I wish I could come up with something to say. :D
uhhhh, I like it!!! But how would Hestia know Mufflato? I thought it was secrety, sice no one knew the prices spells, exept for levecorpus, since that one was used so frequently....but I'm probably wrong....
Author's Response: I hadn't thought about that. I'm going to assume that Snape taught the Order certain spells that would come in handy. (But certainly not all of them.)
uuh, i absolutely looove this chappie! and i loooves this story!!!! :)
but some of those articles don't seem like the stuff neville would hang up, like the ones critisizing harry and dumbledore, but i can see why you had to put these in, so dudley would know.
can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
uh, i like it!
I think the dursleys should have remembered fred and george though, seeing as they come to pick harry up twice and made dudleys tongue grow...
Author's Response: thanks!
where's the next chapter???!!!
Author's Response: in the queue :)
i dont know its sort of unrealistic getting put in prison for that...and lily? in prison?
well, i wanno know what happens next- so keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
sirius didnt get kicked out he ran away-although i like the kissing part a lot
oh-not that it matters , but does james have a sister?or adopted sister?
well, keep it up!
Author's Response: No, the books don't say that he had a sister, but they also don't say that he didn't. So creative license can be used.
lily? a troublemaker? i like it
Author's Response: Why, thank you!
Oh, this was wonderful! Defiantly one for my favs list :D
I loved how you turned Lily's comment into such a wonderful-and hilarious- story! Lily's characterization sent a smile to my lips-it was so good! She was not the know-it-all, rule abiding Head Girl. In this fic I could really understand why she was a Gryffindor :D
This line (or tow lines): James Potter was quite possibly the most stubborn man on the planet. Unfortunately for him, Lily Evans was the most stubborn woman on the planet.
was just so spot-on.
Again, great job!
oh no! she's turning all evil! like in... daughter of the dak side. ahhhh everyones turning mad!!!!!!
good chapter though.......
i hope the next chappie comes soon o she can be set to rights ! :p
Author's Response: I haven't read that one, is it any good?
loved it ! (; where's the next chappie??
A few coments, though. I don't think the twins would stay quiet on the train ride-like they were at the beginning... and where's the next chapter??? :P
Author's Response: I don't believe they were in the same compartment as Scarlet, so that is why you hear nothing from them until later.
Well, yeah, but when she just entered the compartment. Although that might be because they were exited about the map...
Author's Response: Oh I apologize! I thought you were talking about when she was a First Year.
Rose was a Weasley. She never gave Scorpius Malfoy a second glance. They were sworn enemies, even though they’d barely even spoken to each other. But sometimes all it takes for love to blossom is a Potions lesson, a few snide remarks and a dropped book.
Two people. Two entirely different worlds that are suddenly intertwined.
YAY!! finally, a new chappie! I had like completly forgotten where this fic had left off. :P
and I think you're completely right. Griffendor and Slytherin are both known to be very proud, so this could defianetly be a problem.
CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! SO HURRY UP!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! :) I was worrying that I might have lost all my readers in my huge long hiatus there. I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and the next chapter will hopefully be up within a few weeks. Thanks! :D
i really like it, although i think u should have made them be ffriends first
Author's Response: Thank you! And I was considering that, but I like how I've done it instead. :)
Awwww! i oled this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was really really good. (:
I cannot wait for the wedding and Rose meets the Malfoys!!!! :P
haha.... three people, two falling in love.... reminds me of th trio...
i can't wait for the next chappie! An I'm glad you are continuing to write this story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll update as soon as my beta sends the next chapter back.
ohkay, so i really really enjoyed ths chappie. (:
but you said emma was their FOUR-year old daughter, later you said it was hard for hannah to take care of their SIX-year old. so how old is she?
oh, this chappie was so great. i'm already waiting for the next!
haha, i like teddy's hair :P
Author's Response: Oops - I had changed her age around a few times, but then must have forgotten to catch them all. She's actually four. :) Thanks for the review!
written extremely well. good job! very touching, and very sad. i hate it whn main characters die..... *sniffle*
Lindsey Tonks appears to be a normal, almost invisible Hogwarts student, but underneath her is someone far from normal. What the world doesn't know is that Lindsey is the daughter of two well-known imprisoned Death Eaters, and has an identity she must hide from the world. Underneath Lindsey is a girl named Lyra Lestrange, a girl who is meant to be a secret forever. But will it last forever?
*Begins in GoF and follows the series through DH.
**Will appeal to fans of the Black family! Prominent characters are Bellatrix, Tonks, Andromeda, Sirius, and (to an extent) Narcissa.
Part Four Synopsis:
It's the summer after Albus Dumbledore's death, and the whole world is falling to Voldemort and the Death Eaters. Broken-hearted Lyra, unable to return to Hogwarts, must go into hiding with her family. It doesn't last long, and eventually Lyra is faced with a choice: join or die. Lyra's decision comes with many surprises, including a new ally who follows her to the final battle of good versus evil. While Lyra's path may seem clear, she finds herself torn between two sides for the final time, and in the end, despite tragedy and loss, Lyra accomplishes the impossible...which defies all of the agreements she and her family ever made.
Three years later, the fic has been completely finished! Enjoy reading it without having to wait for new chapters. Thanks to those who patiently waited and faithfully reviewed!
great storyso far! I love it!
ButTonks would want to fight the Death Eaters to, not just go into the woods.....and she should have bought a krum figure :P
Author's Response: Thank you. She probably would have wanted to fight the Death Eaters, but her main goal right then was keeping her cousin safe :)
ok, here;s the deal : -she never got punished for using magic outside of school
-droco, ect. already have harry to torment, although i do see him hating her because of their family's
-i see your point with the no friends, ... but that also is kind of conspicuous,,,
-LOOVE YOUR STOY! (: IT'S GREAT!!!
Author's Response: I know she was never punished and it crossed my mind that maybe she should have been, but I think the only time she used magic outside school was at the World Cup when plenty of other underages were using it to defend themselves, too, and the Ministry couldn't punish that many students so they made an exception. Okay, I just made that up on the spot but I think it works :) You're right about Draco, and he doesn't torment Lyra like he does with Harry, but he bothers her if he gets the chance just because she's (supposedly) the daughter of Andromeda Tonks.
do all the teachers and all the (higher0 ministry officials know about Lindsy.Lyra'sparentage?
And I know it fits to the story, but I don't think she should be *looks for the right word* fascinated? pulled?(does that make sense? ...well, she shouldn't want to do the dark arts....just because her parents were Death Eaters...like you said, she;s an individual...
And I don't think you need the dot's between DADA.
Sorry if I'm being annoying!
I reallt like your story!
Author's Response: The teachers don't know and only a select few Ministry wizards know (I'm not sure what department...let me get back to you on that once I think about it). I get what you're saying about the Dark Arts and it's not exactly that she wants to do them, she's just curious about them because she knows how if affected her parents lives and therefore her lives. By trying the Dark Arts she might get more insight into why her parents got into it or something like that. It's also necessary for the plot :) She is an individual, but (like many teenagers) she's struggling to figure out who she is, which is difficult since she doesn't know her parents. She just wants to be closer to them so she can get a better idea of who they were. And...I used to not have dots between DADA but I changed it because they were there in HBP :) Thanks again.
'...now waltzing back to the Ravenclaw table after retrieving the bouillabaisse from our place at the Gryffindor.'
IU think it should be Griffendor ONE.
-just being nitpicky-
Author's Response: Oops, does it say that? I didn't catch it when I revised. Sorry!