenes, so the way you kept it so interesting and exciting is something I very much look up to ... well done! I've not read Moments of Bliss (I'm too busy to read a fic as long as that right this minute, I've WAY too much homework) but this is a great stand alone fic anyway, and MoB is definitely on the list of things to read when I finally get some time, so ... great job!
Author's Response: Oh, dear! I\'m so sorry I didn\'t see this lovely review. This story hasn\'t seen much action in a while and I forget to look at it (even after I put up the cool banner Katie made for it). *embarrassed and ashamed*
I\'m really glad to know you enjoyed it. I am in the midst of struggling to write a sports themed segment of MoB and I\'m realizing why writing Quidditch is difficult. I\'m thrilled you think I pulled it off here, and hope I get so lucky with the scene I\'m writing now. I might have it (the chapter) finished by the time you get a chance to read it (MoB). *hides from MoB readers* I\'m glad to hear it is on your list and hope you enjoy it if and when you read it. Thank you so much for taking the time to read this little one shot and leave me such a nice review.
Summary: "Charlotte-Flower" has been writing to her mysterious ‘quill pal' for over a year, but she really doesn't know him at all. When he suggests that they meet, she has mixed feelings. Would they like each other? Hate one another? But the most important question: Who is he?
Aww, that was sweet! I liked it. I was just looking to see if you had any other fics as well as 'I dont do snogging', because ... I'm not sure, I was just pretty bored, I guess. And then I saw you had a one shot called "the power of the quill", and I knew I had to read it - I myself have a one shot called "the art of the quill", which also happens to be Marauder based ... cool, huh? Anyway, moving on from that, I loved this! It was so ... good! (lack of adjective syndrome, forgive me). And the thing about randomly thinking of it while trying to get to sleep made me laugh, too - that's exactly the story behind most of my fics! Scary, isn't it ...?
Author's Response: Wow, it\'s scary how alike our thinking is! I have another fiction that just grabbed ahold of my brain as I was getting out of bed the other morning. I wasn\'t even conscious yet, I think. ;) Leave a comment when (if) it is approved!! I\'d be interested in what you have to say about it. Thanks for your reviews!
Summary: What happens when a spell backfires; turning James, Sirius, Remus, and Peter into girls? Plz R&R.
Hey, this is pretty good. I'm already imagining what happens with them being girls, it sounds so funny ... v. intriguing, the thought of what they would do is hilarious, even in my mind. What year are they in?
Author's Response: They are in their 6th year. Thanks for the review.
Within the Marauder band of Merry Men, Sirius is the dashing Will Scarlet. Seventh year, his goal is not to rob the rich, but to help poor Robin woo Maid Lily, avoid sermons from Friar Moony, aid a rat in need, and win the love of a fair lady.
Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill for Best Romance- Non Canon.
*Chapter 30 is 'To Be Loved'*
Hey, I just wanted to say I've been reading this over the weekend, and I really like it (even if me-on-the-outside finds constant romance a little tedious, me-on-the-inside enjoys it).
The Marauders are incredibly truthfully written, I love all the scenes with them. You especially did well with Peter - I know from experiance he is hard to write in a good light, and your is probably the best portrayal of him I remember reading :D.
I also love the Robin Hood references, but those are for personal reasons involving my friends who don't know when a joke gets old ... but that's why I love them. I'm not saying what the joke is, but it involves the Prince of the Poor being my third alleged husband ... *laughs to self, and is probably regarded as mental by anyone reading this who isn't me or four of my closest friends*
Anyway ... I think your fic is great. Long, but great ;D. I look forward to an update, and am hopefully anticipating reading about Lucius being pummulled by what to him would appear to be thin air ... Go Sirius!
Author's Response: The Owl and the Pussy-Cat went to sea
In a beautiful pea-green boat:
They took some honey,
and plenty of money
Wrapped up in a five-pound note.
It was either quote the nursery rhyme or Tom Jones \'What\'s New Pussycat?...whoa...whoa, whoa...\' (the whole song, which I would\'ve had to look up since I sure don\'t know it, heh.
Thank you for spending your valuable time reading my story! Is it raining where you are too? I want snow, not rain, but I won\'t whine, or be nosy and ask about your \'alleged\' polygamy, ;). The story will be 30 chapters, so it won\'t last much longer. I hope you enjoy it, and Lucius getting his face smashed next chap.
Oooh, another exciting chapter, I do say! I loved the "ROSMERTA!" at the end ... it was very dramatic.
Poor Sirius. I do feel bad for him. He's got such a twisted past ... Anyway, I look forward to the rest of this fic. And those one shots, too. :D Good job!
Author's Response: Sirius = drama, doesn\'t he? Gotta love him...I think it\'s in the guidelines. Must not submit fics to more than one cat, must love Sirius. :D
Summary: When Sirius passes through the veil, he ends up in the Realm of Dreams. He manages to wake up. But when he wakes up, it’s the 30th of October 1981. The past fourteen years have never happened. He has a chance. Will it all be for naught?
Note: The word count for the story is incorrect, it should read around 21096 words. I arrived at this amount by adding the word count for the individual chapters together.
Wow. Intriguing, and very well written. When are you planning on updating? I hope soon, it's a really great idea! Ooooh, I do hope they have a happy ending! I'm such a sucker for those.
Anyway, please update soon, because I really liked this - it was so interesting!
Summary: Lily Evans is confident yet unsure of her future. Who needs a boyfriend anyway when you've got awesome friends? But when James Potter finds a way into her mind and heart, slowly but surely, Lily finds what she missed in life. Love, loathing, friendships, and hardships are all components of this epic tale.
This is good. I like all of your characters - the five girls are all really different from each other, but they still fit, which is nice, and none of them are Mary-Sue's... I love pride and prejudice (I've only seen the movie, but I am TRYING to read the book ...) and I think this fits it without being too strict on the exact plot. You write really well.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Summary: Lily has a secret. Afraid of her secret being revealed, she locks herself away behind a mask of perfection. What will it take for her to realise no-one is perfect?
Wow! I was kinda thinking "woah, depressing" for the first part, but as soon as James turned up it was all okay again (I guess he has that affect on me as well as Lily, lol). And I really, really, really liked the second part on her wedding day. It was so wonderful! I loved it. For a first fanfic this was pretty good!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think I\'ve improved a lot since I wrote this, but I\'m still really glad you enjoyed it. I may end up editing it in the future, because, though I\'m still fond of the idea, I think I could do a better job now. Thanks heaps for reviewing!